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Posted: 17 November 2009 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Part-23

dono sanyo ke room mein jaate hai sanyo wahaan par jaane ki tayaariyan kar rahi hoti hai

dharam:sanyo kya tum kahin jaa rahi ho

sanyo:haan

veer:kahaan aur kyon

sanyo:vo hum awadhi jaa rahe hai

veer:awadhi par kyon koi kaam hai wahaan

sanyo:haan vo kya hua na aaj bua ko shagun lekar jana tha par aaj to unki tabiyat kharab hai to unhone kahaa hai hum wahaan jaakr shagun de aaye

dharam:acha to ye kaam hai

veer:hum bhi chale tumhare saath

sanyo:ji nahi hume koi jarurat nahi hai tum dono ki hum khud hi chale jaenge

veer:par hum tumhari madad karne thodi na jaa rahe hai

sanyo:jo bhi ho hum nahi le jaa sakte tum dono ko

dharam:theek hai koi baat nahi

veer:koi baat nahi kya hume pata hai ki tum awadhi kyon jaa rahi ho shagun to ek bahana hai

sanyo:to batao kis liye jaa rahe hai hum

veer:rajkumar harsh se milne

sanyo:haan to tumhe us se kya

dharam:are to ise bhi......................humara matlab hai hume bhi to rajkumari sia aur antara se milna hai

sanyo:to jao jaakar bua se pu6 lo agar vo haan karti hai to chalo

veer:ye kaam to tum karogi

sanyo:bhala hum ye sab tum dono ke liye kyon karne lage

veer:humare liye naa sahi khud ke liye to karogi

sanyo:hum ku6 samjhe nahi

veer:dekho agar tumne jaakar maa se hum dono ke liye nahi pu6a to hum jaakar tumhare aur harsh ke baare me maa ko sab bata denge aur fir ma tumhe bhi awadhi nahi jaane degi aur.............................

sanyo:dekho veer ye sab galat hai tum dono aisa nahi karoge

dharam:to jaakar bua se bolo

sanyo:par vo nahi manegi

veer:to koi baat nahi hum jaakar ma ko sab bata dete hai kyon dharam

dharam:haan chalo veer

sanyo:are ruko hum pu6te hai par agar humne tum dono ke baare mein pu6a to vo bilkul nahi manegi isliye humare paas ek yojana hai suno.................................

sanyo nivriti ke kamre mein jaati hai nivriti aaram kar rahi hoti hai

sanyo:bua kya hum andar aa sakte hai

nivriti:are sanyo tum haan haan aao naa

sanyo:ji bua hum agya lene aaye the

nivriti:acha saari tayaariyaan ho gayi na

sanyo:ji bua

niviriti:saara saaman rakh liya na kahin ku6 bhul mat jaana

sanyo:ji bua sab rakh liya

nivriti:acha ye dharam veer kahaan hai dikhai nahi de rahe subah se

sanyo:ji............vo dono................ji daud lagane gaye hai shaam tak aa jaenge

nivriti:acha hai dono yahaan nahi hai varna awadhi jaane ki jeed karte

sanyo:acha bua to ab hum chalte hai nahi to der ho jaegi

nivriti:theek hai beta sambhal kar jana

sanyo:bua hum do dasiyon ko apne saath le jana chahte hai kya hum unko le jaye

nivriti:are isme pu6ne ki kya baat hai jitni le jaani hai le jao

sanyo:ji shukriya bua

sanyo room se bahar aati hai bahar dharam aur veer uska intezaar kar rahe hote hai daasiyon ki dress pehnkar

veer:sanyo:kya kaha maa ne

sanyo:unhone kaha le jao

dharam:unhone hum dono ke baare mein ku6 pu6a to nahi naa

sanyo:pu6a tha par humne keh diya ki tum dono daud lagane gaye ho aur shaam tak aa jaoge

veer:chalo acha hai ab maa ko hum par shak bhi nahi hoga

dharam:par veer ek baar phir sochlo

veer:sochna hota to kab ka sochleta samjhe ab chalo nahi to yahin par shaam ho jaegi

teeno awadhi ke liye nikalte hai raste mein dharam veer ko ladkiyon ke kapdo mein chalne mein pareshani hone lagti hai

veer:dharam mujhse to chala hi nahi jaa raha

dharam:to kya humne kaha tha ki ye kapde pehno

veer:to tum bata nahi sakte the ki in kapdo mein itni pareshani hoti hai

dharam:baat to aisi kar rahe ho jaise humne ye pehle pehne ho

veer:acha us raat kisne pehne the vo safed saadi

dharam:haan to vo to saadi thi par lahenga thode na pehna tha

sanyo:ab tum dono jhagadna band karoge agar kisi sipahi ne sun liya to jaakar bua ko bata dega phir to tum dono to maroge hume bhi marwaoge

veer:acha theek hai ab chup ho jao jayda gussa hone ki jarurat nahi hai hum par

sanyo:gussa aur hum

dharam:aur nahi to kya hum bhi to tumhari aur harsh ki kitni madad karte hai aur tumse itni si madad maangi to gussa kar rahi ho

sanyo:acha galti ho gayi maaf kar do ab khush

veer:thek hai theek hai

teeno awadhi pahuchte hai sanyo shagun ka saman maharani ko dekar harsh ke paas chali jaati hai veer ghungat peh leta hai aur antara ke kamre mein jaata hai to dharam sia ke paas

veer antara ke kamre mein

antara apne kamre mein baithi veer ko yaad kar rahi hoti hai tabhi veer uske kamre mein jaata hai aur itne dino ke baad antara ko dekh kar bahut khush hota hai

