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hmm sounds interesting.......
update soon dear.....would love 2 read more.......
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Part 1



We see a girl sleeping she is beautiful bt it seems she is not happy with life her face looks dul and pale as her  mother enter the room  and remove the curtains and girlhids her face from the pillow just to prevent the sunligt affecting her

Guess right girl is ridhima and mother is padma


Padma: beta sade saath hogaye ab uthja bache kitni der soyegi

Ridhima: maa thode der aur waise bhi aaj office main 2 baje ke baad jana hai

Padma:aur thode hi din bache hai aram se soja sasural jane ke baad yeh sab nahi chalega

Ridhima: at once get up from bed with jerk maa abhi to sirf baat chal rahi hai

Padma:nahi beta subah hi phone aya tha jai bhasaheb ka armaan ne rishtey ke liye haan kar di hai

Ridhima was shocked kyaaa


Armaan had come to meet ridhima to see her as jaimalik and sasnk gupta wanted moreover armaan also wanted

As soon as armaan went to her room he can smell her fragnance which make him at once happy and delighted he was dressed in white t shirt with blue jeans looking hansome and killing as ever

He sat on the sofa waiting for ridhima to come out of washroom as she came wearing normal jeans and t shirt (she weares western much in ff) she was looking simple thouth beautiful as armaan saw her he lost again on her beautiful just only one word came from his mouth which was whisper beautiful his blue eyes was constantly gazing on her ridhima was getting consiouse of the gaze and started getting nervous as coming near him armaan understood and mentally kick himself loosing again on her beauty

He mentally make a not to himself not to losse on her atleast now . wanting to comeback from this awward situation he just tell her

Armaan: hi I am armaan armaan mallik

Ridhima: sat beside him I am ridhima

Armaan: so

Ridhima: isse pehle tum aage bado mujhe tumare saath kuch battein clear karni hai

Armaan: interrupting yehi tum abhi se pyar karti thi

Ridhima: was shocked hw he knew this bt then tell karthi thi nahi karti hoon

Armaan was bit disappointed hearing that par ab to who

Ridhima: haan main janti who ab yaha nahi hai par mere dil main who ab bhi hai par tumhe kaise pata I am sure dad ne tumhe kuch nahi bataya

Armaan: tumne sach main abhi tak  mujhe nahi pehchana

Ridhima: nahi kya hum pehle bhi mil chuke hai

Armaan: just smile showing his dimples tumhe yaad nahi colledge main jisse tum aur abhi champu keh kar bulate the

(in colledge armaan was very studios types having big glass specks and always having oily hair can imagine suriji attire)

Ridhima: for once forget everything and just started laughjing

Armaan was lost one her charms yet again

Ridhima: holding her stomach don't tell me tum wahi champu ho jo mere aur  abhi kea age peche rehte the colldge main hahaha jisse bike chalane main daar lagta tha par padhayi main hamesah aage hahaha

Armaan: haan main wahi hoon

Ridhima: seeing his serious tone sorry mera mazak udhane ka koi irada nahi tha I am sorry mujhe to bas who sab yaad aagaya par tum achanak itne badal kaise gaye

Armaan: bas kyun ki is duniyan main kamyab hone ke liye aap kaise dekte hai who bhi important hai

Ridhima: who to hai and u are looking gud also

Armaan: for once felt proud and happy thanks

Ridhima: I guess tab to tumhe pata hi hoga main aur abhi colledge main kitne close the kyat um phir bhi mujhse

Armaan thiking yeh mujhe nahi pata hoga to kisse pata hoga and trying to tell something

Meanwhile padma enter the room  

Padmacoming: armaan beta tumare office se phone aya hai koi urgent kaam hai

Armaan: ok aunty mujhe ab chalna chaiye bye ridhima nice meeting u

Ridhima: bye

After armaan went ridhima was relaxed thank god use to mere aur abhi ke barrein main sab pata hai kitni baar usne mujhe kiss karte hue ya uske saath romance karte hue degha hoga who is shadi ke liye kabhie haan nahi kahega thankg god


Padma: kya hua beta kya sochne lag gayi itni tensed kyun hai tune hi to kaha tha who acha hai

Ridhima: haan maa par mujhe laga tha who is shadi ke liye kabhie haan nahi karega use mere aur abhi

