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My ff~ Afsana Pyaar ka~ (Page 3)

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Posted: 17 November 2009 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
part-15


nivriti seedha jaakar veer ko taikhane mein dhoondti hai aur dekhti hai ki ver ek box ke peeche ek chote bache ki tarah chupa hota hai

nivriti peeche se jaakar uska kaan pakad leti hai

veer:maa aap yahaan

nivriti:haa aur tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho

veer:par maa hume nahi jaana wahaanvo sab hume haldi lagaengi

nivriti:so to hai par hum unse kaheenge ki thodi thodi lagaye ab theek hai

veer:theek haiCry
Cry
nivriti veer ko lejakar hall ke beech mein beetha deti hai aisa lag raha tha jaise koi exhibition lagi ho aur sabhi veer ko dekhne ke liye aaye hai wahaan par sabhi auratein ek ek kar ke aati hai aur veer ko haldi lagati hai veer ka chehra aisa lag raha tha jaise abhi ro dega aur uski aisi haalta dekh kar dharam ki hasi roke nahi ruk rahi thi veer ko sabhi ne pura peela kar diya bechara

veer:CryCry
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dharam:LOLLOLLOL

nivriti:are vaa aaj to mera laal bilkul peela ho gaya haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Embarrassed
veer:maaCry
Cry
dharam:LOLLOL
LOL
veer:tumhe aaj jyada hasi aa rahi hai na chinta mat karo thode hi dino tumhara bhi no. aaega

dharam:veer humara jab aaega tab dekha jaega

haldi ki rasam khatam hoti hai veer takes baath aur apne kamre mein chala jaata hai vo itna thaka hota hai ki jaate hi so jaata hai thodi der baad dharam uske kamre mein aata hai

dharam:veer pata aaj sab kya keh rahe the ki aaj tak unhone itna sundar dulha nahi dekhaTongue

veer :no reply

tab dharam dekhta hai ki veer so chuka tha vo apna haath uske sir par pyar se ferta hai to dkhta hai ki veer ko bahut tez fever hota hai

dharam:veer utho

veer uthta hai

veer:kya hua dharam sone do humara sar bahut jore se dard kar raha hai

dharam:veer tumne hume kyon nahi bataya

veer:kya nahi bataya

dharam:yahi ki tumhe bhukhar hai

veer:are yaar itni si baat bhi koi batane ki hoti hai kya subah tak theek ho jaega

dharam:hum kuch nahi jaante hum abhi vaid ji ko lekar aate hai

veer:are dharam tum to ekar hi chinta kar rahe ho hum biulkul theek hai

dharam:hum tumhari ek nahi sunane wale tum aaram karo hum abhi vaid ji ko lekar aate hai

dharam jaakar vaid ji ko bulakar laata hai

dharam:vaid ji veer kab tak theek ho jaega

vaid ji:kal subah tak bilkul theek ho jaega bas abhi ise aaram karne do

dharam:ji vaid ji

vaid ji goes and nivriti enters the room

nivriti:dharam veer hum tum logo ko ek khushkhabri dene aaye the

veer:vo kya hai maa

nivriti:tumhari sabse achi dost aa gai hai

dharam and veer together:kya sanyogita aa gai

nivriti:par tum dono ko kaise pata chala

dharam:bua vo sab aap nahi samjhoge hum jaa rahe hai us se milne

veer:nahi dharam hum us se pehle milenge

dharam:nahi veer tumhe aaram karna chahiye

veer:aaram gaya bhad mein

dharam hum to jaa rahe haiTongue

and he runs from there and veer also follows him

both of them reaches there where sanyogita was

then she turns her face towards dharam she was one of the most beautiful princesses of that time
uski aankho mein ek ajeeb si kaharai thi jisme har koi dood jae uski muskan par to laakh zingiyaan kurban.(sanyogita kannauj ki rajkumari hai )

sanyogita:dharam tum veer kahaan hai

veer:hum yahaan hai

dharam:ab khadi hi rahogi ya gale bhi milogi

veer:vo humari shaadi mein aayi hai khaas humse milne to vo humse gale milegi

dharam:nahi humse

veer:meine kahan naa humse

sanyogita:ab bas bhi karo hum tum dono se gale milenge ab khush

she gives hug to both of them

veer:sanyogita humare saath humare kamre mein chalo khub saari baate karenge

dharam:nahi vo humare saath humare kamre mein jaegi aur vaise bhi vaid ji ne kahaan hai ki tumhe aaram karna chahiye

sanyogita:kyon kya hua hai veer ko

dharam:uski tabiyat kharab hai

veer:nahi hume kuch bhi nahi hua hum theek hai tum humare saath hi chalogi

sanyogita:theek hai chalo dharam tum bhi veer ke kamre mein hi jao wahin bate karenge

all three of them goes to veer's room

sanyogita:veer:humne suna hai bhabhi kafi sundar hai kahin unke aane se hume bhul to nahi jaoge

veer:kaun vo chipkali kisne kahaa

sanyogita:kisne kahaa kya sabhi kehte hai ki Awadhi ki rajkumariyaan chand hai

veer:jhooth kehte hai

dharam:veer tum humari sia ke baare mein aise bologe to hum tumhe maar dalenge

veer:dekha tumne ye dharam to har waqt sia sia hi laga rehta hai hai aaur ab to hume maarne ki dhamki bhi de raha hai

sanyogita:haan veer hum to ye soch rahe hai ki abhi ye haal hai to baad mein kya hoga

dharam:tum dono chup ho jao aisa kuch bhi nahi hai

veer:acha sanyogita peechli baar jab tum aayi thi tab tum keh rahi thi tumhe ek rajkumar dekhne aa raha hai

sanyogita:aa to raha tha par aaya nahi

dharam:par kyon

sanyogita:kyonki humne use raaste se hi bhaga diya

veer:par vo kyon

sanyogita:kyonki humare dil ne humse kahaa ki ye humare sapno ka rajkumar nahi hai

dharam:acha to hume bhi to batao kaun hai tumhare sapno ka rajkumar

sanyogita:humare sapno ka rajkumar ...............hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....
...........jab milega tab batenge

veer:theek hai

in awadhi antara kisi ke peeche bhaag rahi hai use maarne ke liye doud rahi hoti hai

antara:hum tumhe zinda nahi chodenge tumne hume bandariya kahaa ab dekhte hai tumhe humse kaun bachaega

harsh:ab isme humne kya galat kahaa

(harsh ajmer ka rajkumar hai aur antara ka sabse acha dost )

antara:ek to tum vaise hi itne dino baad aaye ho shaadi mein upar se hume bandariya keh rahe ho

harsh:mein tumhe sab kuch batata hoon pehle maarna band karo

antara:theek hai batao itne dino baad kyon aaye

harsh:vo hum apne dil ko samjha rahe the

antara:kya

harsh:yahi ki vo bandariya hui to kya hua hai to humari dost hi uski shaadi mein chale hi jana chahiye

antara:kya kahaan tumne(she again starts beating him)

sia:are antara ye kya kar rahi ho
(harsh bhaag kar sia ke peeche chup jataa hai)

harsh:dekho na jab se aaye hai maare jaa rahi hai

sia:kyon sia harsh ko kyon maar rahi ho

antara:sia ab tum hi dekho ise hume bandariya keh raha hai

harsh:ab tum hi batao kya galat kahaa humne

sia:kuch bhi to nahi

antara:tum bhi jao hum tum dono se baat nahi karenge

phir harsh use manane ke liye uske samne jaata hai aur uthak bethak karne lagata hai jis se antara has deti hai par use hasta dekh kar harsh ki ankhein bar aati hai

antara:ab tum kyo ro rahe ho

harsh:kuch nahi bas bachpan yaad aa gaya tha

antara:itni si baat par isme rona kyon ayaa

harsh:parso tumhari shaadi hai aur phir tum chali jaogi aur humari sabse achi dost beechad jaegi hum to bilkul akele ho jaenge phir hum ladai kis se karenge

antara:bas ho gaya ek kaam karo tum humare liye bhabhi le aao theek hai

harsh:shaadi aur mein ho hi nahi sakta apne jaisa pagal samjha hai kya

antara:hum pagal hai

harsh:nahi bilkul bhi nahi tum to bandariya hoTongue
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Posted: 17 November 2009 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
part-16

in aryanagar in veer's room nivriti comes

nivriti:ab saari raat batein hi karte rahoge kya sona nahi hai

sanyogita:bua abhi bas thodi der aur(vo bhi dharam ki tarah nivi ko bua bulati hai)

veer:haan maa thodi der aur

nivriti:nahi ab bas aur sanyogita tumhe yaad hai na hume subaha jaldi niklna hai

dharam:aap dono kahin jaa rahe hai kal

sanyogita:haan hum log awadhi jaa rahe hai shagum lekar

veer:theek hai jao jaakar so jao

sanyogita apne kamre mein chali jaati hai aur nivirti apne kamre mein jaa rahi hoti hai tabhi peeche se

dharam:bua .........vo ...... hume aapse kuch baat karni hai

nivriti:haa bolo dharam

dharam:bua baat ye hai ki baat ye hai ki....

