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PART 5



RIDZ: TO PHIR AB TAK BATAYA KYUN NAHI?

ARMAAN: MEINE SOOCHA THODA TIMEPASS KAR LOON!

RIDZ: TIMEPASS!! WHAT DO U MEAN BY TIMEPASSS!!!!!!!

TUMHE SAACH MEIN KISSE KI FEELINGS KI PARWAH NAHI HAI.

MEIN TO YEH SOOCH RAHI THI KI TUMNE AB TAK MUJHE MAAF NAHI KYA.

AGAR MEIN MAAFI MANGNE KE LIYA KUCH KAR DETI TO????????       

ARMAAN: THEEK HAI. THEEK HAI! ISMEIN ITNA GUSSA HONE KI KYA BAAT HAI?

RIDZ: MEIN TO KHUD KO HI KOSNE LAGI THI,

KI MEINE ITNI BADI GALTI KER DI KI TUM MUJSE ITNA GUSSA HO GAYE!

Armaan: Badi Galti toh thi, lekin voh sabh pichlee bath hai...let's forget it.

Agar hum dono koh dost banna hai tho phir hamara beech bharosa bhi hona chaiya...manzoor.

Ridz: Manzoor.

Armaan: Acha tum doctor kyun banna chaathi thei...

Ridz: Mein apne Papa ke bahut izzat karthe hoon,

aur un par naaz hai ki voh kaise logoon ke maddath karthe hain...

mein bhilkul unki jaise bhan na chaathi hoon..aur thum...?

Armaan: Mere dad ke vajah see...lambhi kahani hai...phir khabie bhataon gha..

yehi samajhloa..kuch saabhath karna chatha hoon. Aur

Sabath karne ke bath..Riddhama..Yo Basket...mein apne dil se bhaath kar raha hoon..aur

tum tho lala land mein ghus kay.

Wake up basket..teek hai.

Armaan thinks to himself: Yeh tho basket kuch aur cheez hai...

soothe hui kithne innocent or khubsoorat lag rahe hai.....

Armaan gets up and picks riddhama up in his arms and puts on the makeshift bed.

And admires her beauty while unbeknowst to him feelings are stirring up in his heart...

feelings that won't be able to stop from growing even if he wanted to.






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PART 6


Armaan could see the innocent child in Riddhama's face.

How he wished he could take her to Dr. Gupta immediately.

He knew that would make her smile more than anything

and he desparetly wanted to please her, but didn't know why.

Why was Basket affecting him this way..

what was going on with his heart...he meant his mind..

Armaan (thinking to himself): Yeh dil kahan takpak aya.

Armaan out loud: teek hai, fikar mat karo...

thoree dher mein subha hoa jayege..and

then I promise Basket mein thume tumhare papa ke paas laijaonga.

Ridz: Promise...

Armaan: Promise.

Ridz: teek hai abh thum thoree aur dher soa jao...

aga hoa saktha hai bahut lambha safar hoa aur..Armaan, Armaan...

Ridz saw that Armaan had already fallen asleep.

So she lay down as well...and gazed at him while he slept.

Ridz thought to herself, how childlike he looks when he is sleeping...

no arrogance or obnoxiousness coudld be seen...

Ridz thinking to herself: Kiya yehi asli roop hai armaan ka...

Armaan apna papa koa kya sabath karna chatha hai...

kitna dard tha unki bathoan mein.

Mauka mile ga thoh mein zaroor phir sai puchongee....

Ridz was a little scared and she thought to herself that it was

better to lay closer to Armaan than on the other side of the shack.

So she got up and lay down closer to himself,

and for once in her life...she feel protected.

Her father had always protected her,

but this feeling was different and

she had never felt it before....

Ridz: Armaan....Armaan...

Ridz realised that Armaan was in a deep sleep..and

she didn't want to disturb him. So she closed her eyes...and

the only vision that came to her was the one where

she had hugged Armaan in the forest out of fright.

With that vision Ridz feel asleep again.


The morning sun shone in Armaan eyes waking him.

He felt happy...He smiled,
he hadn't felt this happy in ages.

He put his hands on his chest and felt another hand....

was it the bhooth.....he felt a little more..

it was a delicate and soft hand...he opened his eyes and looked down,

Riddhama had placed her hand over Armaan's chest.

The tossing and turning had moved Armaan and Ridz closer.

