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great parts thxs for the pm 

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PART 150

Recap: AR spend another night at the farmhouse due to the occurrence of landslide on the highway and share some cute and ahem ahem moments with each other yet again…. 

Next morning…. 

Riddhima woke up feeling self contented the next morning. Getting married to Armaan had made her feel complete; something which she had never felt before. She felt as if she had got a new life, and for this she was very thankful to God. 

She then stretched her arms in a joyful manner and was about to get up from the bed when she found Armaan's side vacant. It surprised her not to see Armaan near her side, especially at this time of the morning when usually he had the habit of sleeping till late. 

She got up and started looking for Armaan…. 

R: Armaan! Armaan kahan ho tum? 

She was facing the balcony and her back was facing the bedroom entrance when suddenly she felt the coming of Armaan. She turned around to find Armaan standing with a tray in his hands. 

A: Tang tadang…..Goodmorning Riddhima! 
R: Armaan, tum kahan the? Main tumhen dhoond rahi thi (in a worried tone) 

Riddhima then saw a teapot with 2 cups and a plate of sandwiches and biscuits on the tray held by Armaan. 

R: Armaan yeh sab….(still confused) 
A: Haan Riddhima! Yeh sab maine banaya hai, tumhare liye. 

After seeing all this, Riddhima's anger and impatience melted away and her eyes got filled with tears. She felt really lucky to have got married with such a loving person. She was unable to stop herself and went running towards Armaan. But, before she could hug him, he said… 

A: Ruko Riddhima! Kya kar rahi ho? (naughtily) 

Riddhima found it a little awkward and was not able to understand why Armaan stopped her from hugging him. 

A: Arre, pehle mujhe yeh tray toh bed pe rakhne do warna toot jaayegi (he said it with a cheeky grin on his face) and placed the tray on the bed. 

Riddhima came running and hugged him tightly. 

R: Armaan, tumne yeh sab mere liye kiya? 
A: Aur nahin toh kya… 
R: Oh Armaan, I love you so much! 
A: I love you too sweetheart. 
(And they both sat on the bed) 

A: Waise bhi, I wanted to show you my cooking skills especially after last night's discussion. Tumhen bhi toh pata chale ki tumhari ek "All rounder" husband se shaadi hui hai… LOL 
R: Oh achha? (smiling) 
A: Haan, aur yeh ghulam tumhare liye kucch bhi kar sakta hai. Toh kya hukum hai mere Aaka? LOL 

Riddhima found Armaan's behavior funny and started to laugh…Seeing Riddhima laugh, Armaan felt very happy and satisfied. The morning sunshine reflecting on her face made her look even more beautiful. Her skin, her eyes, her lips, all radiated with full effect and showed her natural beauty at its peak. 

Armaan kept staring at her and didn't want this moment to end ever….. 
Seeing Armaan staring her, Riddhima started to feel shy and in order to break the silence said….

R: Armaan! Kya hai? Hato ab, mujhe fresh hona hai. 
A: Arre Riddhima, abhi ruko na. Yahin baithi raho mere saath. 
R: Armaan, mujhe jaana hai. I have to get ready. 
A: Kya yaar Riddhima, main nahin chahta kit tum kabhi bhi meri nazron se door ho. 
R: Oh achha? Kabhi nahin? (in a teasing way) 
A: Haan, kabhi nahin! (He made a puppy like face while saying this) 
R: Magar Armaan, jab hum Sanjeevani mein wapas jaayenge, tab toh humari duties bhi alag alag ho sakti hain. 
And, aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki humme se kisi ki night duty ho aur doosre kin na ho. Tab tum kya karoge? (Riddhima was trying to tease Armaan by giving examples of all these scenarios) 

Armaan knew that Riddhima was trying to tease and irritate him so he said while maintaining his calm… 

A: Nahin, main aisa nahin hone doonga. Agar aisa hua, toh main hamare Papppaji se mera matlab hai mere Sasurji se baat karke hum dono ki duties ek saath lagwa doonga. 

Riddhima started smiling on seeing the innocent side of Armaan and said… 

R: Toh tum aisa karoge? That's not fair. 
A: Arre jaan, everything is fair in Love and war. 
Aur waise bhi mere Sasurji ki position kis din kaam aayegi. Aakhir main unka damaad hoon, toh itna favor toh unhe mere liye karna hi hoga (and he winked at her). 
R: Armaan, tum kabhi nahin sudhar sakte. (trying to make an angry face; but was acting) 
A: Tumse shaadi ki hai na, ab tum hi mujhe sudhaar dena (and he laughed) 

Riddhima got a little frustrated coz she wanted to irritate Armaan and she ended up getting irritated herself. She got up from the bed and said to Armaan…. 

R: Achha, ab hato mere saamne se. I need to take a shower and get ready. Then we have to go back home. 

