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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 3:32am | IP Logged

Hi friends I had this concept in my mind from a long time .. so I wrote a shortstory on it'

It'll just have three parts '.

update 1(pg1)
update2 (pg9)
update 3 (pg14)
update 4 (pg18)
the ending part a, part b ,(pg23)
On of which I have already written ,,I'll write the next n the last part only if u guys want me too'.

Pls pls do read it n reply ' even if u don't like it'..

Its basically a sajjan ss'

 

                         THE STRANGER

It felt strange being here'. Beside this stranger '.

It felt cold too ,

maybe I had not brought enough clothes with me to this place,,

 to this hospital room ' but still it was so much more colder here , much colder then what was explainable ,,,,

A gust of wind pushed my hair backward' i inclined my head in the direction of the wind'.

I looked at the open window ,, I got up instantly to bolt it up,,,

I could endure the cold all right , but this stranger right here with me didn't need anymore pain then he was already in''.

Saying so I looked at his calm an serene face.. he was sleeping or so the doctors were saying 4 the past 5 days ,,,,

He wasn't handsome' no handsome wasn't a word enough to describe his beauty '.

Even in his present condition,, with a bandage on his head ,, a plaster across his right hand n bruises everywhere   , he looked angelic '.

I moved n sat beside him again ' I looked at the stranger's face again'

STRANGER yes that had been what he was to me ,,, I had never seen him before'

I would have remembered if I had ,,, as a matter of fact he was to devine to ever 4get '..

I sighed ..

I was puzzled .. I had no idea why I was still here .. what made me stop here????

Was it the pity I felt 4 this boy who seemed to be in so much pain??

Was it gratitude that I felt 4 him because he came in front of that goddammed truck just to save me????

I shuddered , the memory of that accident 5 days ago was still a pain,,, It was horror 'had it not been 4 this boy '

It would have been me who would have been lying on this very bed, covered in tubes n needles n bandages from head to toe''.

May be it was this gratitude that made me stay in this hospital''

The boy winced ,, abruptly ending my monologue'.

I placed my palm just above his hand n patted it lightly to sooth him,,,

Though still unconscious the needles tend to make him uncomfortable some how'..

The doctor has told me this a day b4 yesterday ,,,,

He winced again n this time I felt a movement beneth his sheets ' he was moving his legs '.

I panicked , he was not required to move much ,,, that would make the saline needles come off ' and that can't be good '..

He jerked his hand again ,, it looked as if he wanted to free his hands from the needles'

I held his arm more tightly '

"pls don't don't move ' it'll just cause u more pain.. pls"

He had started to shiver n I had started to sob almost in the  same instant'

I held on both his wrists ,, his eyes eyes were still closed but the shivering bit had gone out of control '

"DOCTOR, NURSE PLS COME "

I couldn't leave this boy to go out n call the doctor,,,,

He was trashing madly n I was horrified at what would happen if I left his wrists..

"don't don't pls ' samrat don't"

Samrat????

That shocked me ' I hadn't known this boy's name 'but somehow I was so sure he was called samrat only'.

Bloody hell ,no one here knew his name .. what was I '..!!

He winced again n this time may be grunted to'..

"what happened gunjan' oh good lord "

The doctor camein followed by that skinny nurse behind ,,,,, he immediately broke a vial of some liquid n filled the injection quickly with it'

In the mean time the nurse had finished applying spirit with a dapped cotton on samrat's exposed arm'

Samrat.. how was I so sure of his name?????

"don't leave him"

Saying so the doctor inserted the needle in his arm ,,, samrat '. No the boy winced again'.

Within a few minutes his shivering stopped n he became absolutely still under my arms' '.

I didn't lift my arms back though '..

I was afraid that absence of my hold would some how make him thrash in pain again'

"leave him now .. he is ok gunjan"

As if I had been electrocuted ,my arms dropped to my sides"

 

I looked at the doctor now..just a day b4 he has promised that samrat'this boy was fine ,, that he would recover but now this!!!!!!!

"u said he was going to be fine!!!why the hell did u lie???"

My voice may be  .. was more harsh then I had intended it to be ..

Atleast the shocked expression on the doctor's face said this '.

"I I yes I said that n gunjan he is going to be fine"

"what was this then ???? was thrashing in pain a symptom of recovery???"

I couldn't control the stream of tears that flowed down my cheeks now"

The doctor smiled..

"calm down gunjan ,,, this was a good news ,,, he is coming around ..

I expect he'll be fully conscious by the morning"

I slumped on my chair beside samrat's bed .. I felt relieve washing through me.. my head felt light weighted '.

"gunjan,, I think u should go hom now n sleep ..take some rest at least,,, its been 5 days n u have left his side only when u had to go n get ur clothes.. he'll be fine go n rest"

I shook my head .. just bring me some coffee mayank, that'll make me fine'

The doctor, my old school friend sighed..

"gunjan he is going to be fine I promise u"

"I know he will be fine' thanks mayank ,,, do me a favour more .pls"

"what"

"cal di n tell her that I have a clue to this boy's identity.."

"huh??? U know who he is????"

"he is called samrat'"

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Edited by dolly18 - 08 January 2010 at 4:49am

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 3:38am | IP Logged

wao yaar what an update

OMG i loved it to the core
i have no words to describe it
really it was AWESOME TERRIFIC MINBLOWING
plz plz plz continue soon
i want to read more
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
and thanx for the pm dear
hmm well how gunjan know his name is samrat ?
 
 
 
 
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Edited by sana866 - 24 November 2009 at 3:48am

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 3:45am | IP Logged
ummm no replies????????????????is it that bad???

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dolly18

ummm no replies????????????????is it that bad???
 
i replied na dear it was an awesome update
plz continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn Wink

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 3:53am | IP Logged
that was so lovely yaar,felt bad for sammys pain,but how come gunjan know his name if she doesnt know him.do continue soooon.Smile

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 3:58am | IP Logged
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thanxx 4 d pm

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 4:58am | IP Logged
dolly...it was awesome!!!!! i loved the part!!! awww sam saved gunji...but how does she know hes called samrat??? plssss ontinue it!!! i'm waiting to read the next part!!!

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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sana866

wao yaar what an update

OMG i loved it to the core
i have no words to describe it
really it was AWESOME TERRIFIC MINBLOWING
plz plz plz continue soon
i want to read more
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
and thanx for the pm dear
hmm well how gunjan know his name is samrat ?
 
 
 
 
love
sana Big smileWink
awwwww sana thanku soooooooo uch sweets really thanks jana .. i am glad u liked it lov dollyEmbarrassed


Edited by dolly18 - 25 November 2009 at 4:41am

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