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Posted: 17 November 2009 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
Part-7

veer along with sia makes a plan to scare antara but unfortunately when they were planing dharam hears each and every thing

dharam:veer hum tumhe aisa nahi karne denge
sia:par dharam hum dono sirf mazak karenge
dharam:rajkumari sia aap bhi is nalayak ki baaton mein aa gayi
sia:hum to sirf maza lene ke liye ye sab kar rahen hai
dharam:par hume ye sab kuch theek nahi lag raha
sia:dekho aap ko agar hum par bharosa hai to aap bhi humara saath denge
dharam:par.........
sia:par var kuch nahi haan ya na
dharam:theek hai par ek baat bataiye ki aap pehle to itni seedhi thi ab aap itni natkhat kaise ho gayi
sia:vo kya hai na antara humari behen hai to uski aadate hum mein bhi aati jaa rahi hain
dharam:acha ye batao hume kya karna hoga
veer:kuch jyada nahi ek saadi pehnani hogi
dharam:veer kya tum pagal ho gaye ho hum aur
sia:dharam humare liye
dharam:theek hai
veer:to tum aur sia andar antara ke kamre mein jaoge aur mein bahar se darawani aawaj nikalunga

in the night sia gets ready and veer is waiting for dharam and then dharam comes

veer:kahaan reh gaye the itni der laga di
dharam:saadi pehnane mein tym lag gaya
veer:vaise dharam..................................tum kaafi ache lag rahe ho ek kala teeka bhi laga lo kahin kisi ki nazar na lag jaye
dharam:veer tumhe to hum baad mein dekhenge

all three of them goes towards antara's room

on dat night sia was looking very beautiful and all the way dharam was just staring her aur tabhi ek hawa ka jhoka aata hai aur sia ke baal uske muh par aa jate hai dharam apne haatho se uske baal hatata hai aur sia bhi uski aankho ki gaharai mein doob jati hai

on the other side veer aage chalta jaata hai aur kuch der baad use pata chalta hai ki sia aur dharam to uske saath aaye hi nahi aur vo unhe doondne ke liye nikalta hai veer dhekta hai ki vo dono ek doosre ki aankhomein khoye hue hai

veer:oooooooooooohhhhhhh
dharam:veer tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho tum bhool gaye hum yahaan kisliye aaye hai
veer:achha bache hum bhool gaye aur tum jo..........
dharam:nahi veer chalo chalte hai
sia:dharam vaise tum to aaj sach mein achhe lag rahe ho ek dam cartoon
dharam:aur ye sab is veer ki vajah se
veer:meine thode hi na kaha tha haan karne ko(khud to ladki pe flat hokar haan kar di aur ab hume keh raha hai)
dharam:(he bhagwan khash humne sia ki baat na mani hoti to aaj hume ye saadi to nahi pehnani padti)
sia:dharam kya soch rahe ho
dharam:kuch bhi to nahi..........................chaliye chalte hai

teeno antara ke kamre ki aur jaate hai aur veer antara ke bed ke neech chup jata hai aur darawani aawaz nikalne lagta hai jis se antara ki neend khul jati ahai aur uth kar beth jati hai aur tabhi do auratein safed saadi pehne uski aur aati ahi dono ka chehra unke balo se dhaka hota hai

aurat:chalo antara hum tumhe lene aaye hai
antara:par ...........par tum log.............ho kaun
aurat:tumhari maut
antara:par.............tummmm......hume kyon marana chahti ho
aurat:kyonki tumne humare kamre mein aakar hume pareshan kiya tha
antara:humne kab........
aurat:ab chalo

aur veer neeche betha betha darawani aawaze nikalta rehta jis se mahol kafi darawana ho jata hai

tabhi achanak dharam ko cheenk aa jati hai aur unka khel bigad jata ye dekh kar dharam to bhag jata hai apr veer vahin phans jata hai aur sia bhi vahin ruk jati hai

antara:sia tum ............ tumne ye sab kyon kiya ........... humne to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki tum aisa karogi
sia:humari baat to sun lo
antara:tumhe pata hai na hume kitna dar lagta hai insab cheezo se phir bhi tumne aisa kiya agar hume kuch ho jata to
veer:par isme sia ki koi galti nahi hai ye sab humne kiya hai
antara:veer par kyon kiya pata hai hum kitna dar gaye the
veer:hume maaf kar do hume pata nahi tha
antara:veer hum tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakte
veer:par antara
antara:veer chale jao yahaan se hum kuch anhi sunana chahte aur haa ab kabhi huse baat karne ki koshish nat karna
sia:antara vo maafi mang raha hai na maaf kar do
antara:sia hume is waqt akela chod do

