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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 6:28am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Lion_Priya

lagta hai is baar dhamkiyon ka asar ho gaya...matlab ud toh chota tha aur font bhi...(kya karun....aadat se majbur) Teri toh! (Ab tu kahegi ki doc ko gaaliyan dena allowed nahi hai!) Aur maa meri, UD koi chota nahi tha! Tere 'bade' se UD se bhi bada tha!samjhi???

ud thoda HATKE tha...matlab kitna HATKE tha pata nahi ...par tha...matlab CUTE tha...aur kuch nahi kahungi...kyoun ki mera dimag ab bhi baht garam hai... Arey!! Kahi UD padke toh nahi na 'Hat' gaya??? I know yaar...kuch hua hai...warna itna 'Garmagaram' comment nahi milta mujhe!

main toh yeh soch rahi thi ki rajveer ko naina ne bachaya hai...isiliye dono me frndship ho jayegi...!!! par doctor ki soch ne pani pher diya...!!! mujhe yaad aayaa...'center-fresh ka add' back ground music me teen docs operation table par ek aadmi ko sula kar kuch disscuss kar rahe the...!!! pahle toh aisa lagta hai ki jaise voh is case k bare me discuss kar rahe hain....par jaise hi background music off hoti hai...tab pata chalta hai ki voh kisi zameen ka 3-4 hissa kar rahe the...aur senior doc nadiwale hisse ki demand kar raha tha kyuon ki voh senior hai'...!!! in sare pravachan se yeh pata chalta hai ki doc ki soch kab kya hota hai kuch bhi samajh me nahi aata...!!! You know what? Main react hi nahi kar pa rahi hoon! As a good doctor, i understood ki tum apna frustration mujhpar nikal rahi ho, jaise ki Raj ne Naina pe nikala! par...chalta hai...main bhi Naina ki tarah bahotttttt understanding hoon....

maine naina ko le kar kuch guesses kiye hain...par main yahaan voh nahi likhungi...!!! kyoun ki by chance agar mera khayal sahi sabit hua toh tum mujhe sach me OT me bhej dogi...!!! Hool mat de bekaar me! mujhe pata hai tumne kyun nahi likha...kyunki sochne ke 5 min. baad hi tumko samajh mein aagaya hoga ki nahi....mera guess wrong hi hai!

Huda aur Shantani ke bare me main kuch nahi kahungi...kyoun ki main un dono gadhon se kuch xpect karti bhi nahi hun...voh sirf peetne k kabil hain... ya...right!

phil-hal raj galat nahi hai... Woh tumhe kab galat lagta hai???

jo bhi huda n shantanu ne kiya...kam se kam u k baad voh itni asani se kaise kisi par yakeen kar sakta hai...??? toh in dono ki dosti ki suruwat dushmani k sath hui...!!! Dosti????!!! well...lets see kab hoti hai unmein...DOSTI !!!

par yaar Raj ne sach me naina k sath kuch achha nahi kiya...!!! naina ne bhi raj se challenge kar hi li...!!!

vaise yeh dono bade kab honge...??? ek idea hai.........hero bachpan me bhaagta hai aur bridge k upar se niche kudta hai train par...aur train par kudte hi bada ho jata hai...vaise hi tum bhi raj ko kahin se jump kara kar bada kar do...varna hamara kya hoga...!!! kyoun ki is raj ko dekh kar mujhe sirf lollypop ka khayal aata hai...amul choc (jis ka jingle hota tha 'gift for someone u love') ka khayal nahi aata...!!! serouslly mat le...main mazak kar rahi hun... story line ek dam mast hai...aur tu aise hi lihti ja...main becousule ki do packs bhejti hun...taki tujhe vitamins kami na ho...aur tu iase hi mast ud post karti rahe...!!! Thank you so much! dono cheezo keliye...becosule capsules keliye bhi (par tu paise mat kharch kar...hospital stock se kaafi mil jaayegi mujhe free mein..tere liye bhijwaau?? sabse late toh tu hi UD karti hai..aur 4/5 fics UD karte karte Vit. ki kami toh ho hi jaati hogi.. )

Second cheez...Raj ko bada karne ke idea ke baareinmein...no thanks but! kahin agar Raj ka pair train par na gir ke kahi 'pair phisal gaya ' toh??? Woh toh kahi mu dikhane ke layak nahi rahega!! Na bhai na, main aisa risk nahi le sakti!

Aur Priya, kabhi kabhi lollypop ke 'tangy' taste ko bhi enjoy karo...hamesha 'Amul chocolate'? daant kharab hojayege bachche!

chal ab kya cont soon kahna padega...jaldi se next ud post kar...!!! dekho toh.... kaun gussa ho raha hai mujhpe?

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Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 6:38am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rituka7

damn cool;
awesome
superb
update soon.............