nivriti:aage bhi to bolo

dharam:kya hum bhi aapke saath awadhi chal sakte hai

nivirti:par tum wahaan chal kar kya karoge

dharam:hum sia se milna hai

nivriti:nahi bilkul bhi nahi

dharam:par bua kyon

niviriti:shaadi se pehle nahi bas hum kuch bhi nahi jaante

dharam:par.............

nivriti:par var kuch nahi jaakar so jao

dharam muh latkaye veer ke kamre mein jaata hai

veer:kya hua muh kyon latka rakha hai

dharam:kuch bhi nahi hua tum so jao

veer:dharam dekho kuch to hua hai batao hume

dharam:theek hai batate hai par vada karo madad kroge

veer:theek hai vada ab bolo kya baat hai

dharam:hume sia se milne jaana hai

veer:nahi dharam isme mein tumhari koi mada nahi kar sakta nahi dharam

dharam:par veer tumne vada kia hai

veer:vada gaya bhad mein hum tumhari mada nahi kar sakte

dharam:veer.................

veer:agar maa ko pata chalega to tum to bach jaoge par meri kher nahi .................na baba na mein kuch nahi kar sakta

dharam:veer dekho hum kitni baar mahal se chori chupe bahar gaye hai aur kisi ko pata bhi nahi chala ab bhi chalte hai kisiko nahi pata chalega

veer:par dharam tum samjhte kyon nahi ho

dharam:tum seedha sedha batao humare saath chaloge yaa nahi agar nahi to phir humse kabhi baat mat karna

veer:theek hai chalunga ab kush

dharam:haan ab yojna to batao ki chalenge kaise

veer:...................................

dharam:haan theek hai phir subah

in the morning nivriti and sanyogita were leaving for awadhi so both dharam and veer goes to see off them

dharam:ab bua to gayi chalo ab apna kaam karte hai

veer:theek hai chalo

dharam:(aryawardhan ke paas)pitaji bua ek jaroori cheez le jana bhul gayi hai hum jaakar de aaye

aryawardhan:par vo to koi sainik bhi le jaega

dharam:nahi pitaji bahut khas cheez hai hum jae

aryawardhan:theek hai jao

dharam:ji shukriya pitaji.............................pitaj
i hum veer ko bhi le jae

aryawardhan: theek hai le jao

both dharam and veer make their way to awadhi


in awadhi sanyogita mahal mein enter karti hai aur harsh se takara jaati hai harsh antara se bachne ke liye bhaag raha tha aur sanyogita ko nahi dekh pata aur us se takra jaata hai sanyogita ke haath mein shagun ki thali hoti hai vo to gir jaati hai but sanyogita ko harsh bacha leta hai aur dono ek doosre ki aankho mein kho jaate hai itne mein antara aati hai

antara:(coughs)............

harsh:haan antara bolo kyqa kaam hai

antara:hume to kuch bhi nahi par tum yaahaan ye sab............

harsh:vo vo................vo hum inse takra gaye the

antara:acha takara gaye the aur ye hai kaun

harsh:vo ye ....ye ye ..........pata nahi

antara:maaf kijiega par humne aapko pehchana nahi

sanyogita:ji hum sanyogita hai kannauj ki rajkumari aryanagar se aaye hai

antara:kis ke saath ayi hai aap

sanyogita:ji hum bua ji ke humara matalab hai veer ki maa ke saath aaye hai

antara:acha is bewakuf ki taraf se hum maafi maangte hai maaf kar dijiye

sanyogita:ji uski koi jaroorat nahi

antara:acha tum humare saath chalo hum tumhe sia se milwate hai

sanyogita:ji chaliye

antara takes her to sia

antara:siainse milo ye hai kannuaj ki rajkumari rakumari sanyogita

sia:ji aapse milkar kushi hui

sanyogita:hume bhi aapse milkar acha laga

sia:acha antara tum jaakar tayaar ho jao mehndi ki rasam bhi shuru karni hai tab hum sanyogita ke saath bethate hai

antara:theek hai

vo chali jaati hai tayaar hone ke liye

sia:acha sanyogita tumhe humari mada karni hogi

sanyogita:kya karna hoga hume aap boliye

sia:pehle ye aap bolna band karo aur suno hum antara ke liye ek khas nratya karne wale hai par tumhari madad chahiye

sanyogita:haa bolo

sia sanyogita ko sab kuch bata deti hai aur ye kisi ko bhi naa batane ko bhi kehti hai

udhar dharam veer sabse chupte hue mahal mein pahuchte hai par tab tak mehndi ki rasam shuru ho chuki hoti hai aur sia wahaan chali jaati hai par whaan ladko ka aana mana hota hai vo dono bhi sia se milne ke liye wahin paas hi chipkar saara programme dekh rahe hote hate hai tabhi peeche se koi aakar veer ke kandhe par haath rakhta hai dono dar kar peeche dekhte hai he was none other than aur harsh

harsh:kaun ho tum dono aur yahaan kya kar rahe ho

veer:yahi sawal hum tumse bhi kar sakte hai

harsh: dekho jyada..............

dharam:dekho ab aap dono jhagda chalu mat kar karo hum batate hai ki hum kaun hai

harsh:batao

dharam:hum aryanagar ke rajkumar rajkumar dharam veer hai

harsh:dharam veer tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho

veer:pehle tum to batao tum kaun ho

harsh:hum antara ke bachpan ke dost hai harsh

veer:par tum yaaha kya kar rahe ho

harsh:andar mehndi ki rasam chal rahi hai aur bahut maza bhi ho raha hai hum bhi dekhna chahte hai

dharam:to andar chale jao

harsh:par tum dono andar kyon nahi jaa rahe

veer:kyonki dharam sia se milne aaya hai aur humari maa bhi andar hai agar us epata chal gaya ki hum dono yahaan hai to pata nahi humara kya hoga

harsh:

veer:acha ye to batao andar ho kya raha hai

harsh:andar naach gana ho raha hai jaante ho sanyogita jaante ho na use vo aur sia nratya karne wali hai

dharam:kya sach mein sia bhi karegi hume dekhna hai

harsh:vo to nahi ho sakta kyonki anadar jaana mana hai

veer:to hum bahar se dekh lenge

dharam:haan hum yahi se dekh lenge

harsh:hum bhi dekhenge

veer:theek hai chalo
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Posted: 17 November 2009 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
part-17

veer:par hum teeno yahaan se ek saath nahi dekh sakte koi do hi ek baar mein dekh sakte hai

harsh:hume ek jagah pata hai jaha se hum teeno sab kuch dekh sakte hai

harsh un teeno ko ek khidki ke paas le jaata hai jahaan se sab kuch saaf saaf dikhai deta hai.In the room antara ko mehndi lagai ja rahi hai inten mein sia khadi ho jaati hai

sia:suno suno sab humari baat suno aaj hum aur sanyogita aap sabhi ke samne ek nrtaya prastut karne jaa rahe hai hum abhi sanyogita ko lekar aate hai

is beech teeno baate karne lagte hai

dharam:par ye log karne kya wale hai jo itni der lag rahi hai

harsh :jahaan tak hume pata chala hai ye log koi naach pesh karne wale hai

veer:ye to sia ne bhi bol diya

harsh:par vo dekho

dharam:kya dekho wahaan to koi bhi nahi hai abhi to aaengi tab dekhenge

veer:haan abhi kya dekhna

harsh un dono ka muh udhar ki side ghumata hai aur dono shocked reh jaate hai aur muh khula ka khula reh jaata hai

harsh:muh to band kar lo

veer:ye to sanyogita hai par isne mere jaise kapde kyon pehne hai

dharam:pehn liye honge par ye sia ko kya hua hai antara ki tarah kyon bani hai

harsh:kyonki sanyogita veer bani hai aur sia antara samjhe ab muh band kar ke dekho

wahaan dance shuru hota hai

jaise hi gana khatam hota hai antara gusse mein khadi ho jaati hai
dono hi us song ko kafi romentic bana deti hai

antara:ho gaya yaa aur kuch baaki hai
Grrrhum jaa rahe hai yahaan se

sia:antara ruko to sahi

sanyogita:lagta hai use acha nahi laga

on the other side

harsh:ise kya hua

veer:are yaar tum logo ko pata hai naa iska gussa iski naak par hi betha rehta hai isliye chali gayi

dharam:par isme gussa hone ki kya baat hai sia ne kitna acha kiya tha

itne mein ek tune bajne lagti hai aur teeno us side turn karte hai aur teeno surprised reh jaate hai ye dekh kar ki antara dance kar rahi hai.