Seeing Riddhima get up, Armaan got up too and blocked her way… 

A: First say "I love you". 
R: Paagal ho kya? LOL 
A: Haan tumhare pyaar mein….(said with a slight smile on his face). Say you love me. 
R: Armaan, jaane do na mujhe. 
A: No. Jab tak tum mujhe nahin kahogi, main tumhen nahin jaane doonga. 
R: Armaan, please jaane do mujhe. Dekho hum kitne late ho rahe hain. Wahan ghar mein sab hamare bare mein kya soch rahe honge. 
A: Let them think whatever they want to. Main apni biwi ke saath hoon aur usse woh 3 words sunna chahta hoon. Toh kaho na biwiji…..(in a naughty way) 

Ridz knew that Armaan won't let her get away like this so she asked him to close his eyes… 

R: Achha bolti hoon par pehle tum apni aakhen band karo. 
A: Paaka, then you'll say those 3 words? 
R: Haan baba band toh karo… 

Armaan closed his eyes and had a big wide smile on his face showing all his front teeth (the one that makes him look so cute) 
Riddhima thought that this was the right opportunity to get away from him so she said… 

R: Armaan (in a whispering manner)….*silence* 
A: Haan bolo Riddhima….(in a whispering tone; still having that wide smile on his face) 
R: I…..*Silence* 
A: Bolo Riddhima….(the silence was killing him) 
R: Love……*Long Silence* 
A: Love……(in a whispering way; he was getting really impatient) 
R: I …..Love……*Long Silence* 
A: I love what????(his impatience was at its peak now) 
R: I love ……Sanjeevani….. 

And she ran away by climbing from the other side of the bed into the bathroom and was laughing loudly….Armaan on noticing this ran after her but to his despair, she had already shut the bathroom door before he could catch her….. 
Riddhima was still laughing…. 

A: Riddhima tumhe toh main chodoonga nahin…. 
R: Oho….poor you! 
A: Dekh loonga tumhen. (He said this while going back towards the bedside) 

At this, Riddhima opened the door and said… 

R: Toh dekh lo. 

Armaan again ran towards the bathroom door to catch her but, she shut it at his face before he could get inside….LOL 

A: Ouch! Dekh loonga main tumen basket (while holding his nose). Mera number bhi aayega…. LOL 

After taking shower and getting dressed, Riddhima went into the kitchen and prepared some "Alloo" and "Gobhi" Paranthas…..And then she called for Armaan…. 

R: Mr. Malik, khana ready hai. Aa jao. 
A: Aa raha hoon Mrs. Malik…. LOL 

And Armaan came running down from the stairs…..and opened his arms while standing in front of Riddhima and said… 

A: Tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye (in a singing tone) 
R: Chalo Armaan, bahut natak ho gaya. Ab khana khao aur batao kaisa bana hai. 

Armaan after taking a bite said… 

A: Waah! Waah! Tumhare haath kahan hai, unhen chhomne ka dil kar raha hai…. LOL LOL LOL 

At this, Riddhima put another bite in his mouth and said…. 

R: Bahut hua Mr Aashiq, ab jaldi breakfast karo. Then, we have to leave for home as well. 
A: Jo hukum mere aaka…. LOL 

And both Armaan and Riddhima finished their breakfast and left the farmhouse to head back towards home… 
Both of them reached the Malik mansion….but still sitting in the car…. 

R: Chalen Armaan? 

Riddhima was about to open the door when Armaan held her hand and said… 

A: Riddhima pehle ek kiss do na. 
R: Armaan, pagal ho gaye ho kya? 
A: Do na please! 
R: Armaan, koi dekh lega…..(she was blushing at the same time) 
A: Do na please! 

Ridz knew Armaan won't let her go away without kissing him….So she also felt like being naughty with him. 

R: Pehle meri ek shart hai. 
A: Haan haan, jo shart hai bolo, main poora karoonga. Akhir ye Armaan Malik ki zabaan hai, ek mard ki zabaan. 

Riddhima kissed Armaan's cheek. At this Armaan again got very happy and had the wide smile showing all his front teeth glittering….Since, Riddhima's kissing had left a lipstick mark on his cheek, he was about to wipe it away when Riddhima stopped him and said… 

R: Arre sweetheart, tumne toh meri shart suni hi nahin. 
A: Haan bolo Basket. 
R: Tum iss nishaan ko aaj pure din nahin mita sakte (she had a cheeky grin on her face while saying this) 

On hearing this, Armaan's eyes bulged out in a surprised way and he said… 

A: But sweetheart, andar ghar mein sab honge na, woh kya sochenge??? (in a worried voice) 
R: Too bad, tumne toh kaha tha ki ye Armaan Malik ki zabaan hai, ek mard ki zabaan. Yeh sab tumhen pehle sochna chaiya tha….(She was being all cheeky with him) 
A: (Thinking and talking to himself) Ab kya karoon? Ghar mein sab dekhenge toh mera mazaak udayenge….(was saying while making a puppy like face) 

So Armaan placed his right hand on his right cheek to cover the lipstick mark and they both rang the door bell of the Malik masion. When the door opened, all the family members got surprised to see Armaan holding his cheek with his right hand while their suitcase was in his left….. LOL 