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Posted: 17 November 2009 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
Part-8

vo dono chale jaate hai aur subah jab sabka lunch karne ka tym hota hai antara kitchen mein jaati hai aur veer ke khane mein bahut saara namak aur mirchi daal deti hai par veer us se maafi mangne ke liye uske peeche aata hai aur ye sab dekh leta hai aur vo apni thali badal deta hai
sabhi kahana khane bethate hai

antara:veer lo khana khao
sia:kya baat hai aaj to....
antara:kyon tum dharam ko khana khila sakti ho to hum veer ko nahi khila sakte
dharam:hume kab khilaya
sia:to ab khila dete hai lo dharam khana khao
antara ne jis khane mein namak aur mirch milayi thi vo dharam ke pass chali jati hai aur antara ka plan fail ho jata hai aur doosri taraf dharam ka mirchi ki vajah se boora haal ho jata hai veer apna khana khata hai

veer:dharam mein soch raha tha ki itne dino se horse riding nahi ki kyon na aaj chale
dharam:haan veer theek hai tum chalo mein aata hoon
veer:mujhe bhi abhi kuch kaam hai thodi der baad chalte hai

antara phir se ek plan banati hai vo jakar veer ke ghode ko kuch khila deti hai jisse vo veer ko apne upar se gira de

veer aur dharam dono nikalte hai aur ek khai ke paas aakar veer ka ghoda bekabu ho jata hai aur veer ko girane ki koshish karta hai par veer puri koshish karta hai apne aap ko bachane ki par ghoda use gira deta hai aur vo khai mein gir jaata hai

dharam:veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..........

veer ko bahut chote lagti hai aur vo behosh ho jata hai dharam veer ko lekar mahal pahuchta hai aur usi waqt sia aur antara apne kamre se bahar niklte hai aur unhe dekh lete hai
sia:dharam ye veer ko kya ho gaya
dharam:pata nahi aaj veer ke ghode ko kya ho gaya usne veer ko ghai mein gira diya aur dekho na veer ko abhi tak hosh bhi nahi aaya
sia:dhram tum chinta mat karo veer ko kuch nahi hoga
dharam veer ko lekar uske kamre mein jata hai aur vaid ji ko bulata hai

dharam:vaid ji veeer ko hosh kyon nahi aa raha
vaid ji:beta iske sir par bahut ghari chote aayi hai
dharam:veer theek to ho jaega
vaid ji:beta abhi kuch bhi nahi kaha jaa sakta ab to bhagwan hi kuch kar sakte hai
antara vahaan se bhaag kar mandir jaati hai
antara:bhagwan veer ko theek kar dijiye humari galti ki saza hume de dijiye par veer ko theek kar dijiye .humne to sirf mazak mein aisa kiya tha humara veer ko nuksan pahuchane ka koi maksad nahi tha
aur jor jor se ghanti bajane lagti hai jis se uske haatho se khoon aane lagta hai tabhi sia vahaan ati hai
sia:antara tum yaahaan kya kar rahi ho
antara:veer kaisa hai
sia:abhi bhi use hosh nahi aaya
antara:bhagwan hum kasam khate hai ki jab tak veer ko hosh nahi aata hum na to kuch khaenge aur na hi kuch pienge

dono mahal ki aur jaati hai

antara veer ke room mein jaati hai
antara:dharam tum jaakar aaram kar lo hum veer ke paas rukte hai
dharam:theek hai

dharam chala jaata hai
antara veer ke paas bethti hai aur vahin so jaati hai
subah jab antara uthti hai aur vahaan se jaane ke liye khadi hoti hai to dekhti hai ki veer ne uska haath pakad liya hai
antara ke dil mein kuch kuch hota hai aur vo vahin veer ke pas beth jati hai