as they finish off with their dance

sia:par tum to naraz ho gayi thi na

antara:natak kya sirf tum dono hi kar sakti ho hum nahi

on the other side ye song dekh kar un teeno se raha nahi jaata aur teeno khidki kud kar andar chale jaate hai aur dance start kar dete hai. all the girls and ladies their gets shocked but then they also dance with them and song finishes

nivriti:dharam veer tum dono.......................
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dharam:vo bua isme veer ki koi galti nahi hai humne hi use yahaan aane ko kahaa tha aap use mat daatiyega vo to aana bhi nahi chahta tha

nivriti:par hum kyon daantne lage hum to ye keh rahe the ki tum dono itna acha naachna jaante ho hume to pata hi nahi tha

veer:kya to aap humse naraz nahi hai

niviriti:nahi bilkul bhi nahi

while they were talking with nivriti a tune comes and antara sia nad sanyogita just starts pushing them they were teasing them and dancing on the song ye gore gore se chore from movie hum tum then all six of them danced on it and finally the programme gets over sanyogita goes to her room and dharam along with sia goes to terrace and veer was all alone in his room and getting bored while antara was in her room and then harsh enters the room

harsh:tumne to aaj kamal hi kar diya hume to pata hi nahi tha ki tum itna acha naach sakti ho vaise hum to ye bhul hi gaye ki bandariya to sirf naachna hi jaanti hai

antara:no reply

harsh:kya hua antara (and goes in her front and watches that she was crying)

harsh:kya hua ro kyon rahi ho

antara:harsh hume shaadi nahi karni hume awadhi chod kar nahi jaana hum maa pitaji ke bina wahaan kaise rahenge

harsh:dekho antara pehle rona band karo

antara wipes out her tears

harsh:dkho har ladki ko humesha shaadi ke baad apna ghar chod kar doosre ghar jaana padta hai jahaan use ek naya pariwar milta hai aur vaise bhi jab veer hai to kya gum hai hume pata hai vo tumhe bahut saara pyar dega aur tumhe humesha khush bhi rakhega

veer apne kamre mein bore ho raha tha to vo antara ke kamre mein jaane ka decide karta hai aur jaise hi vo wahaan pahuchta hai vo dekhta hai ki antara harsh ke gale lagi hui hai(actually jab harsh ne use chup karaya to vo uske gale lag gayi thi)

veer:
Shocked(man mein)kal iski shaadi hai humare saath aur ye harsh ke gale lag rahi hai hume chod kar aaj tak hume to kabhi itne pyar se gale nahi lagaya MeanGrrr

harsh ka dhyan us par padata hai

harsh:are veer tum yahaan bahar kyon ghade ho andar aa jao

veer:nahi mein baad mein ata hoon

harsh:nahi veer aa jao

veer gets inside the room

antara :tum yahaan kya karne aaye the

veer:kamse kam tumse milne to nahi aaya tha vo to dharam ko sia se milna tha isliye mujhe aana pada nahi to mein aur awadhi me aaon ho hi nahi sakta

harsh:kya tum dono aise hi ladte rehte ho

antara:hum to nahi ladte ye hi ladta rehta hai

veer:nahi ye jhagada chalu karti hai

antara:hum.........

harsh:are ab bas bhi karo acha veer tumse ek baat pooche

veer:poocho

harsh:ye sanyogita kaisi ladki hai

veer:par tum ye kyon pooch rahe ho

antara:haan harsh tumhe usme kab se dilchaspi hone lagi

harsh:are mein to aise hi pooch raha tha

veer:kahin tumhe bhi dharam ki pehli nazar ka pyar to nahi ho gaya

harsh:pata nahi par vo hume achi lagti hai

antara and veer:kyaaaaaaaaaaa????????????????

veer:bhul jao use to hi acha hoga

harsh:par kyon

veer:kyonki uske pitaji ajmer ke se sakht nafarat karte hai

itne mein sanyogita bhi wahaan aa jati hai

sanyogita:nafrat are hume bhi to batao kaun kis se nafrat karta hai

veer:tumhare pitaji ajmer se

sanyogita:haan par yahaan ajmer se kaun hai

antara:harsh aur kaun

sanyogita:kya???????????????

antara:haan tumhe nahi pata harsh ajmer ka rajkumar hai

sanyogita harsh ko dil hi dil mein pasand karne lagi thi aur jab use ye sab pata chala to uski aankho mein aasoo aa gaye aur vo vahaan se uth kar jaane lagi par peeche se karsh uska haath pakad leta hai

harsh:sanyogita kya hua kahaan jaa rahi ho

sanyogita:apne..............kamre mein humara haath..............chodo harsh

harsh:ye haath chodne ke liye nahi pakda hai meine (sanyogita turns towards him)

sanyogita:kya kehna chahte ho tum

harsh(stands up and goes near to her)yahi ki hume tumse pyaar ho gaya hai aur hum tumhare saath apni saari zindgi bitana chahte hai aur hum................

sanyogita:nahi ye sambhav nahi hai pitaji................

harsh places his finger on her lips

harsh:hum aapka uttar sunana chahte hai

sanyogita:hum bhi aapse pyaar karte hai (aur uske gale lag jaati hai)


veer & antara:(coughs)...............shayad hum dono bhi yahin bethe hue hai

harsh:to kya hua tumhe kisne mana kiya hai tum dono bhi gale lag jao ek doosre ke

veer looks at antara and antara looks at him and then just rums away from the room veer also moves out of the room in the way to his room he meets nivriti

nivriti:veer tum aur dharam kahaan hai

veer:vo maa dharam........pata nahi

nivriti:pata nahi kya dhoondo use chalna nahi hai kya aryanagar

veer:ji maa mein abhi use bulata hoon

veer dharam ke paas terrace par jaata hai aur sia aur dharam ko dekhta hai vo dono ek dusre ka haath haathon mein liye ek dusre ko dekh rahe hote hai

veer:(coughs).......................

dharam:veer tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho kya baat hai

veer:agar milna ho gaya ho to aryanagar cahle maa bula rahi hai

dharam:mein kab mana kiya tum chalo hum aate hai

then the all four nivriti veer dharam and sanyo leaves for aryanagar in the way they stop to reat near a temple

veer:sanyogita tumse ek baat poochu

sanyo:pocho

veer:dekho hum ye baat jante hai ki kannauj aur ajmer ke beech dushmani hai par kyon hai ye nahi pata hume batao

dharam:veer tum ye achanak ye sab kyon pooch rahe ho

veer:are agar ye pata nahi chalega to mein inki madad kaise karoonga

dharam:par kiski madad aur kaisi madad hume bhi koi bataega

veer:tumhe nahi pata

dharam:tum log bataoge nahi to pata kaise chalega

veer:acha to suno sanyogita bhi tumhari tarah hi pagal nikli

dharam:dekho veer seedha 2 bolo kya kehna chahte ho

veer:yahi ki use bhi tumhari tarah hi pehli nazar mein pyaar ho gaya hai

dharam:kya?kab?kis se?

