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Posted: 09 December 2009 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! thanks!!Smile

An eight year old Rajveer is trapped in a storeroom and scared and crying!!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Poor baby!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchKitna roh raha hai aur cheekh raha hai!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry haan...I know ro woh raha hai, aur takliff tum sab ko ho rahi hai!LOL

Raj is a star and an all rounder!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileWow!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Huda and Shantanu tricked Raj and locked him in that storeroom!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Raj school ka hero hai aur woh log zero yeh sacchai unse bardaast nahi huyi!!!!!Thumbs Down Thumbs Down Thumbs Down Thumbs Down

Ish Huda ko toh main chhodungi nahi!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryYeh toh bachpan se hi villain nikla!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryAb bachcho ke gun toh paalne mein hi samajh aate hai na?Wink

I am sure Raj ush Huda ko baad mein sambhal hi lega!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up lets see!

A cute little girl came to Raj's rescue and I am sure that is Naina!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile aur kaun ho sakta hai?Wink

After all Raj ko musibaat se toh Naina hi bacha sakti hai!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smileright!!!

Lekin yeh Raj toh bina kuch bole hi chala gaya!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Thanks bhi nahi kaha Naina se!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Raj kuch kuch satka hua hai LOL

The beginning was very different and interesting!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clapthanks again!


 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
     
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by manatated - 21 December 2009 at 11:38am

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Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 09 December 2009 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_shona

Woww...one more RN fic... gr888888... i m soo happy..Tongue
 
Lovely concept... Thanks neelu !Big smile
 
 
so Raj is only 8 yr old...n that girl must be Naina.. Embarrassed aur kaun ho sakta hai?Wink
 
 
Huda is Angry ..koi baat nahi Raj bhi use achhe se samjaayega... Wink lets see!
 
storyline is gud..pls continue.... but dont forget to update ur other fics...!!!!Wink Tum ho na yaad dilaane keliye!
 

waiting for the next part...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by manatated - 21 December 2009 at 11:40am

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Posted: 09 December 2009 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dazzling_glory

Great....one more RN fic. And the starting is completely different.
 
Beautifuly written.  Thanks !!
 
Raj got bullied by his so called friends...for being good at studies and sports...this is not fare. I know...
 
But who was that girl? whom do you think???Wink lemme give you a clue...woh jo har waqt Raj ko museebat se bachati hai...Tongue samjhi???
 
please continue soon

 

 
 
 
 
 


Edited by manatated - 21 December 2009 at 11:42am

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Posted: 09 December 2009 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....mujhe rona aa raha hai.... Ale ale bachcha...itna nahi lote! tum chup hojao please! dekho agar tum chup hogayi toh main Raj ko bulaungi! okay??? LOL
 
mera Raj store-room me bandh tha??????????   hailaa!! Raj ka naam liya aur Sumi chup!!! kya baat hai??!!! Embarrassed
 
Wa wa wa wa............................usse kitni takleef hui hogi.....CryCryCry...how cud they do this to him???????Angry...Huh....Raj school ka hero hai and wo log zero....sacchayi bardasht nahi hui to usse aise store-room me lock kar diya...huh!!!!Angry.....I just so hate them for this. My poor baby....kitna ro raha tha....cheekh raha tha..CryCryCry...me feeling so bad for him. I know dear...but maine kisiko bhej diya hai usse bahar nikalne!


But at least koi achhi si ladki ayi aur usne usse nikal hi liya....I wonder if thats Naina...ya phir apka dimag kuch aur hi soch raha hai madam??WinkWinkArey maanti hoon, mera dimaag bahot kuch sochta rehta hai, but yeh cheez toh kabhi nahi badalti naa? Agar Raj museebat main hai, toh bachane _______ hi aayegi! ( fill in the blanks...LOL)

Anyways, Mana......firstly thankssssssss for staring a new fic....which is also non-LrL based.....it'll be gud to read...that I knw for sure. Thanks for the PM as well.... Itne saare thanks ko ek hi jawaab...U R MOST WELCOME MY DEAR!
 
