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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 9:33am | IP Logged

i wont be able to reply now

2 reasons

don't have time

after reading all this imy hands r shaking literalluy

bye but i'll cuddle sim ,pari n mallika to death tomarrow

pakka promise

lucario

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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 10:14am | IP Logged

very nice first part .....sorry for late comments........as i read it in hurry as i was leaving for my exam from home.....aftr tht i didnt got time to comment......but waiting for the second part.......continue soon.

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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 10:42pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by --Pari--

Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

I have an intelligent question dolly ???????

Mayu aur gunji school main kab sath the ??????????

Anyways awesome tha yaar !!!!!!!!! Pta na ho ke bhi pta tha ke vo samrat hai !!!!!!! wah wah wah wah wah wah !!!!!!!!

A great suspense thriller dolly !!!!!! Atleast iska part update karne main der mat karna !!!!!!!! Loved it !!!!! Hats off to you !!!!!

Officially likhna shuru kar de !!!!!! Waise ek suggestion hai !!!!!!

MJHT ki story tu hi pen down kar de zyada acchhhi likhegi tu !!!!!

Love

Simmu

he he he

mein ppen down karun mjht ki story... Han ofcourse !!!!!! Tu pen down kar !!!!!

beta phir do dino mein samrat aur mayu ka ram naam satya ho jayega ... Vo to mujhe pat hi hai !!!!! Ye kare bagair to tera khana hazam nahi hoga hehehehehehehehe !!!!!

adhiraj ko unke khoon mein umarkaid ho jayegi . . . . Ye achha hai !!!! Kam se kam peechha to chhotega !!!

aur gunur apni premiyon ki yaad mein paagal ho jayengi . . . Waise ye karne ke liye zyada mehant nahi karni padegi !!!!!!

u know na how sadistic i am ?????? I knw you truly to the core meri amma !!!! Tabhi to keh rahi hun !!!

Waise tune sab ka to bta diya bt teri pen ki gayi story main Benji , dia , uday aur ab Suhani ka kya hoga ???????? Waise mayu ki maa aur bui bhi reh gayi !!!!!!

don't u think tu khud bhi bahut sadistic hai behena

i am really thankful apna raju aas paas kahin nahin hai varna us bechare ka to ........

ahem ahem, u know that better don't u?????

I really know dolly !!!!!!! Thank heavens ke vo nahi hai !!!!!!! Waise tune btaya nahi ke tu benji , dia, uday , mayu ki mummy aur bui ke sath kya karna chahegi ?????? Aur ab hum apne signature ko torture karna band karein !!!!!

mein bhi yehi soch ri thi

vaise i want to strangle pari can u pls beg or frustrate her enough too cum n read this ss plssssssssss..

bui=i'll lock her in her own tabela///

banji n uday== un dono ki shaadi ho jayegi

mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale

Hahahahahahahahaha !!!!! Waise maine pari ko abhi abhi apni charro ki siggie ke liye request bheji hai !!!!!

Hope so ke jaldi poori ho jaye !!!!!

mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale . . . Intelligent question yet again doll :- Rest of the remaining gharwale hain kaun ???????? saynak ka ram nam satya karva diya , gunur would probably in asylum , benji uday ek dusre ko jjhel lenge > To bcha kaun ??????????

oohhho

so tumne hi kaha tha usse............. ROFL

...........thanks to u to dolly LOL

...........mere kaan pakd kar muje read karne k liye kahan tum dono ne.....phir jaake maine padha.....aur padha to esa ki............ab tu dekh.............tu dekh.................me tuje kitna torture karti hu........waise when will u going to undate next part??? ROFL

OMG u guys hillirious ROFL

...............woh diya, mayu ki mom, and woh uday benji ROFL

ha ha love u guys!!

Ye to kuch bhi nahi pari !!!!!! Tu iski mumbai blast wali ff padhegi to behosh ho jaegi !!!!!! Actually I am editing it right now !!!!!!! Jab complete edit ho jaegi to tujhe post kar dungi !!!!! Vo bhi isne suspense pe chhor rakhi hai !!!! Idiot !!!!

Aur tujhe mujhe thanx karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai !!!!!! Friendship main no sorry and no thank you !!!!!

Hahahahahahahaha know zyada filmi ho gya na !!!!!!!!

...............woh diya, mayu ki mom, and woh uday benji aur haan in sab pe to humein bhi taras aa rha hai !!!