veer:saare sawal abhi poochne hai

dharam:batao na veer

veer:are ajmer ke rajkumar harsh se

dharam:kya sach mein chalo koi to humare jaisa hai

sanyogita:matalab kya hai tumhara

dharam:are itne dino se hum soch rahe the ki hum akele hi pehli nazar ke ghayal hai

veer:acha sanyogita tum bolo ab

sanyogita:darasal pehle ajmer ke maharaj aur pitaji bahut ache dost the aur ek dusre ke liye apni jaan bhi de sakte the par ek din kisine pitaji ka khazana loot liya aur unki chamtkari talwar bhi aur chalaki se is sabka ilzaam ajmer para laga diya aur pitaji aur unki dosti dushmani mein badal gayi

veer:sirf khzane ke liye unhone apne dost par shak kiya

sanyogita:nahi veer khazana khone ka koi dukh nahi hai pitaji ko balki unki dukhmani ki wajah hai vo talwar

veer:par us talwar mein aisa kya khaas tha

sanyogita:ye to hum nahi jaante bas maa se suna tha ki vo talwar cahmatkari thi

veer:acha theek hai par tum ye kaise jaanti ho ki ajmer ke maharaj par jhootha ilzam lagaya gaya tha

sanyogita:kyonki hume kuch din pehle ek patra mila

dharam:kaisa patra

sanyogita:usme likha tha ki un dono ki dosti todene ke liye kisi ne ye sab saazish ki thi

veer:kiska tha vo patra

sanyogita:ye to us par nahi likha tha

veer:aur kya likha tha us par

sanyo:kuch khas nahi ek nishan bana hua tha

veer:kaisa nishan

itne mein nivriti aa jati hai

nivriti:are ab chalna nahi hai kya raat hone wali hai

dharam:ji bua chaliye

they all again starts their journey and finally reaches aryanagar wahaan pahuchte 2 vo log saari baatein bhul jaate hai aur shaadi ki tayaariyon mein jut jaate hai

next day dharam veer ke room mein jaata hai

dharam:veer tum tayaar ho gaye kya hume awadhi ke liye niklna hai

veer:hum to tayaar hai par tum to tayaar ho jao

dharam:par ye kya pehna hai utaro ise aur hum jo lae hai vo pehno

veer:theek hai hum pehen lenge aur tum bhi jao tayaar ho jao

dharam:theek hai par jaldi karna nahi to bua daategi

veer:acha dharam tum kya pehn ne wale ho

dharam:pata nahi ab jaakar dekhenge

veer:mein tumhare liye jo laya hoon vo pehno

dharam:acha do

veer:tumhare kamre mein hai jao

dharam veer ke liye cream colour ki sherwani laya tha with red dupatta aur veer dharam ke liye black sherwani laya tha with white dupatta Dono hi un kapdo mein bahut hi smart lag rahe the dharam tayaar hokar veer ke paas jata hai

dharam:veer kahaan ho tayaar hue yaa nahi

veer:haan hogaya chalo(and then looks at dharam).......................sia to gayi aaj

dharam:kyon kya hua

veer:are tum itne ache lag rahe ho ki sia ko aaj tumse phir se pyaar ho jaega

dharam :are hume pyaar se yaad aya sanyo kahaan hai

veer:vo bhi apne kamre mein tayyyar ho rahi hai

dharam:tum neeche pahucho hum abhi use bulakar laate hai

veer:theek hai par jaldi aana

then apna veer ghodi chadta hai aur baarat awadhi ke liye niklati hai
Party!

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part-18

in awadhi antara apne kamre mein bethi me mirror ke samne bethi thi aur saari ladkiyan aur sia bahar kaam me vyast hai tabhi antara mirror mein dekhti hai ki uske peeche veer khada hai she immediately turns her face

antara:tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho

veer:tumhe dekh raha hoon

antara:acha to batao hum kaise lag rahe hai

veer was just about to ans itne mein

sia:antara kis se baat kar rahi ho

antara again looks there where veer was standing but finds that there was no one

antara:kuch bhi to nahi par tum yahaan koi kaam hai

sia:nahi hum to ye batane aaye the ki baarat aa gayi hai

antara:to isme hum kya kare

sia:haan tum kya karogi karna to hume hai

antara:mutlab?????????????

dekhti jao .........
Roll(and goes outside)

antara:par sia ........... sia suno to..............

on the other hand

sanyo:dharam aaj dhyan se rehna koi galti mat karna aur apne pyar ko aaj 2 bhul jao theek hai

dharam:par kyon aaj kya khaas hai

sanyo:bhuddhu aaj sia veer ki jutiyaan chupaegi to tumhe unki rakhwali karni hai

dharam:haan hum unka khud se bhi jayada dhyan rakhenge

maharaj aur maharani baarat ka swagat karne ke liye aate hai sia bhi vahin hoti hai aur dharam ki nazar us par padti hai usne wahi neela lehenga pehana tha jo dharam ne bhijwaya tha vo us din itni sundar lag rahi thi ki vo use dekhta hi reh gaya

sanyo:dharam bhul gaye kya abhi kya kaha tha

dharam:haan ......................nahi to bilkul bhi nahi sab yaad hai aaj sirf pehredari haina

sanyo:haan ab chalo

sia comes near to him

sia:aaj to veer sach mein bahut acha lag raha hai mujhe to antara se jalan ho rahi hai

dharam:kya kahaa
Shocked

sia:nahi kuch bhi nahi

sanyo:antara kahaan hai akhir hum bhi to dekhe humari bhabhi kaisi lag rahi hai

sia:vo apne kamre mein tayaar ho rahi hai chalo hum tumhe le chalte hai

dono antara ke room ki taraf jaane lagti hai sia aage chal rahi thi aur peeche 2 sanyo

sia:antara dekho tumse milne kaun aaya hai

antara:kaun hai

sia:sanyo...............(.turns her face)..............are ye kahaan gayi

antara:sanyo kahaan hai

sia:pata nahi abhi to mere peeche 2 hi aa rahi thi achanak na jaane kahaan kho gayi

antara:mujhe pata hai vo kahaan hai

sia:kahaan

antara harsh ke paas aur kahaan

and really she was with harsh only jab vo aa rahi thi to harsh ne use kheench liya tha


sanyo:harsh kya kar rahe ho koi dekh lega

harsh:are koi bhi nahi dekhega

sanyo:aur dekhliya to

harsh:vaise tum aaj bahut sundar lag rahi ho ye kesariya rang tum par bahut acha lag raha hai

sanyo:jhoothe kahin ke

harsh:nahi sach mein meri nazar hi nahi hat rahi hai tumse tum aaj bilkul pari lag rahi ho

itne mein ek awaaz aati hai sanyo maan lo aaj sach mein tum bahut achi lag rahi ho
dono dekhte hai all four(veer dharam sia and antara )were there sanyo jab unhe dekhti hai to sharma kar bhaag jaati hai aur harsh bhi bahana banakar chala jaata hai

veer:ye dono ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte hai hume inki madad karni hogi

antara:madad kaisi madad

veer:inke gharano ki dushmani ko khatam karke

dharam:haan veer humse jo bhi ho sakega hum karenge

sia:hum bhi tum logo ke saath hai

itne mein pandit ji ki awaz aati hai var yahaan aakar bethiye

dharam:chlo veer pandit ji bula rahe hai

veer jaata hai aur apni jutiyaan utar kar mandap mein beth jaata hai

sanyo:dharam jutiyaan kahaan hai

dharam:humare paas hai

sanyo:theek hai par dhyan rakhna

dharam:are bharosa rakho hum par

on the other side sia harsh ke paas jaati hai ye batane ke liya ki unhone jo plan banaya tha vo ab pura nahi ho sakta aur unhe koi nai yojana sochni padegi

sia:harsh ..................

harsh:tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho jao jaakar jutiyaan chupao

sia:are kaise chupaon vo dharam hai na usne jutiyaan apne paas rakh rakhi hai

harsh:to kya hua jao jaakar ladki hone ka fayada uthao

sia:mutlab mein samjhi nahi

harsh:dekho dharam tumse pyaar karta hai to tum jaakar use apni bato mein lagana aur itne me mein jaakar vo jutiyaan le aaonga

sia:theek hai

sia dharam ke paas jaati hai aur harsh vahin paas mein chup jaata hai aur moke ka intezaar karna lagta hai

sia:dharam tumne kuch khaya kya

dharam:nahi abhi tak to nahi

sia:dekho tum bhi na apna khayal bilkul bhi nahi rakhte chalo hum tumhare liyew kuxh khane ko lekar aate hai

dharam:nahi sia hume abhi bhuk nahi hai tum yahin humare paas betho hume acha lagta hai
sia:theek hai dharam

and cont talking aur dusri taraf mauka milte hi harsh jutiyon par haath saaf kar deta hai aur phir sia ko ishara kar deta hai ki kaam ho gaya

sia:dharam ab hume jaana hai antara ko tayaar karna hai

dharam:theek hai jao

pandit ji:kanya ko laya jaye

sanyo aur sia jaakar antara ko lekar aate hai aur veer ke paas betha dete hai
phir sanyo dharam ke paas chali jaati hai

sanyo:dharam lao jutiyaan do hum kahin aur chupa kar aate hai

dharam:thek hai ye................................kahaan gai ............