(yahaan se shuruat hoti hai ek aur luv story ki)

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Part-9

dharam veer ke kamre mein jata hai
dharam:antara aap jakar dhoda aaram kar lijiye hum veer ke paas bethte hai
itne mein ek sipahi aata hai
sipahi:rajkumar dharam aapko maharaj bula rahe hai
antara:dhram aap jaiye hum theek hai
dharam:theek hai agar kisi cheez ki zaroorat pade to bahar sevak khade hai unhe keh dijiyega
antara:ji
dharam chala jata hai aur tabhi veer ko pani ki pyas lagti hai
veer:pani............pani
antara:ye lo
antara veer ko pani pilati hai aur veer ko hosh bhi aa jata hai
veer:tum......tum .....yahaan kya kar rahi ho..........aur.........................
.aaaaaaaa
antara:kya hua
veer:kuch nahi
antara:ye lo veer ye dawa pi lo
veer:hume tumhari koi zaroorat nahi hai hum khud pi lenge
antara:to theek hai pi lo
veer finds that his hands are badly injured and he can not hold the glass but still he tries but fails then
antara:rehne do apni takat kisi aur din dikha lena lo ab chup chap ise pi lo
veer:antara ko dekhta rehta hai aur tabhi vo notice karta hai ki antara ke hatho se khun nikle raha hai
veer:tumhe to chot lagi hai jakar lep laga lo nahi to ghav aur bad jaega
antara:hume tumhari nasihat ki zaroorat nahi hai aur haan hum abhi aate hai tum bed se mat hilna theek hai

jaise hi antara jaane lagti hai veer bed se uthne ke liye try karta hai aur gir jata hai
veer:aaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....
antara comes running
antara:kya hua .................humne mana kiya tha na ki bed se mat uthna .............kya tum kabhi humari baat nahi maan sakte
par veer ke sir se khun niklne lagta hai aur antara dar jati hai aur jaldi se dharam ko bulati hai

aaj ke liy itna next update will be on wednesday

precap: veer recovering n nok jhok of veer n antara

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part-10

dharam:kya hua rajkumari antara

antara:dharam dekho na veer ke sir se khoon nikle raha hai

dharam:par ye hua kaise

antara:tumhare bhai ne kasam khai hai ki ye humari baat kabhi nahi manega

dharam:aap hume puri baat bataeye

antara:dharam humne is se kaha rha ki bed se na uthe phir bhi ye humare jaate hi bed se uth gaya aur gir gaya jis se khun aane lag gaye

dharam:veer tum samjhte kyon nahi ho tumhe bahut gahari chotein aayi hai aur tumhe complete bed rest chahiye

veer:par dharam............

dharam:par var kuch nahi humein kuch dino ke liye bahar jana hai aur tab tak antara tumhara khayal rakhegi aur tumhe uski har baat manani padegi samjhe

veer:dharam......................... humari baat to sun ..........................aaaaaaaaaaaaaa

dharam:kya hua veer

veer:dharam mera sir fata ja raha hai

dharam:antara tum iska dhyan rakho hum abhi vaid ji ko lekar aate hai

dharam jaldi se jakar vaid ji ko lekar aata hai par tab tak veer behosh ho jata hai

dharam:vaid ji veer theek to hai na

vaidji:haan rajkumar bas inki sir ki chote par phir se chot lag jaane ki vajah se behosh ho gaye hai thodi der mein hosh aa jaega

dharam:rajkumari antara humein ab niklna hoga aap veer ka dhyan rakhna aur haan sia ka bhi

kuch der baad veer ko hosh aata hai

veer:dharam......................dharam.
..................dharam.........

antara:haan veer bolo

veer:dharam ...............kahaan ....hai?

antara:dharam to chala gaya use der ho rahi thi aur ye dawai pi lo aur vaid ji ne tumhe jyada bolne se mana kiya hai

veer bethta hai aur antara use dawai pilati hai aur veer antara ko dekhne lagta hai aur uski nashili aankho mein kho jata hai

antara:veer veer aise kya dekh rahe ho

veer:tumhe.........mera matalab hai ye dekh raha hoon ki kya tum vahi antara ho jisne mere ghode ko........

