MY DMG- AR FANFIC : 136-149Updated - Page 2

Posted: 14 years ago




PART 7


RIDZ: ARMAAN TUM KABHI UTHEE?

MUJHE PATA BHI NAHI CHALA.

ARMAAN: TUM TO WHAAAN PAR SOOYI THI NA.

(POINTING TO THE PLACE SHE WAS SLEEPING)

PHIR YAHAAN KAIE AA GAYI?

RIDZ: WOH.. WOH.. MUJHE DARR LAG RAHA THA

ISLIYE TUMHARE PAAS AA GAYI.

ARMAAN: WOW! BASKET KO DARR BHI LAGTA HAI!

RIDZ: ARMAAN............! STOP IT!

ARMAAN: OK.

RIDZ: SO WHAT R V DOING NOW?

ARMAAN: LETS SEARCH FOR SOME FOOD FIRST AND

THEN WE'LL FIND THE WAY BACK TO THE CAMP.

RIDZ: FINE. ANYWAYS I'M HUNGRY 2

ridz:mujhe bookh lagi and im very thirsty

armaan:yahaan par koi mcdonalds nahin hai ki main

tumhare liye hamburger with frenchfries n coke lekar aaon

ridz:mazaak mat karo

armaan:ok basket

ridz:chalo ab bahaar nikalne ka raaste dhundte hai

warna hum dono humeshakeliye ghum hojayenge!!!!!!!!

armaan (2 himself):main toh chahta hon ki

hum hamesha ke liye gum hojaye!!!

ahhhhh wats happening 2 me

ridz:ab chalo bhi kya soch rahe ho!!!

armaan:coming na basket!!!!!!!!!

suddenly as they are walking

ridz feels that there is something

in her sandal n she starts laughing

ridz:hehe hehe

armaan is staring at her a question was on his face

armaan:tumhe kya paagalpan ke dore parte hai

ridz:hehe he shut up hehe he armaan hehe

hehe hehe meri sandal main kuch hai hehe!!!

armaan stares at her feet

armaan:kya hai??????????????

ridz:hehe hehe he no hehe hehe idea

armaan bends down

armaan:wait a moment

ridz:kya hehe kar hehe ho?

armaan:wait meri maa!!!

armaan ridz ki sandal utaar ta hai aur aur

ussme se doh cheetiyan nikal ti hai

ridz shouts

ridz:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cheeti cheeti!!!!!!!!!!

armaan:aaj kal ki ladkiyaan bhi naa!!!!!!!!

ridz hand was on armaan's shoulder

aur woh apna haath itna zor se uske shoulder

pe press karti hain ki armaan ko bohut acha lagta hai

ki woh apna haath pyar se uske feet pe malta hai

thodi der ke liye woh bhi behek jaati hain!!!!!!!!




Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
nice plot mohit.....just read a bit.....will read it later...hving exams ......pm me wid ur update.....
Posted: 14 years ago








THANKS SWAMI

YEAH SURE

i will pm u swami






Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago






PART 8


Ridz koa bahut acha lagta hai.

Armaan kai hathoan mein jadhoo hai.

Ridz: Armaan...ummm mein ab teek hoon.

Armaaan being bought of his trance..

Armaan: acha, chalo ab haath pakroah...

mein nahin chathan kai thumein koi aur cheez lag jay.

Ridz Armaan ka haath pakar laithe hai.

Phirse voh aise mehsoon karthe hai ki duniya kee har

mushkil ahsaan ho sakthe hai agar Armaan uske saath hai.

Ridz(thinking): yeh mujhe kiya hoa raha hai.


Armaan: Mil gaya....Mil gaya...voh dekho

Basket..Jungle mein clearing hai agai..

Armaan itna kush hota hai, lekin

voh khushi jaldee sai mitjathe hai jab

armaan koa yaadh ata hai kai jab
voh vapas jayengai camp Kal..sabh kuch

phir sai vaise bhan jaye ga.

Ridz pehle bahut khush hoti hai jab tak

use yaad ata hai kai ki saubh

kuch vaise he hoajayega...jaise ki pehle tha...

Armaan: chalein vapas laut chalein...

Ridz: nay...mere matlab hai ha....vapas chalein..

Armaan Ridz ka haath pakartha hai aur

jalde dono Jungle sai bahar nikal jaathe hain...nikhalte he

voh dono ik doosre koa dekthe hai aur

kushi ki mare ik doosre kai gala lag jatha hein.

Dono ko bahut acha lagtha hai,

par dono koa yeh nahin maloon ki

Jungle ke beech mein Armaan nain

Ridz ka dil choorar kai apni jaan dalthee hai ridz mein...

Aur Ridz apne dil kai darwaza Armaan koa kholdheye hai.

Ik doosre koa ik doosre sai pyar hoagaya,

lekin dono yeh nay jante ke yeah naya ehsaas kya hai,

yeh naya apnapan kya hai, yeh naya bharosa, vishwas kya hai....