antara:kaun hai

veer(in girls voice):ji hum hai rajkumari ji

antara:yahaan kya karne aayi ho

veer:ji vo arayanagar se rajkumari sanyogita aayi hai shagun lekar

antara:kya rajkumar veer bhi unke saath hai

veer:ji nahi rajkumari ji vo akeli hi aayi hai

antara(in a very upset tone):theek hai tum chalo hum aate hai

veer:ji rajkumari ji aapse ek baat puche

antara:pucho

veer:kya aapko rajkumar veer ki yaad aa rahi hai

antara:nahi bhala hume uski yaad kyon aane lagi

veer:acha to aapko unki yaad nahi aa rahi hai

antara :nahi use agar humari yaad nahi aati to hume uski yaad kkyon aaegi

veer:(in his original voice)veer ko antara ki bahut yaad aati hai har pal har lamha

antara gets very happy and in happiness she hugs veer
On the CheekBig Hug

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Part-24

veer bhi antara ko hug karna chahta tha aur iske liye vo bhi apne haath udhata hai par phir ruk jaata hai antara ne veer ko bahut kas ke pakda hua tha she was very much excited ki vo abhi bhi khushi mein pagal hi thi par thodi der baad use hosha aata hai ki usne kya kiya vo veer ko chodti hai aur blush karti hai

antara:vo....................vo hume.........hum.......

veer:koi baat nahi

antara:acha tum yahaan kab aur kyon

veer:mein...................... yahaan.................vo...............vo.................vo dharam..........haan dharam ko sia se.................... milna tha to vo mujhe yahaan.................le aaya

antara:to tum hamse milne nahi aaye

veer:mein bhala tumse kyon milne aaonga

antara:haan haan kankhajure kahin ke

veer:dekho antara mujhe kankhajura mat kaho

antara:kankhajure

veer:antara.............

antara:kankhajure

again a voice comes antaraaaaaaaa

antara:kya hai

veer:mein nahi pitaji

(gets a little bit relaxed )

antara:acha pitaji

thodi der baad dono ko shock lagta hai

veer and antara together :pitajiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

antara:veer tum yahaan se jao agar pitaji ne tumhe yahaan dekh liya to vo rani ma ko bata denge aur phir to tum jaante

veer:are par mein jaooon kaise darwaze se to maharaj aa rahe hai

antara:ek .................ek kaam karo.................tum jaakar kahin chup jao

veer:are par kahaan yahaan to koi jagah hi nahi hai

dono room mein idhar udhar chupne ki jagah dundne lagte hai phir antara apne kapdo ke box ke paas jaati hai aur use khol kar usme jaane lagti hai

veer:ye kya kar rahi ho

antara:are chup rahe hai tum bhi chup jao

veer:par tum kyon chup rahi ho

antara:are haan hum kyon chup rahe hai ...........chupna to tumhe hai .......

veer:pagal.......

antara:ab jaldi karo aur is mein ghus jao

veer box mein ghus jaata hai aur vo box ko dhoda khula rakhta hai jis se use pata rahe ki bahar kya ho raha hai aur antara jaakar darwaza kholti hai

antara:pitaji aap

mahaaraj:haan par aap itna chonk kyon gayi.............. kya hume yahaan nahi aana chahiye tha

antara:nahi pitaji aisi baat nahi hai ................ kkya koi kaam tha

maharaj:nahi bas aise hi aapse baate karne ka man kiya to aa gaye

antara:par pitaji............

maharaj:kya baat hai aapka humse baat kane ka man nahi hai kya

antara:nahi pitaji vo baat nahi hai par aaj humari tabiyat thodi kharab hai

maharaj:kyon kya hua dikhaiye hume

maharaj antara ke sir par haath rakh kar dekhte hai

maharaj:aapko bhukhar to nahi hai phir kya hua

antara:ji pitaji vo hume na bahut thakaan ho rahi hai aur shayad sardi bhi lag gayi raat mein

maharaj:acha theek hai aap aaram kijiye hum kal baat karenge aur haan kisi bhi cheez ki jarurat ho to bata dijiyega

aur phir maharaj jaane lagte hai tabhi veer ko cheenk aa jaati hai

maharaj:ye cheenkne ki awaaz.........

antara:...............vo............. vo pitaji..............humne kahaa na hume raat mein sardi
lag gayi isiliye ye cheenke bhi aa rahi hai

maharaj:acha theek hai aap so jaiye

aur itna keh kar vo chale jaate hai aur dusri taraf veer box ka dhakaan kholta hai uski haalat dekh kar antara ko hasi aa jaati hai

veer:ab ye has kyon rahi ho yahaan baithe baithe meri to jaan hi nikal gayi aur tumhe hasi aa rahi hai

antara:are ab hum par gussa kyon hote ho humne kya kiya tumse kisne kahaa tha ki is tarah chup chupke humare kamre mein aao

veer:haan haan theek hai ab bahar to nikalo mein tumhare in kapdo mein atak gaya hoon

antara:kapado mein matalab

veer:are mera lenga tumhare kisi kehnge mein fas gaya hai

antara:acha ruko hum abhi suljha dete hai

antara jaakar veer ka lehnga suljhati hai phir paas mein hi khadi ho jaati hai aur jaise hi veer ka balance bigdta hai aur vo seedha antara ke upar jaakar girta hai dono ek dusre ki aankho mein kho jaate hai

dono ek dusre ki aankho mein dube hue hi hote hai ki sia aur dharam wahaan aa jate hai aur un dono ko aise dekh kar ku6 aur hi samajh lete hai dono apna face turn karke khade ho jaate hai

dharam:veer agar tum dono ka pyaar khatam ho gaya ho to hum apna muh ghuma le

veer aur antara dono aankho ki gaharai se bahar niklte hai aur khade ho jaate hai

veer:are dharam tum dono yahaan ........kab aaye hume to pata hi nahi chala

sia:haan haan pata kaise chalega tum dono to ek dusre ki aankho mein jo khoye hue the

dharam:veer ye sab achi baat nahi hai

veer:are kya achi baat nahi hai ...................... tum dono jaisa samajh rahe ho vaisa ku6 bhi nahi hai .........vo bas humara per fisal gaya aur hum antara ke upar gir gaye

dharam:acha to ye baat hai hume laga ki..............