antara:tum jante the

veer:mein sirf ye janta tha ki tumne mere ghode ko kuch khilaya hai par ye nahi jaanta tha ki tum mujhe marna chahti ho

antara rone lagti hai

antara:veer hum tumhe nuksan nahi pahuchana chahte the aur humne to kabhi soch bhi nahi tha ki aisa ho jaega veer hume maaf kar do.........hume maaf kar do.....

veer:antara rona band karo meine tumhe maaf kar diya

antara:hum vaada karte hai ki aaj ke baad hum kabhi aisa mazak nahi karenge

veer:vaise tum rote hue bilkul achhi nahi lagti

antara:aur tum chup hi achhe lagte ho

veer:aeeeeeeeeee.............chipkali kahin ki

antara:tumne hume chipkali kaha to tum............kankhajoore

veer:dekho......mujhe kankhajoora mat bulao tumhare liye achha nahi aaaaaaaaaaa.....

antara:kya hua??????????

veer:dara diya na

antara:ab tum chup chap so jao

veer:theek hai aur tum bhi jaakar kuch der aaram kar lo

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part-11

kai din beet gaye veer bhi ab theek ho gaya tha.Antara ne veer ke puri tarah theek ho jaane tak uska dhyan rakh isi beech antara ko veer ke saath waqt guzrana achha lagne laga vo use pasand karne lagi thi par vo khud is baat se anjan thi aur aisa hi kuch veer ke saath bhi ho raha tha par abhi bhi dono ne jhagdana band nahi kiya tha dono baatein kam jhagda jyada karte the.
ek din dharam veer ke pass gaya aur

dharam:veer mein soch raha tha ki ............ mein soch raha tha ki.........

veer:dharam tum sochna band karo aur bolna shuru karo

dharam:veer mein soch raha tha ki kyon na sia ko........

veer:dharam tumne mujhe kahin muh dikhane ke layak nahi choda

dharam:ab aisa kya kar diya

veer:humare bhai hokar itna darte ho seedha seedha bolo na ki tum sia ko apne dil ki baat batana chahte ho

dharam:par tumhe kaise pata chala

veer:tum ye bhi bhool gaye ki mein tumhara bhai hoon aur tumhe tumse bhi jyada jaanta hoon aur humara log to humara naam bhi ek saath lete hai to tumhare dil ki baat humse kaise chupi reh sakti hai

dharam:veer par hum

veer:dharam ek kaam karo aaj raat ko use mahal ki chat par bulao aur keh dena jo bhi kehna hai

dharam:koi gadbad to nahi hogi

veer:are kuch nahi hoga

dharam antara ke through sia ko chat par bulata hai raat mein dhandi dhandi hawa chal rahi thi aur chand bhi aaj pura tha aisa lag raha tha jaise ye sabhi do pyar karne walon ki khushi mein sharik hone aaye hai

dharam chat par pahuchta hai aur sia ko wahaan par pata hai

sia:dharam aap gaye bolo kya kaam hai

dharam sia ke pass jata hai

aur sia ka haath pakad leta hai

sia:dharam ye kya kar rahe ho

dharam:sia hum aapse kuch kehna chahte hai

sia:haan dharam bolo

dharam:vo sia hum ............ hum ...................hum.......

sia:dharam aage to bolo

dharam:hum aapse bahut pyar karte hai kya aap..........

sia:haan dharam hum bhi aapse baahut paya karte hai

both of them sit there for the whole night with hands in hands aur khub baate karte hai

subhah dharam goes to meet veer and sia goes to meet antara

dharam:veer veer kahaan ho (dharam finds veer at his bed)
(man mein)abhi tak so raha hai ye kabhi nahi sudhrega

dharam:veer utho na hume zarrori baat karni

veer:dharam dekho hume sone do aur tum bhi jakar so jao vaise bhi tum raat bar nahi soe ho

dharam(surprised):tumhe kaise pata

veer(neend mein):are yaar mujhe sab pata hai aur mein tumahari aadat se vakif hoon