now pls continue soon....baccho ko zara bade kar do....U c I'd luv to fall for Raj all over again n again n again n............ahh lets stop here.WinkWink hey bhagwaan! nahi....main itne jaldi nahi bada karne waali unkoTongue
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by manatated - 21 December 2009 at 11:48am

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Posted: 09 December 2009 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanskruthi

Hiiii mana..... hi yogitha!!

u started another RN fic....wow!!!!!!   .....so nice....n that too raj is there in the first update ........toooooo good. Arey tumhare liye toh usse 1st UD mein rakha hai! LOL
 
 
par is baar tum  naina ko nahi raj ko rulaya na .....kitna dara hua tha.....ye huda ko main chodungi nahi.....stupid huda.... Ab koi na koi toh royega hi naa! Tongue
 
a cute little girl came to rajs rescue....wo naina hi hai na. Tumhe kya lagta hia???
 
its an amazing part dear Clap   Clap    Clap    Clap Thanks a lot! Smile
 
thanx for the pm yaar ...waiting for the next part.....hope u post it soon
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by manatated - 21 December 2009 at 12:16pm

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Posted: 09 December 2009 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Wow,dear another rn ff and non lrl based .good.Nice  update.
Raj is too cute but huda uss problem hain raj se.kitna ro raha tha raj.
Hey oh lerki kaun hain,I guess naina.
Now continue soon dear.
 
 
 
 Hi rakhi!!
 
 thanks a lot for liking the UD...
 
And woh ladki kaun hai yeh next UD mein pata chal jaayega!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by manatated - 21 December 2009 at 12:18pm

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Posted: 09 December 2009 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lion_Priya

Sirf Tum...hamesha...Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile!!! haaaiiiiii....kya yeh main tumhare liye bol sakti hun....??? LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL Aur kisise kehne ke baaremein sochna bhi mat!!! LOL LOL LOL LOL  
 
okkkk ab nautanki nahi...main kaam ki baat karti hun. Arey wwah! aaj itne jaldi patri par aagayi???
 
 hamesha toh heroine ko hero bachane aata hai...par yahan toh ulta ho gaya...!!! Likhnewaala ultikhopdi ka hai na! Tongue
 
vaise yeh RN fic ka rule hai ki agar naina mushibat me ho toh rajveer aayega bachane...aur rajveer mushibat me ho toh naina aayegi bachane...!!! matlab hum writers k dimag me RN ko sath rakhne k liye jyada papad belne toh padte hi nahi...LOL LOL LOL Sau baat ki ek baat!!! LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
yeh muyaan Huda toh bachpan se hi villan nikla...!!!  Ek kahawat hai marathi mein...ki bachcho ke pair( equivalent to unke gun..i.e. characteristics) paalne mein hi samajh mein aate hai...toh Huda bada hoke kaisa banega, yeh to bachpan se pata chalega na? LOL
 
aur shantanu...matlab LRL me naina ka voh so called BF na...!!! phir huda aur shantanu ki jodi salamat rahe...!!! arre yeh dono sath honge toh RN bhi toh sath honge na...u know na in sab scenes me hum RN fans...hamesha xcited rahte hain...!!!Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smilebilkul!!!Big smile
 
ek baat bata...yeh kya teen age love story hai...??? Winktujhe kya lagta hai??Tongue
 
 
first part vaisa hi tha...jaisa tera har ek ud hota hai...!!! matlab...font badaLOL LOL LOL ...short udLOL LOL LOL...par superb oneClap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap(koi shaqWink)... Ek phatka khayegi!! itna bada UD karo, phir bhi ek hi maala japti rehti hai...chota hai..chota hai...
 
naya fic start kiya hai aur voh bhi non-LRL ...!!! lagta hai tujhe bhi humari bimari akhir lag hi gayi...!!! chal ab teri khinchai band karti hun...!!!Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Sangat ki rangat aa hi jaati hai madam!
 
 
arre main toh Thanxxx kahna bhul hi gayi....!!! thanxxxxxxxxxxx a lot...tum ne ek aur RN fic jo start kiya...Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smileOooooh!!! My pleasure maam! LOL LOL LOL
 
cont soon. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
  
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by manatated - 21 December 2009 at 12:26pm

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Posted: 09 December 2009 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerna1

nice concept
plz continue soon
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Thanqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq .....................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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