Padma: phir abhi kitni baar kaha hai ridhu use bhul ja tumne uske barrein main bataya hi kyun tere papa ne kya kaha tha yeh to shukr hai armaan ne phir bhi

Ridhima: ma maine use kuch nahi batya use pehle se hi sab pata tha who humare colledge main hi tha phir bhi usne shadi ke liye

Padma: dekh beta humne tumhe jitna time dena tha de diya abhi ko bhulne ke liye pechle teen saal se hum teri hi baat mainte aaye hai par abhi nahi beta tu khud hi soch tere papa ko abhi abhi ek heart attack aya hai hum log sirf itna chathe hai kit um apni zindagi main aage bade aur armaan ko who sab pata hote hue bhi usne haan ki hai matlab use acha ladka tujhe mil hi nahi sakta itna assan nahi hota bache kisse aise insaan se shadi karna jab use pata ho ki who kisse aur se pyar karti thi ya karti hai

Ridhima: maa main yehi to janna chathi hoon ki usne aisa kyun kiya don't worry mom is baar maine dada se wada kiya hai main is shadi se inkaar  nahi karungi lekin mujhe yeh janne ka haq to hai na ki usne yeh sab jante hue bhi haan kyun ki mujhe use baat karni hi padegi


Mallik mansion

We see a guy doing pushups wearing his track pant and vest looking stunning and hot as ever  get disturbed as hois cell phone rang bt seeing the number automatically smile came on his face he atonce stopthe push up turn a bit and pressing the button

Armaan: heloo breathing heavily

Ridhima: hi armaan tum thik to hona

Armaan was happy seeing him concerned nahi who workout kar raha tha isliye

Ridhima: tum who bhi karne lage

Armaan: haan

Ridhima: tum bahut badal gaye ho mujhe tumse luch poochna tha

Armaan: kya

Ridhima: tum to mere aur abhi ke barrein main sab jante the phir tumne haan mera matlab tum kisee

Armaan: maine haan isliye kaha because I like u

Ridhima: par

Armaan: dekho yeh battein yaha nahi ho sakti hum log kahi milte hai waise bhi aaj main 2 baje tak free hoon agar tum bhi

Ridhima: haan I also have half day

Armaan: gud so we sould meet at pizzeria at 11 what say

Ridhima: ghar par mil nahi sakte

Armaan: kyun tumhe mujhpar bharosa nahi hai

Ridhima: aisa nahi hai

Armaan: then done 11 pizzeria bye tc

Cut the call so that she cannot protest

Ridhima thinking ajeeb ladka hai par milne main kya khrabi hai agar shadi karni hi hai to it is important that I make everything clear to him

Rahul muskaan

Muskaan was in kithen making breakfast rahul came from the door and just hug her from back tigtly kissing her sidecheeck

Rahul: gud  morning jaan

Muskaan: morning baby bahut jaldi ho gayi aapki subah

Rahul: aaj hald day hai na jaan kissing her neck tightly

Muskaan closed her eyes for once coming to reality thinking agar abhi nahi roka to they would carry away

Muskaan: slightly pushing him kya kar rahe ho yeh bedroom nahi hai

Rahul: oh to bedroom hone se I can do anything winking

Muskaan:blushing tum thakte nahi na bas chance chaiye har waqt

Rahul:jab biwi aapke jaise ho to kaun thakega waise were is my morning kiss

Muskaan: now facing him abhi maine kya kaha rahul

Rahulnot lisning just bring clser his lips and within a minute there lips were touching each other and enjoying there morning kiss broken unfortunately when armaan came

Armaan putting hand on his eyes bro bhabs aap logon ko romance kitchen main karna zarori hai kya

Rahul: jab janta hai to dekh ke nahi khus sakta kitchen main huh

Muskaan hitting him and glaring to be quite

Armaan: bhabs aap kisse samjha rahi hai inhe shram nahi aati kuch logon ko yaad dilana chaiye ki bed room bhi hota hai jab aap log bahar itna involve pehte hai pata nahi bed room main kya karte honge

Listning this rahul and muskaan both went scarlet red

Armaan: not bad bro u also know to blush

Rahul: bahut hoga asale kabse se patar patar kar raha hai ek baar ridhima ko aa jane de phir dekhta hoon tujhe