dharam:achha theek hai par suno to

veer irritat ho jata hai uth kar beth jaata hai

veer:bolo

dharam:veer rajkumari sia bhi humse bahut pyar karti hai usi ne kaha

veer:ho gaya ab hum so jae

dharam:jao so jao ab hum tumhe kabhi bhi koi baat nahi batayenge

veer:dharam bura kyon maan rahe ho hum bahut kush hai

same reaction was of antara after hearing sia

thodi der baad awadhi ke maharaj aryanagar aate hai

maharaj dono rajkumariyon ko wapas le jane ke liye aate hai

aryawardhan:aaiye maharaj aaj yahaan ka raasta kaise bhul gaye

maharaj:maharaj aisi koi baat nahi hai darasal hum dono rajkumariyon ko lene aaye hai

aryawardhan:par maharaj dono rajkumariyaan yahaan kush hai aur dharam veer ko bhi unke saath achha lagta hai dono hi bade kush rahte hai

maharaj:par vo dono itne dino se aapke paas reh rahi hai aise achha nahi lagta

aryawardhan:vaise maharaj hum soch rahe the ki kyon na humari dosti ko rishtedari mein badal diya jae

maharaj:aapne to humare man ki baat chin li

aryawardhan:to phir theek hai maharaj hum sia ka haath dharam aur antara ka haath veer ke liye maagte hai

sia apne pitaji se milne vahaan aati hai aur un dono ki baatein sun leti hai aur sia hawa ki tarah antara ko ye baat batane pahuchti hai aur dekhti hai ki dharam veer bhi vahin hai

sia:achha hua aap sab yahi mil gaye hume tum sab ko ek khushkabari sunani hai

antara:kya jaldi batao intezar nahi ho raha hai humse

sia:pitaji ne............pitaji ne..........pitaji ne.........

antara and veer: aage bhi bologi ya nahi

sia:pitaji ne humara rishta dharam ke saath tay kar diya hai

antara:kya sach mein humein lagta hai ki hum to aaj khushi pagal hi ho jaenge

sia:aage to suno

antara:aur bhi hai

sia:haan humare saath saath tumhara aur veer ka rishta bhi tay ho gaya hai

antara and veer:nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
iiiiiiiiiiiii

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Part-12

veer:hum abhi maharaj ko mana kar ke aate hai chalo antara kyonki is se shaadi karne se to achha hoga ki hum khudkhushi kar le

antara:haan hum bhi is se shaadi karke apni zindgi narak nahi banana chahte

sia and dharam:to theek hai agar tum dono shaadi nahi karoge to hum dono bhi nahi karenge aur do pyar karne walo ko alag karne ka paap bhi tumhare sir hi aayega soch lo

antara and veer:.............................par...
.........

sia and dharam:par var kuch nahi haan yaa nahi sedha batao

veer and antara:haan..............

antara:veer yahaan se chalo hume kuch baat karni hai

veer and antara goes out of the room

veer:bolo kya hai

antara:dekho veer ye tum bhi jaante ho ki agar humari shaafi hui to na to tum khush reh paoge aur na hi hum

veer:to kya kare naa kar de jis se sia aur dharam ki bhi shadi toot jae

antara:agar na hi karna hota to hum haan nahi karte hum ye soch rahe hai ki kyon na hum dono pyar ka natak karte hai aur jab dharam aur sia ki shaadi ho jaegi to hum dono na kar enge

veer:par agar humari pehle ho gayi to

antara:tum bhi na humesha negative hi socha karo aur aisa hua to dekha jaega philhaal do din baad sagai hai

veer:theek hai ab chale

antara:kahaannnnnnnnnn

veer:andar

antara:bewakuf andar sia aur dharam hai

veer:to kya hua

antara:tum un dono ko akela nahi chod sakte kya

veer:achha batao kahaan chalna hai

antara:narak mein

dono apne apne raaste chale jaate hai
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mahal mein rajkumar veer aur dharam ki sagai ki tayaariyaan jore shore se chal rahi hai

sagai ke din veer dharam ke kamre mein jata hai

veer:dharam tum abhi tak tayaar nahi hue jaldi karo sab tumhara intzaar kar rahe hai

