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antara room mein baithi
rahti hai aur baithe baithe use kab neend aa jaati hai pata hi nahi chalta aur
vo veer haath par sir rakh kar so jaati hai raat mein veer ko hosh aata hai vo
thoda sa hilta hai aur antara ka sir uske haath se gir jaata hai jis se antara
ki neend khul jaati hai
antara:veer ..................tum theek to ho
veer:..................ha...an mein bil....................kul theek
....hoon..........aaaaaaaaaaaa
antara:kya hua veer(stands up quikly)
veer:ku6 nahi bas jara sa dard ho raha hai
antara:tum yahin lete raho hum sabhi ko jaakar bata kar aate hai ki tumhe hosh
aa gaya
aur antara udh kar jaane lagti hai par veer peeche se uska haath pakad leta hai
aur bahut polite tone mein kehta hai
veer:antara rehne do.................sab so rahe honge subah bata dena
antara:par veer dhara.......
veer:vo bhi thak gaya hai to so raha hoga ...........kisi ko raat mein pareshan
karne ki jarurat nahi hai
antara:tumne to hume dara hi diya tha pata hai humari to jaan hi nikal gayi thi
veer:acha meri.........itni chinta
antara:tumhari chinta kise hai hume to...............
veer:haan haan kya hume to............chipkali
antara:veer tum phir chalu ho gaye
veer:acha ek baat batao mere ghayal hone ki khabar kis kisko hai
antara:awadhi mein sabhi ko aur ab tak to aryanagar mein bhi pata chal gaya
hoga
veer:aryanagar mein par kaise kisne bataya
antara:sanyo ne khat baija hai
veer:marwa diya ab to mein gaya samjho
antara:par aisa kyon keh rahe ho
veer:aur nahi to kya kahoon ab maa ko humare awadhi aane ki baat pata chalegi
aur phir meri aur dharam ki chutti
antara:are ku6 nahi hoga maa tumse aur dharam se ku6 nahi kahegi dekhna
veer:are tum maa ko nahi jaanti
antara:hum jaante hai isliye keh rahe hai ki vo tumse ku6 nahi kahegi ab chup
chap se so jao
veer:mujhe neend nahi aaegi ab to sapne mein bhi maa hi dikhegi
..............................he bhagwan mein yahaan kyon aaya..............
on the other hand in
aryanagar aryawardhan gets the letter and immediately rushes to nivi's room
aryawardhan:nivriti,.....................................nivriti
nivriti:kya baat hai bhaiya aap itna khabraye hue kyon hai
aryawardhan:vo dharam veer....................
nivriti:kya hua dharam veer ko ...............vo dono theek to hai
aryawardhan:vo dono rajkumariyon se milne awadhi gaye the aur laut te hue un
par ku6 bakuon ne hamla kar diya .............................veer ghayal
hai...........
nivriti:kya .............................bhaiya mujhe abhi awadhi jana hai
....pata nahi mera bacha kis haal mein hoga bhaiya ................jaldi hume
awadhi le chaliye..........
aryawardhan:haan nivriti............chalo jaldi chalo hum abhi jaakar jai
bhaiya ko ye khabar dekar aate hai .............aur jaane ki tayaari karte hai
aryawardhan jai ke room mein jata hai aur sab ku6 batata hai
jai:he bhagwan ye sab kya ho gaya.....................aryawardhan tum jaldi se
jao aur mere dharam veer ko wapas lekar aao...............mein yahin rukta hoon
jaldi jao.................................
aryawardhan:ji bhaiya hum abhi jaate hai aur un dono ko wapas lekar aate hai
aryawardhan jaise hi room se bahar nikalta hai room ki khidki se vo daku jo
dharam ke haatho bach nikala tha room mein aata hai
daku:sarkar..............................hume maaf kar dijiye .................
jai:maaf aur tumhe .....................................
