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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
haha..loved the part..i wish it wasn't the last though. Loved the dialogues!!
"Kahani khatam nahi huyi....Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost......"

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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged

Hi Mana

Perfect ending for this cute love story.ClapClapClap It was indeed special coz it was so simple yet so touching.Smile

Raj came to meet Naina for the last time but he cudn't say bye to her..He believed in his love and he knew that if its true then it wud surely b his..He wud alwayd wait for her..Smile
Naina was so shocked to read his diary..stupid girl!! cudn't she read it before boarding the plane anyways she finally came to her senses soonLOLLOL
Raj was so dissapointed when she didn't came in the concert but he didn't let his friends down..He sang from his heart while everything inside him was crying..That song is one of my very favourites..I  love it like anythingSmile
and just like that Naina was infront of him and he was so happy to see her there and he hugged her to him to never let her go..Smile Alekh,Naveen and Abhi were so happy for them..Big smile
After 2 years of marriage Raj was same and Naina was fighting with him for not loving her..LOLLOL I never knew that one has to fight to show their love but I completely agree with Naina..LOLWink
Naina and Raj were so shocked when their son complained abt a girl..it was as if pasr was repeating itself..Smile
 
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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
awesome ff dear
loved it

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
WOW Mana..Luv u for such an awesome story

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
So here comes my opinion for the last update of the fic.

Good ending.
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Raj and Naina are inseparable and finally Naina realized after reading his dairy that how much he loves her and till when he loves her.Day Dreaming
Day Dreaming Day Dreaming  He wanted just to save her from falling fan but unfortunately her hair chopped off in that incident and she begun to hate him. Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

But now when Huda tried his best that Naina couldn't hug Raj she hugged her and she realized once again that what is she going to loose now. Ouch Ouch Ouch It's Raj's Jhankaar's competition day and his lucky charm is not with him.
Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Naina gave him her wishes but still Raj's sadness is not making him sing a song. Ouch Ouch Ouch But Naveen and Alekh reminded him about his Goal and made him ready to sing but his tears and pain was clearly visible in the song while singing.
  Cry Cry Cry

But naina finally realized that to whom she loves and who loves her whole heartily.Smile Smile Smile And she is back to her love when Raj has never imagined that she would be back to him ever. Sleepy Sleepy Sleepy And he was in deep sorrow to think that she has left with Huda.
  Cry Cry Cry

It was beautiful last part darling Clap Clap Clap and loved the way u used title "Sirf Tum Humesha". Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

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perfect ending yaar...koi compln nahi...!!! matlab thoda sa hai...par ab jab fic khatam ho hi chuka hai toh compln kar ke faida bhi kya hai...

 
mere liye toh yeh fic hamesha spl rahega yaar...
 
raj akhir baar mila naina se...par use BYE nahi bola...!!! use kahin na kahin is baat ka yakeen tha ke naina wapas aayegi hai na...??? vaise kahete hain...'true love always comes back'...!!! chahe kitni bhi raat ho...door ander se bandh ho...chain laga ho...ya kuch bhi ho...true love aa kar darwaza knock toh karega hi...aur surprise bhi karega...hai na...ha ha ha...
 
naina ka dimag hamare DDPA ke membs se bhi jyada kharab hai yaar...!!! dairy pahle nahi padh sakti thi kya...!!! khair dair aaye...durust aaye...
 
kya sahi entry mari hai us ne...gane ke bich me hi...vaise mera fav song hai yeh...but Kishore Kumar wala...remix nahi...
 
ok..ab eplg par aate hain...
 
shadi hui bhi toh kahan...store room me...??? kya sahi jagah chuni hai raj ne...!!! jahan pahli mulakat hui phir mukka-laat hui...vohin shadi kari us ne...ha ha ha...
 
aur shadi ke 2 saal baad kya ho raha hai in dono ke bich me...!!! naina ro rahi thi...kyoun ke raj us se ab jhagda nahi karta...???hadh hai yaar...ek baat bata Mana...yeh toh hum dono jante hain ke hum dono Kumbh ke mele ke bichde hue behn hain...par hamari aur ek behn Naina ki rup me hai kya...??? mujhe yaad nahi aa raha hai ke hum 2 bhen the ya 3...ha ha ha...
 
naina aur raj surprised the...par main nahi hun...kyoun ke beta hai raj ka...toh kuch us ki tarah ka bhi toh banega hi na...

ab yeh kya tha..."Kahani khatam nahi huyi...Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost..."ha ha ha...
 
loved d whole part...loved d fic...n love you darl...

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Hey Mana,
What can I say except that you have given the perfect ending to this special story.
Raj naina se milne toh atta hai par bina kuch kahe wahan se chala jata hai. all he wanted was for naina to come to the concert.
He loves naina very much and believes that if live is true than it will come back to him.
It is very painful for him to see naina board the plane, it just breaks his heart. He agrees to go to the concert as he did not want to let his friends down. He covers his pain and sorrow in his singing.
Naina is shocked to read his diary..stupid girl never realised how much Raj loved her all these years.
Par koi baat nahi...der aaye durust aaye. Finally she dumps Huda and comes back to Raj. He is overjoyed to see her there in front of him. Abhi and Naveen are happy for RN.
EVen after marriage..the two of them have not changed. Both still enjoy fighting with wach other as much as they enjoy romancing.
They are both socked to hear their son speak about some girl..it felt as if history was repeating itself.
Thanks for sharing this story with all of us.
Take care
Nisha

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
very nice 

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