dharam:veer tum to aisi baat kar rahe ho jaise sagai sirf humari hai tumhe tayaar nahi hona kya shakal dekho apni

veer:dharam meri to zabardasti karwa rahe ho isliye mein tayaar ho kar kya karoonga tumhi ho tayaar aur jaldi aa jao

veer bhi apne roommein jaakar thoda bahut tayaar ho hi jata hai thodi der baad dono center hall mein milte hai

dharam:to veer aap to tayaar hi nahi ho rahe the

veer:vo to aise hi ho gaya taki maa ko shak na ho ki har baar to bina kisi baat ke bhi tayaar rehta aur aaj sagai ke din hi tayaar nahi hai

dharam:achaa bete ye baat hai hume to pata hi nahi tha

veer:ab pata chal gaya na

intne mein sia tayaar hokar aati hai aur dharam use dekhta hai to bas dekhta hi reh jaata us din sia ne laal lehnga pehna tha vo jab stairs se utar rahi thi to aisa lag raha tha jaise koi pari jannat se utar rahi ho dharam chahkar bhi apni nazar sia se nahi hata pa raha tha

veer:dharam maa bula rahi hai

dharam :no reply

veer:dharam.........................dhar
am...................

dharam:no reply

veer dharam ko dekhta hai phir wahaan dekhta hai jahaan se sia utar rahi thi
veer dharam ka dhyan whaan se hatane ke liye use hilata hai

veer:mere bhai aise mat dekho bhabhi ko nazar lag jaegi

dharam:veer hum kya karein humari nazar hi nahi hat rahi hai

veer:vaise vo lag kafi sundar rahi hai
(aur phir se sia ki aur dekhta hai tabhi sia ke peeche se antara aati hai usne neela lehnga pehna tha aur aur hawa ki wajah se uske baal uske chehre par aa rahe the jinse vo pareshan ho rahi thi veer ne jab use dekha to vo use dekhta reh gaya aur uske baalon ko hatane ke liye vo uski aur jaane lagta hai

dharam:veer kahaan jaa rahe ho

veer:no reply

dharam:veer veer (aur peeche se jaakr use pakadta hai tab veer hosh mein aata hai )

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Part-13

dharam:veer kahaan jaa rahe ho

veer:mein kahin bhi to nahi

dharam:tumhe kya lagta hai hume kuch dikhai nahi deta

veer:tum kya keh rahe ho hume kuch samajh nahi aa raha

dharam:achha bete vaise ek baat batao dekho mein to sia se pyar karta hoon to us se nazar nahi hata paya par tumhe kya hua ....................

veer:dharam chup ho jao.............aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jaisa tum soch rahe ho

dharam:par hum to kuch soch hi nai rahe

veer:..........................dharam ab chalo sagai ka mahurat nikal jaega............

dharam:haan haan chalo ha ha ha

sabhi ikadhe hote hai aur phir dharam aur sia ek doosre ko angudhi pehnate hai phir

nivriti:veer tum bhi antara ko angudhi pehnao

veer:ji maa

jab veer antara ko angudhi pehnane wala hota hai tabhi antara apni angudhi gira deti hai aur sabhi angudhi doodne lagte hai

antara jaldi se apni angudhi uthati hai

antara:veer jaldi karo jaldi se angudhi pehno

dono apni apni angudhi khud pehn lete hai

antara and veer:pehan di hume pehna di

uske baad thoda naach gana hota hai

par jaise hi nach gana khatam hone wala hota hai koi wahaan lage jhomar ki rassi ko kaat deta hai us waqt antara jhomar ke neeche hoti hai jhomar jhab neeche gir raha tha to veer ka dhyan us par jaata hai aur ek hero ki tarah vo jump karta hai antara ko wahaan se le jaata hai (i am not able to describe the scene properly but kuch dv ke scene jaisa hi hai)phir veer antara ke neeche aur antara uske upar dono ek doosre ki aankho mein kho jaate hai

sia:antara tum theek to ho

antara:haan sia hum bilkul theek hai

sia:bhagwan ka lakh lakh sukra hai ki tum bach gayi aur tumhe kuch nahi hua

dharam:veer tumhe to chote lagi hai

sia:haan veer ............................... antara veer ko andar le jao aur dawa laga do