daku:sarkar humne dharam veer ko maarne ki puri koshish ki aur veer ko ghayal
bhi kar diya par humare sabhi aadmi maare gaye...............mein kaise na
kaise karke wahaan se bhaag nikala
jai:wahhhhhhhh kya baat hai.................wahaan se bhaag kar kya khub kaam
kiya hai tumne
and then takes out a dagger and stabs him
jai:tumhe kya laga ..................tum dharamn veer se bach gaye to jai se
bhi bach jaoge...............................nahi ...........nahi
.............(and shouts in anger)mujhe haarne walo se sakht nafarat hai
nafarat.........
in awadhi veer abhi bhi
nahi so raha hota hai aur antara use sulane ki puri koshish kar rahi hoti hai
par veer to veer hai use sulana bacho ka khel nahi hai ..........ye kaam sirf
ek jana kar sakta hai aur vo hai nivi jo ki aaj khud veer ke na sone ka karan
hai.......
antara:veer ye kya bacho jaise dar rahe ho hum keh rahe hai na maa ku6 nahi
kahegi
veer:nahi mujhe neend nahi aa rahi bas
antara:veer agar aaram nahi karoge to tabiyat aur kharab ho jaegi
veer:par mujhe dar laga raha hai
antara:are .....................acha theek hai hum tumhe maa se bacha lenge ab
to khush hona
veer:haan par..............
antara:phir par...............antara par bharosa hai ki nahi
veer:khud se bhi jayada
antara:to bas ab aakne band karo aur so jao
veer apni aankhe band kar ke late jaata hai par sota nahi hai thodi der mein
antara ko neend aa jaati hai aur vo vahin veer ke haath par so jaati hai pir
veer apni aankhe kholta hai aur antara ko dekhne lagta hai aur ek innocent
smile deta hai par veer ek dam se hawa aati hai aur antara ke ku6 baal uske muh
par aa jaate hai veer apne dusre haath se unhe hatata hai par jaise hi veer
antara ko chuta hai uski neend khul jaati hai
antara:tum jaag rahe ho soye nahi abhi tak
veer:nahi ...............soya tha................na mein vo................vo
.......khul gayi neend
antara:acha koi baat nahi ye dawai lo aur so jao
antara veer ko support deti hai aur baithati hai phir use dawa pila kar phir
leta deti hai
antara:veer ab so jao aur hume bhi sone do
veer is baar ek ache bache ki tarah chup chap so jaata hai par phir use ek
sapna aata hai antara ki mauut ka aur vo dar kar udh jaata hai
veer:antaraaaaaaaaaa........................
veer ki cheekh sun kar antara dar jaati hai
antara:kya hua veer ku6 chahiye tumhe ...............
veer:nahi............ku6 nahi....................ku6 nahi..
antara:acha tum ruko hum paani lekar aate hai
aur vo udh kar jaane lagti hai par veer peeche se uska haath pakad leta hai
antara:kya hua .....aur
ku6 bhi lana hai
veer:antara mujhse vada karo tum mujhe chod kar kabhi nahi jaogi
antara:ye kya bol rahe ho veer
veer:tum vada karo
antara:veer hum to bas paani elne jaa rahe hai
veer:nahi tum yahaan mere paas hi baitho kahin mat jao
antara:acha hum bas paani elkar aa rahe hai phir yahin tumhare saath baithenge
veer:vada karo mujhe kabhi chod kar nahi jaogi
antara:acha vada ab to jaane to paani lana hai
antara jaane hi lagti hai ki veer ki awaaz aati hai
veer:antaraaaaaaaaaaa,,......................aaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....................aaaaaaaaaa
antara peeche mudti hai aur dekhti hai ki veer bed par pada hai aur dard se
chilla raha hai
antara (with tears in her eyes):veer.........veer kya hua
veer..............veer
veer:mera sir dard..................se fat.....raha hai.............antara
antara:tum ruko veer........... hum abhi jaakar dharam ko bula kar laate
hai..................
itne mein veer faint ho jaata hai
antara:veer..............veer................aankhe kholo veer................