Thanks Rituka! Big smile

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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 7:03am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Hehe.....wat hav u done yaar? I thought Raj n Naina r going to be frnds......but u knw wat.....I definitely luv war more than frndship.... LOL

....I sooooooo loved it. Thank you so much Sumi!!! Big smile

well...you'll definitely gonna see some interesting war!!! Wink

I really felt bad for Raj.....not having frnds is sumthing too painful.....after all every relation has its own importance n none can suffice for the other.... Ouch

...and I understand Raj's situation also (I always do that only Embarrassed

)..... That's it Sumi!! LOL

you Understand THAT only...! LOL

being just a kid....he may hav taken all children as those jerks Huda n Shantanu....and that has started off a NOT so beautiful realtionship which I'm sure is going to turn into one of the most beautiful relationships....wat say? Wink

Yeah...that I assure for sure !!! Big smile

Well.....to be beautiful, it'll take time....but, it's gonna be interesting for sure!!! Wink

And Mana......abhi tumhari pareeksha hai.....tumhe jald se jald ye fic continue karna hai.....Raj ko bara karo yaar.....I need to fall for him all over again....(chhote bacche pe kitne din line marungi LOL

)....plsssssss try to continue soon. Big smile

Arey, school mein ho na tum abhi??? Kitna line maarti ho uspe??? LOL

Just kiddin ! No offense meant ! gussa mat hona ha... Smile

And yes, I'll continue soon ! Smile

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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 7:07am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sania_58

awsome update

plz continue soon

plz send me a PM

Thank you so much sania!!

and yes, i'll pm u...

can u add me to your buddy list?

That way i won't fail in informin u.... Smile

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Posted: 27 December 2009 at 4:56am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Dhara_s

Aww...how cute is that...??? Thanks dhara! Well..i too find fights or rather tiffs more cute than sweet talks Wink

Poor Rajveer...taking out everything on Naina...!!! haan...ab apno pe hi toh gussa nikaalte hai! Wink

Aur Raj ka dil toh Naina ko kabse apna maan chuka hai na! Tongue

His mom liking Naina is going to make him all the more angry...!!! yeah...aag mein tel ka kaam kiya uss cheez ne... LOL

Bina wajah Naina ko chot lagi...!!!!

This is one of the cutest RN fics, I have come across...!!! Continue soon...!!! Thanks a ton again sweetie... Big smile

Edited by manatated - 01 January 2010 at 7:37pm

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Posted: 27 December 2009 at 4:58am | IP Logged

Originally posted by dazzling_glory

thanks for the update You're most welcome dear ! Smile

I was very surprised to read that raj behaved so rudely with naina. He believes that naina is just like huda and his friends. Hmmm....he had a very bad experience with them, so he thought so.

I am sure that naina will give her a proper answer. let's see Wink

Raj ko jawab dena itna aasaan bhi nahi Tongue

Raj's mom likes naina very much and wants raj to be her friend so that they can play together. Even naina likes Gayatri....but she is very angry with raj.

waiting to know what happens next. please continue soon. I will....

Edited by manatated - 01 January 2010 at 7:41pm

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Posted: 27 December 2009 at 5:21am | IP Logged

Originally posted by prerna1

that was really good
but why Raj is behaving like this with Naina
plz continue soon

Thanks for liking it Prerna... Smile

Well...Raj ka problem jaldihi pata chal jaayega! Smile

Edited by manatated - 01 January 2010 at 7:43pm

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Posted: 27 December 2009 at 5:21am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Sanskruthi

Hiiiiii Mana, Hi Yogitha!! Big smile

Lovely update Clap Clap Clap Clap Thanks a ton !! Smile

Naina apne dadu ke saath rehthi hain'.n she miss her parents'..u know some thing this reminded me of my child hood'..i also used to live with my grand parents( long time for two years) the reasons also same'..n they used to pamper me sooo much......but afsoas ki baat ye hain ki raj jaisa cute ladkha mera neighbour nahi hain jiske saath main jaghda karsaku. he he he!! LOL

Well sad for you !! but are you sure, Raj jaise cute ladke ke saath tumhe jhagda karna hai??? Wink

Naina to bahut well mannered child hain '.she is ready to become a friend of raj '..parrrrrrr raj to is baat ke liye tayyar nahi hain'..usne naina ko ugly kaisa kaha yaar'. Arey yaar janaab gusse mein hai! Ab Raj ka gussa!! Embarrassed

Aur phir APNO pe gussa nahi honge toh kispe honge??? Tongue

naina kitni sweet hain''usne kaha ki raj galthi se gira diya.jab asal mein wo jaanthi hain ki raj ne ye jaan bhoochke kiya''. Raj ne koi option nahi choda na LOL

Uske maa ke saamne usne jhoot toh bola hi aur uparse innocent si shakal banake Naina ko bhi sorry bola... LOL

n u know what''.i loved this type of beginning of a not so beautiful friend ship''kyunki i know baadh mein this will turn in to the most wonderful n beautiful relation ship........ me too !! And yes, it'll turn into most wonderful and beautiful relationship! Big smile

I am not all disappointed with this'..mujhe to ab in donon ke bichmein cute fights dekhna hain''... Ohk !! Your wish, my command, dear !! Big smile

'n raj naina ko jaldi bada kardo yaar. Arey yaar!! Sab ke sab ek jaise hai! hamesha har waqt Raj pe line maarni hoti hai tum logoko...par tum phir bhi alag ho! Tumne DONO KO bada karne ki demand ki hai, jabki baaki sab sirf RAJ ko bada dekhna chahte hai! LOL

I really liked this update but ek baath mujhe bilkul accha nahi laga'..wo hain tumhari update ki length''don't u think ye bahutttttttttttt short hain. Nahinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn !!! Kitna bada toh hai !! Ouch Aur main toh kitniiiii good girl hoon! Tumhe kabhi mujhe dhamki deneki zaroorat padi hai aaj tak??? Toh plzzzzzzzz isse chota matt kaho...waise bhi woh Priya mera dimaag khati rehti hai font ki size aur UD ki length ko leke!

The update is awesome'''n plz try to update fast n that too long one. Ohk boss!!! Tongue

Edited by manatated - 01 January 2010 at 7:57pm

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