antara:haan haan tumhe to yahi sab lagega

sia:acha ji............ab aap bhi veer ki taraf ho gayi.................. are hum to bhul hi gaye the ........ki ab aap humari bahan thode na hai aap to veer ki patni hai.........

dharam:aur nahi to kya ................ pata hai sia jab tum yahaan aa gayi thi na antara ke saath to janab ke haal dekhne layak the .................din raat bas antara hi antara aur to ku6 dikhai hi nahi deta tha

antara:acha sia ki yaad khud ko aa rahi thi aur veer ka naam laga rahe ho

dharam:are mana hume sia ki yaad aa rahi thi par pucho is se ki hume yahaan kaun laya

veer:mein ....thode na tumhe yahaan laya ...tum to khud mujhe yahaan jabardasti yahaan laye ho

peeche se sanyo aur harsh bhi aa jaate hai

sanyo:acha to ab jhud bhi bolne lage veer

harsh:sach bataoon to ye antara ji bhi yahaan saare din veer aisa veer vaisa karti rahti thi har baat mein veer

sanyo:aakhir ho bhi kyon nahi dono ki nayi nayi shaadi jo hui hai upar se ..........haye ye judaai

sia:ab kya hua veer ab kya bologe

antara aur veer dono ki haalat to bahut kharab ho jaati hai dono blush karte hai aur jo kabhi kisi ko baato mein jitne nahi dete the vo dono bilkul chup khade ho jaate hai

aur isi tarah vo charo in dono ko khub chidate hai phir veer apni chuppi todta hai

veer:ab bas bahut ho gaya haan mana mujhe antara ki yaad aa rahi thi par tum log to humare peeche hi pad gaye ..........................aur dharam wapas nahi chalna kya maa intezaar kar rahi hogi

dharam:haan humne kab mana kiya chalo abhi chalo vaise bhi milna to tumhe tha hum to bas aise hi aa gaye the

sanyo:chalo chalo agar bua ko ku6 bhi pata chala to hum maare jaenge

harsh:itni jaldi kya hai jaane ki thodi der aur nahi ruk sakte kya tum log abhi to humne sanyo se baat bhi nahi ki

sanyo:jana kise hai par majburi hai ..................

dharam:acha sia hum chalte hai aur haan antara ka dhyaan rakhna nahi to ye veer mujhe maar dalega

antara:dharam...........(and blushes)

sia:oyeee hoyeeeeeeee kya baat hai

veer:chalo na dharam..........

then veer dharam aur sanyo wapas aryanagar ke liye nikalte hai par raste mein khuch daaku un par hamla kar dete hai

daku:jo ku6 bhi tum logo ke paas hai sab hamare hawale kar do

veer:kaun ho tum log

daku:hum jo bhi par kya tumne suna nahi hamne kya kahaa jaldi karo

daku 2:ye log aise nahi manenge maar dalo inhe

phir vo log un par attack kar dete hai sanyo ek surakshit jagah par jaakar chup jaati hai aur dharam veer un se ladai karte hai thodi der mein hi vo dono sabhi dakuon ko maar dete hai par ek daku peeche se aakar veer par vaar kar deta hai jis se veer behosh ho jaata hai aur vo daku dharam ke haatho se bach nikalta hai

dharam:veer aankhe kholo veer veer.........veer aankhein kholo

sanyo:dharam ab kya kare yahaan se to aryanagar bahut dur hai

dharam:hum jaante hai aur humare paas awadhi jaane ke alawa koi raasta nahi hai

sanyo:to chalo der kis baat ki

dharam aur sanyo veer ko lekar awadhi pahuchte hai (dharam veer ne dress change kar li thi)veer ko room mein le jaate hai

on the other hand in antara's room ek daasi daud kar jaati hai

dasi:rajkumari ji ........rajkumari ji.....

antara:kya baat hai aise kyon chilla rahi ho

dasi:ji vo rajkumar veer...........

antara(shocked):kya rajkumar veer

dasi:rajkumar veer par kisi ne hamla kar diya aur ab unhe behoshi ki haalat mein mahal laaya gaya hai

antara:kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa??????????

antara ye sab sunte hi room ki taraf daudne lagti hai jahaan veer ko rakha gaya tha

antara:veer..............veer...........
...aankhein kholo veer

dharam:antara sambhalo apne aap ko veer ko ku6 nahi hua vo theek hai

maharj:par ye sab hua kaise

dharam:ji hum sabhi aryanagar jaa rayhe the tabhi ku6 dakuon ne hum par hamla kar diya

maharaj:hume aryanagar khabar bhijwa deni chahiye

sanyo:ji humne bhijwa di hai

maharaj:ji acha aapne bahut acha kiya

antara:vaid ji veer theek to ho jaega

vaid ji:haan rajkumari ji ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai rajkumar bikul theek hai

dharam:humne kahaa tha na.............. sia antara ko uske kamre mein le jao

sia:chalo antara chal kar aaram kar lo

antara:nahi tum sab jao hum veer ke paas hi baithenge

sia:par antara............

