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hey continue soon mohit!
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Hi Mohit...
ur FF seems interesting.
But i m sorry right now i m very busy with Eid work...
will surely read ur FF after Eid.
Hope u understand.
All the best.
Kanwal.

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really goood mohit waiting for more
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A symbol of your love, you gave to me.
It is a golden Payal from you, a token,
A promise of love, can never be broken.
Its music makes me believe that you're with me,
It creates a sound of music & arose so many emotions,
My body and my soul can feel it & move with music,
A gift extremely special, given from my lover,
It remember just how much you love me."

"One plus one equals two you see,
But somehow it's different with you and me,
When we're together we share one mind,
I'm only complete when you are near,
To loose you someday is my biggest fear...
You listened to my problems
In a kind and caring way,
I trust u with my secrets,
That no one has been known,
I trust you with my feelings,
I may be smiling today,
Thank you....."


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SORRY

I KNOW U ALL R WAITING FOR A UPDATE

BUT I WILL NOT BE ABLE UPDATE TODAY

AS MY ROOM IS SHIFTING

I WILL TRY 2 UPDATE AT NIGHT







Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 13 December 2009 at 7:29am

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ok we will wait
u takecare
byeeeeeeee

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SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE






PART 18



next day in lockeroom

(rids is alone there

when armi cames there and

see rids alone there and

smiled walked to her and

touched her waist rids shocked

turn around now rids is leaning on the locker

and armi is very close to her)

rid:armaan what are you doing

armi:i didnt did anything

but kuch karna ka dil karta hai

rid:kya

armi:to watch u 24/7

rid:armaan i m not a tv

that u will watch me

armi:how unromentic ok gimme a kiss

rid:armaan no

armi:plz riddima

rid:plz armaan no

armi:came on riddima plz

rid:armaan

armi:riddima cameon its just a kiss

(armi moved forward but

rids was unconfortable so

she pushed him back )

rid:ARMAAN I SAID NO SO NO

WHY U FORCE ME

I M NOT READY FOR ALL THIS

(she yelled at him )

armi:WHAT WRONG WITH U

RIDS I LOVE U BUT I THINK U

DONT TRUST ME THANK U VERY MUCH

rid:its not like tht arman

armi:o really then what is it like

(then armi angryly left the lockerom)

rid:i shouldnt done that

i trust armaan i think i should say soory

(then the whole day rids tryed to say sorry

but armaan didnt listen to her at night

armaan was walking out of sanjeevani and

rids followed him armaan got in his car

and rids also got in his car )

armi:what are you doing

rid:di have night duty so you will drop me home

armi:but its not that late

you can get a auto

rid:this car is not even better then auto

so let go (armi started driveing )

rid:armaan im s

(before rids could say anything else

armi turn the cd on which made rids angry

she tok out the cd and throw the it out)

armi:what was that all about

rid:you were not listening to me

armi:because i m angry at you

(rids puts her hand on his hand )

rids:r u still angry

armi:yes

(then rids run her fingers on his neck)

rid:stil angry

armi:y.yes (melting)

(then rids run her hand his hair )

rids:now

armi:abit

(then rids puts her hand on his face )

rid:now armaan

armi:no i m not angry

(then rids pulls her hand back)

armi:wht happened why you stoped

rids:you are not angry any more

and my house is here

(rids laughing got out of the car)

armi:no no no i m angry

i m angry i m stilll argry

dont go plzzzz i m angry

(rids laughing run to her house )

armi:arre yaar i m so stupid







Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 13 December 2009 at 8:19am

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PART 19



ridz was sitting in her room

dreaming about armaan ..

and armaan was doing the same..!!


just then armaan gets an idea..


he goes and

climbs the pipe of ridz's house..

ridz was asleep till then

and anjali had night duty..

armaan climbs and

sees ridz sleeping like an angel..


he goes and removes her hair from her face..

he bends and kisses her on her forehead

and then starts to walk away

and then ridz holds his hand.

armaan turns..

ridz says"mujhse milne aaye,

aur mile bina hi jaa rahe ho"..


armaan smiles and

says"u where looking so cute

that i didn't wanted to wake u up."

rdz asks"but why did u came here?"

armaan says"jo tumne kaha ,

tumse milne aaya tha"

ridz says"ok..to ab mil liye aur ab jao"

armaan says "no"

ridz pushs him out of her balcony..

he moves down the balcony

and ridz stares at him..

he gives a flying kiss and walks away..

...next day...---

after dr.kirti gives them their duties...

armaan riddhima were walking to the general ward ..

just then armaan pulls ridz to the stairs   

armaan holds her from her waist ,

ridz is blushing and

is strugging to free herself

but from inside she wants him to hold her more titely...

riddhima"ye tum kya kar rahe ho"

armaan"pyar ..aur kya?"

riddhima "armaan tum pyar karo magar

sahi jagah aur sahi waqt par"

armaan"wo to thik hai par.."

(his pager started buzzing)

armaan--very angry

"ye hilter ko bhi abhi hi meri yaad aani thi"..

riddhima"armaan...ab chalo"

then armaan goes away and

ridz smiles and goes to treat her patients..


... ...

armaan enters the locker room

and sees ridz alone...he smiles naughtily. .

he comes and

holds riddhima from her waist from behind...

riddhima turns and

he comes very close to her...

she felt something very special from inside..      









Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 29 May 2012 at 12:07am

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