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Posted: 26 November 2009 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

I have an intelligent question dolly ???????
 
Mayu aur gunji school main kab sath the ??????????
 
Anyways awesome tha yaar !!!!!!!!! Pta na ho ke bhi pta tha ke vo samrat hai !!!!!!! wah wah wah wah wah wah  !!!!!!!!
 
A great suspense thriller dolly !!!!!! Atleast iska part update karne main der mat karna !!!!!!!! Loved it !!!!! Hats off to you !!!!!
 
Officially likhna shuru kar de !!!!!! Waise ek suggestion hai !!!!!!
MJHT ki story tu hi pen down kar de zyada acchhhi likhegi tu !!!!!
 
Love
Simmu
he he he
mein ppen down karun mjht ki story... Han ofcourse !!!!!! Tu pen down kar !!!!!
beta phir do dino mein samrat aur mayu ka ram naam satya ho jayega ... Vo to mujhe pat hi hai !!!!! Ye kare bagair to tera khana hazam nahi hoga hehehehehehehehe !!!!!
adhiraj ko unke khoon mein umarkaid ho jayegi . . . . Ye achha hai !!!! Kam se kam peechha to chhotega !!!
aur gunur apni premiyon ki yaad mein paagal ho jayengi . . . Waise ye karne ke liye zyada mehant nahi karni padegi !!!!!!
u know na how sadistic i am ??????  I knw you truly to the core meri amma !!!! Tabhi to keh rahi hun !!!
Waise tune sab ka to bta diya bt teri pen ki gayi story main Benji , dia , uday aur ab Suhani ka kya hoga ???????? Waise mayu ki maa aur bui bhi reh gayi !!!!!!
don't u think tu khud bhi bahut sadistic hai behena
i am really thankful apna raju aas paas kahin nahin hai varna us bechare ka to ........
ahem ahem, u know that better don't u?????
I really know dolly !!!!!!! Thank heavens ke vo nahi hai !!!!!!! Waise tune btaya nahi ke tu benji , dia, uday , mayu ki mummy aur bui ke sath kya karna chahegi ?????? Aur ab hum apne signature ko torture karna band karein !!!!!
mein bhi yehi soch ri thi
vaise i want to strangle pari can u pls beg or frustrate her enough too cum n read this ss plssssssssss..
bui=i'll lock her in her own tabela///
banji n uday== un dono ki shaadi ho jayegi
mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale

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Posted: 26 November 2009 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

I have an intelligent question dolly ???????
 
Mayu aur gunji school main kab sath the ??????????
 
Anyways awesome tha yaar !!!!!!!!! Pta na ho ke bhi pta tha ke vo samrat hai !!!!!!! wah wah wah wah wah wah  !!!!!!!!
 
A great suspense thriller dolly !!!!!! Atleast iska part update karne main der mat karna !!!!!!!! Loved it !!!!! Hats off to you !!!!!
 
Officially likhna shuru kar de !!!!!! Waise ek suggestion hai !!!!!!
MJHT ki story tu hi pen down kar de zyada acchhhi likhegi tu !!!!!
 
Love
Simmu
he he he
mein ppen down karun mjht ki story... Han ofcourse !!!!!! Tu pen down kar !!!!!
beta phir do dino mein samrat aur mayu ka ram naam satya ho jayega ... Vo to mujhe pat hi hai !!!!! Ye kare bagair to tera khana hazam nahi hoga hehehehehehehehe !!!!!
adhiraj ko unke khoon mein umarkaid ho jayegi . . . . Ye achha hai !!!! Kam se kam peechha to chhotega !!!
aur gunur apni premiyon ki yaad mein paagal ho jayengi . . . Waise ye karne ke liye zyada mehant nahi karni padegi !!!!!!
u know na how sadistic i am ??????  I knw you truly to the core meri amma !!!! Tabhi to keh rahi hun !!!
Waise tune sab ka to bta diya bt teri pen ki gayi story main Benji , dia , uday aur ab Suhani ka kya hoga ???????? Waise mayu ki maa aur bui bhi reh gayi !!!!!!
don't u think tu khud bhi bahut sadistic hai behena
i am really thankful apna raju aas paas kahin nahin hai varna us bechare ka to ........
ahem ahem, u know that better don't u?????
I really know dolly !!!!!!! Thank heavens ke vo nahi hai !!!!!!! Waise tune btaya nahi ke tu benji , dia, uday , mayu ki mummy aur bui ke sath kya karna chahegi ?????? Aur ab hum apne signature ko torture karna band karein !!!!!
mein bhi yehi soch ri thi
vaise i want to strangle pari can u pls beg or frustrate her enough too cum n read this ss plssssssssss..
bui=i'll lock her in her own tabela///
banji n uday== un dono ki shaadi ho jayegi
mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale
Hahahahahahahahaha !!!!! Waise maine pari ko abhi abhi apni charro ki siggie ke liye request bheji hai !!!!!
Hope so ke jaldi poori ho jaye !!!!!
mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale . . . Intelligent question yet again doll :- Rest of the remaining gharwale hain kaun ???????? saynak ka ram nam satya karva diya , gunur would probably in asylum , benji uday ek dusre ko jjhel lenge > To bcha kaun ?????????? 