antara:theek hai sia .........veer chalo hum dawa laga dete hai

veer:nahi mein theek hoon is sab ki koi jaroorat nahi hai

antara :jaroorat kaise nahi hai (aur uska haath pakadti hai aur use le jaati hai veer bhi use mana nahi kar pata aur bas use hi dekhta rehta hai)

in the room

antara:tumne ye sab kyon kiya agar tumhe kuch ho jata to

veer:aur agar tumhe kuch ho jaata ...................mera matlab hai ki agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to sia aur dharam ki shaadi bhi toot jaati na

antara:acha hota

veer:acha hota matlab

antara:kuch nahi ab tum aaram karo

veer:tum bhi thak gayi hogi tumhe bhi aaram kar lena chahiye

antara aur veer apne apne kamaro mein so jaate hai aur tabhi dharam veer ke kamre mein aur sia antara ke kamre mein jaati hai

sia:antara utho hume ek jarrori baat batani hai

antara abhi bhi so rahi thi

sia:antara utho na hume baat karni hai

antara:sia abhi hum bahut thak gaye hai subah baat kaenge

sia:nahi bahut jaroori baat hai

antara beth jaati hai:bolo kya baat hai jaldi karo hume phir se sona bhi hai

sia :pehle jaldi se humare saath veer ke kamre mein chalo

veer ke room dharam us se uthane ki koshish karta hai par veer uthe to kaise kyonki dharam ke hiss se ki neend bhi to vo hi leta hai

dharam:veer utho na

sia:kya hua dharam

dharam:dekho na sia ye nalayak uth hi nahi raha

antara:dharam tum hato hum uthate hai ise

antara paas hi rakha paani us par daal deti hai

veer:dharam(he shouts)

dharam:humne kuch nahi kiya jo kuch kiya antara ne kiya hai

antara:aakhir sia ne humari neend kharab ki to hum tumhe kaise sone de sakte hai

veer:tumhari himaat ......

dharam :ladna chalu mat karna

sia:dekho hum dono ye baatana chahte the ki tum dono ki shaadi ki tarik tai ho gayi hai

antara:aur tumhari

dharam:humari bhi ho gayi hai par tum dono ki pehle hai

veer and antara:kabbbbbbbbbbbbb????????????????

sia:ek mahine baad sharad purnima ke din

veer:aur tum dono ki

dharam:humari us ke 15 din baad hai

sia:hume jo batana tha bata diya ab tum dono so jao

ye kehkar dharam aur sia chale jaate hai

antara:neend uda kar keh rahe hai so jao

veer:are meri to zindgi barbad ho jaegi tumse shaadi karke aur socho positive

antara:to tumhe kya lagta hai meri aabad hogi

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next day in the morning rajyasabha aur maharaj aryawardhan sabha mein bethe the

rajyasabha:maharaj ab hume lagat hai ki dharam aur veer me se hume kisi ek ko chun lena chahiye taki vo aage chal kar aryanagar ka singhasan sambhal sake

aryawardhan:to aap sabhi kya chahte hai

rajyasabha:hum sabhi ye chahte hai ki aaj se un dono ki har baat ka dhayan rakha jae aur unke har faisale aur nirnay par bhi nazar rakhi jae aur baad mein hum ye sab baaton ka dhayan rakhakkar hi faisala batenge ki kaun aage chal kar maharaj banega

aryawardhan:jaisa aap sabhi theek samjhe

itne mein awadhi ke maharaj aate hai unke aate hi sabhi rajyasabha ke sadsya chale jaate hai

maharaj:ab hume aur humari betiyon ko jaane ki agya de maharaj

aryawardhan:ji maharaj vaise bhi ab un dono ko kuch samay baad yahi aana hai

maharaj sia aur antara awadhi ke liye niklte hai
kuch dino ke baad awadhi aur aryanagar mein shaadi ki tayaariyan shuru ho jaati hai phir ek din sia antara ke kamre mein jaati hai

