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mohit_aggarwal Goldie

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged

PART 157

armaan gets a call from his sister tia but ridhima thinks its one of armaan's girlfriend but all the missunderstanding is cleared now 

in armaan's house 
armi: ridhima meri behen 2 hours mein airport pe ponch jaige toh hum dono usse pick karne jaige ok 
riddz: teek hai baba ab nasta toh karlo 
armi:ridhima kya tum nasta kamere mein lau plz 
riddz: teek hai baba tum joa mein lati hu ok 

armaan goes to his room 
ridhima gets 2 glases of juice and some paratas 
armaan is sitting on the bed and reading a case 
ridhima came in 
riddz: armaan yeh loh tumhara breakfast 
armaan got up and locked the door 
riddz: armaan yeh yeh kya kar rehe ho 
armi: shhh 
he put his finger on her lips. armaan made her sit down he slowly took of her earings kissing her ear and then bitting it 
riddz: armaan ahhh 
armi: dard hua kya 
riddz gave a no reaction after taking off her eaarings he went to take of her necklace while taking that off her started kssing her neck again and again he was about to take of ehr magalsruth when ridhima stopped him 
riddz: armaan nahi yeh mera magalsruth isse maat nikalo plz 
armaan smiled at this he knew how much ridhima loved him 
armaan then went closer to her and kissed her eyes 
riddz: armaan plz yeh maat karna 
armaan didn't listen to her he kept on kissing her eyes and then moving to her cheeks but ridhiam kept on saying "armaan plz don't" but armaan didn't listen to her at all he kept on doing whatever his hearts was telling him, he couldn't stop kissing her cheeks again and again layed ridhima on the bed and ended up kissing her neck this time he wasn't only kissing her neck but was sucking her neck sucking her skin it leaving red marks everywhere.Armaan wanted to stop himself but couldn't stop himself he tried his best but his heart takes over his mind everytime he loves ridhima too much to leave his lips of her body. 

armaan slid down a bit so his near ridhima tummy he wanted to kiss it but instead he was chewing it as hard as he could the only thing ridhima could do was gasp everytime she couldn't stop him or herself she liked the way he kissed her. armaan wanted more this wasn't enough for him he wanted more and more of her. They had 2 hours left before they go and pick up tia before that armaan wanted more of riddz. So he took of her pallu she was wearing he kissed her shoulder he snked his fingers down ridhima's arm, ridhima kept on saying "I love u again and again" armaan loved it when she was saying it again and again. he went down to her feet he started kissed her ankcle then kissing her lips pushing her down ridhima tried her best to keep up but couldn't armaan was the only person she has ever put her lips on, now ridhima was geting in the mood she was getting more naughtier she tookher hand and started exploring armaan's back. armaan had goosebumps everywhere shivers ran down his back for the first time while riddz was doing that armaan was kissed her foreheab then her neck leaving his kisses everywhere around her face. ridhima then started kissing armaan neck she loved it she felt like she was in a new world 

just then armaan's phone rang 
armi: yeh phone ko bhi abhi bajna tha 
riddima was giggling 
armi: teek hai di ponch jaige bye 
tia: bye 
armaan hanged up 
armi: ridhima di ko pick karne chale 
riddz: teek hai ab toh mere uppar se uto [laughing] 
armaan got up of her and then ridhima made a sarre properly armaan put his buttons on 

in the car 
riddz: armaan tumujhe tumare behen ke bare mein kuch nahi bataya 
armi: meri behen bohot sweet and kind sabka dyan lekti hai she is so cute 
riddz: ab toh mujhe usse milna hi padega 
armaan tell more about her sister how they used to fight and stuff 

in the airport 
a girl is seen she is wearing a green colour churidar all the security is just staring at her 
armaan and ridhima reached the airport 
the girl comes out 
armi: T I A... 
tia turns around [tia is played my kashish or kth i hope no one mind u can change if u don't like it] 
riddz :bohot koobsurat lagti hai [whispering to armaan] 
armi: pata hai 

tia comes 
tia: BHAI... 
armi: hi tia di kaise ho tum 
tia: first class 
tia notices ridhima 
tia: hmmm toh yeh hai meri pyaari bhabhi 
ridhima blushes 
riddz: hi 
tia: hi toh tum ho jisne mere bhai ka dill le liya 
ridhima starts blushing even more 
tia: ohe ohe kinte cute ho tum 
riddz: thnaks 
armi: ab tum dono ke battei ho gaye to gahr chale 
tia and riddz: CHALE... 
they all laugh 

and go home 

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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 11:26am | IP Logged
thnx 4 da massive updt! loved it! Armaan is so romantic! he always have his way with Ridz! he takes every oppurtunity he gets 2 romance with her! LOL!
want more...updt asap
thnx 4 pm


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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
Very nice all the parts...please continue soon !!!!
mohit_aggarwal Goldie

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Posted: 12 June 2012 at 11:22pm | IP Logged


AR recives tia  from the airpot. this part is dedicated to all of the readers . 
aa wedding night part
sorry for posting late

PART 158

(Much awaited atul-anjali wedding night)

anjali was sitting in her room & was thinking something& 
blusing too.atul was busy planting his new plant in garden. 
big smile appeared on angi's face as remembered her wedding night. 
Smile *flashback* Smile 
Angali was sitting on the bed. 
Atul enters the room as being pushed by the girls.the girls r giggling & laughing. Atul closes the door of the 
room & comes & sits on the bed.he was sweating badly. 
an(angali)& at(atul): 
an: tumhe paseena kyun a raha hai. 
at:actually mein nervous ho raha hoon. 
an:angi laughs a bit & says nervous hone wali kya baat hai.(she sees thatatul is hiding something on his back) 
an:atul kya chupa rahe ho. 
at:woh tumhare liye present laya ne bataya tha ki shaadi ki pehli raat ko biwi ko taufa dete hai & he gives it to her(guess wats the gift Wink ) 
an: she unwraps the gift & finds that their was a small cute baby rose plant.tears begin to fall from angis eyes 
she was extreamlly happy& says oh atul "i luv u" Heart 
at: i luv u too Heart 
then atul stares at her.she is feeling all shy & starts blushing.the lights in the room were dim. the room was decorated with candels & flowers all around. 

atul comes near angali.their hearts are beating really fast.atul starts coming more closer, closer & closer. 
soon they can feel each others breath.atul wanted to kiss her lips but is hesistant. angali understands this 
&she begin to kiss him.he responded back enthusiastically. soon they began to hav a long passionate kiss.then atul bends over her & starts removing the jewellery& kiss the part from where he removes the jewellery. first the earing he kissis &bites the ear.then her neck , then the anklet and so on.angi was feeling good. she was feeling out of the world.angi begans to unbutton his kurta & kisses his chest & neck. atul slowly opens the strings of his top 
& then removes it. he was astonished & amased to see angi like this & nervous also being atul.He obsereved her carefully.. she was blushing & shying badly. he pulls her closer & kisses her everywhere. they both are enjoyinh themselves. he takes the sheet& pulls over both of them . the night goes on & candels melting & aa melting in each other.

*flash back over*

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KaJen_addiction IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
plz update this...
mohit_aggarwal Goldie

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaJen_addiction

plz update this...

i m not updatting bcoz no one is reading it

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