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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 1:04am | IP Logged
lovedd it!!! keep continuing dear....u rock in writing!!!

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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 6:12am | IP Logged
 
Shocked
 
 
ok isse pehele main kuch bhi kahu.............A BIG SORRY............to u jaan.................................couldn't come here for some reason................ask simi why...........And A BIG THANK to her................woh bhi usse hi pucho why!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 6:30am | IP Logged
ok dolly....................this left me in shock and in inner happiness.....somewhat proud and somewhere excitement!!!!!! m telling u reason for everything!!!!!!
 
SHOCK-
this come as a total surprise for me!!!...........................u r an such a fab writer.............awsome towsome bloosome..................tumne esa kaise kiya????? no plzzzz tell me na!!!!!!!! tu sich rahi hogi....................hamare itni lambi frnship main muje ab pata chala......................how fantastic u r!!!!!!!!!!...............he na ha ha !!!
but this is my first time .......reading ur FF...................tera kya reading any FF on IF.................isse pehele I never read any!!........................aur pata chala .....I missed a lot!!!.......................tune kitna kaha tha na muje...............par m not a good writer nor a good reader!!!............
I hate reading ...................but  while reading urs .......I was like............OMG...............the most intresting reading I have ever done............whitout blinking my eye.............I was just starring at my comp..........................the above pic can define me perfactly!!!!!! so I m in shock!!!
 
now inner happiness and excitement.................
 
let me come to the story.......pehele yeh kaho............when r u going to post next...........nahi yeh kaho...............how did  u think of this????? plzzzz tell me.............I mean that symbolization and all that.....sorry dont know much about writing but still........................like when I was reading it..........I was actually feeling it!!.............I felt like its me lmao...hasna mat but sach main................every scene were coming infront of my eyes!!!.....................I didn't read it here..................simi pmed me............so I never expected it to be a SAJAN FF!!!..............aur jese hi maine sammy ka naam padha....................I was likeDay Dreaming....now ofcourse...........I was not imagin my self.............it was gunjan instead of me infront of my eyes lmao....mera sapne tut gayaROFL.............par sacchi main...................then I felt like m waiching MJHT.............but with a very improved story line ha ha .........and after reading Mayank's name I was likeShocked............maine toh socha hi nahi tha......the docter could be mayankLOL..................aur phir tune muje bahut hurt kiye................wahan par stop karke..............ab main kaise soungi??????......plzzzz jaldi update karrrrrrrrrrrrrr............bagging u!!!!!!!!!!
 
PROUD
that u r mine..................and ofcourse simi's and sayank's also.....................we all r so pround to have u......................and ya ur lappie also lmao.............nahi par sachhi................m feeling like.............yeh meri best frnd hai!!!!!!! love u so much meri jaan............want to say sorry.........muje pata chala main kya miss kar rahi thi...................simmi....................the credit goes to u!!!...........thanx a lot meri jaan.............tum nahi hoti to muje kabhi pata nahi chalata....................a big hug to u!!!
 
 
dolly............................hugs and kiss.............love u meri jaan..............proud of u ............................and waiting for the next part eagerly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Edited by --Pari-- - 27 November 2009 at 6:32am

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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

Originally posted by dolly18

Originally posted by simar456

I have an intelligent question dolly ???????
 
Mayu aur gunji school main kab sath the ??????????
 
Anyways awesome tha yaar !!!!!!!!! Pta na ho ke bhi pta tha ke vo samrat hai !!!!!!! wah wah wah wah wah wah  !!!!!!!!
 
A great suspense thriller dolly !!!!!! Atleast iska part update karne main der mat karna !!!!!!!! Loved it !!!!! Hats off to you !!!!!
 
Officially likhna shuru kar de !!!!!! Waise ek suggestion hai !!!!!!
MJHT ki story tu hi pen down kar de zyada acchhhi likhegi tu !!!!!
 