antara:humne kahaa na

sia:theek hai jaisi tumhari marzi

then they all leaves the room

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Part-25


antara room mein baithi rahti hai aur baithe baithe use kab neend aa jaati hai pata hi nahi chalta aur vo veer haath par sir rakh kar so jaati hai raat mein veer ko hosh aata hai vo thoda sa hilta hai aur antara ka sir uske haath se gir jaata hai jis se antara ki neend khul jaati hai

antara:veer ..................tum theek to ho

veer:..................ha...an mein bil....................kul theek ....hoon..........aaaaaaaaaaaa

antara:kya hua veer(stands up quikly)

veer:ku6 nahi bas jara sa dard ho raha hai

antara:tum yahin lete raho hum sabhi ko jaakar bata kar aate hai ki tumhe hosh aa gaya

aur antara udh kar jaane lagti hai par veer peeche se uska haath pakad leta hai aur bahut polite tone mein kehta hai

veer:antara rehne do.................sab so rahe honge subah bata dena

antara:par veer dhara.......

veer:vo bhi thak gaya hai to so raha hoga ...........kisi ko raat mein pareshan karne ki jarurat nahi hai

antara:tumne to hume dara hi diya tha pata hai humari to jaan hi nikal gayi thi

veer:acha meri.........itni chinta

antara:tumhari chinta kise hai hume to...............

veer:haan haan kya hume to............chipkali

antara:veer tum phir chalu ho gaye

veer:acha ek baat batao mere ghayal hone ki khabar kis kisko hai

antara:awadhi mein sabhi ko aur ab tak to aryanagar mein bhi pata chal gaya hoga

veer:aryanagar mein par kaise kisne bataya

antara:sanyo ne khat baija hai

veer:marwa diya ab to mein gaya samjho

antara:par aisa kyon keh rahe ho

veer:aur nahi to kya kahoon ab maa ko humare awadhi aane ki baat pata chalegi aur phir meri aur dharam ki chutti

antara:are ku6 nahi hoga maa tumse aur dharam se ku6 nahi kahegi dekhna

veer:are tum maa ko nahi jaanti

antara:hum jaante hai isliye keh rahe hai ki vo tumse ku6 nahi kahegi ab chup chap se so jao

veer:mujhe neend nahi aaegi ab to sapne mein bhi maa hi dikhegi ..............................he bhagwan mein yahaan kyon aaya..............

 

on the other hand in aryanagar aryawardhan gets the letter and immediately rushes to nivi's room

aryawardhan:nivriti,.....................................nivriti

nivriti:kya baat hai bhaiya aap itna khabraye hue kyon hai

aryawardhan:vo dharam veer....................

nivriti:kya hua dharam veer ko ...............vo dono theek to hai

aryawardhan:vo dono rajkumariyon se milne awadhi gaye the aur laut te hue un par ku6 bakuon ne hamla kar diya .............................veer ghayal hai...........

nivriti:kya .............................bhaiya mujhe abhi awadhi jana hai ....pata nahi mera bacha kis haal mein hoga bhaiya ................jaldi hume awadhi le chaliye..........

aryawardhan:haan nivriti............chalo jaldi chalo hum abhi jaakar jai bhaiya ko ye khabar dekar aate hai .............aur jaane ki tayaari karte hai

aryawardhan jai ke room mein jata hai aur sab ku6 batata hai

jai:he bhagwan ye sab kya ho gaya.....................aryawardhan tum jaldi se jao aur mere dharam veer ko wapas lekar aao...............mein yahin rukta hoon jaldi jao.................................

aryawardhan:ji bhaiya hum abhi jaate hai aur un dono ko wapas lekar aate hai

aryawardhan jaise hi room se bahar nikalta hai room ki khidki se vo daku jo dharam ke haatho bach nikala tha room mein aata hai

daku:sarkar..............................hume maaf kar dijiye .................

jai:maaf aur tumhe .....................................

daku:sarkar humne dharam veer ko maarne ki puri koshish ki aur veer ko ghayal bhi kar diya par humare sabhi aadmi maare gaye...............mein kaise na kaise karke wahaan se bhaag nikala

jai:wahhhhhhhh kya baat hai.................wahaan se bhaag kar kya khub kaam kiya hai tumne

and then takes out a dagger and stabs him

jai:tumhe kya laga ..................tum dharamn veer se bach gaye to jai se bhi bach jaoge...............................nahi ...........nahi .............(and shouts in anger)mujhe haarne walo se sakht nafarat hai nafarat.........

 

in awadhi veer abhi bhi nahi so raha hota hai aur antara use sulane ki puri koshish kar rahi hoti hai par veer to veer hai use sulana bacho ka khel nahi hai ..........ye kaam sirf ek jana kar sakta hai aur vo hai nivi jo ki aaj khud veer ke na sone ka karan hai.......


antara:veer ye kya bacho jaise dar rahe ho hum keh rahe hai na maa ku6 nahi kahegi

veer:nahi mujhe neend nahi aa rahi bas

antara:veer agar aaram nahi karoge to tabiyat aur kharab ho jaegi

veer:par mujhe dar laga raha hai

antara:are .....................acha theek hai hum tumhe maa se bacha lenge ab to khush hona

veer:haan par..............

antara:phir par...............antara par bharosa hai ki nahi

veer:khud se bhi jayada

antara:to bas ab aakne band karo aur so jao

veer apni aankhe band kar ke late jaata hai par sota nahi hai thodi der mein antara ko neend aa jaati hai aur vo vahin veer ke haath par so jaati hai pir veer apni aankhe kholta hai aur antara ko dekhne lagta hai aur ek innocent smile deta hai par veer ek dam se hawa aati hai aur antara ke ku6 baal uske muh par aa jaate hai veer apne dusre haath se unhe hatata hai par jaise hi veer antara ko chuta hai uski neend khul jaati hai

antara:tum jaag rahe ho soye nahi abhi tak

veer:nahi ...............soya tha................na mein vo................vo .......khul gayi neend

antara:acha koi baat nahi ye dawai lo aur so jao

antara veer ko support deti hai aur baithati hai phir use dawa pila kar phir leta deti hai

antara:veer ab so jao aur hume bhi sone do

veer is baar ek ache bache ki tarah chup chap so jaata hai par phir use ek sapna aata hai antara ki mauut ka aur vo dar kar udh jaata hai

veer:antaraaaaaaaaaa........................

