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my naksh ff(part 4 edited completely) (Page 5)

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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee update and do continue soon Tongue
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plz update soon....
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Hello frds i m back and here is part5
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Hi friends sorry for delay.i was bit busy .i was down with typhoid and then my sis marriage.heres part 5 .naitik was waiting in his room.he says oh god yeh akshara bhi na kafi intezaar karwati hai.mohit is right that these girls always want attention thats why they make theis husband 2 wait for them.soon akshara enters the room.she laughs at naitik.naitik turns .he says whats the funny part that ur giggling.aksh says nothing.then naitik goes and grab aksh in his arms n says nothing.akshara says naitik what r u doing.he says nothing.both of them starts laughing.then naitik comes closer 2 him .he is so close to her that aksharas body shakes.she gets up and goes near to the window shyly but with a smile on her face.then naitik also goes there.he just turned her then aksh suddenly hugs him.naitik holds her tightly nd says i was missing this there in shimla but aksh says she was missing him.suddenly wind started blowing very fast as a sign of rain.the sound of thunder feard aksh so she holds him very tightly.naitik also holds her tightly as if he is calming akshara.soon the rain started akshara release from him nd goes near 2 the window.she was enjoying rain then naitik says lets go to the terrace.seeing no body outside both goes to the terrace.aksh starts dancing in joy naitik sees her and is happy 2 see her like this he keeps on staring then aksh grabs naitik and says u also enjoy the rain.after spending 1 hr in rain they both come down to their room.in the room naitik closes the door.naitik has something in his mind.he says akshara first give me my clothes 2 change then u do.aksh says ok.when aksh gives his cloth then naitik says help me out.aksh then helps him.naitik in his naughty mind holds akshara nd says i will not leave u like this he then switch off the light and then starts pulling akshara saree.akshara says what r u doing.he says ssshhhhhh.well frnd i stop here now u guess what will happen next lets make it interesting now its up 2 u all u say what should be next nd whose will be best i ll post that part.it would be really fun so try it.

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nice part dear
i think that ur imagination of writing another part would be better than anyone else
so u should only write next part
cont, soon
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very well written.......

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