antara jaldi se dharam ke room kar daudti hai
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antara:dharam..........................dharam.......................
dharam:kya hua antara is tarah itni raat ko ......sab theek to hai
antara:nahi dharam ku6 theek nahi hai.......vo veer............................
dharam:kya hua veer........
antara:vo phir behosh ho gaya
dharam:antara tum uske paas jaakar baitho mein vaid ji ko lekar aata hoon
antara ki cheekhe sun kar sabhi jaag jaate hai aur veer ke room mein pahuch
jaate hai antara veer ke paas jaakar baithti hai aur jore jore se rone lagti
hai
sia:antara himmat rakho ku6 nahi hoga veer
antara:par sia..............
harsh:antara tumhe bhagwan par vishwas hain ........to tum dekhna vo veer ko
ku6 nahi hone denge
tab dharam vaid ji ko lekar aata hai aur antara wahaan se ghadi hokar sia ke
paas chali jaati hai aur uske kandhe par sir rakh kar rone lagti hai
antara:sab hamari galti hai hume sab ko bata dena chahiye .
dharam:antara rona band
karo aur hume aaram se batao hua kya tha
antara:tumsab ke jaane ke baad veer ko hosh aaya
tha....................................
dharam:iska matlab usne koi bura sapna dekha tha
vaid ji:maharaj chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai rajkumara ab theek hai
dharam:par ise hua kya hai
vaid ji:jaisa ki rajkumari ji ne bataya uske hisab se to ye sab us sapne ka
asar hai
maharaj:aur koi chinta ki baat.........
vaid ji:ji nahi maharaj bas itna dhyan rahe ki ye do teen din kar pura aaram
kare aur safar na kare to acha hai kyonki ye abhi bhi kamjore hai aur inhe
dekhbhal ki jarurat hai
dharam:ji shukriya vaid ji.........aayiye hum aap ko chod aate hai
sanyo:antara agar chaho to tum jaakar thoda aaram kar lo tab tak hum log veer
ke paas baithte hai
antara:nahi hum bilkul theek hai aur hum veer ko chod kar nahi jaenge
.........aap sab jaakara aaram kar lijiye
maharani:beta agar kisi cheez ki jarurat ho to bata dena
antara:ji maa
sia:apna dhayan rakhna aur veer ka bhi
antara nods her head an all of them exits the room
thodi der baad veer ko hosh aata hai
veer:an...........ta..........antara.............................ant.ara
antara:haan veer bolo hum yahin hai tumhare paas
veer apni aankhe kholta hai aur dekhta hai ki antara ro rahi haivo uske aasu
pochta hai
antara:tumne to humari jaan hi nikal di thi agar tumhe ku6 ho jaata to hum..............
veer:to hum kya
antara:to hum.........................to hum.....................ladai kis ke
saath karte ......aur raat me takiya kiske muh par maarte
ye sunkar veer ek pyaari si smile deta hai aur antara bhi phir dono ek dusre ki
aankho mein dekhte hai aur unhi mein dub jaate hai then thodi der baad jab ye
eye lock tutata hai tab antara veer ko dawa dwti hai jise pikar veer so jaata
hai kyonki usme neend ki dawa hoti hai
agle din subah subah
antara jaldi udh jaati hai aur phir veer ke room ki safai karti hai(matalb
dawaiyon ko theek jagah set karna and all)uske baad vo veer ko dekhti hai jo ki
sota hua ek chote bache ki masum lag raha hota hai uske chehre par ek pyari si
smile hoti hai mano koi sundar sapna dekh raha ho antara veer ke paas jaati hai
aur uske sir par haath pherti hai tabhi dharam aur sia sanyo aur harsh ke saath
wahaan aate hai
dharam:sia humara bhai kitna khushnaseeb hai jo use antara jaisi patni mili ab
hume uski koi chinta nahi hai kyonki ab antara uska dhayn rakhegi
sia:sach me dharam
antara:are tum sab kab aaye hume to pata hi nahi chala
sanyo:hum log to kaafi der se khade hue hai
harsh:par tum to veer ko nihaar rahi thi
antara blushes
antara:mujhe veer ke liye kada laana hai mein abhi aati hoon
dharam:haan haan humne kahaan roka hai apni pati ki sewa karna to achi baat hai
antara just runs away from there
tab veer ki neend khulti hai
veer:dharam tum yahaan itni subah
dharam:haan bas dekhne aaye the ki tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai
veer:ab mein theek hoon
dharam:veer pata hai aaj hum bahut khush hai
veer:vo kyon
dharam:kyonki humare budhu bhai ko itni achi patni mili hai jo uska khudse bhi
jayda dhyan rakhti hai sach me veer tumhe pata hai kal raat se vo yahin tumhare
paas baithi hai ek pal bhi yahaan se nahi gayi...........
