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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 6:24am | IP Logged
[b]    main apni story likh rahi hun........agar aap logon ko pasand aayi to aur likhungi.


:::::YAHI MOHABBAT HAI::::





kahani hai do dilon ki jo bina dekhe bina jaane mile.........bichad gaye aur phir humesha ke liye jud gaye.......bas do dilo ki chhoti si dastaan hai.......




the gal starts her PC...and open a chatroom"DESTINY" by mistake......

thoda surprise hoti hai...phir sochti hai ...///chalo try karte hai///

and give her name as "NEEL" .



on the other side the boy also sees the same chatroom as usual..

"kisi ki talaash me"



gives his name "KRISH".


and both see each others name and start chatting................



"hello"

"hello"
"who r u"
"m NEEL and u"
" m krish"
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.after one hour....

Neel...."u r very funny"

krish.. "tum bhi buri nahi ho"

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.after three hours.....

Krish...." to abb hum dost hain" hainaaaa

Neel...."shayad"

Krish...."abb bhi shayad"

Neel....."nahi shayad nahi pakka abb hum dost hain"
"hey krish muje abhi jana hoga kal baat karte hain"

Krish"......"ok main intezaar karunga bbye"......

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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 6:45am | IP Logged

hey Vinni..

m truely a gr8 fan of this story yar..
would like to  read it here all over  again..
Plz keep posting..
 
luv
Rucha

vineeta247

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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 6:55am | IP Logged
aur agle din bhi dono ki baaten shuru hoti hain aur........ek dusre ke baare me kaafi kuch pata karte hain..........

after 5 days


Neel......" hey krish tum mba ke baad kya karoge?"

Krish..... " business "

Neel..." haan haan pata hai mba ke baad business field me hi jaate hain par khud ka ya koi family business hai ya job prefer karoge?"

Krish..."family business hai ...par main job bhi karunga"

"neel tum batao tumhe kya kya pasand hai....?"

Neel...."muje sab pasand hai...baarish...,phool,....kahaniyan,....painting...rang sab kuch..aur tumhe?"

Krish...."muje baraf ....pahad ...waadiyan bahut pasand hain..............."

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.after 2 hours.....

Neel...."tum itne romantic ho?? to tumhe kabhi pyaar nahi hua?"

Krish....."nahi kabhi nahi pyaar ishq mohaabat....sunne me bahut achhe lagte hain..par muje lagta hai hota wahi hai jo kismet me likha hai.......
krish...." dekho neel .........bhagwaan ne har ek ke liye kuch na kuch socha hai....mere liye bhi socha hoga...............to main koi tension nahi leta........"

waise....pyaar karne ke liye tum to ho na....   hahahhahahha





Dil har ek pe fida nahi hota,
Har koi aap sa nahi hota.
Aapka saath agar mila hota,
Fir mere pass kya nahi hota.
Dil kisi tarah maan bhi jaata,
Agar aapka pyar mila nahi hota.
Aap waada jo poora kar lete,
Fir mujhe bhi koi gila nahi hota.
Rang bhar lete khwaab me hum bhi,
Agar ye faasla nahi hota.
Aap humse mil gaye kyun aakhir,
Kaash yeh silsila nahi hota.




Neel........."hahahahahhah flirting....."
are wah tum to bahut achha likhte ho....khud lika hai kya??

Krish" haan kabhi kabhi likh leta hun.................."
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.After 1 year..................


Krish aur Neel dono ko ek dusre se baat karne ki itni aadat ho gayi ki...ek bhi din baat na kare to lagta jaise din hai hi nahi...........aur jab dono ko jada time hota to....krish ki har subah neel ki gud morning se hi shuru hoti...dono ghanto chat karte rahte.........

unhe itna time beet gaya tha aur ek dusre ki acchi buri aadaton.........pasand naapasand se waakif the..........


par abb bhi na to dono kabhi mile the na hi kabhi ek dusre ki aawaj suni thi.........
yaani agar kabhi chatroom band ho jaata ya pc kharab ho jaata to dono baat nahi kar paate.........aur dono ko bahut takleef hoti........

neeel khud nahi samaj paa rahi thi ki aisa kya hai jo bina dekhe bina mile kisi ki itni aadat ho gayi ki usse bina baat kiye raha nahi ja raha tha..................

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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Hi dearsmileys!
How R U
smileys!
I Wish u r Gud
smileys!
woah dear
smileys  its really mind-blowingsmileyssmileyssmileyssmileys superb updatesmileyssmileyssmileysso they r chat friendssmileysbut nice storysmileysplz continue it soonsmileys & if possible plz pm mesmileys


"I miss your touch Ridzi (Shilpa),
The smile on you face and the sound of your voice so sweet,

I love as the day ends, to lie in each others arms,
To kiss you and to feel your heart beat.

I love to feel you in my arms as you sleep so peaceful and sweet,
The warmth of your body, the smell of your perfume,
 And to feel your heart beat, t
o see you in the night,
In the light of the moon for you are so beautiful.