Anything for you two !!!!!!

Love ya loads

Simi

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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 10:43pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by dolly18

i wont be able to reply now

2 reasons

don't have time

after reading all this imy hands r shaking literalluy

bye but i'll cuddle sim ,pari n mallika to death tomarrow

pakka promise

Dont worry darling !!!!!! I am there to hold you back !!!!!!

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Posted: 28 November 2009 at 1:10am | IP Logged

Originally posted by samratrocks

lovedd it!!! keep continuing dear....u rock in writing!!!

thank so much sweety 4 liking it

lov dolly

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Posted: 28 November 2009 at 1:12am | IP Logged

Originally posted by --Pari--

ok isse pehele main kuch bhi kahu.............A BIG SORRY............to u jaan.................................couldn't come here for some reason................ask simi why...........And A BIG THANK to her................woh bhi usse hi pucho why!!!!!!!!

to tu finally aa gayi tera reply dekh kar bhi mujhe itna bada dhaka hi laga hia jaan...

its ur biggest reply ever

congo!!!!!!!!!

and i feel oblidged for this

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Posted: 28 November 2009 at 1:16am | IP Logged

Originally posted by --Pari--

ok dolly....................this left me in shock and in inner happiness.....somewhat proud and somewhere excitement!!!!!! m telling u reason for everything!!!!!!

SHOCK-

this come as a total surprise for me!!!...........................u r an such a fab writer.............awsome towsome bloosome..................tumne esa kaise kiya????? no plzzzz tell me na!!!!!!!! tu sich rahi hogi....................hamare itni lambi frnship main muje ab pata chala......................how fantastic u r!!!!!!!!!!...............he na ha ha !!!

but this is my first time .......reading ur FF...................tera kya reading any FF on IF.................isse pehele I never read any!!........................aur pata chala .....I missed a lot!!!.......................tune kitna kaha tha na muje...............par m not a good writer nor a good reader!!!............

I hate reading ...................but while reading urs .......I was like............OMG...............the most intresting reading I have ever done............whitout blinking my eye.............I was just starring at my comp..........................the above pic can define me perfactly!!!!!! so I m in shock!!!

i am not that good pari ..pls mein kal se vaise bhi channe k jhaad pe chadi hui hun aur upar mat dakhelo...

vaise in sab mein teri hi galti hai ... teri siggs dekh k kuch to likh hi deti hun .... u know

now inner happiness and excitement.................

let me come to the story.......pehele yeh kaho............when r u going to post next...........nahi yeh kaho...............how did u think of this????? plzzzz tell me.............I mean that symbolization and all that.....sorry dont know much about writing but still........................like when I was reading it..........I was actually feeling it!!.............I felt like its me lmao...hasna mat but sach main................every scene were coming infront of my eyes!!!.....................I didn't read it here..................simi pmed me............so I never expected it to be a SAJAN FF!!!..............aur jese hi maine sammy ka naam padha....................I was like Day Dreaming

....now ofcourse...........I was not imagin my self.............it was gunjan instead of me infront of my eyes lmao....mera sapne tut gaya ROFL

.............par sacchi main...................then I felt like m waiching MJHT.............but with a very improved story line ha ha .........and after reading Mayank's name I was like Shocked

............maine toh socha hi nahi tha......the docter could be mayank LOL

..................aur phir tune muje bahut hurt kiye................wahan par stop karke..............ab main kaise soungi??????......plzzzz jaldi update karrrrrrrrrrrrrr............bagging u!!!!!!!!!!

PROUD

that u r mine..................and ofcourse simi's and sayank's also.....................we all r so pround to have u......................and ya ur lappie also lmao.............nahi par sachhi................m feeling like.............yeh meri best frnd hai!!!!!!! love u so much meri jaan............want to say sorry.........muje pata chala main kya miss kar rahi thi...................simmi....................the credit goes to u!!!...........thanx a lot meri jaan.............tum nahi hoti to muje kabhi pata nahi chalata....................a big hug to u!!!

dolly............................hugs and kiss.............love u meri jaan..............proud of u ............................and waiting for the next part eagerly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awwwwwwwww pari i i....... i mean ....i am really......

u r soooooo. i mean i want to .... i mean ... i ...i no really i was just saying

crap 4get it i am talking rubbish

how u people can even expext an understandable response after all this

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