sanyo:kahaan gai ka kya matlab hai tumhare paas hi to thi

dharam:haan par ab kahaan gai pata nahi

sanyo:dharam tum bhi na ek kaam theek se nahi kar sakte acha ye batao kya sia aayi thi

dharam:haan aayi thi aur baate bhi ki

sanyo:aur ye harsh kahaan hai

dharam harsh.....................vo ..................vo raha

sanyo:tum yahin ruko mein aati hoon

vo harsh ke paas jaati hai aur rone ka natak karne lagti hai

sanyo:harsh........
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harsh:kya hua ro kyon rahi ho

sanyo:vo dharam ko dekho khud se jutiyaan sambhali nahi jaati aur ab mujh par gussa kar raha hai

harsh:to mein isme tumhari kya madad kar sakta hoon

sanyo:mujhe vo jutiyaan la do

harsh:acha pehle rona band karo mein lata hoon

harsh:ye lo jutiyaan

sanyo:shukriya harsh agar aaj tum nahi hote to

harsh:are isme shukriya ki kya baat hai aur mere rehte tumhari aankho mein aansoo nahi aane chahiye

sanyo:vada kabhi nahi aenge aur vahan se chali jaati hai

sia:harsh vo sanyo yahaan kya kar rahi thi

harsh:vo bechari ro rahi thi tumhare dharam ki wajaha se

sia:ab dharam ne kya kiya jo vo ro rahi thi

harsh:jutiyaan kho jaane par use daat raha tha

sia:acha ba mein tumhe ek baat bataon dharam kabhi kisi ko nahi daat ta aur sanyo ne tumhe champu bana diya aur tumse jutiyaan le gai

harsh:kya??????????????????sia maaf kar do hume

sia:vaise ek baat batao jab bhagwan dimaag baant raha tha to tum kya ghaans char rahe hai the

harsh:theek hai mein abhi jaakar lata hoon

harsh sanyo ke peeche jata hai aur sanyo use dekh kar bhaagne lagti hai harsh bhi uske peeche 2 bhaagne lagta hai sanyo bhagte bhagte ek room mein ghus jaati hai

harsh:ab kahaan jaogi bhachke dekho sanyo chup chap vo jutiyaan de do

sanyo :aur nahi di to

harsh:tumne mera bahut fayada uthaya hai

sanyo:ab isme meri kya galti ki bhagwan ne tumhe akkal hi nahi di to

harsh:abhi dikhata hoon mere paas kitna dimaag hai

sanyo room mein idhar uthar bhagne lagti hai aur finally bed par chad jaati hai harsh bhi uske saath bed par chad jaata hai aur bedsheet ki wajah se dono ka per ulajh jaata hai aur dono gir jaate hai sanyo neeche aur harsh uske upar harsh side hota hai aur sanyo jaane lagti hai

harsh:sanyo jaate jaate ye jutiyaan to deti jao

sanyo:humara haath chodo

harsh:jutiyaan do aur chali jao

on the other hand shaadi puri ho jaati hai

pandit ji:vivaah sampann hua ab aap dono apne bado ka aashirwad le ljiye

antara aur veer sab ka aashirwad lete hai aur phir veer apni jutiyaan pehnane jaata hai par vo vahaan nahi hoti

veer:dharam meri jutiyaan

sia:humare paas hai

dharam:nahi veer jutiyaan humare paas hi hai

sia:acha to dikhao

dharam:theek hai abhi dikhate hai

tabhi harsh aur sanyo wahaan aate hai

dharam:sanyo lao jutiyaan do

sanyo:no reply

sia:degi kaise uske paas hai hi nahi

chalo harsh jaldi se jutiyaan do

harsh:vo jutiyaan vo.....................vo

sia:kya hua jutiyaan tumhare paas hi haina

dharam:hume pata tha nahi hai sanyo lao

sanyo:vo jutiyaan harsh ke paas hai

dharam:kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa?????????????
????????????

sia:yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hum jeet gaye ab agar jutiyaan chahiye to paise nikalo

veer:mujhe nahi chaiye rakho tumhi apne paas

nivriti:veer tumhe jutiyaan to leni hi padegi aur beta ye to rasam hoti hai chalo paise do aur jutiyaan lo

sia:haan haan nikalo tumhare bhai se to ku6 bhi nahi hota

dharam:humne kya kiya ye sab is sanyo ne kiya

sanyo:acha meine kiya sia ki baaton mein fas ke jutiyaan di tumne aur galti humne ki

veer:ab ladna chodo aur ye lo tumhare paise

and gives money to sia aur phir baari aati hai bidaai ki(u all can imagine a typical bidaai scene)antara ko doli mein bidhate hai aur phir maharaj aryawardhan awadhi ke maharaj ke paas jaate hai

maharaj:hum aapko apne dil ka tukada de rahe hai

aryawardhan:maharaj aap bilkul bhi chinta mat kijiye antara humari bahu nahi beti bankar rahegi

maharaj:hume pura vishwas hai ki jitna pyaar use yahaan mila us se kahi adhik aap sab use denge

aryawardhan: maharaj agar aapki agya ho to hum sia ko apne saath le jana chahte hai kya hai na ki dono hi behne ek saath badi hui hai aur ab achanak ek naye ghar me antara dhal nahi paegi sia hogi to uska bhi man lag jaega
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Part-19

maharaj:parantu maharaj sia ki shaadi bhi najdeek aa rahi hai aur harsh bhi yahaan akela ho jaega

aryawardhan:jahaan tak shaadi ki baat hai vo to aap sambhal lenge aur raha sawal harsh use hum apne saath le jaate hai ek se bhale do

maharaj:jaisa aap theek samjhe

then they all along with sia and harsh leaves for aryanagar and reaches there in short tym all gurls along with sanyo and sia takes antara to veer's room the room was decorated with flowers and a pleasant smell of rose and jasmine was all around the room. Rose petals were spread over the bed and from the door to the bed a path with flower petals was made and a gentle breez was blowing all a romantic night

sia:anatara ye kamra to aaj bahut sundar laga raha hai

antara:sach me pata hi nahi chal raha ki ye veer ka hi kamra hai

antara:haan vaise to veer ka kamra darawana lagta hai

all laughs

sanyo:tum logo ko kamra pasand aaya ye humne tarayaar karwaya hai aur sia tum dekhna hum tumhari shaadi par kamra aur bhi caha sajaenge aur tab antara bhi humari madad karegi kyon antara

antara:haan jaroor aur tumhari aur harsh ki shaadi par kaun tayaar karega kamara

sanyo ki aankho mein aasu aa jaate hai

sia:kya hua sanyo

sanyo:hume dar lag raha hai agar pitaji.........

antara:nahi tumhari shaadi sirf harsh ke saath hogi ye humara wada hai tumse ki hum tum dono ki shaadi karwaenge

sia:are ab yahin khade rahoge kya andar bhi chalo veer aata hi hoga

kafi der ho jaati hai veer ka kahin ata pata nahi hota tab sia dharam ke paas jaati hai harsh bhi vahin hota hai

harsh:tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho sia aur itni chintit kyon lag rahi ho

sia:are vo veer ka kahin ata pata nahi hai

dharam:kya vo apne kamre mein nahi gaya

sia:nahi dekho na kitni der ho gai

dharam:hum abhi use dhoondte hai aur kamre mein bhejte hai

sia:theek hai hum antara ke paas jaate hai par tum jaldi bhej dena use

harsh:par dharam hum use dhoondenge kaha par

dharam:humare kamre me vo vahin hoga

harsh:tumhe kaise pata

dharam:veer humara bhai hai aur humse jayda use koi nahi janta

both of them reaches dharam's room and dharam was right veer was sleeping there

dharam:dekha humne kahaa tha na chalo ab ise udhate hai

harsh:ye to sabse kadhin kaam hai

dharam:veer utho aur apne kamre mein jao

veer:dharam sone do neend aa rahi hai

dharam:veer humne kaha udho

veer:mere kamre mein saari ladkiyaan bethi hai

dharam:vo sab chali jaegi wahaan se tum ek baar jao to sahi

veer:par mujheyahin sona hai

dharam:ab bahut ho gaya udho

harsh:dharam ye aise nahi manega

dharam:to chalo harsh.................................ch
alu ho jao

veer:dharam kya karne wale ho ..........tum dono dekho dharam.................mere paas mat aao ........acha nahi hoga dharam nahi .................nahi.....