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PART 151

AM: Acha beta tumne abhi tak bataye nahi yeh lipstick ke daag kaha se aye? 
A: who mummy…….. (Looking at ridz who was crimson red) 
M (mauli): Aunty samjha karo zaroor bhabhie ne…… 
Everyone starts laughing and riddhima runs upstairs. 
A: aap log bhi na dekho abhi riddhima chaligaye 
AM: acha acha chalo ek kaam ki baat karne thi armaan hum sab kal tumhare papa ki dost ke ghar janewale hai tum apna aur riddhima ka kayal rikna beta. 
A: ji ma (smiling) 
AM: acha chalo aab tum dono dinner ka ke soh jana meh tumhare dinner bhejti hoon. 
Armaan ran upstairs in full speed and saw that riddhima was already fast asleep. He decided to have dinner and go to sleep as it was quite late and the long drive had exhausted him. 
It was 08:00am in the morning Riddhima woke up as soon as a ray of sun hit her eye. She saw Armaan write next to her peacefully sleeping. 
R: Aaj mein ise chor deti hoon waise bhi kitna cute lagta hai sothe waqt. Mein change kar ke nashta bana ti hoon. 
Now it was 10:00am Riddhima came in their room searching for Armaan. 
R: Armaan, Armaan, uttho its 10'o clock hmmm yeh Armaan kaha chala gaye neeche dekh ti hoon. 
R: (worried) Armaan makaz choro she entered the garden 
A: Ha bolo Riddhima with a grin on his face 
Before she could speak he took a water pipe and sprung it in her direction. 
A: ha ha ha aaj meine apna badla leh liye he panted while running fast beacsue Riddhima was running after him. 
R: mein tumhe nahi choronge, tumne mere pure saree gheeli kar di. Armaan tum to aaj gaye!!! 
A: sorry basket aab maan bhi jaho mein thaak gaye hoon. 
R: (still running) tumhe yeh saab phele sochna tha 
R: kha choop gaye? Mein tumhe na… 
A: wrapping his hands around her bare waist kabhi nahi? 
R: hmmm kabhi nahi 
A: coming close so she could feel his warm breath on her cold body mein toh yahi chahta hoon kit um mujhe kabhi nah choro. 
R: turns around and hugs him I love you mr malik 
A: and I love you too mrs malik 
R: acha baba abhi nashta kaane chale 
A: hmmm teekh hai par phele 
R: phele kya 
A: tum apne sari toh change karlo nahi toh phir meh change karwa deta hoon with a grin 
R: nahi mein khud kar sakh ti hoon and runs away 

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PART 152

hey this is my part 

armaan takes revenge on ridhima by splasing her by water 

ridhima goes to change her clothes cause they were all wet, she was going to wear a pink saree just then armaan came in 

armi :ridhima pink nahi 
riddz :armaan pink saree bohot achi hai 
armi :lakin tum red mein bohot achi lagti hoSmile 
armaan came and hugged ridhima from the backCOLOR=ORANGE]{ ridhima is still wet } 
riddz :armaan yeh kya kar rahe ho 
armaan didn't listen to her 
riddz :Armaan plz muihe chod do plz 
armi :ridhima koi nahi line dond lo 
riddz :armaan plzzz dekho darrvaza kula hai 
armi :toh 
riddz :armaan koi dekh lage plz 
armaan moves ridhima's hair from the back and he starts kissing her neck Embarrassed 
ridhima gave out gasps whenever armaan kissed her on the neck 

riddz :Armaan ab toh chod do 
armi :mein tumhe kahi nahi choduga 
riddz :tumhare mama aur papa kya kahe ge 
armi :ab se yeh sirf meri hi mom aur dad nahi woh ab tumhare bhi hai 
riddz turned around so she is facing armaan she hugged him as tight as she could 

armi :ridhima kya hua 
riddz :kuch nahi armaan 
armaan made ridhima sit on the bed 
armi :ab batoa 
riddz :armaan sach mein kuch nahi hai 
armi :ridhima tum mujhe se jhoot bolna bant karo plzzz 
riddz :mujhe papa anjali aur nani ki bohot yaad ah rahi hai 
armi :itni si bath hai hum dad ko milne ajj raat jayge ok 
riddz :Armaan tum kinte ache ho 
armi :ab jakar change karo 
riddz :mein toh bul gayi 

riddz got chnaged she wore a red saree with red earings and payal 
riddz came out and sat infront of the dressing table she was trying to put the mangalsruth on but she couldn't reach it from the back. 
armaan was startnd at her from the back but ridhima didn't notice ridhiam stood up {her back facing armaan}armaan came closer and closer 

he put his hand on the bare waist ridhima head shot up 
riddz :armaan 
armi :shhh 
armaan did ridhima mugalsruth formt the back then he took the sindoor from the dressing table and put it in her maang 
armi :ajj kuch zayada hi achi lag rahi ho 
riddz {was blushing tooo much} 
riddz :thanks 
armaan lifted ridhima chin up 
he gave her gentle kiss on her cheek then he went and kissed her eyes and then her forehead 
ridhima's eyes were closed 
armaan went up to her lips he didn't do anything fora few mintues but just then ridhimagot him she put as much passion into it as much as armaan used to armaan was really suprised but he felt gald that she did it this time the kiss got more passionate everytime armaan's hand was exploring all of ridhima's bare waist and ridhima's hand was caressing armaan hair 

