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Posted: 26 November 2009 at 9:38pm | IP Logged







PART 16



NEXT MORNING(in sanjeevini)

LOCKER ROOM(all interns r present)

Armaan is starint @ ridz

whoz bsy searching for some file in her locker.

angie:gguyz

mujhe DR keerthi ko reports deni hai

so i have to leave

atul:mein bhi aaun tumhare saath

angie:uski koi zaroorat nai and leavez

and atul still followed her keep on talking his stuff 2 her

Sapna:kya dhund rahi ho ridz

R:kuch nai bas maine kal ek file rakhi thi

pata nai kahan hai

S:oh,vo file mere pass hai

actually kal tum reception par bhool gayin thi ,

ye rahi vo file.......ab mein chalti hun ,

you carry on armaan(wid a naughty smile)

R(smiles noticing why sapna said that to armaan):

thanx fr the file sapna.

S:you are most welcome and she leaves

Ridz is leaving when armaan holds her wrist

R:armaan haath chodo mujhe jaana hai...

A:you know what ridhima......

mujhe kal raat bhar neend nai aayi

R:vo kyun?

A:raat bhar bas tumhare hi qayaal arahe the......

i was missing u

R:armaan......tum bhi na ,ab chalo

A:r u sure

R smiles and nods her head saying yes


IN CANTEEN(atul and sapna)

sapna:atul itne udaas kyun ho

atul:kya karun.....kuch samajh nai aaraha

S:kis bare mein

A:main ajali se bohot pyaar karta hun...

par vo hai ki mujhse baat karna to door

meri shakal bhi dekhna nai pasand karti.

S:tum bhi waise hi karo

ATUL:kya matlab

S:arey jaise vo

tumse sirf kaam k baare mein baath karti hai

waise hi tum bhi sifr kaam ki baath karo.......

agar vo kaam k alawa kuch aur

baath kare toh ignore kardena

Atul:are you sure isse usko koi farak padhega.

S:ho sakta hai

ANGIE ENTERS

angie:hey

s:hi

dreamy atul:hi anjali

s:sapna stares @ him eyes wide

atul cums @ his sence and

tell sapna in low voice oops!!sorry

s:ok ab mein chalti hun mujhe jaana hai

angie:ok bye

with that sapna leaves

atul gets up @ leave

angie:tum bhi jaarahe ho

atul without saying anything leaves

angie confused and thinking

"why did he leave with out answering me?

didn't he hear what i asked him or is he ignoring me?









Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 15 December 2009 at 6:10am

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PART 17



all the interns are going

to dr kirti! to get dere duties!

dr k- dr atul aur dr anjali aaj

apki duty genral ward mein hai

aur naaya case aaya hai opt mein

jise aap dr anjali ke saath solve karne gi!

AA- ok dr kirti.

as dr kirti said that atul started to give wried looks.

while all of this was happening

armaan slowly started to put his hand on ridz waist.

r- armaan tum kya kar rehe ho?

said in the soft gentle low voice.

dr kirti saw that n got anger.

dr kirti- aap aapne personal matters hospitial mein mat laye

dr armaan! aapko jo bhi karna hai sanjeevni ke bahar kareye!

ar- dr kriti! app kaunsi baat kar rehe hai?

he said dis actin wried. while ridz was reall sacred.   

dr k- dr armaan!   

neways dr sapna aaj aapki duti cancer ward mein hai.

s- ji doctor.

dr k- aur dr. armaan and dr riddhima

aaj do burnt cases aaye hai.

aap dono voh cases handle karengi aur

voh dono 50% burnt hai. voh opt mein hai.

dr k- so what are you waiting for? GO!

AR wre wlkin in the corridor.

r- armaan meine kahata na ki!

oh forget it

tum tho mere baat kabhi bhi nahi sunonge!...........

went angerily!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   

armaan folowin her says- basket! basket! suno toh!

i am sorry! muhje kya patata ke voh hitler dekhlenge?

said giving innocent look!

r- armaan! tumna! its ok! newways

lets get to our work   !

they started doing there job while

the title song was playing in background

(like in 5th dec epi!

when ridz was doing all the wrk at night!   )

             ********************************************************************

ALL THE INTERNS IN LOCKER ROOM

angie:oh god aaj phirse night duty.......

