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He guyz myself diksha/sinnie and i am starting a new ff here hope u all will like it............

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Character Sketch

Rajkumar Dharam-eldest son of Maharaj Aryavardhan.Handsome, responsible, down to earth, daring, intelligent, loving, calm are just a few words that describe his persona.He is very protective and loves his brother Veer more than anything.Best in sword fighting

Rajkumar Veer-one year younger than Dharam.Handsome, funny, naughty, short tempered, loving, caring, brave, clever.He doesn't share a good word for girls. He loves Dharam more than anything in the world and is also very protective about his younger brother.Best in archery.

Rajkumari Siya-eldest rajkumari.Sweet, cute, beautiful, calm, loving, caring, innocent, responsible.She is the most beautiful girl in the whole kingdom of Avdhi.Any boy who saw her would want to marry her.She has been in search of her 'Sapno ka rajkumar' since her early childhood.She loves her sister Antara very much and is very kind to her.

Rajkumari Antara-youngest rajkumari.Beautiful, sweet, cute, short tempered, a complete tomboy. She hates boys who think that girls are useless. She is very good at using weapons and is a good warrior. She loves her sisters very much.

Rajkumari Sanyogita-friend of Rajkumar Dharam n Veer.Beautiful, sweet, cute, friendly, loving, caring, gets into tension very easily when she sees anyone in trouble n Rajkumari of Kannauj.[she will be introduced in the story later on when veer n dharam will be getting married]

Rajkumar Harsh-friend of Rajkumari Sia n Antara.Handsome, shy, caring, responsible, calm, brave are the words which describe him best.He is a person with a golden heart.Fastest horse rider and is gud in sword fighting.[he will be introduced in the story later on when veer n dharam will be getting married]

Maharaj Aryavardhan: The king of Aryanagar. A good king, who is fair.

Nivriti: The sister of Aryavardhan. A sweet and kind person. A good aunt for Dharam.n mother of veer

Sia's and Antara's parents: They are a nice set of parents.

Villians shall be introduced later in the story.

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Part-1

This story is of a state named arayanagar.The kngdom of arayanagar was divided in two communities on aryavarts and others shramiks.The Aryavarts were the rulers and shramiks were the labours who were forced to live under miserable condition.The elder brother of king Jaywardhan was very cruel.

pure mahal mein khushiyaan manai jaa rahi hai kyonki aaj bahut saalo baad mahal mein bachoo ki kilkariya gunj rahi thi. Maharani ne ek ladke ko janam diya tha jiska naam tha dharam aur doosri aur maharaj ki behen Nivriti ne bhi ek ladke ko janam diya jiska naam rakha gaya veer

vahin doosri aur awadhi mein bhi do rajkumariyon ka janam hua ek ka naam tha rajkumari sia to doosri ka naam tha rajkumari antara

dono hi rajayo mein aaj ka din sabse khushi ka din tha par koi khush nahi tha to vo the shramik jinhone aryavarton ke kul ko khatam karne ki kasam khayi thi

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Part-2

Five years passed away

maharaj:maharani hum soch rahe the ki kyon na is baar hum awadhi chalte hai vaise bhi bahut dino se maharj se milna bhi nahi hua
maharani:jaisa aap theek samjhe
maharaj:to theek hai hum kal hi chalenge
maharani:ji maharaj vaise hum dharam veer ko dekh kar aate hai vo dono sunege to khush ho jayenge

dharam:veer hum tumhe nahi chodenge
veer:chodne ke liye pakadna bhi padata hai
dharam:veer humari kitab de do nahi to hum pitaji se keh denge
veer:tum aur kuch kar bhi nahi sakte

rani goes there
rani:dharam:kya hua
dharam:ma dhekho na veer hume pareshan kar raha hai
rani:par veer to chup chap kitab pad raha hai
dharam:nahi ma vo to bas natak kar raha hai
rani:dharam ab mazak chodo aur apne kapade jamao hume kal awadhi jana hai
veer:hum bhi chalenge
rani:haan haan hum sab chalenge
rani goes from there
veer:dhekha dharam
dharam:hum tumhe maar dalenge veer

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Part-3

next day all of them leaves for awadhi

veer:dharam humne suna hai ki wahaan par do sundar rajkumariyaan hai
dharam:to hum kya kare
veer:agar tumhe unme se koi pasand aayi to
dharam:veer yahi sawal hum tumse bhi pooch sakte hai
veer:mat poocho kyonki ye mera sawal hai tum ise chura nahi sakte

rani:achha theek hai ab yahin bedhe rahoge ya andar bhi chaloge
dharam and veer along with all family memebers enters the palace of awadhi

rani of awadhi:aayiye hum sab aap sabhi ka intzar kar rahe the
veer:vo sab to theek hai par rajkumariyan kahaan hai
dharam:ooooooooooooo
veer:chup ho jao
rani of awadhi:vo dono andar hai jao aap dono vahin chale jao
both of them goes there and suddenly rajkumari sia comes running and collides with dharam and falls.dharam gives his hand to her and just start looking in her eyes on the other side veer enters the room and slips there becoz of oil placed on the floor

antara:............................buddhu dekh kar bhi nahi chal sakte
veer:to ye sab tumne kiya
antara:haan humne kiya kya karoge
veer:hum tumhe maar dalenge
antara:pehle pakad ke to dikhao

veer uske peeche baghta hai use pakad ne ke liye par vo phir se raste mein kanche gira deti hai jis se veer gir jaata hai aur use chot lag jati hai

rani of awadhi:antara ye kya kiya apne agar rajkumar veer ko jayada chot lag jati to
antara:lag jati tab dekh lete par use nahi lagi na to hum jaa rahe hai
rani of awadhi:antara ye kya keh rahi ho janti ho na vo humare mehman hai
antara:par ma isme humari kya galti hai ab hume kya pata tha ki uski aankein nahi hai button hai aur vaise hum jaa rahe hai sia humara intezar kar rahi hai