veer ki cheekh sun kar antara dar jaati hai

antara:kya hua veer ku6 chahiye tumhe ...............

veer:nahi............ku6 nahi....................ku6 nahi..

antara:acha tum ruko hum paani lekar aate hai

aur vo udh kar jaane lagti hai par veer peeche se uska haath pakad leta hai

antara:kya hua .....aur ku6 bhi lana hai

veer:antara mujhse vada karo tum mujhe chod kar kabhi nahi jaogi

antara:ye kya bol rahe ho veer

veer:tum vada karo

antara:veer hum to bas paani elne jaa rahe hai

veer:nahi tum yahaan mere paas hi baitho kahin mat jao

antara:acha hum bas paani elkar aa rahe hai phir yahin tumhare saath baithenge

veer:vada karo mujhe kabhi chod kar nahi jaogi

antara:acha vada ab to jaane to paani lana hai

antara jaane hi lagti hai ki veer ki awaaz aati hai

veer:antaraaaaaaaaaaa,,......................aaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....................aaaaaaaaaa

antara peeche mudti hai aur dekhti hai ki veer bed par pada hai aur dard se chilla raha hai

antara (with tears in her eyes):veer.........veer kya hua veer..............veer

veer:mera sir dard..................se fat.....raha hai.............antara

antara:tum ruko veer........... hum abhi jaakar dharam ko bula kar laate hai..................

itne mein veer faint ho jaata hai

antara:veer..............veer................aankhe kholo veer................

antara jaldi se dharam ke room kar daudti hai

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antara:dharam..........................dharam.......................

dharam:kya hua antara is tarah itni raat ko ......sab theek to hai

antara:nahi dharam ku6 theek nahi hai.......vo veer............................

dharam:kya hua veer........

antara:vo phir behosh ho gaya

dharam:antara tum uske paas jaakar baitho mein vaid ji ko lekar aata hoon

antara ki cheekhe sun kar sabhi jaag jaate hai aur veer ke room mein pahuch jaate hai antara veer ke paas jaakar baithti hai aur jore jore se rone lagti hai

sia:antara himmat rakho ku6 nahi hoga veer

antara:par sia..............

harsh:antara tumhe bhagwan par vishwas hain ........to tum dekhna vo veer ko ku6 nahi hone denge

tab dharam vaid ji ko lekar aata hai aur antara wahaan se ghadi hokar sia ke paas chali jaati hai aur uske kandhe par sir rakh kar rone lagti hai

antara:sab hamari galti hai hume sab ko bata dena chahiye .

 

 

dharam:antara rona band karo aur hume aaram se batao hua kya tha

antara:tumsab ke jaane ke baad veer ko hosh aaya tha....................................

dharam:iska matlab usne koi bura sapna dekha tha

vaid ji:maharaj chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai rajkumara ab theek hai

dharam:par ise hua kya hai

vaid ji:jaisa ki rajkumari ji ne bataya uske hisab se to ye sab us sapne ka asar hai

maharaj:aur koi chinta ki baat.........

vaid ji:ji nahi maharaj bas itna dhyan rahe ki ye do teen din kar pura aaram kare aur safar na kare to acha hai kyonki ye abhi bhi kamjore hai aur inhe dekhbhal ki jarurat hai

dharam:ji shukriya vaid ji.........aayiye hum aap ko chod aate hai

sanyo:antara agar chaho to tum jaakar thoda aaram kar lo tab tak hum log veer ke paas baithte hai

antara:nahi hum bilkul theek hai aur hum veer ko chod kar nahi jaenge .........aap sab jaakara aaram kar lijiye

maharani:beta agar kisi cheez ki jarurat ho to bata dena

antara:ji maa

sia:apna dhayan rakhna aur veer ka bhi

antara nods her head an all of them exits the room

thodi der baad veer ko hosh aata hai

veer:an...........ta..........antara.............................ant.ara

antara:haan veer bolo hum yahin hai tumhare paas

veer apni aankhe kholta hai aur dekhta hai ki antara ro rahi haivo uske aasu pochta hai

antara:tumne to humari jaan hi nikal di thi agar tumhe ku6 ho jaata to hum..............

veer:to hum kya

antara:to hum.........................to hum.....................ladai kis ke saath karte ......aur raat me takiya kiske muh par maarte

ye sunkar veer ek pyaari si smile deta hai aur antara bhi phir dono ek dusre ki aankho mein dekhte hai aur unhi mein dub jaate hai then thodi der baad jab ye eye lock tutata hai tab antara veer ko dawa dwti hai jise pikar veer so jaata hai kyonki usme neend ki dawa hoti hai

 

agle din subah subah antara jaldi udh jaati hai aur phir veer ke room ki safai karti hai(matalb dawaiyon ko theek jagah set karna and all)uske baad vo veer ko dekhti hai jo ki sota hua ek chote bache ki masum lag raha hota hai uske chehre par ek pyari si smile hoti hai mano koi sundar sapna dekh raha ho antara veer ke paas jaati hai aur uske sir par haath pherti hai tabhi dharam aur sia sanyo aur harsh ke saath wahaan aate hai

dharam:sia humara bhai kitna khushnaseeb hai jo use antara jaisi patni mili ab hume uski koi chinta nahi hai kyonki ab antara uska dhayn rakhegi

sia:sach me dharam

antara:are tum sab kab aaye hume to pata hi nahi chala

sanyo:hum log to kaafi der se khade hue hai

harsh:par tum to veer ko nihaar rahi thi

antara blushes

antara:mujhe veer ke liye kada laana hai mein abhi aati hoon

dharam:haan haan humne kahaan roka hai apni pati ki sewa karna to achi baat hai

antara just runs away from there

tab veer ki neend khulti hai

veer:dharam tum yahaan itni subah

dharam:haan bas dekhne aaye the ki tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai

veer:ab mein theek hoon

dharam:veer pata hai aaj hum bahut khush hai

veer:vo kyon

dharam:kyonki humare budhu bhai ko itni achi patni mili hai jo uska khudse bhi jayda dhyan rakhti hai sach me veer tumhe pata hai kal raat se vo yahin tumhare paas baithi hai ek pal bhi yahaan se nahi gayi...........