veer:mein jaanta hoon dharam par ab vo kahaan hai
sia:are vo tumhare liye dawa laane gayi hai
harsh:kash sanyo bhi mera itna dhayan rakhe
sanyo:sapne mat dekho
all laughs
then antara room mein aati hai
antara:veer tumhe pata hai maharaj aur maa awadhi ki sima me pravesh kar chuke
hai
veer:kya iska matlab thodi der mein maa yahaan hogi nahi.................
dharam:par kyon veer tum aise kyon kar rahe ho
veer:dharam ab to mein gaya
ab maa mujhe daategi ki mein yahaan awadhi me kya lene aaya tha
sanyo:haan to kya hua bata dena
veer:haan mujhe pitwa do tum sab
phir sab veer ke maze lene
lagte hai ki vo maa se dar raha hai tab antara ko gussa aa jaata hai
antara:kya ho raha hai ye sab kyon pareshan kar rahe ho veer ko use aaram karne do .....aur dharam tum
bhi.....ye mat bhulo ki agar veer ki daat padegi to tum bhi nahi bachne wale
aur sanyo tumhare aur harsh ke baare veer bataye yaa na bataye mein jarur bata
dungi
sia:antara gussa mat karo hum to bas mazak kar rahe the
antara:mazak yahaan veer ki ye haalat hai aur tum sab ko mazak sujh raha hai
all together hume maaf kar do antara
tabhi ek sainik aata hai
sainik:rajkumari ji rajkumar veer ki maa aur pitaji aa chuke hai
veer:kya..................
tabhi nivriti room mein
enter karti hai aur veer ko aisi haalat mein dekh kar rone lagti hai
nivriti:veer...........tum theek to hona...............
veer:haan maa me bilkul theek hoon aur vaise bhi mujhe kya ho sakta hai
nivirti:haan haan tumhe ku6 kaise ho sakta hai jaan to humari nikal gayi thi
jab humne suna ki tum ghayal ho
veer:par maa mein ab bilkul theek hoon dekho
nivriti:haan mujhe dikh raha hai
veer:pata hai maa kal puri raat antara ne mera bilkul aapki tarah dhayan rakha
mujhe aapki kami bilkul mehsus hi nahi hui
nivriti:haan hume pata hai maharani ne bataya
aryawardhan bhi kamre mein aate hai maharaj ke saath
arywardhan:veer ab kaise ho tum
veer:ji mein theek hoon
aryawardha:maharaj yadi aapki agya ho to hum rajkumar dharam veer aur rajkumari
sanyo ko le jaa saktehai
antara:ji nahi maharaj..............vaid ji ne kahaa hai ki rajkumar veer ki
tabiyat abhi bhi kharab hai aur aisi haalat mein unhe safar nahi karna chahiye
nivriti:par shaadi.....................aur aaj jo haldi ki rasam hai vo
maharani:vo sab aap yahin kar lijiye aur shaadi bhi yahin se ho jaegi
nivriti:par............