harsh aur dharam veer ko utha lete hai harsh veer ke haath pakdta hai aur dharam per aur dono use utha kar uske room tak le jaate hai aur wahaan jaakar use room mein dhakka de dete hai jis se vo room me jaakar gir jaata hai aur saari ladkiyaan hasne lag jaati hai

sia:veer thoda sambhal kar chalo antara yahin hai kahin nahi jaa rahi vo

sanyo:chalo chalo sab bahar chalo (and gives a naughty smile to veer)

they all locks the room from outside and then only a pillow comes towards veer but veer catches it

veer:ye kya hai

antara:takiya hai kyonki aaj se tum neeche soya karoge

veer:mein aur neeche shayad tum ye bhul rahi ho ye kamra mera hai aur ye bistar bhi mera hi hai

antara:to kya hua ab dekho hume bahut neend aa rahi hai jao jaakar so jao aur hume bhi sone do aur neend nahi aa rahi ho to jaakar saari raat jagran karo

raat me veer neeche hi so jaata hai par kyonki vo pehli baar neeche so raha tha use neend nahi aati aur saari raat vo turn hi karta rehta hai antara ye sab dekhti rehti haiaur use ye dekhte dekhte hi neend aa jaati hai aur vo so jaati hai phir raat me veer paani pine ke liye udhta hai aur use dhayan nahi rehta aur antara ke paas jaakar hi so jaata hai aur jab subah antara ki neend khulti hai to vo veer ko dekh kar shocked reh jaati hai use gussa bhi aata hai aur vo veer ko maarne ke liye takiya uthati hai par sote hue veer bahut cute aur innocent lag raha tha to vo ruk jaati hai aur veer kko dekhne lagti hai

antara:sote hue veer kitna acha lagta hai par ye mujhe kya ho raha hai me kyon veer ki taraf khichi chali jaa rahi hoon nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hum veer se pyaar nahi karte vo bas humara acha dost hai

then she just picks up the pillow and throws it on veer

veer:antara..........................tum
hari himmat kaise hui mujhe maarne ki

antara:aur tumhari himmat kaise hui humare paas aakar sone ki

veer:tumhare paas aur me

antara:nahi to kya me

veer:galti se aa gaya tha yaad nahi raha

antara:to kya maafi nahi maangni aati

veer:maafi aur tumse kis baat ki

antara:yahaan aakr sone ki

veer:ye mera bistar hai samjhi

antara:par jab tak dharam aur sia ki shaadi nahi ho jaati hum yahin soenge aur tumhe neeche sona padega samjhe

veer:aur nahi soya to

tabhi darwaze par koi knock karta hai aur veer phir se bed par pad jata hai aur bedsheet aud leta hai

dharam:ye awaaz kaisi thi

antara:kaunsi aawaz

dharam:ye veer abhi tak so raha hai

antara:me bhi to ise kabse utha rahi hoon par ye hai ki uthata hi nahi

tabhi sia ki nazar neeche pade bishtar par padti hai

sia:ye neeche bistar kyon bicha rakha hai kaun soya tha neeche

veer:mein soya tha

dharam:tum kyon

veer:vo kya hai na kal bistar par neend nahi aa rahi thi to thodi der neeche jaakar late gaya tha

dharam:acha vo sab chodo tum dono tayaar ho jao sab neeche intzaar kar rahe hai
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Part-20

veer:theek hai hum aate hai tum dono chalo

sia:theek hai par jaldi aana vaise bhi antara aaj tumhara yahaan shaadi ke baad pehla din hai to ku6 rasme hai vo puri karni hai

antara:theek hai ......................acha vo dono sanyo aur harsh kahaan hai

dharam:vo dono neeche hai

sia aur dharam neeche chale jaate hai aur phir dono tayar hote hai aur phir veer aur antara bhi neeche aa jaate hai sabhi dinning table par breakfast karne bethte hai

veer:maa aaj to maza aa gaya aap ka to jawab hi nahi

nivriti:bas veer bahut ho gaya...............(turns to antara)acha antara beta aaj tumhara pehla din hai to aaj raat ka khana tumhe banana hai

antara:ji maa ..............................maa agar hum sia ki madad le to chalega

nivriti:haan beta aur sanyo bhi tumhari madad karegi..................................acha to mein chalti hoon tum sab bhi naashta khatam kar lo

nivriti leaves the room and then all starts teasing veer and antara

harsh:are antara tumhara chehara utara hua kyon hai

sanyo:haan tum dono ki shakal par to 12 baje hai

antara:puri raat so hi nahi paye isliye

veer:haan shaadi me itna thak gaye the aur phir raat me bhi theek se nahi soye

dharam:koi baat nahi....................................
.......veer aur antara hum samjhte hai

sia:haan aur vaise bhi pehli raat ko sota kaun hai

all four(sia dharam sanyo and harsh)starts laughing and teases them like this

dharam:are bas bas ab bahut ho gaya chalo bahut kaam hai

sia:kaunsa kaam

dharam:are hum to batana bhul hi gaye pitaji ne kaha tha ki veer aur antara ko mandir le jaana hai

sanyo:mandir vo kyon????????

dharam:pitaji ne kaha tha ki wahaan jo bhi naya shaadi shuda joda jaata hai to mata unki har kaamna puri karti hai aur jaldi hi unke ghar me chote bache ki kilkariyaan ghunjti hai

harsh:ooooooooooooooooo to whaan jaane se mahal me chota veer aaega

antara:dekho harsh ab bahut ho gaya bas bhi karo jab tumhari shaadi hogi tab dekhenge ki tum kitna bolte ho

sanyo:yaar ab shaadi hui hai to chota veer to aaega hi

veer:sanyo tum bhi

sia:meine aur dharam ne sab ku6 soch liya hai

dharam:haan par sia ek baat batao ye humara veer hi itna shaitaan hai to chota veer to iska bhi baap hoga tab humara kya hoga

veer:sochte raho kya hoga me to jaa raha hoon aur jab mandir jaana ho to bula lena

antara:me bhi jaa rahi hoon

veer and antara exits the room


veer gussa ho jata hai aur apne kamre mein jaakar cheeze idhar udhar phekne lagta hai

veer:chota veer ..................................Grrr...................yahaan mujhe us chipkali ke saath rehna pad raha hai aur un sab ko mazak soojh raha hai

antara bhi veer ke peeche 2 kamre mein aati hai aur room ki haalat dekh kar dar jaati hai

antara:veer ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai kamre ki......................................
.........aur tumhe hua kya hai itna gussa kyon ho

veer:tumhe to maza aa raha hoga hainaGrrrGrrr ........................................
............wahaan vo log naa jane kya kya soch rahe hai aur ...............................

antara:............................. par humne kya kiya hai jo tum hum par itna gussa kar rahe ho...............................hum to bas pooch hi to rahe theCrying%202

veer:mujhe maaf kar do vo......................meine galti se guse mein keh diya ........................................
...maaf kar do

antara:par ab kya karenge

veer:matlab

antara:matlab ki sab humse kitni aas lagaye baithe hai aur humare beech aisa ku6 bhi nahi aur naa hi kabhi hoga

veer:vo hum baad mein dekhenge philhaal to hume mandir jaana hai jao jaakar tayar ho jao

antara:theek hai

veer room se bahar chala jaata hai aur antara apni dress choose kar rahi hoti hai par use ku6 samajh nahi aata ki vo kya pehne vo saari dresses laga lagakar dekh rahi hoti hai tabhi usse mirror mein veer dikhai deta hai

antara:tum..................... aise kya dekh rahe ho humari madad karo

veer:madad kis cheez mein

antara:are humare kapde pasand karne mein....................................
...acha ye kaisa hai

veer:ye nahi koi aur

isi tarah antara veer ko kaafi saare lehnge dikhati hai par veer ko koi bhi pasand nahi aata aur phir aakhiri mein vo ek neela lehenge udhati

veer:haan ye acha hai tum para bahut acha lagega

antara:theek hai

antara thoda sharmati hai aur neeche dekhti hai aur dusre hi pal veer wahaan se gayab ho jata hai antara khud par hasne lagti hai aur tayaar ho jaati hai

veer:antara tum tayaar ho gayi kya

antara:haan

phir veer antara ko dekhta hai aur dekhta hi reh jaata hai

antara :ab dekhte hi rahoge yaar ku6 bologe bhi..........................

