well friends thank u for u'r response.i m glad that u"ll liked first part of the ff. today i will write part 2 and at about 7 in the evening i ll write part 3 also.in my school i got 4 period free so utilised the time in writing part 2 and half of part 3.tomorrow i 'll post 2 part more.her comes part 2
the next morning in singhanias house-
while coming from her bedroom gm went to nakshs room.she decided that if akshara won't have wake up then she is not only going to scold akshara but she will complain this to rajshri too.bm also thought the same way.but they both were surprised to see that akshara was reciting doha.bm &gm were surprised to see her because they felt may be akshara wont wake up early as she was late yesterday.dj was silent in a bad mood only he came to puja but when he heard the ramcharitmanas dohas from akshara he felt very refreshing his all anger vanished.akshara's voice was very revealing the whole singhania house felt refreshing.dj sat beside akshara rb also joined him.gm and bm too sat beside.after akshara completed dj says"bahoo thare mooh se bhajan sunne ko man karat hai" akshara becomes happy.she sang the bhajan.when akshara brings aarti to dj he says"bahoo thare kanth mein maa saraswati niwas karti hain.bahoot hi chokho bahu mili hai mare ko".dj had seen how akshara was feeling guilt so he decided to forgive him.dj says"i am very happy and lucky that i got bahu like you"gm &bm surprisingly looked towards dj.he further says"it is because of u only that today munna has understood his responsibility and he joined our business other wise he said he wanted to do job"rb says akshara u r not my bahoo only but u r my daughter.gm & bm are really shocked as why both dj&rb are praising akshara only when yesterday only she had break the rule.dj says"when first shankhri tai had brought u'r rishta that time only i had decided that u will be my bahoo.u"l only be munna's dulhan.he says u r my bahoo so i don't want to hear any complain from anybody.u should keep this in u'r mind after all u r u r the best bahoo i like very few people and u'r one of those.bahoo ab tujhe is khandan ko aage barahana hai to tujhe is ghar ki har rasm riwajoon ka khaal rakhna hai.chal ab kal ki baat bhool ja aur ab hamare liye khana banao aaj ham apni bahoo ke haath ka khana khayenge.then from the back mohit says haan bhabhi jaldi khana banaiye kyunki ab jab yahan naitik nahi hai to apne is devar ko hi khana khilaiye aakhir saiyaan nahi to devar hi sahi.dj gives him an angry look then he says raj banna munshijee se hissab dekhna hai as soon dj and rb leaves gm an d bm also laeve then rashmi says bhabhi aaj aap superwoman ki tarah khana banana kyunki yeh sarphara mohit aaj khoob khayega.mohit says kyun tere naitik daada ko hi haak hai bhabhi ke haath ka khane ka.then from the back suddenly a voice comes jee haan.mohit says naitik he hugs him then naitik says kyun jab main yahan nahi tha to tu meri biwi se flirt kar raha tha.meriiii biwi ke haath ka khane ka pehla hak sirf mere paas hai baad mein kiss aur ka.naitik then look at akshara who is really surprise to see naitik.
now i stop here at 7 in the evening i "ll post part 3 so pls reply and give u'r suggestion as i really need u'r support.bye
Edited by shiraja - 18 November 2009 at 4:30am