Anjali, Sapna, Atul: Ridz! Armaan! Tum teek hoa...

Sab dost phir se milthe hai ik doosre koa.

Dr Keeri and Dr. Subhasank and Dr. Gupta ve vahan hai.

Dr. Gupta: Ridz meri bachee tum teek hoa,

bhagwaan ka shukar hai....

Thank you ARmaan tumnein meri bachee koa bachaleyah.

Armaan: Sir it's okay...mein khush hoon ki sabh kuch teek hoa gaya....

Dr. Gupta takes Ridz in his arms and

leads her to the nearby medical station to have her checked out.

Armaan (thinking): BAsket, yeh mujhe kya hogaya...

agar thum ve mere jaise he sochtee hai...toh palat...

Armaan watched Riddhima move away with her father....

Palat! Palat! ARmaan was thinking.

Anjali: ARmaan I'm so glad you are okay...

It's good tum dono teek hoa...i was so worried...

Armaan was to busy gazing towards his basket

who was moving further and further away...

palat he was thinking.

Anjali: Armaan mein thumse bhaath kar rahein hoon...dekho meri taraf...

Anjali grabbed Armaan's face and

turned him towards her so that she could talk to him properly....

As Armaan moved his face away...

Riddhima turned back to see the back of Armaan's head...

Riddhima (thinking): thank you Armaan,

thumnein voh kuch diya hai

joh mujhe khudh nay maloom kya hai...

phir bhi thank you...

Riddhima turned around and walked away with her father..

Anjali finished talking and

Armaan quickly turned to face Riddhima...

he watched he go into the medical station tent...

Armaan (thinking): voh nahi paltee...hmmm!

Armaan was then taken away by Dr. Keeri

to receive medical attention.




Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago





PART=9



as dr gupta take ridz in the camp to have her check

ridz is contonously dreaming abt those scenes whch

wud happened in jungle bw her & armaan

as the camp is closed AND

all the docs returned back to sanjeevani

2nd scene:

in the bus armaan and ridz sit 2gether AND

seeing both of them doing masti and closed to each other;

anjali gone jealous wid ridz

3rd scene:

IN sanjeevani

armaan and ridz in locker room

armaan said to ridz

AR:basket ab tum kaisa feel karrahe ho

R:matlab mujhe kya howa hai

AR: nahi woh tumhe daar lag raha tha na

R:(thinking)[yeh armaan ko kya hogaya kaise baatein karaha hai]

armaan main ab theak ho

at that they listen the announcement that

dr.keerti calling all interns quickly in the emergency ward

so they both leaved

where ix an accident case waiting for all ov dem

armaan got a girl namely rhea

who have injurious on her leg

ridz got a boy namely viney

who have a big wound on his hand it needs stitches

whn ridz goving stitches to viney....

suddenly ridz see rhea is trying

to do flirting wid armaan and armaan enjoying it

R:OHH GOD!!!yeh kya karrahe hai

aur aur armaan bhi ais kay saath offfffff

(she totally forget tht

she is giving stitches wid out giving anesthesia )

the boy shout aloud wid pain thn

ridz came out his thinkings and

agn show all her presence in her case




Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
heyaa hi mohit
 
interesting ff ,
well you said that this ff has been posted earlier too , well i have not read it earlier , butafter reading your parts its looking nice ,
hmm would love to read it ahead , 
 
please doo add me on in your pm list ,
 
and one more think , why r you posting such small small plots , doo post them together , in one big plot , hmm
 
well in any case , doo pm me with updates
 
take care
simi
Posted: 14 years ago

HEY MOHIT

I HAVE READ IT CONTI
WELLL LATER I PROMISE TO WRITE IF IT IS OPEN FOR ALL OF US
LOLEY
HEAVEN
Posted: 14 years ago







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fariaa70,chahatmalhotra, swami,simi2,daring66

thanks for ur appreication guys!!!!

it means a lot to me

i will definatly pm u guys!!

please keep reading and commenting






Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago







PART 10



after listening to the shout of the pateint

ridz realises that

she forgot to give anesthesia before

doing with his stiches and

Armaan then notice that

ridz was watchin him and rhea flirting

AND gives a noughty smile and

starts constantly stairin @ her.

R:oops, i m so sorry;

mein aapko anesthesia dena bhool gayi

viney(wid lotz of pain in his voice):

itz paining doctor.

R:dont worry, main abhi

aapko anesthesia dedeti hoon and

then will do with your stiches and

finally she is done wid her work and

looks angrily @ armaan and

armaan who was lost admirin her beauty

comes bck 2 his sence

and realises that

ridz had a angry look on her face

and he follows ridz.

IN CORIDOOR

A:yo basket

(and runs 2 ridz who was still waliking)

A:hey basket,

kya hua(asks wantedly knowing the reason)

R(wid a little anger in her voice):

kuch nai....kyun?