ridz tumhe ghar akele jaana hoga

r:itz ok di.......mein chali jaongi

A suddenly intrupts and says

a:mein chodon tumhe(wid a big smile)

r:nai.......main chali jaungi(wid a sweet smile   )

angie:jab usse tumhe chodne mein koi problem nahi hai

toh phir tumhe kya hua.....drop kardega vo tumhe

ghar tak chali joa uske saath aur

waise bhi itni raath ko auto milna mushkil hai

r:ok

a:toh chalein

r:hmmmmm

armaan and ridz leaves

s:mere auto wale bhaiyya wait kar rahe honge

mein chlati hun....bye

angie and atul:bye

angie to atul:toh aaj tumhari bhi night duty hai na

Atul:with out answerin her leaves

angie:ise kya hua .......

meri koi baath ka jawaab kyun nai deta .........

ajeeb ladka hai and gets back to her duty

out side sanjeevani

A:toh basket kahan chalogi

R:ghar aur kahan

A:kya ridhima kabhi kabhi toh hamein moka milta hai

ek dusre k saath akele mein waqt guzaar ne ka aur

tab bhi tum ghar jaana chahrahi ho

R:armaan par.....

A:par var kuch nai ab tum wahin chalogi

jahan mein tumhe lekar jaaunga

R:par kahan......

A:maine kaha na jahan mein lekar chalon

r:aur kya mein jaan sakthi hun k

aap mujhe kahan lekar jaa rahe hain

a:kyun aapko mujh par bharosa nai hai kya

r:mmmmmm    nai

a(gets angry):fine!!!!!!!!

chalo mein tumhe ghar chod deta hun

r:arey.....mein toh mazaak kar rahi thi!!!!!!

tum itna serious kyun ho rahe ho

armaan doesnt answer

r:acha ba ba chalongi

a:kahan

r:jahan tum lekar chaloge

a:sure

r:mmmm........

yea sure!!!!!!

after a while armaan stops the car and

both steps out of the car

r:toh tum mujhe beach par lekar aana chahte the

a:cums and stands beside her..............ya

r:vo kyun?

a:kyunkii raat mein yahan par koi nai hota na isiliye

r:smiles and looks at him

who is lost admirin her beauty

armaan pulls ridhima closer to him

and ridz gets nervous

r:armaan k..kya kar rahe ho

a:abhi tak toh maine kuch kiya hi nai hai

r blushes and sayz :armaan....tum bhi na

and pushes him off her and

says chalo wahan chal kar baithte hain

they go near the water and

sits on the sand n suddenly the wind blows and

ridz hairs r on armaans face and

armaan is enjoying this

he can smell her hair and

leans more frward to her and

then ridz realizes that

her hairs are flyin and

also troubling armaan so,

she takes her left hand

around from back of her head to

take in control the right side hair

from which she thought

armaan is geting troubled and

wen she about to take her hairs off

he holds her hand and

ridz is just starin at him

a(in a soft voice):rehna do ridhima........

mujhe acha lagta hai

r(in low voice):armaan par......

a:shhhhhh!!!

(and places his index fingure

on her pink rosey lips)

now both are lost sdmiring each other and

den armaan leans more closer to

kiss her on her cheek when the sound of

waves is to be heared by them and

ridz gets back 2 her sence

and gets up and

is blushin soooooooooo much and

armaan gets up too and

stares at her wid a naughty smile

R(head down blushing):

armaan hamein chalna chahiye

a:itni jaldi

r(still blushin keepin her head down):

armaan bohot raat hogayi......

ghar par nani qamaqaan pareshaan ho jayiengi

a(wid a thought of teasin her says):

toh ismein konsi bari problem hain

mein naani ko phone karke kehdetan hon k

hum dono ek saath beach par hain

jahan humare alawa aur koi nai hai,

so no need to worry nani.......

toh how was ma speach

r:very funny.........ab chalo

a:he pulls her closer to him

r:armaan late hojayienge

a:i dont care and

lenas forward that his nose

is touching her cheeks

r:armaan bohot raat ho chuki hai

a:hone do

ridzz closes her eyes when

armaan kisses her on her cheek

r:armaan.....plzz

(and gets off him and

is blushin soo much that

she never blushed soo much in her life)chalo

a:kabhi kabhi toh moka milta hai ridhima

r:armaan(with a little but sweet anger)

a:ok fine chalo

both gets into the car and A drops R home.







Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 15 December 2009 at 6:08am

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really liked it
love heaven contiiii
soon plzz
 

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Fab parts just like DMG man!!Continue soon and PM me!!

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nice
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I like it , it is good

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its sooooooooooooo amazing
i mean itne time baad finaly purane AR ki luve story
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Continue soon
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Hi,
i m really sorry 4 late reply.
It was lovely,fabulous ff.
loved A-r so much.
Keep it up.
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