veer:mein jaanta hoon dharam par ab vo kahaan hai

sia:are vo tumhare liye dawa laane gayi hai

harsh:kash sanyo bhi mera itna dhayan rakhe

sanyo:sapne mat dekho

all laughs

then antara room mein aati hai

antara:veer tumhe pata hai maharaj aur maa awadhi ki sima me pravesh kar chuke hai

veer:kya iska matlab thodi der mein maa yahaan hogi nahi.................

dharam:par kyon veer tum aise kyon kar rahe ho

veer:dharam ab to mein gaya ab maa mujhe daategi ki mein yahaan awadhi me kya lene aaya tha

sanyo:haan to kya hua bata dena

veer:haan mujhe pitwa do tum sab

 

phir sab veer ke maze lene lagte hai ki vo maa se dar raha hai tab antara ko gussa aa jaata hai

antara:kya ho raha hai ye sab kyon pareshan kar rahe ho veer ko use aaram karne do .....aur dharam tum bhi.....ye mat bhulo ki agar veer ki daat padegi to tum bhi nahi bachne wale aur sanyo tumhare aur harsh ke baare veer bataye yaa na bataye mein jarur bata dungi

sia:antara gussa mat karo hum to bas mazak kar rahe the

antara:mazak yahaan veer ki ye haalat hai aur tum sab ko mazak sujh raha hai

all together hume maaf kar do antara

tabhi ek sainik aata hai

sainik:rajkumari ji rajkumar veer ki maa aur pitaji aa chuke hai

veer:kya..................

 

tabhi nivriti room mein enter karti hai aur veer ko aisi haalat mein dekh kar rone lagti hai

nivriti:veer...........tum theek to hona...............

veer:haan maa me bilkul theek hoon aur vaise bhi mujhe kya ho sakta hai

nivirti:haan haan tumhe ku6 kaise ho sakta hai jaan to humari nikal gayi thi jab humne suna ki tum ghayal ho

veer:par maa mein ab bilkul theek hoon dekho

nivriti:haan mujhe dikh raha hai

veer:pata hai maa kal puri raat antara ne mera bilkul aapki tarah dhayan rakha mujhe aapki kami bilkul mehsus hi nahi hui

nivriti:haan hume pata hai maharani ne bataya

aryawardhan bhi kamre mein aate hai maharaj ke saath

arywardhan:veer ab kaise ho tum

veer:ji mein theek hoon

aryawardha:maharaj yadi aapki agya ho to hum rajkumar dharam veer aur rajkumari sanyo ko le jaa saktehai

antara:ji nahi maharaj..............vaid ji ne kahaa hai ki rajkumar veer ki tabiyat abhi bhi kharab hai aur aisi haalat mein unhe safar nahi karna chahiye

nivriti:par shaadi.....................aur aaj jo haldi ki rasam hai vo

maharani:vo sab aap yahin kar lijiye aur shaadi bhi yahin se ho jaegi

nivriti:par............

maharaj:por var ku6 nahi humare liye sab se jayada jaruri hai ki rajkumaaro ko ku6 naa ho

nivriti:theek hai

maharni:to phir hum haldi ki rasam ki tayaari karte hai

nivriti:hum bhi chalte hai

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sabhi haldi ki rasam ki tayaariyon me busy ho jaate hai thodi der baad nivriti dharam ko lene aati hai aur antara sia ko haldi ke liye

nivriti:dharam beta chalo sabhi neeche intezaar kar rahe hai

dharam:ji bua hum abhi aate hai

veer:maa me bhi chalu

nivriti:nahi tumhe vaid ji ne aaram karne ko kaha hai

veer:maa aane do na vaise bhi me ab theek hoon

nivriti:nahi to nahi

dharam:bua aane do na itna keh raha hai to aur vaise bhi aapki bahu ne iski itni seva ki hai ki ye theek ho hi gaya hoga

niviriti(smiles):theek hai par vahaan jaakar baith jaana idhar udhar mat ghumna

veer:haan theek hai maa

dharam veer ko pakadta hai aur neeche lekar jaata hai aur use baitha deta hai then haldi ki rasam start hoti hai dharam hall ke center me baithata hai aur sabhi maharaniyaa aur rajkumariyaan use haldi lagati hai dharam ka face dekhne layak hota hai (veer ke jaisa) aur udhar is baar veer ki baari thi hasne ki

veer:kyon dharam aaj kya hua hasi nahi aa rahi

dharam:bua dekho na ise hume ched raha hai

nivriti:kyon veer dharam ko kyon ched rahe ho

veer:acha maa me ched raha hoon to aap mujhe daat rahe ho aur us din jab ye has raha tha to ku6 nahi kahaa

nivriti:tum dono hume to maaf karo (aur vo wahaan se chali jaati hai)

veer:.................

phir haldi ki rasam puri hoti hai aur dharam tayaar hone chala jaata hai aur veer uske room me rest karne thodi der baad dharam veer ke room me aata hai aur sia antara ke room mein par dono hi ek dusre ke khayalo mein khoye hue hote hai saare palo ko yaad kar rahe hote hai (swwet one)

dharam:veer ......................

veer:no reply

dharam:veer....................

