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Posted: 24 November 2009 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
hey... gr8 start... hope we will get a bit of other couples too... and if u have a pm list can u please add my name to it.

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Diya! When r u going to update?!

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Yeah same  question when are you updating!

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Part 4

Prithvi stood under the shower, warm water pouring down his back, easing his tension a
little. It had been a long day. Sameer still hadn't forgiven him for his forced wedding
and it didn't look like things would settle down soon. He had the nasty feeling Sameer
was planning something, and he didn't like it one bit. Varun didn't seem too happy either
and Prithvi knew his youngest brother was having trouble dealing with his feelings for
Roshni... "I completely understand what the poor fellow must be going through" Prithvi
sighed, his mind turning to Damini. She seemed really angry, and he didn't blame her at
all, not after the way he'd behaved yesterday. But still, did she have to ignore him?
Couldn't she at least be cordial? Prithvi sighed again, and turned off the shower,
resigning himself to the messed-up situation.

He dressed and stepped out the bathroom, towel around his shoulders, and promptly stopped
dead in his tracks. Damini was sitting in front of the mirror, wearing a black nightgown
that left little to imagination. Her hair was pulled over to one side and she was
brushing it out. Prithvi stared at her entranced, eyes following the brush's movements.
His hands itched to touch her, to bury his fingers in that impossibly-soft hair, but he
didn't dare approach her. He wasn't to be trusted around her, that much had become quite
apparent yesterday, and he really didn't want to lose control again...

As he stood in the middle of the room, trying to get a hold of himself, Damini got off
the chair. Prithvi gulped, trying to ignore the way the nightgown skimmed over his wife's
curves. He stood rooted to the spot, unable to do anything but stare, as she sauntered
towards him. As she got closer, his mind started screaming at him to get out of the room
as soon as possible, but it was too late by then. Damini faced him, a smile playing on
her lips, and asked " Is something wrong?" He opened his mouth to respond, but he
couldn't say anything. Damini's smile grew wider as she pulled the towel from around his
neck and tossed it aside. "Good" she said and took a step towards him. Prithvi stepped
back hurriedly, not wanting her to close the distance between them. "What are you doing ,
Damini?" he asked, his voice sounding high and nervous to even his own ears. Damini just
smirked and continued moving forward till she had him backed to the wall. "I want to be
with you, Prithvi, and I know you want it too", she said putting her arms around his
neck, "What is so wrong about that?" she asked, looking into his eyes. Turning his head
away, Prithvi tried to stall her "Damini, please..." His voice trailed off as she softly
kissed his jaw. "Shhhh... no talking" she whispered and kissed his cheek. Clenching his
fists in an attempt to keep from holding her, Prithvi breathed out raggedly as she
trailed kisses on his jaw, "I don't think..." "No thinking, either" Damini said, between
kisses. He shut his eyes, trying hard to regain control, but he was fighting a losing
battle and he knew it. Giving in to his feelings, he slid his arms around his wife's
waist and pulled her close, kissing her bare shoulder gently.

Suddenly, his phone began to ring, startling them both. "Ignore it, Prithvi", Damini
said, burying her face in his neck. Steeling himself, Prithvi gently pushed her away,
trying not to let her hurt expression affect him. He picked up the phone and frowned -
why was Inder calling him this late at night? What was the scum up to now? He frowned
again when he received a message to meet Inder immediately. He glanced at Damini, leaning
against the wall, looking hurt yet hopeful and said "Something has come up at the
hospital..." Her face fell further, but she simply nodded, turning away from him. As he
was leaving, he thought he heard her whisper "Don't go" but didn't glance back, fearing
the vulnerability that he just knew would be etched on her face. Cursing himself, Prithvi
walked away...

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Posted: 25 November 2009 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Diyaaaaaaaaaa!!! this was amazing!!! loved it from every possible angle!!!Clap
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keep on writing....yeah i'm very demanding.....lolLOL

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Posted: 25 November 2009 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
love damini in controlWink...brilliant diya!!!Clap...need more!

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Posted: 25 November 2009 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Aha....Damini taking control.....great job Diya...I loved it....it was so beautiful!!! why did you stop????.......ok am reading it again.....will the next part appear soon?

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Posted: 25 November 2009 at 1:10pm | IP Logged

Guys, sorry for disappearing... There's no power at home for some joy and lappie charge is almost done, so have to go now... Will come back to read your wonderful comments... Have to reply to the previous ones as well... Sorry for the delay.

Oh, and next part should be up on saturday...

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