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pooja_rahil9

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Posted: 12 November 2005 at 4:59am | IP Logged

hi gys

i create the lovely fan fic of suraj and mansavi

plz reply if u like it

the story begun when mansavi has relized that suraj is not the murderer of satya

mansavi: suraj mujhe maaf kar do mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum mere pati ke katil nahi ho or tum arjun or satya ke bade bhai ho.

suraj: koi baat nahi mansavi shyaad mere kismat me hi ye sab likha tha par mujhe is baat ki khushi hai ki meri sabse acchhi dost ab mujhe katil nahi samjhti.

mansavi: par suraj tum sabko bata kyon nahi dete ki tum mammi ji ( our so kol shakku) ke bade bete ho, ye to tumhara hakk banta hai or phir satya bhi to ye hi chhate the.

suraj: nahi mansavi jab tak ma mujhe khud sabke saamne sweekaar nahi kar leti or me satya ke katil tak nahi pahuch jaata tab tak me kisi ko kuch nahi baatuunga.

mansavi: suraj kitna acchaa insaan hai or mene use kitna bura aadmi samjha (apne mann me)

now day by day they r becoming close to each other

and one day by any circumstances they have got married

on their suhhagraat

suraj: mansavi mujhe pata hai ki mene jo kuch bhi kiya vo thik nahi kia par mansavi me tumhe u beshara nahi dekh sakta

mansavi: suraj humari shaadi to ho gayi hai par me abhi tak satya ko nahi bhuli ho or na hi kabhi bhool paayungi ,isliye hum pati patni sirf duniyaa ki nazroo me hi hai , satya ke laave me kisi or ki ho hi nahi sakti.

suraj: mansavi ek din me bhi tumhare din me apni ek khaas gagah banakar hi rahunga (apne mann me)

gys next scence i will post soon

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Posted: 12 November 2005 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
good keep going...

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Posted: 12 November 2005 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
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wonderful part
please continue soon

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Posted: 13 November 2005 at 4:31am | IP Logged
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Posted: 13 November 2005 at 7:48am | IP Logged
hey gus
i m continuing my story's next part
plz read it


the story beguns with early mornimg

suraj is ready for office


suraj: are mera towel kaha cala gaya yahi par to rakha tha, mil gaya

now he goes into the bathroom

in a meanwhile mansavi comes from bathroom wore with only towel,
and suraj see her in romentic way for a while, but suddenly he turn his face from fer and mansavi feel very shY and bad


suraj: sorry mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum andar ho

mansavi feel very shy
now suraj moves from there


suraj: are mera suitcase kaha cala gaya yahi par to rakha tha, yera mil gaya

in meanwhile khushi comes there

khushi: uncle meri chocklate kaha hai lagta hai aaj aap meri choclate dena bhool gaye

Suraj: nahi beta me tumhari choclate dena nahi bhoola par pehla tum mujhe papa kaho phir me tumhe tumhari choclate dunga or aaj se tum mujhe sirf papa kehkar hi pukaarongi.

khushi: lekin me aapko papa kehkar kyon pukaaru aap to mere uncle ho na

suraj: nahi aaj se me tumhara papa hoo

khishi: vo kaise

suraj: acchha ye baataaoo ki mansavi tumhari kya lagti hai

khushi: (thoda has kar)mammi

suraj: to isiliye me unka pati hoo or isliye tum mujhe papa kehkar pukaaroongi

khushi: thik hai papa, ab laaoo meri choclate

now they both hug to each other as a good father and daughter

now suraj is going office and suddenly


mansavi: are suraj tum itni galdi office ja rahe hoo nashta to karte jaaoo

suraj: nahi mansavi mujhe jaana hai office me thoda kaam hai (thoda shrama kar)

mansavi: nahi tum abhi nashta karke jaaoo tumne kal bhi thik se nashta nahi kiya tha ( as a only frd , vo ye sab kehti hai)

suraj: ab me tumhari baat kaise taal sakta hoo

now he ready to go office

now its time to evenig
and suraj comes from office


mansavi: are tum aa gaye

suraj: ha aaj office jaldi chhutti ho gayi

now its the time to sleep

mansavi comes from the kitchen into bedroom
and see suraj as a shy

mansavi comes near to the room


suraj: mansavi tumhe udhar sone ki koi jaroorat nahi hai, me udhar sofe pe so jaata hoo or tum yaha par arraam se so sakti ho or ha ek baat yaad rakhna hum aaj bhi pehle jaise dost hai, the or rehenge.

mansavi: suraj litna acchha insaan hai or maine use kitna galat samjha (apne mann me)

gys next part i eill post soon

plz comment on that
do u like it or not?

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Posted: 13 November 2005 at 8:02am | IP Logged
i liked your story i thin you should also add some scenes of the other characters.
how sweet
please write soon

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Posted: 14 November 2005 at 8:30am | IP Logged
awesome! Clap

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Posted: 06 February 2006 at 4:30am | IP Logged
hey plzz continue...i'm loving it..i wanted suraj and manasvi scenes.. u write really well.continue..... Clap

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