A:tum thodi gusse meib lagrahi ho isliye.

R(in li'll louder voice):main gussa nai hun.

A:toh phir itna chilla kar kyun baath kar rahi ho....

mujhe behra samajhrakha hai kya?

R:toh finally tumhari duty hogayi

A:arrey abhi toh sirf 2:00 hi baje hain aur

tumhe toh pata hai na ki humari duty raat tak hothi hai.

R:main us duty ki baath nai karri thi

A:toh phir?

R:tum us ladki ke saath kya kar rahe the

A:konsi ladki?.......

..oh acha vo rhea.....

achi ladki hai,nai?

R(stairs @ him wid lotz of anger and

moves 2ward locker room and Armaan follows her)

no one is there in locker room except them.

A:oh toh tum isiliye gussa ho

kyunki vo mere saath flirt karrahi thi and

den he grabs her hand and

moves closer 2 her n says)


kya tum mujhse pyaar karne lagi ho,

now both r starin @each oder,

dey continue stairin each other fr 10 sec and

suddenly ridzis back to her sence and

pull her hand frm his and

is feeling shy turns and

walk forward to her locker while talking to him

R:mera dimaag qaraab hogaya hai kya

jo main tum se pyaar krongi.

A(to himself):dimaag toh qaraab hai tumhara

tab hi toh nai samajh pa rahi ho ki

tum bhi mere liye kuch feel karti ,

tab hi toh us din nai palthi thi na tum.

R:kuch kaha tume

A:mmm....aaaaa...nai...nai toh......kyun?

tumhe phirse kuch sunai diya kya ,

mujhe toh lagta hai k us bhoot ka saya abhi bhi tumpar hai.

R:shutup armaan....

A:canteen chalogi

R(wid attitude):tumhare saath

A:haan.......kyun koi problem hai

R:fine chalo

IN CANTEEN

A:toh kya logi tum

R:hot chocolate

A:gets a hot chocolate for ridz

and a cup of coffee for hmself.

to tumne bataya nai

R:kya?

A:tum kyun gussa thi.......

tum jealouse feel karrahi thi na.

R:jealous?kisse

A:rhea se

R:rhea se?

bhala main kyun usse jealous feel karne lagi

A:shayad isiliye kyunki

vo mere saath flirt karrahi thi.......

don lie basket......

sach batao tum mere liye kuch feel kartihona

R:armaan........vo main

A:haan ya na

R:dekho armaan

A:maine poocha haan ya na

suddenly

they are interrupted by sapna,atul and angie





Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago




PART 11



soooooooooo..........

little precap



this grl called rhea has a hurt on her leg

and armaan is her doctor

and she trys to flirt wid him

and ridz sees it

and feels jealous so she just shouting and.....

then dey go canteen

and armaan asks her

if she feels for him

but

she say ofcourse not!

and armaan sayd haan ya na?

then suddenly angie atul n sapna comes

(an- angie at- atul, s- sapna, a- armaan n r- ridz)




AB AAGE




all three- hi!

AR- hi!

an- koi important bat charahi kya?

armaan sees them and starts actin wried.

a- nahi kuch nahi kyu?

an- jst look at the way tum behave ker rehaho!

at- hai!

yeh lovly muhje kabhi bhi zinda nahi chodenge!

har waqt mere piche piche he bhagte hai!

ridz pager rings

r- ok bye muhje jana hai. bye.

armaan follows her and

says hey basket mera jawab abhi tak tumne nahi diya!

ridz tries to ingore wat Armaan said and

trys to change the topic says

armaan muhje rounds ke liya jana hai. bye

ridz finishs her rounds and

is going to the locker room.

she just pssing through the corridor and

suddenly sum one pulls her

in the stair case ( romantic spot! )

she got sacred for a sencond and

then saw it was armaan!

they just stare into their eyes for a while

and then armaan starts going closer to her

untill she was aganist the wall.

he puts his hands at the side

so she dont go. he cums closer and closer

ridz is kinda meltin and then

armaan says - tumne abhi abhi mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya!

r- armaan voh?

she is really meltin because

armaan is really close to her and

they can hear each others heart beat too.

a- voh kya basket?

armaan leans to kiss her on her cheeks

and then atul cums

armaan says in the low voice:

ise bhi abhi aana ta!

armaan is really angry.

r- armaan. says in a soft voice.

they both quickly get apart.

at- tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho?

and ridz angie tumhe bola rahe hai.

a- yaar champ basket abhi aate hai tum javoh!

at- kyu?

angie ne muhje kaha ke ridz ko lekar avoh

so mein ridz ko lekar hi javonga! and

grabs ridz hands and

tries to take her aways and

armaan tries to stop her but

do not suceed and

atul takes ridz

armaan is really really anger............

and slams his hand on da wall.....................






Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 14 years ago

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