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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Beautiful, marvellous!! But why does all your stories end with death??

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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NidheyaCole

Beautiful, marvellous!! But why does all your stories end with death??


Big smile 
All these stories were written five or so years ago and I just picked one of them from the bunch.
I didn't realize the pattern I was setting.
Will post something light next time.

Thanks for your comments!

PS: My FF's are definitely not this strong. They are mostly err....philosophical and borderline preach-y :-)



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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 8:20am | IP Logged
But they are still so beautiful!!

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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 10:04am | IP Logged
hey sookie...thanks for PM
love u r stories as usual...when i read this 2nd part i remembered of some movie i saw...anyways thats not imp..love the way u described it ..
u r stories always seem to have this mystic element in it which makes me hooked to it..just wanna read all but exams!!!!
loved the way u started -hell? and the second part unfolded some other mystery,waiting to read more of it,,,do send me PM...please...
really u r writings tell how much effort u keep in it..five years or six years back..they seem to be fresh for me...
good wishes...
take care..
sri:-)

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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
thanks for the link...i will get back to this soon..pakka

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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 10:09pm | IP Logged

Hey Sookie!

Amazingly written one! A very complex one that is spelt out in a simple way. Absolutely loved this line -
"I was full of bravery today. I know how people think that its only a coward who can think of giving up his life but then why is everyone so damn scared of dying? "
 
 

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Posted: 20 November 2009 at 12:08am | IP Logged
hey sookie..nice story..
 
Being single and alone at 34, can def be depressing.U feel as if no1 wants u,no1 likes u! but then suicide is not always the best option..
 
but it did turn lucky for him, he found the most beautiful gal there..and the way he expressed her beauty was so sweet..n i bet she was impressed..by his flirtin n sweetness..tatz y she wanted 2 meet him..
 
but then did they jump or not?..was a bit confused der..
 
thnx 4 d PM
do write more
 
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Posted: 20 November 2009 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Its beautifully written... i felt that this was a piece ot read and know what writers can do with mere words.. it can take u to another place, another feel.. another surroundings and mostly to know what another individual may can or feel when somethign hits upon.... i was too hoping for heaven but it ended with hell... hmmm.. woudl be reading more of it..and ocmment..
 
great work.. we all know u r extremely talented... thanks for hsaring it with us... sharing knowledge indeed...
tc
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