after a long passionate kiss the came apart ridhima didn't know what to say cause she started the kiss she was tooo scared to say anything 

armi :ridhima 
riddz :armaan 
at the same time 
riddz :mein bhi ayi 
ridhima ran down stairs she didn't have the guts to look in ridhima's eyes 
ridhima started looking around there was no one in the house then ridhima remembered that everyone had gone out 
armaan came downstairs 
armi :ridhima sab log kaha hai 
riddz :sab bahar gaye hai 
armi :toh iska matlab hum ghar mein akele hai {missshive look} 
riddz :haan {looking really scared} 
riddz :armaan tum kya soch raheho 
armaan :kuch nahi {smilling to himself} Big smile 

armaan had thought of a great plan 

hey guys 
plzzz give me some lovely comment 

Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 01 June 2012 at 3:31am

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PART 153

recap:armaan thought abt the great plan as they were alone today!!!!!. 

armaan:acha tumhe papa, nani aur angi se milne ka maan tha na. chalo chalte hai milne 
ridz:tum kitne ache ho armaan i luv u(& hugs him) 
armaan :i luv u too basket. 
shashank opens the door 
shashank:armaan, ridhima beta tum. wat a pleasant surprise. 
ridz hugs shashank 
nani: meri bachi agaye. kaise hai tu aur tum kaise ho armaan 
armaan:mein aur riddhima bilkul theek hai nani. 
ridz gets little emotional as she meets them after a long time& arman consoles her 
nani & shashank r watching this r really happy to see their love for each other 
armaan:papa ab mein chalta hoon mujhe kuch kaam hai. (  thinks abt the plan) 
riddhima mein tumhe thodi deer mein pick karne ata hoon 
ridz:pata nahi ab armaan ko kya hogaya hai 
armaan: jaldi karo 5 bajne hi wale hai& after everything is done he goes to pickup ridz. 
armaan in car: 
armaan: acha ridz close ur eyes. plz hum ghar poohcne hi wale hai 
ridz: par kyun armaan 
armaan : tum mere leye itna bhi nahi kar sakti(& makes sad face)  
ridz: mein tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon& she closes her eyes. 
now armaan opens the door of their house: 
armaan: aankhe khol lo jaan 
ridz opens the eyes & sees a beautifull house.decorated 
with roses of different colours & in between their was a 
table for 2 with candle in center & lights were dim. 
the house looked like a palace. 
ridz: ye... ye saab mere liye 
armaan: meri sab se pyari jaan ke liye 
& he takes her hand & make her sit on chair. 
armaan & ridz feed each other from same plate 
armaan: khaan kaisa hai. meine banaya hai 
ridz had tears in her eyes. 
armaan:khaana acha nahi hai to mat khao par ro mat 
ridz: khaana bohot achaa hai. par mein isleye ro rahi hoon kyuki mein soch rahi hoon ki koi mujse itna pyaar kaise kar sakta hai. kya ye pyaar mein deserve karti hoon 
armaan: jaan tum bahut achi ho aur tum ise bhi jyada pyaar deserve karti ho. now stop crying jaan 
armaan: chalo jaan lets dance 
armaan plays the soft romantic music!!!!! 
armaan puts both his hand on her bare waist & 
ridhima puts it around his neck. they r really close& 
r dancing really slow lost in each other!!!!!!!!! 

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PART 154

Recap: Armaan took Riddhima to meet her dad and nani and then gave her a sweet romantic surprise in the evening at home. 

After finishing the food, Armaan and Riddhima had a slow dance in their balcony and were completely lost in each other when suddenly, both of them came back to their senses. 

A: Toh Riddhima tumhe mera surprise pasand aaya? (in a curious and enthusiastic tone) 
R: Nahin Armaan! (in an angry tone….lowering her eyes and facing the floor) 

Listening to that, Armaan felt disappointed and made a sad face and then asked her… 

A: Toh tumhen pasand nahin aaya? (in a less enthusiastic way) 

R: Nahin (still facing the floor….but was also trying to see Armaan's expressions by raising her eyes from time to time in between) 
This time, she wanted to play a prank on Armaan and enjoy its outcome. LOL 

Armaan was feeling low after hearing this and felt as if he was not able to reach upto Riddhima's expectations. His mood and facial expressions started to take a drastic change from being completely joyful and excited to being sad and dissatisfied. He now lowered his head and started to think where he went wrong with his plan. 

Seeing this, Riddhima being Riddhima (as in being gentle at heart) couldn't continue playing with Armaan anymore and ultimately raised his face from his chin with her right hand and then held his face in both her hands. 

R: Armaan, mujhe tumhara surprise pasand nahin bahut pasand aaya (said with a smile on her face to cheer Armaan up) 

While saying this, Riddhima couldn't control her emotions and tears started flowing from her eyes. These tears were not flowing because of any pain or unhappiness but, instead, were flowing because of the happiness given by Armaan's love. She felt so happy and thankful to God for giving her such a devoted and loving husband who could do anything to make his love happy. 

