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Sirf Tum...hamesha...(RN)pt.13&Epilogue,pg.75(14/4 (Page 77)

MeetPremeer IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
awesome ff dear
loved it

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-.Aphrodite.- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
WOW Mana..Luv u for such an awesome story

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Mahak Sinha IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
So here comes my opinion for the last update of the fic.

Good ending.
Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Raj and Naina are inseparable and finally Naina realized after reading his dairy that how much he loves her and till when he loves her.Day Dreaming
Day Dreaming Day Dreaming  He wanted just to save her from falling fan but unfortunately her hair chopped off in that incident and she begun to hate him. Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

But now when Huda tried his best that Naina couldn't hug Raj she hugged her and she realized once again that what is she going to loose now. Ouch Ouch Ouch It's Raj's Jhankaar's competition day and his lucky charm is not with him.
Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Naina gave him her wishes but still Raj's sadness is not making him sing a song. Ouch Ouch Ouch But Naveen and Alekh reminded him about his Goal and made him ready to sing but his tears and pain was clearly visible in the song while singing.
  Cry Cry Cry

But naina finally realized that to whom she loves and who loves her whole heartily.Smile Smile Smile And she is back to her love when Raj has never imagined that she would be back to him ever. Sleepy Sleepy Sleepy And he was in deep sorrow to think that she has left with Huda.
  Cry Cry Cry

It was beautiful last part darling Clap Clap Clap and loved the way u used title "Sirf Tum Humesha". Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

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Sweet-Lioness IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged

perfect ending yaar...koi compln nahi...!!! matlab thoda sa hai...par ab jab fic khatam ho hi chuka hai toh compln kar ke faida bhi kya hai...

mere liye toh yeh fic hamesha spl rahega yaar...
raj akhir baar mila naina se...par use BYE nahi bola...!!! use kahin na kahin is baat ka yakeen tha ke naina wapas aayegi hai na...??? vaise kahete hain...'true love always comes back'...!!! chahe kitni bhi raat ho...door ander se bandh ho...chain laga ho...ya kuch bhi ho...true love aa kar darwaza knock toh karega hi...aur surprise bhi karega...hai na...ha ha ha...
naina ka dimag hamare DDPA ke membs se bhi jyada kharab hai yaar...!!! dairy pahle nahi padh sakti thi kya...!!! khair dair aaye...durust aaye...
kya sahi entry mari hai us ne...gane ke bich me hi...vaise mera fav song hai yeh...but Kishore Kumar wala...remix nahi...
ok..ab eplg par aate hain...
shadi hui bhi toh room me...??? kya sahi jagah chuni hai raj ne...!!! jahan pahli mulakat hui phir mukka-laat hui...vohin shadi kari us ne...ha ha ha...
aur shadi ke 2 saal baad kya ho raha hai in dono ke bich me...!!! naina ro rahi thi...kyoun ke raj us se ab jhagda nahi karta...???hadh hai yaar...ek baat bata Mana...yeh toh hum dono jante hain ke hum dono Kumbh ke mele ke bichde hue behn hain...par hamari aur ek behn Naina ki rup me hai kya...??? mujhe yaad nahi aa raha hai ke hum 2 bhen the ya 3...ha ha ha...
naina aur raj surprised the...par main nahi hun...kyoun ke beta hai raj ka...toh kuch us ki tarah ka bhi toh banega hi na...

ab yeh kya tha..."Kahani khatam nahi huyi...Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost..."ha ha ha...
loved d whole part...loved d fic...n love you darl...

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dazzling_glory IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Hey Mana,
What can I say except that you have given the perfect ending to this special story.
Raj naina se milne toh atta hai par bina kuch kahe wahan se chala jata hai. all he wanted was for naina to come to the concert.
He loves naina very much and believes that if live is true than it will come back to him.
It is very painful for him to see naina board the plane, it just breaks his heart. He agrees to go to the concert as he did not want to let his friends down. He covers his pain and sorrow in his singing.
Naina is shocked to read his diary..stupid girl never realised how much Raj loved her all these years.
Par koi baat nahi...der aaye durust aaye. Finally she dumps Huda and comes back to Raj. He is overjoyed to see her there in front of him. Abhi and Naveen are happy for RN.
EVen after marriage..the two of them have not changed. Both still enjoy fighting with wach other as much as they enjoy romancing.
They are both socked to hear their son speak about some felt as if history was repeating itself.
Thanks for sharing this story with all of us.
Take care

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Amor. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
very nice 

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danish1 Senior Member

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 5:56am | IP Logged
awesome .fantastic end

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Sumi_162710 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Part 12

"Romance ke liye better jagah pata hai" Big smileBig smileWink LOL...After all Raj is smart enough to find better places than a pit where some jerk like Huda pushes him...Angry And darn...that good-for-nothing tool had the guts to go back to Naina's house...Angry...*cursing him to the fullest*...AngryAngryAngry

Now coming to Raj...I somehow liked that tiny Raj-Mom was basically nothing in this eventful part...but still I was kinda touched..Embarrassed

And then...RN scene to best tha hi..Embarrassed...the way Raj said it all...achha chalo...the way YOU wrote it all..LOLLOL...that was just fab!! ClapClap And yeah...I was not smiling at all...while reading all that...coz I cud feel that scene...Wink so I wud say...that was a beautiful job done by u...ClapClap

And the diary missing (after all I hav already read the last partLOL)

Waise iss part me meri sui Raj ke dialogues par hi atki has to be my most fav portion of this entire fic...just wonderful Mana!! ClapStarStarStar

Love, (For Raj only...huh...U r ending this fic no love for u)
Sumi. Embarrassed

Edited by Sumi_162710 - 10 May 2011 at 4:44am

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