veer:kya bolu

antara:yahi ki hum kaise lag rahe hai

veer:acha vo......................... bilkul..................................chipkali jaisiToungue%20Out

antara:I%20Have%20YouGrrr

veer:acha tum neeche chalo mein abhi tayaar hokar aata hoon

antara:thek haiGrrr

veer gives a sweet smile and goes to change his dress

phir thodi der baad sab mandir ke liye nikalte hai aur wahaan par pooja khatam karke sabhi aa rahe hote hai tabhi ek ped ke neeche ek baba milte hai

dharam:sia vo dekho baba meine suna hai ki ye baba sabka bhavishya batate hai aur inka kaha kabhi jhooth nahi hota

sia:to chalo na dharam antara aur veer ke baare mein poochte hai

dharam:aur apne baare mein

harsh:haan chalo poochte hai ki mahal mein chote veer ki kilkariyaan kab gujengi

sanyo:[d]

veer and antaraGrrr

sab baba ke paas jaate hai

baba:beta tum yahaan aao(pointing towards veer)

veer unke paas jata hai

dharam:baba iski abhi nayi 2 shaadi hui hai

baba:hum jaante hai aur ye bhi dekh sakte hai ki ek saal ke baad inke ghar mein ek beta paida hoga jo is se bhi jayada bahdur aur samjhdar hoga

sanyo:ye lo dharam tumhari baat sach ho gayi ab to humari kher nahi

veer:ye sab jhooth hai aisa kabhi nahi hoga

antara:haan aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta

sia:par kyon nahi ho sakta ab veer ka beta to har cheez mein us se aage hi hoga na

harsh:are veer ko apne bete se hi jalan hone lagi

veer:aisa ku6 nahi hai

antara:ab mahal wapas chale sab intezaar kar rahe honge

sia:are thodi der aur

dharam:haan hume bhi humara bhavishya pata chale

harsh: pehle hum puchenge

sanyo par kya puchna hai tumhe

harsh:yahi ki humari shaadi kab hogi aur humare bache...............

sanyo: tum to pure pagal ho

dharam baba aap hume bataiye ki humari shaadi kab hogi aur ........

baba:tum dono ki shaadi 15 din ke andar andar ho jaegi aur agle saal tak tum baap bhi ban jaoge

dharam(excited)bete ka yaa beti ka

baba:ek beti ke jo ki bahut hi sundar aur kismat wali hogi

sia:aur baba beta kab hoga

baba:kabhi nahi tum dono ke jeevan mein kewal ek beti ka hi yog hai

dharam:hume to beti hi chahiye beta hua to is veer ke jaisa hoga aur hume pareshan karega
naa hume nahi chahiye

sanyo:ab ho gaya ho to chale

antara:haan maa intezaar kar rahi hogi aur vaise bhi aaj ka khana hume hi banana hai

sia:are haan hum to bhul hi gaye chalo chalo nahi to aaj to sabki daat padegi

they all leaves for the palace and on reaching there they all rest for a while and then sia antara and sanyo goes to kitchen and starts preparing the food
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Part-21

antara sanyo aur sia khana bana lete hai

antara:sia ab khana to tayyar hai chalo sab ko bula laate hai aur sanyo tab tak tum ye sab khana bahar le aao

sanyo:theek hai aur haan vo agni aur jai mama ka khana unhi ke kamre mein bhijwa dena

sia:jai aur agni ye dono kaun hai

sanyo:maharaj ke bade bhai hai aur agni unka beta hai aaj hi aaye hai

sia:to vo itne dino se kahaan the

sanyo:ye sab hume nahi pata

sia:theek hai hum bhijwa denge

on the otherside in agni's and jai's room

jai:agni agni agni ......................

agni:pitaji hume maaf kar dijiye par hum aapse wada karte hai ki un dono ko hum ab jinda nahi chodenge

jai:yehi baat tum naa jane kitni baar keh chuke ho

agni:pitaji is baar mere paas ek bahut hi achi yojna hai jis se dharam veer bhi mar jaenge aur kisi ko hum par shak bhi nahi hoga

jai:kya yojna hai tumhare paas

agni:kyon na pitaji hum aaj ke khane mein jahar mila de jis se ye saara raj pariwar hi khatam ho jaega

jai:haan ye theek rahega par ye kaam karega kaun

agni:vo sab aap mujh par chod dijiye pitaji is baar dharam veer ko mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta

jai and agni laughs

after some tym a man in black cloths with his face covered enters the kitchen no one was there in the kitchen vo jakar sabji mein jahar daal deta hai par veer antara ke paas aa raha hota hai to vo ye sab dekha leta hai

veer:kaun ho tum aur yahaan kya kar rahe ho

man gives a push to veer and starts running veer also follows him aur phir bhaagte bhagte vo antara se takara jaata hai antara neeche aur veer uske upar dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho jaate hai aur vo aadmi wahaan se bhaag jata hai thodi der baad veer ko hosh aata hai aur vo udhta hai aur antara ko bhi udhata hai

antara:veer ye is tarah ghode par sawar hokar kahaan jaa rahe the ki tumhe ku6 bhi dikhai nahi diya....................aankhein kya chod kar aaye ho

veer:are vo aadmi

antara:kaun aadmi aur tum uske peeche kyon bhaag rahe the

veer:are vo hi jo abhi abhi yahaan se bhaga tha tumhara banaya hua khana kharab karke

antara:kya humara banaya hua khana kharab kar diya

veer:haan bas isiliye uske peeche bhaag raha tha aakhir uski himmat kaise hui tumhari mehnat kharab karne ki

antara:to tum hamare liye uske peeche bhaag rahe the

veer:aur nahi to kya

antara:koi baat nahi veer hum khana phir se bana lenge

veer:par akele kaise karogi ye sab vo sia aur sanyo to hai hi nahi

antara:koi baat nahi hum kar lenge tum chinta mat karo

veer:chalo mein bhi tumhari madad karta hoon

antara:tum aur humari madad vo bhi khana banane mein

veer:haan to kya hua kya mein madad nahi kar sakta

antara:par tumhe to khana banana aata hi nahi hai

veer:tum ho na tum mujhe batati rehna mein vo sab karta jaonga

antara :theek hai chalo

dono rasoi mein jaate hai aur khana banane lagte hai veer saari sabjiyaan kaat deta hai aur antara puriya bana leti hai is tarah dono mil kar khana bana lete hai par khana bana lene ke baad veer ki haalat dekhne layak hoti hai afterall usne pehli baar khana banaya tha antara uski aisi haalat dekh kar hasne lag jaati hai

veer:tum has kyon rahi ho

antara:jaakar apni shakal to dekh kar aao tumhe bhi hasi aa jaegiaur haan naha jarur lena aane se pehle

veer:par mujhe to bahut bhook lagi hai aur thak bhi gaya hoon

antara:koi baat nahi hum tumhara khana kamre mein hi le aaenge

veer:haan ye theek rahega

antara:vaise veer shukriya humari madad karne ke liye

veer:isme shukriya ki kya baat hai ek dost hi to dusre dost ke kaam aata hai

veer jaakar apne kamre mein naha dho kar vahin so jaata hai

idhar sab khana kha kar apne apne kamre mein chale jaate hai aur antara jai aur agni ka khana lekar unke room mein jaati hai jahan par jai agni par gussa kar raha hota

jai:tumse ek kaam theek se nahi hota aaj itna acha mauka tha aur tumhari wajah se vo bhi haath se chala gaya

agni:vo pitaji hume maaf kar dijiye bas ek aakhiri mauka aur de dijiye is baar vo dono mujhse bach nahi paenge

jai:rehne do tum to ab jo bhi karna hai vo mein hi karunga ........................................dharam veer manalo jitni khushiyaan manani hai mana lo aakhir kar tumhe ab marna jo hai


antara:mamaji

jai:k...............kkk........kaun

antara:hum hai antara aapke liye khana laye hai

jai:par beta tum aayi kab

antara:bas abhi abhi aaye hai aap log ku6 baate kar rahe the

agni:na..........nahi to

antara:nahi aap log ku6 to keh rahe the ki kisiko marna hai

jai:vo..........vo .................vo to hum humare dushmano ke liye keh rahe the

antara:acha ab un dushmano ko baad mein mar lena khana kha lijiye thanda ho jaega

jai:theek hai tum jao........................... acha suno sqab ne khana kha liya

antara:ji bas veer bacha hai uska hum ab lekar jaa rahe hai

agni:kyon veer ne kyon nahi khaya

antara:aaj usne humari madad ki thi thak gaya to kamre mein hi khane ka intezaar kar raha hai bas aab jaakr use khilana hai

jai:theek hai jao

antara veer ki thali lekar kamre mein pahuchti hai aur dekhti hai ki veer to so chuka hai

antara:ye lo ye mahashaya to so gaye....................................
..... veer utho khana kha lo

par veer to itna thak jaata hai ki uski to neend hi nahi khulti par antara badi mushkil se use uthati hai aur use khana khilati hai


antara:veer utho bhi aur khana kha lo .......................... pehle to bhook bhook chilla rahe the aur ab so gaye..................veer ....................veer

veer:sone do na antara

antara:are khana to kha lo phir so jana

veer:nahi mujhe nahi khana mujhe sona hai

antara:veer bas thoda sa kha lo

veer:nahi......na mujhe ........ ni khana...

