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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 4:51am | IP Logged
amazing ivy!
this is hilarious n interesting!
the plan is finally starting to succeed!!
can't wait for the nxt updt!!

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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 9:39am | IP Logged
OMG, Ivy, these are simply BRILLIANT!!!! I'm in love with this! Thanks for the pm; I just can't believe I've missed something so perfect for so long! Update soon, babe!

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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
wow.... juz loved them...ur just doing awesome work.. I am realli getting addicted now... . Thanx alot 4 da PM... plz update soon

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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
Ives...
 
 
ClapClapClap SUPERB>>>>>>...............awesome...and hayee kahan gaye woh din woh raatein..woh AN....
 
God... those good old days..
 
Thanks soo much for the pm..look forward to the next part...


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Posted: 13 November 2009 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
@Ratika- thanks so much! m glad u liked it!

@Radz-Thanks! And ur right the interns r going to make it a lot more interesting!!!Wink

@Fahi-Thanks so much for ur comments! enjoyed reading them!!!! and m glad ur enjoying the story so much!

@Mishu-thanks so much!!! glad u liked it! and yup...the plan is finally starting to take effect!

@Diya- thanks so much for reading it!! i'm glad ur enjoying it so much!!!

@Prietha- thanks so much!! m glad ur liking them so much!!! its addicting writing this story too!!!

@Zainab-thanks so much!!! and yup i miss the old AN just as much!!!

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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Hey Ivy! Smile
Originally posted by Erutan99


Niki: uh-huh sure...*brushes some straw out of Abhi's hair*

Abhi: *stares at Niki in surprise*
Niki: *looks up and freezes as she gets lost in his eyes*
 
I really love this picture! I can't remember who pointed this out - but I absolutely how both Abhi and Nikki are so caring towards each other, and it's just so natural Embarrassed 
 
Muskaan: Haha Niki, it landed on you.
Niki: *thinks to herself* Dang it! And the other end just had to stop on Armaan...he always picks the most horrible dares...and even worse truths!
 
Have to admit, when I read this my first thought was that Nikki would somehow be tricked into picking truth and then Armaan would ask her how she really feels about Abhi - but I'm so glad that didn't happen! Nikki and Abhi haven't realised (or if they have, then they aren't acknowledging it! LOL) their feelings towards each other. It would have been too fast and besides - we can't skip Nikki's sexy dance! Wink
 
Abhi: *stares back mesmerized*
Niki: *realizes the others r watching and pulls away* What? not sexy enough for u, Dr. Modi!
 
Loved this exchange in DMG and love it here too Embarrassed. Nikki's retort = Clap
Great work. Big smile

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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
@Ditto-thanks so much! I love reading ur comments; they make me really happy!!!

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Posted: 14 November 2009 at 10:14pm | IP Logged

~Back at Sanjeevani~


Armaan: *happily* So I convinced Dr. Modi to give Niki a ride home just now!
Atul: Really! That's great! But didn't she drive here hereself today?
Armaan: *indifferently* She did...so I helped her out by letting the air out of her tires.


Niki: *teasingly* Oh, come on! You know it was hilarious the way Sr. Lovely was flirting with u!
Abhi: *rolls his eyes and focuses on the road ahead*


Niki: *reaches over and tries to force Abhi to smile* Smile...smile...u know u want to!
Abhi: *annoyed* Stop it, Nikita!


*******

Niki: *shocked* Oh My God!
Abhi: *just as shocked* Wha-Niki!



Abhi: *quickly pulls on his shirt and starts buttoning it* Can't u knock?!
Niki: *blushes and looks away* S-sorry...


Muskaan: *excitedly* So I spilled coffee on Dr. Modi and convinced him to go into the supply room to change!
Anjali: Umm....and this is interesting because...?
Muskaan: I sent Niki into the room as well to go get some extra medicine!
Atul: Really...what happend?
Muskaan: Err...I'm not too sure....Dr. Keerti stopped me to ask about a patient and I couldn't follow....But I think it worked...cause a few minutes later Niki rushed past me and she was blushing really hard and looking extremely flustered!


*****


Abhi: Dr. Nikita...u know full well that calls are not allowed to be made during duty hours! *reaches to take the phone from Niki*
Niki: ...sigh....*mutters* Sadhu!