Armaan unknowing started smiling and blushing hearing her name

Rahul: oh ho ab kaun khush ho raha hai aur lala lala bhi giving muskan hi five

Armaan: stop it ok main koi la pila nahi ho raha bhabs pls breakfast ready kardo mujhe 10 baje nikalna hai

Rahul: if I am not wrong aaj half day hai

Armaan: bro mujhe kuch kaam hai

Rahul: pata hai pata hai kya kaam hai saaf saaf bolna ridhima se milne jar aha hai

Armaan: haan jaan raha hoon now happy

Muskaan: acha baba ab tu dono ladna band karo armaan tum fresh hojao tumara juice aur omlet main bana deti hoon

Armaan: thanks bhabs love u

Rahul: oye chup baith  apni ridhima ko bol ye huh

Muskaan was laughing seeing this silly behavior of rahul

Armaan: oh ho someone is jelouse han

Armaan went ooff

Rahul: aur nahi to kya I love u tumhe bolna to mera kaam hai na

Muskaan: was now afraid with his tone rahul pls abhi nahi breakfast reafdy kar lun

Rahul: ok thik hai ab to yeh kaba main hadi nikal jayega 10 baje tab dekhta hoon tumhe winking

Making muskaan blush again

Armaan after getting ready have his breakfast set to go to meet his first love he was wearing  t shirt and jeans still looking stunning went on his bike halt in front of mandir

(lols this armaan is different yeh mandir bhi jata hai)

Armaan: praying bhagwanji aaj main apni pehli date par jaraha hoon pls sab thik kardena who shadi ke liye mana na kare  god pls pls

Pandtji: are armaan beta tum to Monday ko aate ho aaj to Saturday hai

Armaan: panditji aaj mera bahut important kaam hai jiske liye main 16 somwar vrat kiye hai aaj finally main apne sapne ke bahut karreb hoon

Panditji: ph to who ladki tumhe mil hi gayi par yaad rakhna jaha pyar hota hai waha mushkilein bhi hoti hai beta

Armaan: main janta hoon panditji par aapne hi to kaha hai agar kisse hum sache dil se chahe ya uski khushi ki kamna kare to who puri hoti hai

Panditji : yeh lo Prasad bhagwan tumari har icha puri kare

Taking blessing of him he left


Armaan was sitting at corner sit waiting for her as soon as she enter the restaurant armaan can feel the cool breeze at once he look at that direction and was mesmerized by her beuty she was wearning normal long skirt and top loking elegent and beautiful

Ridhima: sorry to keep u waiting

Armaan: not its ok main hi time se jaldi aah gaya

Ridhima: ok

Armaan: kya logi

Ridhima: pizaa

Armaan the n orderd their pizaa and colddrink

Ridhima: mujhe yeh

Armaan: dekho ridhima mujhe pata hai tumhe kya jana hai yehi ki mujhe tumare aur abhi ke barrein main sab pata hote hue bi shadi ke liye

Ridhima: haan

Armaan: ridhima abhi tumara past tha I know u also love her now and that's the thing I like about u your honesty aur yeh to tumhe bhi pata hai I like u sinse colledge times

Ridhima: pata hai armaan par like karna aur puri zindagi betane main bahut pharak hai tumhe to koi bhi mil sakti hai

Armaan: to tum kyun nahi

Ridhima: what

Armaan: dekho ridhima main sab jante hue bhi apne dil se hi tumhe apna raha hoon agar tumhe aitraaz hai to tum mana kar sakti ho

Ridhima: main who nahi kar sakti maine dada ko promise kiya hai

Armaan was sad hearing that he thought she also wanted to marry him bt he was ok with it mujhe isse koi pharak nahi padhta ridhima I like u and want to spend my life with u agar tum yeh zabardasti kar rahi hoon to main tumare parents se baat karun

Ridhima: nahi but one thing I want to make clear hum logon ki shadi hogi par husband wife ka relashionship nahi rahega  tum mujeh force nahi karoge jab tak main na chahu main mana nahi kar sakti dada ko tumhe pata hai

Armaan: I know uncle went through severe heart attack don't worry ridhima sab kuch tumare man se hi hoga jaisa tum chahogi waise bhi arrange marriages main pehle dosti hoti hai phir paayrdon't worry main tumhe kabhie force nahi karunga we can be friends

Ridhima don't know why bt looking his eyes she can feel he was honest and will not betray  her

Ok if u are ok with the conditions I don't have any problem

Armaan was smiling finally thinking don't worry ridhima main tumhe itna pyar dunga tum khud abhi ko bhuljaogi I promise tumhe koi bhi dekh chue uske pehle tumhe mujh par se guzarna hoga  main tumhe itna khush rakhunga ki tumhe koi gum kabhie chu hi na paye .