A: Arre Riddhima, tum ro kyun rahi ho? (in a concerned voice) 
R: Woh Armaan, I am sorry! Please forgive me. 

Armaan couldn't understand why Riddhima was asking for forgiveness. 

A: Riddhima, tum sorry kyun keh rahi ho? 
R: Armaan, woh main tumhen satana chahti thi, isliye tumhen pareshan karne ke liye maine tumse kaha woh sab. 

Now, Armaan understood everything and started smiling. He hadn't seen anyone in his life as innocent as Riddhima. He wondered how anyone could be so innocent and gentle at heart. 

A: Isse toh jhooth bhi bolna nahin aata (thinking and smiling to himself) 
R: Armaan, tumne kuchh kaha? (in an innocent way) 

Armaan came back to his senses. 

A: Huh? Nahin, kuchh nahin. It's okay basket, bade bade deshon mein aisi chhoti chhoti baatein hoti rehti hain. (and winked at her) LOL 
R: Armaan, tum bhi na, bade filmi ho! 
And they both started laughing. 

After dancing for a while, both Armaan and Riddhima felt like concluding their dance. 
Armaan then interrupted. 

A: Umm….Riddhima! (with a raised eyebrow) 
R: Haan Armaan? 
A: Mummy aur Papa aaj kitne baje aayenge? 
R: Armaan, mummy ne kaha tha ki unhen der ho jaayegi aane mein. Most probably, raat tak hi aayenge. 
A: Great! (to himself in an excited way) 
R: Kuchh kaha tumne? 
A: Nahin, woh main soch raha tha ki kyun na hum aaj ki saari shaam relax karen apne bedroom mein? (with a cheeky face) 

Riddhima knew what Armaan meant by that. 
R: Armaan, tum kabhi nahin sudhar sakte. (was blushing and hitting him playfully on his chest) 
Armaan started laughing on hearing this. 

R: Armaan! Kyun na hum aaj ek romantic movie dekhen? 
She had a shine in her eyes as she said that. 
A: Movie??? Kya yaar Riddhima? Movie bhi koi dekhne ki cheez hai? 
He behaved in a revolting way as if a candy was taken from a child. LOL 
R: Please Armaan, mujhe movie dekhni hai. (with a cute face) 

Seeing Riddhima all excited about the movie, Armaan had no choice but to accept her demands. So, he took out a "Classic" romantic movie DVD from his collection and inserted it into the DVD player and sat on the couch in the living room. Riddhima prepared some popcorns and bought them in a bowl and sat on the couch beside Armaan all ready to watch the movie. Armaan pressed the "Play" button and the movie started running. 

Riddhima was all busy watching the movie with the popcorn bowl on her lap and was having a great time. Armaan on the other hand, was feeling bored. So, he slowly and steadily started coming closer to Riddhima. 
Riddhima was so deeply engrossed in the movie that she didn't even pay attention to what Armaan was feeling or doing. Suddenly, Riddhima felt a touch of someone's nose on her neck. She faced her right side and it was Armaan. Armaan was now kissing her neck. 

R: Kya hai Armaan? Movie enjoy karo! (In an irritated and angry voice as she was getting disturbed) 
A: Wohi toh kar raha hoon (with an innocent face yet having a slight cheeky smile on his face) 
R: Yahan nahin wahan dekho (and turned his face from herself to the Tv screen) LOL 

Armaan made a sad face but still was not ready to give up. He put his hand inside the popcorn bowl where Riddhima's hand was and took the popcorns from her hand and ate them. LOL 

Since, Riddhima was all busy with the movie, she didn't let that distract her and again put her hand inside the bowl to take some more popcorns from it. Armaan being Armaan, again placed his hand inside the bowl and opened Riddhima's folded fingers. This lead the popcorns to fall from her hands back inside the bowl. He then interlocked his fingers with hers and tightened his grip. Riddhima on noticing this got angry. 

R: Armaan, tum chup chaap movie nahin dekh sakte? (With her eyes all bulging out with anger) 
A: Chup chaap hi toh dekh raha hoon Riddhima! (with a cheeky face) 
R: Aage dekkhar movie dekho! Aur, yeh lo popcorn khao! (and she put a popcorn in his mouth) 

Armaan again made a sad face and thought to himself... 
A: Yeh Riddhima bhi na! Itna achha mauka mila tha aaj akele time spend karne ka. Maine kya kya soch kar rakha hua tha aaj ke liye. Par nahin, in madam ko toh movie dekhne ki padi hai (with his puppy like face). 
A: Is movie ke hero se zyada "handsome" ladka in madam ke saath baitha hai; jo inka real life "Hero" hai, par, dekho kaise usse ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahi hai…hm! (in irritated tone) 

All irritated and in a desperate need of getting Riddhima's attention, he paused the movie. 