Abhi: *
accidentally grabs her hand while taking the phone*
Niki: *freezes and stares in shock as electricity runs through her arm*


Niki: I need u to check this file for me, Abhimanyu.


Abhi:
*reaches to take the file from Niki but freezes when their hands touch*
Niki: *freezes at the touch of his hand and becomes lost in his eyes*


Atul: U should have seen them! The two were totally lost in each others eyes for a good five minutes before Niki finally pulled away and Dr. Modi put down the phone!
Dr. Shubankar: Ahh, but u didn't see the way they were staring at each other while passing that file! For a second I thought Dr. Modi was going to pull Niki into his arms!
Anjali: This is great! Wait till Armaan hears!

*******


Niki: Abhi! Abhi, come on, quit it! Give it back! I was at the best part!
Abhi: One second...I want to see what's so interesting about this book too...u've been glued to it all day!


Niki:
And....? *smirks coyly and takes a step closer to Abhi* ...not jealous are u Dr. Modi?
Abhi: *gulps in surprise as Niki slowly runs her hand up his shoulder*


Niki:
*seductively* Don't be...*presses herself close to Abhi and slowly begins to reach for the book as she distracts Abhi with her nearness*
Abhi: *stares utterly mesmerized at the girl pressed up against him*
Niki: *whispers* ...but u know...u should really...give me my book back! *snatches the book and jumps back with a triumphant cry of victory*


Guppo:
I think they're flirting....
Wardboy: *turns to Umar Bhai and whispers* they're flirting...
Umar Bhai: Huh? They're firting???
Nurse: *turns to wardboy behind her* Errr? They're firting?
Wardboy: *puzzled whispers to patient behind him* They're hurting!
Patient: *confused* Hurling? No, no u must have misunderstood...*turns to Rahul* They're twirling!
Rahul: *blinks in confusion* Twirling?! What do u mean they're twirling?


*****

Abhi: *whispers huskily* Dr. Nikita, what are u doing over here, hmm...
Niki: *looks up startled* Huh...? Um...I'm just waiting for Sr. Lovely to bring me a file....Why?


Abhi:
Oh...so ur not waiting here for me, then?
Niki: *grins in amusement* Why? Am I suppose to be?
Abhi: Of course...I've told u before girls are always chasing after me...for all I know u could have been standing around here waiting for me to show up so that u could pounce on me...
Niki: Well if that's the case then why did u come up behind me? Shouldn't u have gone in the other direction the minute u saw me?
 


Abhi: *flirtatiously* Well now who said I didn't want u pouncing on me?
Niki: *blushes and gapes in amused shock at Abhi openly flirting with her*



Muskaan: *gleefully* Did u see that?!
Atul: I don't believe it!
Anjali: He's flirting with her!

*****


Abhi: Right, so I think we should start by-



*the lights go out*
Niki: *frightened* Hey! Who turned off the lights?! *panicked* Abhi!
Abhi: I'm right here, Niki!


Niki: *lets out a sob and throws herself into Abhi's arms in fear*
Abhi: *stares at her startled before slowly wrapping his arms around her*


Abhi: *forgets about everything but the girl in his arms and tightens his hold on her*
Niki: *calms down and relaxes feeling utterly safe*


Niki: *slowly pulls away and looks up into Abhi's eyes*
Abhi: *softly* u okay?
Niki: *just as softly* yeah....


Riddhima:
*squeels* It worked!
Muskaan: Huh, really? I can't really see them...
Armaan: Well I can't see anything at all! Riddhima, whats going on in there?!


*****


Abhi: What's wrong, Niki? U've been fidgeting around all day.
Niki: Nothing...I'm just worried about the exams coming up...What if I don't pass? what if I have to repeat my internship?!
Abhi: *smiles reassuringly and slowly raises a hand to brush back Niki's hair and whispers* U'll pass...ur a better doctor then u realize...


Niki: *eyes flutter shut as she finds herself melting at his touch*

*******


Armaan: Part B of project SMN has been a total success...now its time to initiate Part C!
Atul: *looks confused* Part C? And there was a Part A?
Armaan: Stalking them was Part A.


******


Abhi: I know this may sound odd but have u been feeling watched lately?


********





Edited by Erutan99 - 26 December 2009 at 6:41pm

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