veer:no reply

then dharam veer ko thoda shake karta hai

veer:dharam tum.......................yahaan ............kab aaye

dharam:jab tum kahin khoye hue the

veer:me nahi to

dharam:veer hum kayi dino se dekh rahe hai tum khoye khoye rehte ho aakhir baat kya hai

veer:pata nahi dharam aajkal ku6 acha nahi lagta

 

 

dharam:matlab.............

veer:pata nahi bas kisi bhi cheez ka man nahi karta bas............

dharam:hum samajh gaye

veer:kya samajh gaye

dharam:yahi ki tumhe kya hua hai

veer:kya hua hai mujhe

dharam: tumhe ..................tumhe..................

veer:aage bhi bol do

dharam:tumhe pyaar ho gaya hai

veer:pyaar aur mujhe ...................... ab ye bhi bata do ki kis se

dharam:antara se aur kis se

veer:us chipkali se ................................dharam tum pagal ho gaye ho

dharam:haan veer sach me tumhe antara se pyaar ho gaya hai

veer:(innocently) pyaar me aur kya kya hota hai dharam

dharam:pyaar me aapka uske bina kahin dil nahi lagta .............(and tells each and every thing)

dharam:acha veer ab raat bahut ho gayi hai tum aaram karo hum bhi chalte hai

on the other hand sia bhi antara ko sab ku6 batati hai aur phir apne room mein chali jaati hai


antara saari raat veer ke baare mein hi sochti rehti hai aur vo samajh jaati hai ki use veer se pyaar ho gaya hai par fir vo apne aapko rok leti hai kyonki use lagta hai ki agar veer us se pyaar nahi karta hoga to aur dusri taraf veer bhi antara ke baare mein soch raha hota hai aur vo phir antara ko apne dil ki baat batane ka tay karta hai

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Part 28

Agle din subah se sabhi shaadi ki tayariyon me jut jaate hai to vahin veer ko antara se milne ki jaldi hoti hai uske liye har pal saalo jesa lag raha tha to dusri aur antara bhi bahut khush thi akhir kar use pyaar hua tha aur pyaar to hota hi aisa hai jiske bhi jeevan me aata use khushiyon se bhar deta hai.

"kya baat hai aaj meri behen bahut khush lag rahi hai" sia ne antara se chidate huye pucha

"aisa kuch nahi sia tum bhi na hum to roz hi khush rehte hai"

"acha par humne to nahi dekha aur chehra to dekho kitna khila hua hai aaj tumhara"

"sia ab bas bhi karo aur jaao jakar tayaar ho jao mehndi ki rasam ke liye"

"haan bhai jaate hai aur tum bhi ho jao tayaar"

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sabhi aurte aur ladkiyaan gaana bajana kar rahi thi to vahin kuch aurte dono rajumariyon ke haatho me mehndi laga rahi thi. Veer aur dharam bahar khade andar jaane ke liye yojna bana rahe the itne me harsh bhi wahin aa jata hai

"tum dono yahaan kya kar rahe ho"

"hum to kuch nahi andar jaane ke liye koi yojna batao na harsh"

"me kya bataon me to khud kabse wahi soch raha hu"

"pata hai aaj sabhi rajkumariyan nritya karne wali hai aur bhi bahut maza hota hai andar"

"par jaye kese"

itne me sanyo bhi aa jaati hai aur vo un teeno ko baat karte sun leti hai

"tum teeno yahaan kya kar rahe ho aur andar jaane ka khayal apne dimag se nikal do samjhe agar pakde gaye na to itne jute khaoge ki kal uthne ki halat bhi nahi rahegi"

veer sanyo ki baate dhyan se sunta hai aur fir dharam aur harsh ki taraf dekhta hai 2no uska ishara samjh jaate hai

"sanyo humari madad sirf tum hi kar sakti ho bhagwan ke liye hume kese bhi karke andar pahucha do na"

"na baba na mujhe daat nahi khani"

"bas yahi thi tumhari dosti sanyo" veer aur dharam ek saath bolte hai

"yahi tha tumhara pyaar" harsh bolta hai

"beech me aa gai shaadi ki deewar" 3no ek saath bolte hai

"acha theek hai tum 3no apne kapde badal lo"

teeno jakar ache ache lehenga choli pehen kar aa jate hai

"chalo ab humare peeche"

"sanyogita beta ye teeno kaun hai"

"ji bua vo ye humare saath aayi thi dasiyan hai"

"theek hai"

"ab tum teeno yahi khade rehna samjhe aur jo ho raha hai use dekho koi ulti sidhi harkat mat karna warna pakde jaoge" ye bol kar sanyo to chali jaati hai par teeno rajkumar kahaan kisi ki baat manane wale the dharam to chal diye  apni sia ke paas aur veer antara ke paas. to harsh kahaan jaata bechara chup chap khada sanyo ko dekhta raha.

mehndi lag jaane ke baad ab samay tha masti karne ka to antara kahaan peeche rehne wali thi sanyo ke saath mil kar bhai utar gai maidan me. sanyo bhi jaakar jaldi se kapde badal kar aa gayi aur le liya veer ka roop

Didi Tera Devar Deewana,
Hai Ram, Kudiyon Ko Daale Daana,
Dhandha Hai Yeh Uska Puraana,
 Hai Ram, Kudiyon Ko Daale Daana.

Main Boli Ke Laana Tu Imli Ka Daana,
 Magar Woh Chuaare Le Aaya Deewana,
Main Boli Ke Machle Hai Dil Mera Haaye,
Woh Kharbuja Laaya Jo Neembu Mangaaye,
Pagla Hai Koi Usko Bataana,
Hai Ram, Kudiyon Ko Daale Daana...