R: Armaan! Yeh kya kar rahe ho? Itna achha scene chal raha tha.(in an angry tone) 
A: Arre Riddhima, yeh movie "Mature Audience" ke liye hai. Tum mat dekho. LOL LOL LOL 
R: Toh main kya tumhen bachhi nazar aati hoon? (Again in an angry tone). Chalo Armaan, "Play" karo. 
A: Uff! (in an irritated voice) 

Armaan then unpaused the movie and was all ready to be bored again. 

In the movie, some ahem ahem scenes b/w the male and female lead actors started to take place. Seeing this, Riddhima started to feel shy and started blushing badly. She tried to act as if she was not watching the movie but was rather busy looking at something else at her left side with the back side of her head facing Armaan. 

On the other hand, Armaan knew why Riddhima was looking in the opposite direction and came close to her and started kissing her on her neck. Feeling Armaan's warm lips touch her cold skin, Riddhima said… 

R: Armaan! (in a whispering tone) 

Armaan then turned Riddhima's face towards his side and started to kiss the front side of her neck. Armaan's warm lips were making Riddhima melt and it showed on her face. 
Armaan seeing Riddhima's facial expressions felt happy and started to move his lips towards her chin. 

R: Armaan! (in a whispering tone) 
A: Riddhima! (in a whispering tone as well) 

Armaan then moved towards her lips and was about to kiss her when the doorbell rang. Armaan and Riddhima both came back to their senses. 

R: Lagta hai mummy, papa aa gaye. (In a scared and nervous voice while putting her saree pallu back on her shoulder properly) 
A: Haan darwaaza kholo! 

Riddhima went towards the door and opened it and saw the Postman standing there. LOL 

R: Oh Postman! (Felt relaxed and smiled) 

Armaan felt like being naughty again and hid behind the door so that the postman could not see him and started pulling Riddhima's pallu. Riddhima didn't want the Postman to see that, so, she signed the document quickly and took all the letters from him. 
Armaan, during that time was in full naughty mood and was thus rolling himself in Riddhima's pallu. Riddhima quickly shut the main door and saw that Armaan had Riddhima's pallu all around him LOL and was standing just a few inches away from her. 

They both started gazing in each other's eyes when the main door suddenly opened and to Armaan's and Riddhima's surprise, Armaan's mom and dad were standing at the entrance. LOL 

A & R together: Mummy, Papa aap? (With shocked face) 

Armaan quickly realized that he was surrounded by Riddhima's pallu. So, he quickly unrolled himself. 

A: Woh main Riddhima ko theek se saree baandhna sikha raha tha (felt all embarrassed) LOL 

Armaan's Mom and Dad were still standing there with shocked faces in front of Armaan and Riddhima….. 

Xxx xxx 

That's it guys! 

Please comment after reading as that's what encourages me to write more. 

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Posted: 01 June 2012 at 10:06am | IP Logged

PART 155

armaan takes ridhima to meet shashank and nani then they come home and spend a romantic time together the door belll rings it was the postman ridhima is signing and armaan is trying to take a pallu off the post man goes and ridhima see armaan wrapped aroung her pallu and he is reallly close to her, armaan's parrent come in and see armaan wrapped in ridhima's pallu and so close 

A & R together: Mummy, Papa aap? (With shocked face) 
Armaan quickly realized that he was surrounded by Riddhima's pallu. So, he quickly unrolled himself. 
A: Woh main Riddhima ko theek se saree baandhna sikha raha tha (felt all embarrassed) 
Armaan's Mom and Dad were still standing there with shocked faces in front of Armaan and Riddhima….. 

armi: mom dad mein woh 
mom: armaan beta yeh sab tum 
riddz: mummy ji mein yeh sab armaan ki galti hai 
armi: KYA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [shocked] 
riddz: haan tumhare glati hai 
armi: meri sab tumhare galti hai 
riddz :nahi meri nahi tumhare 
armi: tumhare 
riddz: tumhare 
armaan's mom and dad moved out of the coversation and went into their room 

armaan and ridhima were stilll fighting 
armi: ridhima yeh sab meri galti nahi hai 
riddz: jaisi meri galti hai 
armi: haan tumhare hai KYU ridhima KYU [fake crying] 
riddz: armaan i'm really sorry mein kya kiya plz rona mat plz 
armi: ridhima tumhare hi galti hai tum hamesha inti koobsurat jo lakti ho [starts laughing] 
riddz: toh yeh sab mazzak ta [very angry] 
armaan realises what he has done and he holds her hand 
but ridhima pulls her hand off and runs to her room 

armi to himself: yeh maine kya kiya 
armi :mujhe hi kuch karna chahiyeh 

armaan rushes to his room 
ridhima is sitting on the bed and is really sad 
armaan comes in 
armi :ridhima 
ridhima stands up 
riddz: mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai plz yaha se joa 
armi: ridhima plz suno na 
riddz: ARMAAN JOA YAHA SE JOA [shouting] 
armaan felt a different tone in her voice 
armaan left from the room crying he went to the garden behind his house. 