Ridhima: kha kho gaye

Armaan: nahi kuch nahi r u still in contact with anjali

Ridhima: ya I am she is my best friend abhi to who fashion designer bangayi hai uska khud ka bottque bhi hai bas sirf

Armaan: ky aua ruk kyun gayi

Ridhima: who  atul

Armaan: atul tumhe who yaad hai

Ridhima: main use kaise bhul sakti hoon kabhie bike race kabhie bb hamedhsa wahi to abhi ko challenge karta tha aur tum side main khade ho kar bas dekte rehthe  the

U have changed armaan

Armaan: un batton ko 5 saal ho gaye hai ridhima koi bhi change ho sakta hai

Ridhima: to kya atul bhi

Armaan: nahi who waise ka waisa hi hai use ab bhi commitment aur bandhan pe viushwas nahi hai kya anjali ab bhi use

Ridhima: who to kabhie use bhuli hi nahi thi waise abhi atul kaha hai

Armaan: who mere saath hi hai business main specially sare female models magazine ke cover page ke liye who hi select karta hai

(armaan had business for publishing magazines of designer wears wears basically publication house )

Ridhima: ladkiyon ki aur uski tuni hamesha se hi achi rahi hai kyun smiling

Armaan: haan who to hai

Ridhima: abhi mujhe jana hai late ho raha hai meeting ke liye

Armaan: ok chalo

As they went outside

Armaan:chalo main tumhe chod deta hoon

Seeing bike ridhima was frigtenede

Ridhima: main bike se nahi jaungi

Armaan: kyun tumhe to bikes achi lagti thi

Ridhima: maine kaha na armaan tum jao main taxi se chali jati hoon

Armaan: ok main tumare saath hi chalta hoon

Ridhima: nahi its ok I can go

Armaan: don't worry baba maine bro ko keh dunga who kisse aur se keh kar bike ghar pauncha dega ab chalo

Ridhima: ok

In taxi

There was silence for sometime

Armaan: aaj main aur kuch friends disco ja rahe hai tum aana chagi

Ridhima: main ab disco nahi jati

Armaan: what mera matlab hai tumhe to bike racuing discos kitna acha lagta tha ridhima tum bhi kitni badal gayi ho

Ridhima: as u say 5 saal kam nahi hote armaan

Armaan just smile


Anjali atul entry

Why ridhima left everything which she used to do first

(I know guys in this armaan ridhima atul anjali are totally different from what u have seen earlier I will try my best to make u all recognize with them the main reason I was nervous starting this ff)

Guys one favour in this three ff one will be coming every week other alternate week as I cannot update more that twice a week so now u all decide which ff u want regular and which alternate from



Love love love

Karan ki dewani mithila 

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Posted: 26 November 2009 at 3:47am | IP Logged

hey nice one...luvd it....thnx for  d pm

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Posted: 26 November 2009 at 4:44am | IP Logged
hey mithila .....justcame through this ff.......nice concept....interesting .....cont soon....thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 26 November 2009 at 5:16am | IP Logged
hey mithila..nice part..
Armaan had to come to see Ridz for marriage..and he was pretty impressed wid her..but Ridz still loves Abhi..aww..i hope she 4gets him soon..but atleast Armaan said yes! ..n  now Ridz cant say no..
Ridz wanted to meet Armaan..n he was working out..hawt!..but atleast deyre gonna meet
the RM scene was damn cute..n even Armaan teasing Rahul and they both fightin was gud..
So they met and Armaan explained evrytyn 2 her..they also talked about old times..Anji loved Atul but he did'nt beleive in commitment..aww..
Armaan went with Ridz in a taxi..hw sweet..but i wonder why Ridz stopped doin what she used to..
btw can u please put quotes or smtn so that we know which is the dialogue part?!
u can update wdml or this ..i don mind any..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon

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Posted: 26 November 2009 at 5:24am | IP Logged
hey mits di
it was so refreshing
to be honest jaaneman ki yaad dilata hai
but akshay is nothing compared to armaan n karan
thanks for the pm.

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nice do pm me!

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