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Posted: 25 March 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
You wrote about Sati? :D

Awesomely written, it makes me melancholic yet his certain return to seek justice for his beloved makes me happy :-)

He wouldn't take his beloved's sacrifice lightly.

He wouldn't be Shiva.

He would be Rudra.


its very often that when you write I almost have no words to describe how mice I felt after reading it and always feel why I can't write anything like that, then I realize MIGHTY SOOKIE, that you are Sookie! :D


I would love to see how Rudra takes revenge for Sati. 


Thanks for updating

A


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Posted: 25 March 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
I loved the beginning of this story. He knew what was going to happen but he did not warn her about it. It was mere acceptance, or a better word would be, just acting according to a predetermined fate in this context.

In a few words, you describe the whole mythology. It's ironic :) In the past people wrote long over descriptive mythological stories and now i'm reading all of it in less than thousand words. The latter has a deeper impact. :) 

Anu

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Not only are these brilliant reads, I'm learning a lot...so thank you for the gift of newfound knowledge. Maybe because I'm not familiar with the stories, I cannot connect as deeply as other readers, yet it's still intriguing, there is magic in your words itself.  

You certainly have given me many new things to research on...heheh. 

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Sookie   Hug...brilliant update ...the way u wrote about Sati's reply and thoughts before she entered the holy fire was awesome ...waiting to read about Rudra's revenge...plz continue...thank u for the PM...TC  Smile





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Posted: 25 March 2012 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written , will edit later

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Posted: 26 March 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
u leave me speechless...Ouch..Clap

u know...when i forst came to know abt what Sati did...i was very little...i did not understand its importance...actually i did not understand it all...Ermm...y would she do that...

but as i grew older...(which i tell u my mom doubts.LOL)..n came across this one again...i did not c a woman...a girl...i saw a wife....the better half of the husband...the one who would do anything for the honour of the one who is the ONE...

he is the virtue...he is the calm ..n the chaos...he is the poorna...

he is the Ardhanarishwar...n when something like this happens...like it is said...he is Rudra....

Sati knew what she had to do...she could not bear the insults thrown his way...they are one...n she can never listen to this world when it comes to Him...

words r failing me...but i will be back...when i think abt it more...Embarrassed

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