in ridhima's room 
riddz: apne app ko kya samage ta hai phele mummy or papa ji ke samne woh sab hua aur fir mere dil ke saath mazzak kiya mein usse kabhi maff nahi karugi. 
ridhima came downstairs armaan's mom and dad were having dinner 
mom: ridhima beti kanna kale 
riddz: ji mummy ji 
dad: aur yeh armaan kaha hai 
ridhima's head shot up with concern. 
mom: haan bahar bhi kitne barish ah rahi hai 
dad: lakta hai tufaan ane wala hai 
riddz: mummy ji armaan kaha hai [very worried] 
mom: mujhe laga tumhe pata hoga 
just then armaan's mom and dad finish their food and went to their room 

ridhima was crying really badly 
riddz: yeh sab meri hi waje se ho raha hai 
it stated to thunder and lightening 
ridhima got really scared 
riddz: armaan kaha to tum 
ridhima decided to search the whole house she searched the whole house but still no armaan 
ridhima was really scared now and she couldn't control her tears they were flowing like the niagara fall 
she went up to her room and sat down on the bad letting all the tears come down no one there to comfort her to conesol her no one there to lay her head on. Just one thing kept commign in her head NO ARMAAN NO ARMAAN NO ARMAAN she had no control over herself. 
She remembered how she had screamed at armaan 


armi :ridhima 
ridhima stands up 
riddz: mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai plz yaha se joa 
armi: ridhima plz suno na 

* end of flashback* 

riddz: meine aisa kyu kiya kyu 
riddz: sab meri hi galti hai mein hamesha armaan se ladti hoon bar bar sirf usi par naraz hoti hoon 
ridhima got up and went near the window she stood there for a few mins and then she saw someone out there sitting on the swing he was crying really bad he was dripping went thundering all around him and lightening everywhere 
ridhima tried to see who is was she tried her best but she couldn'e she gave it a last try she saw the person ridhima had the most shocking face on her tears were coming out really fast now 
riddz: ARMAAN 
ridhima ran downstairs she ran right to the back to the garden armaan back was facing her 
riddz: ARMAAN [screamed it out] 
armaan looked back and stook up ridhima came running and hugged him as tight as she could armaan couldn't help it he hugged he back as hard as he could ridhima parted first she went closer to him she brought him face closer to hers she put armaan hand on her back and the other on her waist ridhima lifted her self a bit and started kissing armaan it started out really gently and slowly but them ridhima put more presure into it she brought armaan more and more closer armaan put as more and twise of presure into the kiss he didn't want to left go of her he wanted more and more and more armaan stopped and went to her neck kissing every single inch of it he took he pallu of and layed her down on the grass he went to the other side of her neck not leaving a single part of her neck empty without his kisss.Ridhima was exploring armaan back caressing his hair, armaan then started kissing her stomach he wanted every part of her body with his kisses 

riddz: arrrmmmaaannn [gaspping with his every touch] 
armi: shhh ridhima kuch maat khena ajj toh tumne bohot kaha abb kuch nahi 
armaan went down to her feet her slowly took of her payal and kissed her anckle 

armaan picked her up in his arms and took her in their room 
he placed her onto the bed he untied her top kissing every part of her top leaving a trail of kissing 
ridhima stated to unbutton armaan's shirt she took of his top and started kissed her chest leaving lipstick marks everywhere she got on top of armaan and started kissing his neck and then leading up to his shoulders she underlocked her fingers with his not letting him or this moment to leave.Armaan was just staring at riddz following every single gaze of hers not letting his eyes move from hers as ridhima was kissing his bare chest moving up to him forehead then his cheeks on to his chip and then juts waiting for their lips to me meat and again back into a passionate kiss not letting their lips to be out of it 
armaan was rubbing his leg into ridhima. 
Ridhima was happy to win armaan back she promised to never letting a tear in his eyes ever again she will never lose him. 

riddz: armaan plz mujhe maff kardo 
armi: ridhima tumhe maffi magne ki koi karurat nahi hai 
riddz: armaan tum inte ache ho sab meri hi galti thi 
armi: shhh ab kuch nat khena ab toh sirf humhare dill ki dadkaan baat karege 
with that armaan started kissing her again 
riddz :I LOVE U 

With that armaan pulled ridhima into him and then he pulled the bed covers. The only thing that had seen this was the shinning mooon whowere smilling at them. 

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mohit_aggarwal Goldie

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 2:05pm | IP Logged

PART 156

Recap:-Ar spend sum cute moments 2gether... 

IN d mornin:- 
AR sleepin... 

suddenly armaan's fone rings... 
R-is still sleeping... 
A-picks up d fone... 
A-hello(in a sleppy tone) 
A-whose dat??? 
Caller-arre vah riddhima se shaddi karke mujhe bhul gaye??? 
A-hello...cant u answer a simple question...if u cant den plz lemme sleep... 
bi...n yawns 
Caller-hey w8... 
A-now wat??? 
Caller-sings sum kiddy song... 
A-gets up...n is in a shock... 
R-who was sleepinj on armaans shoulder got up... 
kya hua armaaan???sone bhi nahi dete... 
A-gets up from d bed... 
A-Tia tum???? 
T-ji bro mein... 
A-awww...after soo long...kahan ho?? 
R-kaun hai?? 
R-got angry... 
R-got up from d bed n went to teh washroom... 