antara:mujhe ku6 nahi sunana utho ab nahi to hum ye paani se bhara jag tumhare upar daal denge

veer uthata hai aur abhi bhi thoda thoda neend mein hi hai

veer:do .......... mein kha lunga....

antara:haan hume pata hai tum kha loge aur khila bhi doge]

veer:matlab??????????????

antara:matlab ki hume dikh raha hai ki tum kitna hosh mein ho abhi bhi sapne dekh rahe ho....................... chalo ab muh kholo hum khila dete hai........

veer:nahi mein khud kha sakta hoon

antara:cup chap muh kholo

veer apna muh kholta hai aur antara use khana khilati hai

veer:acha tumne khaya

antara:nahi ab jaakar khaenge

veer:khud ne bhi to nahi khaya chalo ab mein tumhe khilaonga

antara:hum pure hosh mein hai hum khud jakar kha lenge

veer:meine keh diya na mein khilaonga matlab khilaonga............................ye lo muh kholo

then veer antara ko khana khilata hai

antara:bas humne kha liya acha chalo ab so jao hum thali rakh kar aate hai

veer nakiya utha kar neeche jaane lagta hai

antara:kahaan jaa rahe ho

veer:neeche sone

antara:are koi baat nahi aaj tum upar so jao hum jaakar neeche so jaenge

veer:nahi tum aaram se upar sona aur vaise bhi mujhe ab aadat ho gayi hai

antara:tum aaj thak gaye ho na to upar hi so jao aur vaise bhi hume pata hai tumhe neeche neend nahi aati raat bhar idhar udhar hote rehte ho

veer:nahi koi baat nahi hai aur vaise bhi mujhse jyada tum thaki hui ho

antara:acha humare paas ek aur tarika hai

veer:kya?????? batao


antara bed ke center mein ek parda laga deti hai

veer:ye sab kya hai

antara:dekho abse tum bistar ke us taraf sona aur hum is taraf so jaenge

veer:par antara.....

antara:par var ku6 nahi bas aaj se hum aisa hi karenge aur aage hum ku6 bhi nahi sunana chahte ................................aur ab so jao hum thodi der mein aate hai

veer :theek hai

veer so jaata hai aur antara bhi thodi der baad aakar vahin so jaati hai

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Part-22

next day morning mein sabhi nashta kar rahe hote hai bas sanyo wahaan nahi hoti

veer:are harsh ye sanyo kahaan hai

antara:haan harsh subah se kahin dikhai nahi di kahin tumse jhagada to nahi hua

harsh:nahi meine bhi use nahi dekha

sia:shayad apne kamre mein hogi

dharam:theek hai uska nashta lekar uske kamre mein hi chalte hai

sab apna nashta khatam karke sanyo ke kamre mein pahuchte hai sanyo apne kamre mein bed par leti hui hoti hai harsh uske paas jaata hai

harsh:kya baat hai sanyo tum yahaan par kar rahi ho neeche kyon nahi aayi

sanyo:ku6 nahi

harsh:sanyo tum ro rahi ho ...................... akhir baat kya hai

sanyo:hum tumhe khona nahi chahte harsh

harsh:are par kisne kahaan ki tum mujhe kho dogi

sanyo:pitaji ka khat aaya hai

veer:khat kaisa khat???????????

sanyo:usme likha hai ki pitaji ne humari shaadi rajkumar vikram ke saath tay kar di hai

all gets shocked

sia:par vo aisa kaise kar sakte hai

sanyo:vo humare pitaji hai

harsh:nahi aisa nahi ho sakta

sanyo:hum harsh ke alawa kisi se shaadi nahi kar sakte

dharam:tumhari shaadi sirf harsh se hi hogi tum chinta mat karo hum par bharosa rakho

antara:haan sanyo humne tumse wada kiya tha aur hum vo jarur pura karenge

veer:shaadi kab hai

sanyo:3 mahine baad

harsh:teen mahine baad.............. ab hum kya karenge veer

veer:sanyo tumne bataya tha ki ajmer aur kannauj ki dushmani ka karan vo chamtkari talwar thi

harsh:haan to

veer:to hum vo talwar dhundenge

sanyo:par humare paas waqt nahi hai

dharam:vo sab tum hum par chod do

veer:ab apni shakal sudhao aur neeche aa jao

sanyo:theek hai tum sab chalo hum aate hai

sab veer ke kamre mein masti kar rahe hote hai tabhi nivriti aati hai

nivriti:are tum sab ke sab yahin ho

veer:are maa aap kya koi kaam tha

nivriti:haan vo awadhi se ek patra aaya hai

sia:awadhi se???????????????

antara:kya likha hai usme

nivriti:maharaj ne bulaya hai rajkumari sia aur antara ko

dharam:par kyon???????????????

nivriti:are shaadi hai tum dono ki 10 din baad tayariyan bhi to karni hai

veer:par antara ko kyon

nivriti:are vo bhi to uski madad karegi na is sab mein

antara:theek hai maa to hum niklne ki tayariyan karte hai....................chalo sia

sia:haan chalo

sia aur antara jaakar tayaariyan kane lagte hai aur agle din awadhi ke liye niklate hai dharam aur veer unke jaane se bahut dukhi hote hai par kya kare aakhir judaai to sahani hi padegi ku6 aisa hi haal sanyo ka bhi tha kyonki harsh bhi to chala gaya tha veer ko antara ke jaane ka itna bura lagta hai ki vo us din khana bhi nahi khata aur apne kamre mein chala jaata hai

veer apne kamre mein bed par baitha hota hai use antara ki yaad aa rahi hoti hai

veer(thinking):pata nahi aaj pehli baar antara ke jaane par itna dukhi hua hoon ye mujhe ho kya raha hai

veer ko vo unki wedding night yaad aati hai jab antara ne use takiya de mara tha aur use neeche sona pada tha vo sab yaad karke veer ke face par ek pyari si smile aa jati hai par uske baad vo phir se dhukhi ho jata hai aur sone lagta hai but uski nazar us parde par padti hai jo antara ne lagaya tha vo us raat ko bhi yaad karta hai jab antara ne use khana khilaya tha aur every moment jo usne antara ke saath bitaya tha vo sab yaad aata hai aur vo saari raat so nahi pata

on the other hand in awadhi

antara pehle to apne maa aur pitaji se ji bhar ke baate karti hai phir jab vo raat mein sone jaati hai to use yaad hi nahi rehta ki vo aryanagar me nahi awadhi me hai

antara:ye veer bhi na pata nahi kya samjhata hai apne aap ko humne to parda lagaya tha aur isne hata diya..................................

aur phir ek dam se use yaad aata hai ki vo awadhi me hai aur parda usne aryanagr me lagaya tha she also gets sad and remembers the night and every moment spend with veer from the very first day of their meeting when they were small kids

days passed like this and finally 5 days were left in dharam's and sia's wedding nivriti ko ab awadhi shagun lekar jana tha par uski tabiyat kharab ho jaati hai aur vo ye kaam sanyo ko de deti hai sanyo apne kamre mein awadhi nikalne ki tayari kar rahi hoti hai to dusri aur veer dharam ke kamre mein jata hai

veer:dharam kya kar rahe ho

dharam:ku6 bhi to nahi kyon kya hua koi kaam hai

veer:dharam...................tumhe pata hai...............sanyo haina vo awadhi jaa rahi hai................

dharam:to kya kare hum

veer:kya tumhe sia se nahi milna

dharam:ji nahi kyon aapko antara se milna hai kya

veer:haan dharam chalo na awadhi chalte hai maza aaega pichli baar ki tarah

dharam:awadhi na baba na.................pichli baar badi mushkil se bache the aur is baar pakad me aaye to bua to tumhe to maaregi hi maaregi hum bhi nahi bachenge

veer:are maa ko bataega kaun abhi chalenge aur shaam tak aa jaenge

dharam:nahi veer hum is kaam me tumhara saath nahi denge

veer:ye acha hai jab khud ko jana tha to mujhe le gaye aur ab mein chalne ko keh raha hoon to mana kar rahe ho

dharam:par veer............

veer:koi baat nahi dharam ...................... galti meri hi hai ...........me sochta tha mera bhai mera har kaam me saath dega par tum.................... rehne do mein nahi jaonga awadhi.....

dharam:veer naraz kyon hote hai.....................acha theek hai hum tayaar hai

veer: sachi mein tum duniya ke sabse ache bhai ho

dharam:par chalenge kaise

veer:sanyo kis din kaam aaegi

dharam:par kya vo manegi

veer:jab tumhe mana liya to sanyo kya cheez hai

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