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ss(sajjan):THE STRANGER:the ending(pg-23)du c:-) (Page 2)

topsyturvy23 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 7:24am | IP Logged
hey great story loved every bit of it plz update soon

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Malika IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 7:44am | IP Logged
dolly dear i will die out of excitement...u know the page of your ss is not opening...i have read a few lines of it and then it got closed...pls pm this part to me....else i dont know how to control my excitement...

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 11:06am | IP Logged
hey i too had commented..........
i had commented when no one had commented........
and i said that i loved it
and to continue soon......
god knows how it is not there???
kya "back" dabane se comment erase ho jaata hai???
anyways.......
now plz continue soon
and pm me...........

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 11:58am | IP Logged
wowow tht was amazingg plzz contuied soon

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
dolly yaar kya part hai

gunjan ne na jante hue bhi usse samrat kaha

very touchy part
soon update the next part

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Malika IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
finally dolly the page opened and how can i tell u that i tried nearly 100 times last night to open this page and felt so frustrated at that error message.... but somehow toaday mornig it opened....and i got a chance to read another masterpeice from your side.U r a good writer...u write very well...and so have become old lines yaar....so wont repeat them...pls i request always  include these lines by default in my replies to your post.coming to your ss...i just cant help but say a million thank us 2 u for writing a story keeping my request in mind!!!! u r such a sweet friend dolly....that my one request and u wrote such a heart warming story on my fav. couple ever!!!! and what do i tell u....just similar to your ff this was equally touching...painful....captivating and so emotional!!!! especially the parts that describe samrat's pain...he being tormented on account of the needles n injections...was way too painful....but the way gunjan took care of him was really so sweet.and as u know i always include my lines of the day...so here goes those golden lines...
 
"He wasn't handsome… no handsome wasn't a word enough to describe his beauty ….
Even in his present condition,, with a bandage on his head ,, a plaster across his right hand n bruises everywhere   , he looked angelic …."
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"I had never seen him before…
I would have remembered if I had ,,, as a matter of fact he was too devine to ever 4get ….."
these lines dolly again just stole the show....the way u always describe samrat's persona and beauty i  am fida over that....
and the suspense in the story is really good...just waiting for sam to become concious so sajan can exchange a few of words....
seriously dolly since the past few months...that is the time i started reading your ff...i have become a huge fan of yours....so pls pls pls write the next part as soon as possible!!! i will be waiting for your next update.
and ya just forgot to mention....it was truely amazing to find mayank being sammy's doc!!!too good....so dear do complete the next part soon...is i always wait to hear it from u.
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
loved it dear
thanx for pm

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