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Posted: 29 November 2009 at 8:57am | IP Logged

Fab parts mohit!!Loved it!Thanks for the PM and continue soon

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Hi Dearsmileys!
How R Usmileys!
I wish u r gud
smileys....

woah dear
smileysits really a nice one smileys smileys smileys smileys hats of to usmileys smileys smileys smileys i think its best onesmileysi wish DMG is like this really missing KASH & DMGsmileys but its rocking onesmileysplz continue it soonsmileysand thanks for the pmsmileys

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Thank u for always forgiving me for mistakes,
Thank u for always staying by my side,
Thank u for giving me the courage,
Thank u for listened to my problems,
In a kind and caring way,
I'm only complete when u are near,
Guys I couldn't forget all of u,
Even at the last breath I take,
Coz u'll always have a special place in my heart."

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Posted: 29 November 2009 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
intresting ff mohit..
Plz add me to ur pm list..

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THANKS FOR UR COMMENTS GUYS

YOUR COMMENT MATTTERS A LOT

PLEASE KEEP ON COMMENTING OR CRITICIZING IT








Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 December 2009 at 2:39am

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Posted: 30 November 2009 at 3:03am | IP Logged
heyaa hi mohit
wow finally i end up reading all te parts till now , it was fab , seriously all the parts were just great , loved it soo much , and it was really good to read and relive all that past best scenes of dmg , i really miss them , but i loved to remind them here with your ff , great, will be waiting for the next updates doo pm me ahead ,  and yaa really thnks a lot for your regular pm's , thanks soo much
 
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PARt 26



Recap

Armaan and ridz went on a date!



HERE IS NEXT PART




Next Day At Sanjeevani....

Armaan and Ridz don't see each other

the whole day............eccept for when

Dr.Kerti assinged them their duties.....

Armaan is getting impatient....

so he goes to see ridz in the cancer ward....

there he see's ridz talking to summit(S)

R: Abb Kaise Feel Kar Rahin Ho??

S: Appko Dehk Thai Hi Sara Dard Mitt Jatha Hai

R: THats so sweet........

(ridz places her hand on summits shoulder

and he places his ontop of hers....

armaan see's this and is getting really

jelous and angry.......

so he leaves............

summit see's him leave and tell riddhima)

Ridz follows Armi in the corridor....

R: Armaan....Armaan....Armaan....

Meri Baath Tho Sunno....

Armaan slips into the stair case....Ridz follows him....

R: Armaan Kaya Hua??

A: Kaya Hua...Kaya Hua!!

R: Armaan Batao Bhi....

A: Meri GF Kissi Or Kai Saath Flir Kar Rahi Hai

Or Mujhse Poocha jaraha hai kai kaya hua hai!!!

R: What..........kaya keh rahai ho tum
A: Bhooli banai ki kohsish maat karo....

meine khud appni ankhoon se

tumhe or summit koh abhi dehka hai....

R: Armaan he is just my pateint....ok......

A: No its not ok....(nd walks out)

Armaan is really mad at Ridz

and she is upset..................

Armaan ignores Ridz the Whole Day

when she goes to the cafe he leave

if she enters the locker room he leaves...

Armaan leaves that night

without saying goodbye to ridz...

Angi: Ridz kaya hua..........

R: Nothing.... .......

An: Then why are you so upset doll?

R: Nothing Di....

An: Cum on mujhe bhi nahin batogi??

R: Just that Armaans Mad at me.....

he thinks i m cheating on him....

An: Wat woh pagal ho gaya hai kaya??

R: arre nahin di...woh tho pehle seh hi tha....

An: Uff...Abb kaya karogi tum??

R: Patha nahin....

An: Why don't you call him??.....

R: i did woh phone hi nahin utta tha...

An: don't worry Ridz............

Abbi sooh jao...............

subah soochai gai.........

don't worry he loves u too much

to stay away from you so long....

Next Morning..............

Ridz Makes sum paratas for Armaan

to take to the hospital....she places it in his locker....

Armaan walks in...

there is no one there but armi and ridz...

Armi c's the paratta's nd tastes one...

(armaan is feeling really bad for what

he said yesterday he knew he was wrong)

A: Wah.....bananai walai nai bhi

kaya paratai bannai hai...

(he says really to no one........

but hes pointing it at ridz)

Ridz smiles at that...nd goes upto him....

A: Look Basket i m srry for yesterday....

i shouldn't have said that...

R: Of course u shouldn't have....

Armaans getting mad....

A: look i m not here

to listen to ur attitude ok...

R: Srry srry........kaan pakar kai srry...

i was just jokeing...

A: no never mind....forget it....

R: Armaan i said srry na...

A: I didn't hear it....

Ridz gets closer..........

butterflies are running in both of their stomachs....

Rids kisses armaan on the cheek

which leaves both of then breathless for a mintue....

then Ridz Whispers i m Sorry Into Armaans Ear...

and runs out of the locker room blushing

so hard her face turn red..............

Armaan is still standing where

he was glued to the floor......






Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 December 2009 at 8:49am

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PART 27



A: Yeh sapna hai kya????

(Pinching his arm) ouch.......   

Ouch..... (smilies to himself)

Sapna:Armaan Armaan

A:Oh haan sapna

Sapna: Armaan tumhara dhyan kahan hai

tumhare pager baaj raha hai

A: oH shit Dr. Keerti

(running out of the locker room)

Sapna: Best of luck

A: Thanks......... .......

and he leaves

Dr Keerti: Dr. Armaan aap toh

time ke bade pabandh hai

jo 10 minute pehle hi aa gaye

(he is late and keerit is being sarcastic)

A: Sorry Dr. Keerti

R(beside Armaan):

Woh Dr. Keerti

(trying to support him)

Dr. K: Dr. Riddhima better hoga

ki aap dono ab yeh ke dusre ki

saphayat karni chod de

aur pehle bar nahi hai

A: Ji Dr. hum dhyan rakhenge

R: Ji Dr.

Dr. K: behter yahi hoga

aapki professional life ke liye.

A: Ji par aapne humne

yahan bulaya kyun

Dr. K:(staring at Armaan her usual angry look.)

Woh isliye kyunki aap dono to jante hain ki

IOTM ke scores ke hisapse

aap dono lead kar rahen hain toh

main baas batana chahti thi ke

main aap dono ke performance se khush hun

and may the best doctor win

R: Ji Dr.

Dr.K: ab aap dono jaa sakten hai

A: phew baap re itni si baat batane ke liye

R: Haan main toh daar hi gayi thi

aur btw Dr. Armaan aap itne late kyun ho gaye

(Naughty smile on her face)

A: Tum mujhe chida rahi ho

R: Nahi toh

A: Aare baas woh koi ladki ne mujhe

gal pe kiss kar liya tha

toh main lipstick ka daag mitta raha tha

R: Armaan

A: haan Basket

R: Tum bhi nah

A: Tum bhi kya

R: Tum

A: Haan main (moving closer to her)

R: Intern of teh month nahi baanoge

( and she runs away)

A: Tumhare liye toh main patient

bane ko bhi tayar hun toh

yeh intern of the month kya cheez hai









Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 December 2009 at 12:49pm

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