Love
Simmu
he he he
mein ppen down karun mjht ki story... Han ofcourse !!!!!! Tu pen down kar !!!!!
beta phir do dino mein samrat aur mayu ka ram naam satya ho jayega ... Vo to mujhe pat hi hai !!!!! Ye kare bagair to tera khana hazam nahi hoga hehehehehehehehe !!!!!
adhiraj ko unke khoon mein umarkaid ho jayegi . . . . Ye achha hai !!!! Kam se kam peechha to chhotega !!!
aur gunur apni premiyon ki yaad mein paagal ho jayengi . . . Waise ye karne ke liye zyada mehant nahi karni padegi !!!!!!
u know na how sadistic i am ??????  I knw you truly to the core meri amma !!!! Tabhi to keh rahi hun !!!
Waise tune sab ka to bta diya bt teri pen ki gayi story main Benji , dia , uday aur ab Suhani ka kya hoga ???????? Waise mayu ki maa aur bui bhi reh gayi !!!!!!
don't u think tu khud bhi bahut sadistic hai behena
i am really thankful apna raju aas paas kahin nahin hai varna us bechare ka to ........
ahem ahem, u know that better don't u?????
I really know dolly !!!!!!! Thank heavens ke vo nahi hai !!!!!!! Waise tune btaya nahi ke tu benji , dia, uday , mayu ki mummy aur bui ke sath kya karna chahegi ?????? Aur ab hum apne signature ko torture karna band karein !!!!!
mein bhi yehi soch ri thi
vaise i want to strangle pari can u pls beg or frustrate her enough too cum n read this ss plssssssssss..
bui=i'll lock her in her own tabela///
banji n uday== un dono ki shaadi ho jayegi
mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale
Hahahahahahahahaha !!!!! Waise maine pari ko abhi abhi apni charro ki siggie ke liye request bheji hai !!!!!
Hope so ke jaldi poori ho jaye !!!!!
mayu ki mommy = vo dia ko adopt kar legi n then rhey will take care of the rest of remaing ghar vale . . . Intelligent question yet again doll :- Rest of the remaining gharwale hain kaun ???????? saynak ka ram nam satya karva diya , gunur would probably in asylum , benji uday ek dusre ko jjhel lenge > To bcha kaun ?????????? 
ShockedShockedoohhho
so tumne hi kaha tha usse.............ROFL...........thanks to u to dollyLOL...........mere kaan pakd kar muje read karne k liye kahan tum dono ne.....phir jaake maine padha.....aur padha to esa ki............ab tu dekh.............tu dekh.................me tuje kitna torture karti hu........waise when will u going to undate next part???ROFLROFLROFL
OMG u guys hilliriousROFL...............woh diya, mayu ki mom, and woh uday benjiROFLROFL
ha ha love u guys!!

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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Dolly...i dont know u much...but dear...from wat i heard from yashi..then ur comments on posts..i knew u as  a true sajan fan!! and a great commentor...then i wanted to so read ur ff...as yashi had mde me so excited...i couldnt read as error was coming..then i finally read it freom yash's pm...my god!! dolly who are u...i mean wher were u!!! Such beautiful and mindblowing talent was hidden in u...was never known to me..by god as nup wll say...i was so touched and hyper by reading it..was so natural and magical...it was so mysticall!! Loved it to the core!! Please personally pm wen u do to yashi the second part and the remaining ones...by the way am adding u as my frend!!!please do see my new mix..will be trying to upload soon !!

hats off to u my jaan for such grand and mersmerzing story on sajan..please continue!

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Posted: 27 November 2009 at 7:36am | IP Logged
@pari
hey pari first of all if dolly is an amazing writer u too r no less...ur creations completely fida over them...i just wanted to ask that r all of us allowed to use your creations...i find them really nice!!! and second thing i know u n dolly r great frnds but want to tell u she has an ff on india forum..."mumbai blasts"....u may be knowing ofcourse....i tell u pari if u wanna experience something that hasn't been experienced so far....pls do read it...u know just like u i am such a bad reader...i never read ffs completely...just browse through them but that one ff...i tell u it will take u to another world....waise mujhe lagta hai ki main dolly ke us ff ki registered promotor ban gayi hoon...first i told my jaan anjali abt it and now u....pls pari go and try that ff...i tell u u will have an experience of a lifetime...dolly is a real magician!!! and u know a secret...it was me only who demanded a nursing scene on sajan from dolly...the kinda one u read in the short story...since the cvs were not showing the nursing scene in real...me dieing to see one ....thought of asking the best writer ever to write it...and dolly came up with this...a story to ponder over...to become mad over...thinking that how it can be so good....so pls all ppl who r sajan/mayur fans...
and loved this story do try dolly's ff....i am not doing her publicity but telling you from the bottom of your heart...i can just say that the way dolly has shown sajan n mayur in that ff even the cvs cant show!!!
 
for all u ppl...here is the link..of dolly's ff....n dolly sorry meri jaan i said so much abt your ff without asking permission....but seriously dont want even a single mjht fan who has not read your that ff...coz its that good!!!.
 
link:
 
edited....
sorry guys forgot to say...if this short story is a trailer the picture isa hiden inside this link....
u would have never seen gunjan so pure...samrat so angelic....mayank so peircing and nupur so lovely
as in dolly's "mumbai blasts" ff...and let me warn u after reading this ff u will become dolly's diehard fan forever...whether u r a mayurian or a sajanian...that ff will cut straight through your heart...so just go and have a try....i cam just say it is better than even a shahrukh or aamir film....
 


Edited by princessyashika - 27 November 2009 at 7:44am

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