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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
OMG IVY! That was hilarious! I loved it. Especially that last bit. I loved that last line of Abhi's. Something tells me they're going to find out, and play around with the interns.

Love,
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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
well done.....
good job.........
keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
Ivy i left then got ur pm so couldn't help but come back 2 read!! LOL
I love all the flirting and how close their getting!! Big smile This was so funny! LOL
 
Guppo: I think they're flirting....
Wardboy: *turns to Umar Bhai and whispers* they're flirting...
Umar Bhai: Huh? They're firting???
Nurse: *turns to wardboy behind her* Errr? They're firting?
Wardboy: *puzzled whispers to patient behind him* They're hurting!
Patient: *confused* Hurling? No, no u must have misunderstood...*turns to Rahul* They're twirling!
Rahul: *blinks in confusion* Twirling?! What do u mean they're twirling?

I love this... its like chinese whispers!! ROFL the answer is never the same at the end!! LOLLOL well done!! Clap

 

Abhi: *flirtatiously* Well now who said I didn't want u pouncing on me?
Niki: *blushes and gapes in amused shock at Abhi openly flirting with her*




Muskaan: *gleefully* Did u see that?!
Atul: I don't believe it!
Anjali: He's flirting with her!
 
this is defintely my favourite part!! Big smileBig smileBig smile fantastic!! and the caps match so well!! Clap this is best part!! Thumbs Up oh and the fliritng bit with the chinese whispers!! LOLLOLLOL

 

Armaan: Part B of project SMN has been a total success...now its time to initiate Part C!
Atul: *looks confused* Part C? And there was a Part A?
Armaan: Stalking them was Part A.
 
So where is part B?? LOLLOLLOL

 

Abhi: I know this may sound odd but have u been feeling watched lately?

 
 
Oh no!!! Abhi is gonna figure it out? Shocked Ab kya hoga?? Hope he don't think Nikki is in on the plan....

 

Great job as usual Ivy!! ClapClapClap Can't wait for ur next update.. thanks for doing it so quick!! Big smileBig smileBig smile

btw.. do u make ur own caps?? cz they match perfectly with ur dialogues!! Thumbs Up 

 
ok am off nw!! goodnyt!! Big smile

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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anhdara13

OMG IVY! That was hilarious! I loved it. Especially that last bit. I loved that last line of Abhi's. Something tells me they're going to find out, and play around with the interns.

Love,
Radz

Shocked is this whats gonna happen Ivy?? ShockedShocked  would love 2 see this!! Big smile

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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
  ivy, stop liking and tell me plzzzzzzzzz.!!!!
Please

this is so exciting.... i am gonna hav 2 stalk u now!!  Tongue


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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Very nice Ivy !!! The last scene was soo funny when Abhi says that  he is being watched lately !! LOL

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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Nice Nice....so the project SNM is really getting results...I loved Abhi flirting with Nikki....n they getting close....do update sooooooooon!!

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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
awesome update Ivy..
You put those wonderful AN moments together so beautifully...  The way someone keeps peeping or discussing how they planned it and worked was amazing.. it made it more beautiful...  Cant wait to find out whats part C..  And the conclusion of this update Abhi thinking being watched.. perfect way to close the update... 

Update next one sooon now.. and dont test our patience... :)

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