sia:antara jaanti ho pitaji aur maa tumhari shaadi ko lekar kitne utsahit hai

antara:(dheere se):kya fayada jiski shaadi hai vo hi kush nahi hai to

sia:kuch kaha tumne

antara:nahi to

sia:achaa tum jaldi se chalo aur apne liye shaadi ka joda aur gahne pasand kar lo

antara:par vo sab to aryanagar se aane wala tha na

sia:haan par humari aur se bhi hum apni behen ko shaadi ka tohfa dena chahte hai

antara:theek hai chalo

in aryanagar dharam veer ke pass jaata hai

dharam:veer kya kar rahe ho

veer:kuch bhi nahi

dharam:to phir tum humare saath chalo aur antara ke liye shaadi ka joda pasand kar lo hume awadhi bhijwana hai

veer:par dharam ye sab to maa karegi naa aur vaise bhi mujhe kya pata us chipkali...............................
....................mera matalab hai rajkumari antara ko kya pasand hai

dharam:haan par hume sia ke liye ek lehnga pasand karna tha uar hum chahte hai ki vo tumhari shaadi ke din use hi pehne

veer:to theek hai na jaakar pasand kar lo mujhe kyon keh rahe ho

dharam:hum akele tum bhi chalo naa

veer:par dharam hume to pasand karna aata hi nahi hai

dharam:theek hai agar tum nahi chaloge to hum bhi nahi jaenge

veer:chalo phir mein chal raha hoon

dono jaate hai wahaan nivriti pehle hi bethi hoti hai

nivriti:veer yahaan aao aur antara ke liye joda pasand kar lo

veer:ji maa

tabhi ek hawa ka jhonka aata hai aur veer ek pal ek liye aankhein band kar leta haiaur jab apni aankhein kholta hai to dekhta hai ki antara uske saamne khadi hai .veer ek ek kar ke lehnge uthata hai aur antara ko dikhata hai par antara ko koi pasand nahi aata phir veer ki nazar ek laal jode par padti hai vo antara ko dikhata hai antara sharma jaati hai aur haan mein apna sia hilati hai phir veer jaise hi apni nazar wahaan se hatata hai aur phirse wahaan dekhta hai to pata hai ki antara wahaan nahi hai

dharam:veer kya hua kahaan kho gaye

veer:kahin bhi to nahi

dharam:veer dekho ye neela lehnga sia par bahut achaa lagega hai naa

veer:haan ab ho gaya ho to chale

.dharam:bua sia ke liye ye neela wala aur antara ke liye.............................. veer kaunsa pasand kiya

veer:ye laal wala

nivriti:theek hai hum bhijwa denge aur ab tum dono jao jaakar aaram kar lo

kai din beet jaate hai aur ab shaadi mein kewal 2 din bache hai aur aryanagar mein haldi ki rasam hai aur sabhi mehman aa chuke hai

veer apne kamre mein betha hai aur dharam uske pas jaata hai

dharam:veer jaldi chalo sab tumhara intzar kar rahe hai

veer:mera par kyon

dharam:are aaj tumhari haldi ki rasam hai chalo bhi

veer:mujhe nahi jaan

dharam:jaana to padega tum jaldi aa jao hum chalte hai ........................................
... veer thoda sambhal ke jaana

veer:kyon ?????????????????

dharam:aaj naa bahut saari auratein tumhe haldi lagaengi

veer:dharam hume nahi jaana hume bachao na

dharam:veer sab intzar kar rahe hai jaldi aa jao ........................... nahi maaf karna intzar kar rahe nahi kar rahi hai

dharam chala jaata hai par kaafi der tak veer neeche hi nahi aata phir dharam use lene uske kamre mein phir se jaata hai par veer wahaan nahi hota dharam pure mahal mein dhoondta hai par vo kahin nahi milta phir vo nivriti ke paas jaata hai

dharam:bua hume to veer kahin bhi nahi mila

nivriti tensed ho kar:kya kahaan gaya hoga

dharam ko veer par hasi aa rahi hoti hai

nivriti :yahaan par veer ka pata nahi hai aur tumhe hasi aa rahi hai

dharam nivriti ko saari baat batata hai jise sunkar vo bhi hase bina nahi reh paati

nivriti:tum yahin ruko hum abhi veer ko lekar aate hai

dharam:ji bua

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