Your love, your warmth, your laughter,
Your touch fills my heart so full.

My one desire is to love you so much that
You never have doubt t
he love that,
 I feel for you is so overpowering that at times I want to shout.

I want to shout out that I love you Ridzi and I adore you,
I want the world to hear me praise and love for you Ridzi.
I wish that I could lift you to the stars above,
I know that you were sent by God to me with love,
I adore you not only for only your beauty,
But for what you have shared with me; your love,

You are a beautiful person whose inner beauty is like,
That of an angle from above.

Together we have stood for each other,
I can only love you and never another.
Please know that I love you for all that you are
And all that you give,
I promise to love you,
Hold you, adore you and praise you for as long as I live.

I love you Ridhima (Shilpa)"





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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 7:12am | IP Logged
..................

Krish......."kya hua neel aaj badi udaas lag rahi ho?"

Neel...."hmmm udas hun..papa ka transfer ho gaya h"

Krish...." par isme udas hone jaisa kya hai?"

Neel...."ye ki jahan papa ki transfer hui hai wahan main net use nahi kar paaungi..........

krish.."   kyaaaaa phir hum baat kaise karenge..........phn no. tum dogi nahi...main maanguga bhi nhai.........jab tak tum na chaho... "

Neel.."abb ek hi raasta hai ki hum ek dure ko khat likhe wahan ..bahut bada postoffice hai..tum ek P.O.box le lo...main bhi le leti hun..aur hum ek dusre ko khat likhenge.."

Krish..."wah...kya baat hai.....iss jamane me jab khat likhna to dur koi iske baare me sochta bhi nahi..hum 18th century ki tarah khat likhenge.."

Neel...."haan ye to h........par tum P.O.box aaj hi le lo aue muje bata do........kyonki muje kal hi nikalna hai....main wahan jaake tumhe khat likhungi aur apna P.O.box no. bhi de dungi................
krish jo neel se bina baat kiye ek din bhi gujarne ki nahi soch sakta tha....usi pal postoffice gaya aur usne ek P.O.box le liya.........aur aake no. neel ko de diya..............

neel agle hi din papa ke saath chali gayi.........abb dono ek dusre ko khat likhte.........

par unhe intezaar karna padhta.....ek dusre ki reply ka.........


aise me Neel ko laga ki ye sirf dosti nahi kuch aur hi hai.........par kya ye use samaj nahi aaya.........

"kya tha wo jo intezaar me neel ko dikha...."

kya wo mahabbat thi........???


yahi haal krish ka bhi tha..............par usne ispe jada dhyaan nahi diya kyonki use abb bhi lagta tha ki shayad bhagwaan ne hi kuch socha hai uske liye....
.......yunhi..unhe mile 2 saal beet gaye.......abb dono ek dusre ko khat likhte aur baat karte..............


abb unhe khat likhne me hi maja aane laga tha.......
neel waapas apne sehar aagayi thi...par yahan usne naya P.o.box no. hi liya .......

ek din jab Neel Postoffice gayi....apna letter lene....to usne dekha iss baar koi letter nahi.............



balki ek gift tha ...........

usne khola to usme........do bahut khubsurat kangan.......aur ek payal thi...

usne krish se iss baare me pucha to jawab aaya.........
..........................



MEri pyaari Neel
" Rab ne duniya banaayi tumhare liye,
Rangobu se sajayi tumhare liye,
Pehle kaayam khuda ne kiya saaybaan,
Fir zameen ye bichhayi tumhare liye.
Phool khushbu saba titliyaan chaandni,
Hai ye manzar kushaayi tumhare liye,
Phal ugaaye kiye meethe chashme ravaan,
Jo bhi neamat hai aayi tumhare liye.
Meethi awaaz dekar parindon ko sab,
Subah shaam dikhaayi tumhare liye,
Bakaye noor saara jahaan ho gaya,
Zindagi muskuraayi tumhare liye


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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Hi dearsmileys!
How R U
smileys!
I Wish u r Gud
smileys!
woah dear
smileys  its really mind-blowingsmileyssmileyssmileyssmileys superb updatesmileyssmileyssmileysso she is going where no net so toughsmileysbut post office take so much timehersmileysplz continue it soonsmileys & thanks for the pmsmileys Luv uEmoticons

"KASH u r my inspiration,
having u in my life is a Big thing.
Which Inspire me to write for KASH.
You are indeed a special someone for me,
I have written only for u.
Loving KASH gives me hope,
Never will I forget,
How KASH always cheer me up,
Every time I'm sad,
I just watch KASH video's,
and remember both of u.
Whenever I'm lonely,
KASH were there for me,
Keeping my heart alive with their cute smile.
So i can write for u as u r my Inspiration.
I dedicate this poem to u KASH,
To show how much KASH meant to me,
I love you KASH my special someone"




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Edited by nidha1983 - 13 November 2009 at 7:37am

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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 11:01am | IP Logged
hey great begening
pls continue soon n pls do pm me
love sanam

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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
really nice ff yaar
plzz continue soon
n plzzzzz add me to ur pm list

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