A still tokin to her...sis... 
T-bro in in USA 
A-abhi tak??? 
T-ji bro...bas airport ja rahi huun... 
T-india aa rahi huun bro...mumbai...n den im gonan meet bhabhi(riddhima) 
A-woow!!!! luv u...u w8in...yeh even shes diein to meet u... 
T-meri flight kal shaam ko land hogi... 
A-ok i'll pick u up...wid riddhima 
T-ok u... 
A-bi sweety...luv u...muah... 
T-cuts the fone... 

R in the washroomn... 
-samajhta kya hai aapne aap ko???koi aaiuse baat karta hai kya???how mean...i hate him... 
fone pe i luv u kar raha hai...hogi koi ex girlfren... 

A-riddhima...riddhima...kahan ho tum??? 
he cant fuind riddhiam anywhere... 
he goes n opens d door of the washroom... 
its locked... 
R-kya hai??? 
A-arre...mein kabse tumhe bula raha huun...tum jawab hi nahi de rahi... 
R-freshen's up n cums out... 

A-guud mornin svtheart... 
R-dosent listen to him...n just walks n goes to the balcony... 
A-arre aiise kya hua??? 
R-is standin in d balcony... 
A-goes up to her 
n hugs her from bak... 
Riddhima tries to escape from his grip...she tries hard but cant... 
A-tumhe kya hua???btw aaj meri guud mornin kiss ka kya hua??? 
R-tumhe uuski kya zaarurat hai...jao aapni uus fone wali se le lo... 
R-kya hai??? 
A-lol...shes my sister...TIA... 
R-wat???n she dey r standin face to face... 
A-still laughin... 
R-blushes...n her head is down... 
A-still laughin...n den says...see tumhe jalan hui 
A-na na na...Mrs.Mallik...ko jealousy hui... 
R-shut up armaan!!! 
A-aacha yeh sab choodo...ab toh meri guud mornin kiss de do... 
R-ok den close ur eyes... 
A-closes his eyes...but den opens n says...nahi u'll run away... 
R-nahi...close ur eyes if u luv me... 
R-is abt to run... 
A-gets to know shes gonan run...he pulls her...n now dey r standin rilli close... 
A-aaj toh nahi choodunga... 
R-blushes...armaan plz... line socho... 
R-laughs...armaan koi dekh leega... 
A-omg...riddhima...mein..tumhare husband huun...aur hum aapne kamre mein hain...aur hum kuch bhi kareen... 
A-just 1 kiss riddhima... 
R-is abt to kiss him... 
AM-Armaan beta...Riddhiam beta...neeche aao... 
A-uuuf...pehle hitler beech mein aati thi..ab mom... 
R-gives him a quick lip kiss...n says bi.. 
A-hmm...yummmy...baaki bad mein... 
R-blushes...n says ab chalo neeche... 

Dey go down n den dey all hav breakfast n all... 
After sumtym in AR's room... 

AR r sittin n as usual armaan is flirtin wid her.. 
R-armaan chalo anjali di aur atul se milne chalte hain... 

n suddenly Riddhima's fone rings... 
R-picks it up... 
Angie-hey riddhima... 
R-hi di... 
A-is kissin her...on her shoulder... 
Angie-kya hua ridzi?? 
R-ab...voh..kuch nahi di... 
Angie-so r u aur armaan kaisa hai?? 
R-mein theek huun...aur armaan bhi theek hai... 
aab batao how r u n Atul jiju??? 
Angie-we r guud...we r just at a plant exhibition... 
A-starts kissin her on her neck... 
R-armmaan!!! w8... 
Angie-kya hua ridzi...armaan kya har raha hai?? 
R-nahi kuch nahi... 
R-luuks at armaan wid big big eyes...and wid an angry face.. 
A-makes an innocent puppy face... 
R-kisses him on his cheeks... 

R-ya temme...hows lyf?? 
Angie-ntn...was missin u...tum toh mujhe bhul hi gaye ho... 
R-no di..not at all...abhi i was just tellin armaan...dat let us all meet up... 
Angie-hears dis...n laughs... 
Armaan-snatches d fone her ridzi's hands.. 
A-hey angie...yeh riddhima ne nahi maine kaha tha... 
R-snatches d fone... 
nahi di i said dis... 
Angie-laughs...Riddhaim tum dono abhi bhi aise hi ladte rehte ho... 
R-di yeh armaan mujhse hamesha ladta hai... 
n suddenly...Atul shouts...anjali dekho...jalid aao.. 
Angie-ridzi mein baad mein col karti huun...atul ko shayad koi plant pasand aa gaya hai... 

n cuts d fone... 
R-armaaan...tum na...mein fone pe baat kar rahi thi n wat were u up2??? 
A-duubara karke bataun.. 
A-gives her an innocent luuk... 
R-bahut cute ho... 

hope u liked it... 
i just wrote it... 
plz comment... 
im w8in...

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