maharaj:por var ku6 nahi humare liye sab se jayada jaruri hai ki rajkumaaro ko
ku6 naa ho
nivriti:theek hai
maharni:to phir hum haldi ki rasam ki tayaari karte hai
nivriti:hum bhi chalte hai
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sabhi haldi ki rasam ki
tayaariyon me busy ho jaate hai thodi der baad nivriti dharam ko lene aati hai
aur antara sia ko haldi ke liye
nivriti:dharam beta chalo sabhi neeche intezaar kar rahe hai
dharam:ji bua hum abhi aate hai
veer:maa me bhi chalu
nivriti:nahi tumhe vaid ji ne aaram karne ko kaha hai
veer:maa aane do na vaise bhi me ab theek hoon
nivriti:nahi to nahi
dharam:bua aane do na itna keh raha hai to aur vaise bhi aapki bahu ne iski
itni seva ki hai ki ye theek ho hi gaya hoga
niviriti(smiles):theek hai par vahaan jaakar baith jaana idhar udhar mat ghumna
veer:haan theek hai maa
dharam veer ko pakadta hai aur neeche lekar jaata hai aur use baitha deta hai
then haldi ki rasam start hoti hai dharam hall ke center me baithata hai aur
sabhi maharaniyaa aur rajkumariyaan use haldi lagati hai dharam ka face dekhne
layak hota hai (veer ke jaisa) aur udhar is baar veer ki baari thi hasne ki
veer:kyon dharam aaj kya hua hasi nahi aa rahi
dharam:bua dekho na ise hume ched raha hai
nivriti:kyon veer dharam ko kyon ched rahe ho
veer:acha maa me ched raha hoon to aap mujhe daat rahe ho aur us din jab ye has
raha tha to ku6 nahi kahaa
nivriti:tum dono hume to maaf karo (aur vo wahaan se chali jaati hai)
veer:.................
phir haldi ki rasam puri hoti hai aur dharam tayaar hone chala jaata hai aur
veer uske room me rest karne thodi der baad dharam veer ke room me aata hai aur
sia antara ke room mein par dono hi ek dusre ke khayalo mein khoye hue hote hai
saare palo ko yaad kar rahe hote hai (swwet one)
dharam:veer ......................
veer:no reply
dharam:veer....................
veer:no reply
then dharam veer ko thoda shake karta hai
veer:dharam tum.......................yahaan ............kab aaye
dharam:jab tum kahin khoye hue the
veer:me nahi to
dharam:veer hum kayi dino se dekh rahe hai tum khoye khoye rehte ho aakhir baat
kya hai
veer:pata nahi dharam aajkal ku6 acha nahi lagta
dharam:matlab.............
veer:pata nahi bas kisi bhi cheez ka man nahi karta bas............
dharam:hum samajh gaye
veer:kya samajh gaye
dharam:yahi ki tumhe kya hua hai
veer:kya hua hai mujhe
dharam: tumhe ..................tumhe..................
veer:aage bhi bol do
dharam:tumhe pyaar ho gaya hai
veer:pyaar aur mujhe ...................... ab ye bhi bata do ki kis se
dharam:antara se aur kis se
veer:us chipkali se ................................dharam tum pagal ho gaye ho
dharam:haan veer sach me tumhe antara se pyaar ho gaya hai
veer:(innocently) pyaar me aur kya kya hota hai dharam
dharam:pyaar me aapka uske bina kahin dil nahi lagta .............(and tells
each and every thing)
dharam:acha veer ab raat bahut ho gayi hai tum aaram karo hum bhi chalte hai
on the other hand sia bhi antara ko sab ku6 batati hai aur phir apne room mein
chali jaati hai
antara saari raat veer ke baare mein hi sochti rehti hai aur vo samajh jaati hai ki use veer se pyaar ho gaya hai par fir vo apne aapko rok leti hai kyonki use lagta hai ki agar veer us se pyaar nahi karta hoga to aur dusri taraf veer bhi antara ke baare mein soch raha hota hai aur vo phir antara ko apne dil ki baat batane ka tay karta hai
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