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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dmg_fanatic



heyy

it is alright

n gud luck for ur exams


post the next part when possible

we will wait



Ditto.........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swamii92



no need for sorry .......waise thnx 4 d comments



ur welcome
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Posted: 14 years ago
it is alright
post the next part when possible
we will wait okkkkk
n ALL THE BEST for ur exams

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😊 😊 😊


takecare 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
no need to be sorry...
all the bst 4 xamz
continue soon..... will wait 4 nxt part...😊
Edited by drishti_8891 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey mohit...
 
gr8 episode as usual... wow shanky agreed for AR's marriage.....
 
don't worry yaar.... we'll wait for ur updates.... take ur time.... all the best for exams, take care....
 
love
 
mina
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Posted: 14 years ago


THANKS FOR UR COMMENTS GUYS!!
MY EXAMS R GOING WELL.
I WILL CONT AND POST THE NEXT PART;
ONLY IF I SEE,
U GUYS R INTRESTED IN READING DIS FANFIC,
πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί
AND INTRESTED IN ITS CONTINUATION....


😊 😊
MOHIT


Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago





PART 29



After they get out of S.S room.

Riddhima: Thanks

Armaan: Yeh maine aapne liye sirf nahi kiya,

Riddhima yeh maine hamare liye kiya hai.

Anji: Kya hua

R: Di woh

A: who maan gaye

ANji: Im so happy for both of u (hugging both of them)

Anji and Armaan's pager rings: Dr. Keerti

R: Bye

Anji: Bye

Armaan: Aapna khal rakhna

R: Haan ab tum jaao

A: bye

R: Yeh aaj maine kya kar diya tha

aapne pyaar ki qurbani dene ka phesla kar diya tha.

Sorry Armaan main toh bhul hi gayi thi

ke iss duniya mein,

meri mujhse jaada phikar meri kissi aur ko hai.

S: hey Riddima kahan khoiye hui ho

R: Kuch nahi baas

S: Chalo mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

R: Haan chalo mera bhi break hai

Dr. keerthi with Armaan and Anjali

Dr K: Aaj aap dono night duty karenge

A&Anji: Ji Dr.

Dr. K: Abhi aap ka break hain aap ja sakten hai

A&Anji: Ji Dr.

In the canteen Sapna and Riddhima sitting.

Sapna: Riddhima tum kha hi nahi rahi ho

Anji: Kaise khayegi jab saiyanji na ho

Riddhima: Di

Armaan is shy n cums n sits besides Riddhima

Sapna: Mujhe koi baatye ga kya ho raha hai

Atul: haan mujhe bhi (cuming from behind)

Anji: Guyz yeh tumahre do dost abhi,

papa se aapne shaadi ki

razamandi maang ke aayen hai

Sapna: Kya Oh My God sachi congratulations.

Atul: Abbe Armaan tu toh bahut aage nikla

Armaan: Champ…….

Riddhima: Thanks n her pager rings

Oh mujhe jaana hai

main tum sabse baad mein milti hun

Atul: Yaar Armaan mera bhi taaka fit kara dena

Armaan: Kya????

Atul: Aare saale tune ek bhen ko toh pata liya

ab mujhe dusri dila de nah

Armaan: Champ aaj mein tujhe ek salah dun

Atul: Haan bol nah

ARmaan: Pyaar agar sacha ho nah

toh duniya ki koi takat usse milne se nahi rok sakti

ATul: Kya??? Kya???

(surprised that Armaan is saying this)

Armaan Leaves.


AT 9 30 pm in the locker room

Everyone is there.

R: Di chalen

Anji: Oh ridz main tumhe baatna hi bhul gayi

aaj meri aur Armaan ki night shift hai

R: Chalega di main auto se chali jaaongi

A: Koi zaroorat nahi hain

itni raat ko akele auto main jaane ki

R: Matlab

A: main tumhe chod ke aata hun

R: Nahi tumhe late ho jaayega

A: Chalo abh

AT the car park

R: Armaan tumhari shift

main bas 15 minuet baki hain

A: Toh

R: Tum late ho jaaoge aur

tum jante ho nah Dr Keerti

Shashank from behind:

Any problem beta

R: Woh papa main

SS: maine suna

SS: Dr. Armaan aap apni duty puri kijiye

aur agar aapko ateraaz nahi ho

toh main aapni beti ko ghar chod dun.

Riddima: Papa…

A: Sure Sir (shy)

In the car.

SS: Aaj main apne aap se bahut naraz hun

R worried: Kyun papa

SS: Aaj mujhe ehsaas ho gaya

ke main ek accha pita nahi ban paya

R: Nahi papa aap world ke best papa ho.

SS: Agar hota toh

aapni beti ka pyaar samajh jata

R: Papa aisi koi baat nahi hai please.

SS: Im Sorry

R: Papa no im sorry

SS: lo sorry sorry main ghar aagaya

R: I love u papa

SS: I love u too beta






Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

EDITED*

Hi Mohit...... First thanks a lot for the pm........ πŸ˜ƒ I had to read all your updates from the beginning or else i would have understand nothing...πŸ˜† But one thing is clear, that u are a very talented person..... I like each words of your writings...... Amazing work i must say.......
Its full of love.....
Keep on the good work...........
 
 
-Soni
 
Edited by -Dreamy_Girl- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

a bit busy will read soon n comment..

good wishe..
sri:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update mohit......cont. soon. ........thnx 4 d pm