Armaan softly picked Ridz's arm up and placed it beside her.

He got up and moved to the other side of the shack....and waited

Armaan (thinking): mein yehein bait ke meri basket ki jagne ki intezaar karonga...

meri basket...what's happening to me.

He heard Riddhama stir in her sleep and

he watched her intently as she slowly woke up...









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PART 7


RIDZ: ARMAAN TUM KABHI UTHEE?

MUJHE PATA BHI NAHI CHALA.

ARMAAN: TUM TO WHAAAN PAR SOOYI THI NA.

(POINTING TO THE PLACE SHE WAS SLEEPING)

PHIR YAHAAN KAIE AA GAYI?

RIDZ: WOH.. WOH.. MUJHE DARR LAG RAHA THA

ISLIYE TUMHARE PAAS AA GAYI.

ARMAAN: WOW! BASKET KO DARR BHI LAGTA HAI!

RIDZ: ARMAAN............! STOP IT!

ARMAAN: OK.

RIDZ: SO WHAT R V DOING NOW?

ARMAAN: LETS SEARCH FOR SOME FOOD FIRST AND

THEN WE'LL FIND THE WAY BACK TO THE CAMP.

RIDZ: FINE. ANYWAYS I'M HUNGRY 2

ridz:mujhe bookh lagi and im very thirsty

armaan:yahaan par koi mcdonalds nahin hai ki main

tumhare liye hamburger with frenchfries n coke lekar aaon

ridz:mazaak mat karo

armaan:ok basket

ridz:chalo ab bahaar nikalne ka raaste dhundte hai

warna hum dono humeshakeliye ghum hojayenge!!!!!!!!

armaan (2 himself):main toh chahta hon ki

hum hamesha ke liye gum hojaye!!!

ahhhhh wats happening 2 me

ridz:ab chalo bhi kya soch rahe ho!!!

armaan:coming na basket!!!!!!!!!

suddenly as they are walking

ridz feels that there is something

in her sandal n she starts laughing

ridz:hehe hehe

armaan is staring at her a question was on his face

armaan:tumhe kya paagalpan ke dore parte hai

ridz:hehe he shut up hehe he armaan hehe

hehe hehe meri sandal main kuch hai hehe!!!

armaan stares at her feet

armaan:kya hai??????????????

ridz:hehe hehe he no hehe hehe idea

armaan bends down

armaan:wait a moment

ridz:kya hehe kar hehe ho?

armaan:wait meri maa!!!

armaan ridz ki sandal utaar ta hai aur aur

ussme se doh cheetiyan nikal ti hai

ridz shouts

ridz:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cheeti cheeti!!!!!!!!!!

armaan:aaj kal ki ladkiyaan bhi naa!!!!!!!!

ridz hand was on armaan's shoulder

aur woh apna haath itna zor se uske shoulder

pe press karti hain ki armaan ko bohut acha lagta hai

ki woh apna haath pyar se uske feet pe malta hai

thodi der ke liye woh bhi behek jaati hain!!!!!!!!






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nice plot mohit.....just read a bit.....will read it later...hving exams ......pm me wid ur update.....

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THANKS SWAMI

YEAH SURE

i will pm u swami








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PART 8


Ridz koa bahut acha lagta hai.

Armaan kai hathoan mein jadhoo hai.

Ridz: Armaan...ummm mein ab teek hoon.

Armaaan being bought of his trance..

Armaan: acha, chalo ab haath pakroah...

mein nahin chathan kai thumein koi aur cheez lag jay.

Ridz Armaan ka haath pakar laithe hai.

Phirse voh aise mehsoon karthe hai ki duniya kee har

mushkil ahsaan ho sakthe hai agar Armaan uske saath hai.

Ridz(thinking): yeh mujhe kiya hoa raha hai.


Armaan: Mil gaya....Mil gaya...voh dekho

Basket..Jungle mein clearing hai agai..

Armaan itna kush hota hai, lekin

voh khushi jaldee sai mitjathe hai jab

armaan koa yaadh ata hai kai jab
voh vapas jayengai camp Kal..sabh kuch

phir sai vaise bhan jaye ga.

Ridz pehle bahut khush hoti hai jab tak

use yaad ata hai kai ki saubh

kuch vaise he hoajayega...jaise ki pehle tha...

Armaan: chalein vapas laut chalein...