Main Boli Ke Laana Tu Mitti Pahaadi,
 Magar Woh Bataashe Le Aaya Anaadi,
Main Boli Thi La Do Mujhe Tu Khataayi,
 Woh Baazar Se Le Ke Aaya Mithaai,
Mushkil Hai Yoon Mujhko Phasaana,
Hai Ram, Kudiyon Ko Daale Daana...

Bhabhi Teri Behna Ko Maana,
Hai Ram, Kudiyon Ka Hai Zamaana,
Rabba Mere Mujhko Bachaana,
Hai Ram, Kudiyon Ka Hai Zamaana...

Hukum Aapka Tha Jo Maine Na Maana,
Khatavaar Hoon Main Na Aaya Nibhaana,
 Sazaa Jo Bhi Dogi Woh Manzoor Hogi,
Aji Meri Mushkil Tabhi Door Hogi,
 Bandaa Hai Yeh Khudse Begaana,
 Hai Ram, Kudiyon Ka Hai Zamaana .



ab jab rang jama hi tha to teeno hi rajkumar ye tak bhul gaye ki unka aana mana tha aur vo sabse chup kar wahaan aaye the aur aa gaye apne asli roop me

"tum teeno yahaan kya kar rahe ho" Nivriti gusse me boli

"maa vo hum bas......"

"veer aap aajkal bahut masti karne lage hai"

"maa hume maaf kar dijiye"

"maa ab rehne bhi dijiye na dekhiye aaj ki rasam me kitna maza aaya in logo ke saath" sia ne maa ko smjhate huye kahaa

"haan maa aur sirf dekhne hi to aaye the" antara bhi nahi chahti thi ki unhe daat pade isliye usne bhi unhi ka saath diya

"acha theek hai meri bahuye  keh rahi hai isliye tumhe chod rahi hu"

nivriti aur baaki sabhi mehman chale jaate hai to wahi veer antara ko chat par aane ko kehta hai par sia ye sun leti hai to vo antara ko veer ke paas jaane hi nahi deti veer saari raat thand me antara ka intzar karta rehta hai aur intzar karte 2 subah ho jaati hai. agle din sabhi bahut jyada vyast rehte hai kaam me ki saans lene tak ki fursat nahi milti par kaam karte huye bhi antara aur veer ek dusre ko hi dhund rahe hote hai.

"sanyo tumne antara ko dekha kya"

"haan vo abhi upar gai hai apne kamre me"

"theek hai shukriya"

veer antara ke kamre me jaata hai to wahi  sanyo peeche se sabhi ko bata deti hai ki veer antara se milne gaya hai to sabhi peche2 wahaan bhi pahuch jate hai veer kamre ka darwaza laga leta hai par lock nahi karta.

"antara vo hume tumse kuch kehna hai"

"bolo veer"

"vo antara vo......"

sia dharam sanyo aur harsh darwaze ke paas khade hokar unki sabhi baate sun rahe hote hai

"vo antara hum apse kehna chate the ki....."

"haan veer bolo na kya bolna hai"

"vo hum apse........apse.........hum apse pyaar karte hai"

antara ki ankho me khushi ke anshu chalak aate hai.

"antara hum jaante hai ki ab tak humare beech pati patni jesa koi rishta nahi tha par ye natak karte 2 hum aapse sach me pyaar karne lage hai hum ye janana chahte hai ki apke dil me kya hai"

"hum bhi apse bahut pyaar karte hai veer....."

veer opens his arms and she comes running to him and he fills her in his embrace. sanyo loses her balance and falls down followed by all three who were holding her for support the door opens.

"tum sab yahaan kya kar rahe ho" veer aksed

"hum ..hum yahaan kuch nahi kar rahe"

"tum batao tum yahaan kya kar rahe the aur ye sab kya ho raha tha"

antara turns red and runs from there veer also lowers his eyes and leaves from there.

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after that antara got very busy and veer was not able to meet her. he tried his level best but failed every time. finally after sometime he saw antara standing against a pillar. he immediately went to her and pulled her.

"veer kya kar rahe ho koi dekh lega chodo hume"

"dekh lega to dekhne do hume koi farak nahi padta vese bhi aap humari patni hai to humara pura hak hai aap par"

"acha aisi aat hai..........are ma........"

"kahaan" he leaves her and looks around but no onw was there. she fooled him "acha to hume budhu banaya hum bhi dekhte hai kab tak bachti hai aap"

she reached the main hall and veer was chasing her.

"antara beta yahaan ana" nivriti called her. as veer heared nivi's voice he immediately changed his way.

"ji ma"

"beta ye sia ka shaadi ka joda hai jao jaakar use de aao"

"theek hai ma"

as soon as antara left from there veer again caught her.

"veer chodo hume kaam hai"

"nahi ab to hum nahi chodenge"

"veer hume sia ko ye dekar aana hai"

"acha ek baar hume humara........."

she got it what he wanted. he moved close to her there was hardly a inc gap left b/w there lips when she dropped the thal from her hands

"ouch"

antara started laughing "aya maza"

"hume to aap baad me dekh lenge acha suno to vo aaj tum vo shaadi wala joda hi pehnana"

antara started blushing and then left for sia's room.

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Hey me first here to commentBig smile
Thanks for posting next update diksha Hug
Enjoyed entire update full of fun n mastiBig smile
All gang of dharam, sanyo, harsh too naughtyLOL
And Veer being Romantic me blusing like antraEmbarrassed
 


Edited by shruja - 17 November 2009 at 11:07pm

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Originally posted by shruja

Hey me first here to commentBig smile
Thanks for posting next update diksha Hug
Enjoyed entire update full of fun n mastiBig smile
All gang of dharam, sanyo, harsh too naughtyLOL
And Veer being Romantic me blusing like antraEmbarrassed
 


thanx di

luv u oho u blushing abhi se to baad me kya hoga di.........Wink

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