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part-4

sia is thinking of dharam and antara enters the room

antara:sia pata tumhe aaj us rajkumar veer ki vajah se hume maa ki daant khani padi humara to man kar raha hai ki hum use maar dale
sia:no reply
antara:hume vo rajkumar veer phooti aankh bhi nahi bhata.......sia sia tum sun rahi ho hum kya keh rahe hai
sia;haan kuch kaha tumne
antara:to hum itni der se uhi bak bak kar rahe hai aur aap he ki kisi ke khayalo mein khoi hui hai
sia:aisa nahi hai achha tum batao ki kya keh rahi thi
antara:kuch bhi nahi....................tum batao kiske khayalo mein khoi hui thi us rajkumar dharam ke
sia:humbhala uske bare mein kyon sochne lage
antara:vo to tum hi jano
sia:chalo ab bahut der ho gayi so jao
subah dharam veer aur unka parivar vapas aryanagar jane ke liye tayar hota hai tabhi sia dharam se milne pahuchti hai
sia:dharam vo humne suna ki tum sab aaj jaa rahe ho kya tum log aur kuch din nahi rook sakte
dharam: nahi pitaji ne kaha he to hume jaana hi parega
sia:dharam:agar hume tumhari yaad aayi to
dharam:to tum humara ye kada dekh lena achaa agar hume tumhari yaad aayi to
sia:to tum humari ye payal le jao aur tum ise dekh lena
sabhi aryanagar vapas lot te hai
aur isi tarah dus saal bit jaate hai aur dharam veer ab 15 saal ke ho chuke hai
aur mahal mein un dono ki bday party ki tayaariyan ho rahi hai
in a room a smart handsome sa ladka kaanch ke samne khada hai aur tayaar ho raha hai he is dharam and then ek cute smart sa ladka aata hai and he is veer
veer:dharam:tum na ladkiyon ki tarah tayar hone mein kitna tym lagate ho sab humari hi galti hai agar vbachpan me hum tumhe rajkumari sia se nahi milvate to shayad aaj tum mein ladkiyon aadat nahi aati
dharam:veer vaise ab ye sia beech mein kahan se aagai
veer:vo humare beech se hati hi kab thi jo phir se beech mein aajaye
dharam;kya kehna chahte ho
veer:sach keh raha hoon humesha to uski payal apne gale se laga kar ghumte rahte ho
dharam:veer chup karo kuch bhi bolte rahte ho
veer:ab vaise rajkumari ji aapka sajna ho gaya ho to chale

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part-5

dharam:veer tumhe apni aankho ka ilaj karva lena chahiye
veer:aur tumhe apne dil ka
dharam:aaj tum bday vale din humse maar khana chahte ho kya
veer:nahi mein to mithai khaonga vaise tum chaho to kha sakte ho

veer vahaan se bhag jata hai aur dharam uske peeche peeche bagta hai aur jaise hi vo main hall mein pahuchta hai vo ek ladki se bhid jata hai
ladki:dekh kar nahi chal sakte
dharam:hume maaf kar dijiye vo darasal hum
ladki:pata nahi tum jese nokaro ko kyon rakha hai maharaj ne
dharam:dekhiye hum nokar
ladki:rehne do ab hume kuch nahi sunana vaise bhi hum yahaan rajkumar dharam veer se milne aaye hai aur tum jaiso ke muh nahi lagna chahte
dharam:vaise

itne mein ek ladki aati aur

2 girl:sia tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho chalo rajkumar dharam veer ke pass chalte hai
sia:chalo antara isne to humara saara mud hi kharab kar diya
dharam :rajkumari sia
sia:haa to
dharam:hum rajkumar dharam hai aur hum jiske peeche baag rahe the vo veer tha

all of them were together and happy

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part 6

sia:woh hume maaf kar dijiye humse pehachan me galti hogayi
dharam:nahi iski koi zarurat nahi hai galti ho jati hai
sia pull antras hand n tells antra tumhe nahi lagta tumhe mafi mangni chahiye
antra: pagal wagal ho gayi ho kya antra ne na kisise mafi mangi hai aur nahi kisi se mange gi
veer interfiors in between yeh ghamndi kya mafi mangegi
dharam veer chupkaro yeh humare mehman hai
siya rehane dijiye galti antra ki hi thi
dharam nahi galti veer ki thi use aisa nahi kehana chahiye tha
siya nahi.....antra interfiors ab hum chale andar
dharam ha chaliye hum apko batate hai aap dono ka kamra
veer par galti meri nahi thi
dharam interfiors ab chale

WHEN THEY WERE LEAVING
dharam and siya were staring each other and walking then veer cums n interfiors age dekho wo kehate hai ha ha maaf kardo chal rahe hai
AT that time antra holds veers hand and pulled him backwards

ANTRA tumhara dimag kharab hogaya hai. TUM undono ko akela nahi chod sakte kya,dekh nahi sakte wo dono kitna khush hai ek sath

then veer pull his hands backawards and says
Tumse acha mujhe pata hai ki wo dono eksath bahut khush hai par maharaj ne dekh liya to.....
antra cut his words

YEH hume bhi pata hai par unhe ek din to pata hi chalna hai na ki wo ek doosre ko chate hai

n then VEER try to speak some words but ANTRA laughs n says alwida with gr8 attitude

veer says in his mind JAB HUM TUMHARE MEHAL AAYE THE TAB TUMNE MUJHE BAHUT PARESHAN KIYA THA NA AB AGE AGE DEKHO HOTA HAI KYA

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