Ridz: nay...mere matlab hai ha....vapas chalein..

Armaan Ridz ka haath pakartha hai aur

jalde dono Jungle sai bahar nikal jaathe hain...nikhalte he

voh dono ik doosre koa dekthe hai aur

kushi ki mare ik doosre kai gala lag jatha hein.

Dono ko bahut acha lagtha hai,

par dono koa yeh nahin maloon ki

Jungle ke beech mein Armaan nain

Ridz ka dil choorar kai apni jaan dalthee hai ridz mein...

Aur Ridz apne dil kai darwaza Armaan koa kholdheye hai.

Ik doosre koa ik doosre sai pyar hoagaya,

lekin dono yeh nay jante ke yeah naya ehsaas kya hai,

yeh naya apnapan kya hai, yeh naya bharosa, vishwas kya hai....

Anjali, Sapna, Atul: Ridz! Armaan! Tum teek hoa...

Sab dost phir se milthe hai ik doosre koa.

Dr Keeri and Dr. Subhasank and Dr. Gupta ve vahan hai.

Dr. Gupta: Ridz meri bachee tum teek hoa,

bhagwaan ka shukar hai....

Thank you ARmaan tumnein meri bachee koa bachaleyah.

Armaan: Sir it's okay...mein khush hoon ki sabh kuch teek hoa gaya....

Dr. Gupta takes Ridz in his arms and

leads her to the nearby medical station to have her checked out.

Armaan (thinking): BAsket, yeh mujhe kya hogaya...

agar thum ve mere jaise he sochtee hai...toh palat...

Armaan watched Riddhima move away with her father....

Palat! Palat! ARmaan was thinking.

Anjali: ARmaan I'm so glad you are okay...

It's good tum dono teek hoa...i was so worried...

Armaan was to busy gazing towards his basket

who was moving further and further away...

palat he was thinking.

Anjali: Armaan mein thumse bhaath kar rahein hoon...dekho meri taraf...

Anjali grabbed Armaan's face and

turned him towards her so that she could talk to him properly....

As Armaan moved his face away...

Riddhima turned back to see the back of Armaan's head...

Riddhima (thinking): thank you Armaan,

thumnein voh kuch diya hai

joh mujhe khudh nay maloom kya hai...

phir bhi thank you...

Riddhima turned around and walked away with her father..

Anjali finished talking and

Armaan quickly turned to face Riddhima...

he watched he go into the medical station tent...

Armaan (thinking): voh nahi paltee...hmmm!

Armaan was then taken away by Dr. Keeri

to receive medical attention.






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PART=9



as dr gupta take ridz in the camp to have her check

ridz is contonously dreaming abt those scenes whch

wud happened in jungle bw her & armaan

as the camp is closed AND

all the docs returned back to sanjeevani

2nd scene:

in the bus armaan and ridz sit 2gether AND

seeing both of them doing masti and closed to each other;

anjali gone jealous wid ridz

3rd scene:

IN sanjeevani

armaan and ridz in locker room

armaan said to ridz

AR:basket ab tum kaisa feel karrahe ho

R:matlab mujhe kya howa hai

AR: nahi woh tumhe daar lag raha tha na

R:(thinking)[yeh armaan ko kya hogaya kaise baatein karaha hai]

armaan main ab theak ho

at that they listen the announcement that

dr.keerti calling all interns quickly in the emergency ward

so they both leaved

where ix an accident case waiting for all ov dem

armaan got a girl namely rhea

who have injurious on her leg

ridz got a boy namely viney

who have a big wound on his hand it needs stitches

whn ridz goving stitches to viney....

suddenly ridz see rhea is trying

to do flirting wid armaan and armaan enjoying it

R:OHH GOD!!!yeh kya karrahe hai

aur aur armaan bhi ais kay saath offfffff

(she totally forget tht

she is giving stitches wid out giving anesthesia )

the boy shout aloud wid pain thn

ridz came out his thinkings and

agn show all her presence in her case






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heyaa hi mohit
 
interesting ff ,
well you said that this ff has been posted earlier too , well i have not read it earlier , butafter reading your parts its looking nice ,
hmm would love to read it ahead , 
 
please doo add me on in your pm list ,
 
and one more think , why r you posting such small small plots , doo post them together , in one big plot , hmm
 
well in any case , doo pm me with updates
 
take care
simi

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