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~The Rishta Series-AN captions story~complete (Page 4)

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Posted: 09 November 2009 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Erutan99

@Annie-r u using firefox...try using a different web browser if u can...i was having problems looking at some of the caps as well when i was in firefox....
Nope. I am using Internet explorer. other pages are fine like the first page on the new AN scene thread, AN fan thread, etc. which browser r you using? Do you think there are too many pics on this page and hence doesnot come up? Earliar when your series was on the AN scene thread, I had no problems.
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Posted: 10 November 2009 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Ivy,
 
It worked. i was able to see the pictures. Great update. Amazing imagination and you have changed the schene after 'Holi' so beautifully. Loved it.
 
 

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Posted: 10 November 2009 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Wow Ivy, lovely update....Right through I had a wide grin on my face...the best part I loved was when Abhi says "there is no monsters except for the one lying on the couch here"  Awwwwwwwsw that is so so sweet..
Loved the whole thing..Do update soon..
 
 
@ Hey Prietha, so nice to see  you after ages... Hope everything is fine at your end...
 
@ Radz thanks so much for the compliment.  its been a long time I've seen any post of yours....

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Posted: 10 November 2009 at 9:33am | IP Logged
beautiful caption story on the holi scene Ivy , you rock girl *hugz*
loved Abhi's last line  she's really beautiful...so innocent...looking at her right now its hard to believe how much trouble this girl can cause... Wink keep it up dear

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Posted: 10 November 2009 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
this completely awesome ivy!
great work!!

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Posted: 10 November 2009 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
hey Ivy this is excellent work, enjoyed reading it soo much, can't wait for ur next posting, it's just like one of picture board stories u get in newspapers
 
u've captured all the characters really well all the old favs are there in rahul and muskaan, i love the storyline, mission AN, with all the interns and staff helping
 
plus u included the caps from one my fav scenes, when nikki asks abhi to stay
 
 

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Posted: 10 November 2009 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
@Radz- thanks so much! I'm glad ur enjoying the story so much...actually i was about to try to update some more today...lets see if i m able to do so! If not today then perhaps tomorrow!

@Annie-Oh good it worked!! And thanks! glad u liked it so much!

@Mich-thanks! I loved the monster part too...at first i thought it'd be too childish but then i remembered how childish niki was acting anyways and thought it would work! glad it did!

@Sayra- Thanks!!!! And yup she is so much trouble when she's awake but looks like an angel asleep!! ;-)

@Mishu-thank u so much!!

@Sigma- Thanks so much! I'm glad ur enjoying it so much!! the holi scene was my favorite too and so had to use the caps!! I'm going to use the caps from med camp for my next part!!!


Edited by Erutan99 - 10 November 2009 at 7:16pm
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~Two weeks later~


Armaan: Argh! *walks right into Atul*
Atul: Ahh!!! *almost falls over in shock*
Anjali: Who is it?!



Atul: Armaan? Rahul?
Rahul: ...sigh...Champ.
Anjali: What are you two doing over here...aren't you suppose to be over there?
Armaan: No, no, Anjali. Riddhima and Muskaan are over there...you two are suppose to be on the other side!
Atul: But Umar Bhai and Guppo are staking out on the other side!
Rahul: No they're staking out on the opposite side!
Armaan: Yeah...the one you thought they were staking out is the side you two are suppose to be on!
Anjali: *gives Armaan a confused look* Umm...u lost me...
Rahul: *mutters* Ur not the only one he's lost...
Atul: Um...Armaan, I've been meaning to ask you....exactly what is the plan? Cause I don't get it...
Anjali: *turns to Atul in astonished delight* U don't get it either! I thought I was the only one!
Rahul: Yeah Armaan what is the plan exactly...all we've been doing for the past few weeks is stalking either Dr. Modi or Niki....
Armaan: Umm....well u see....uhhh...
Rahul:
*deadpans* There is no plan, is there?



Armaan: I stayed up all night thinking, Riddhima. And I think I've finally got a real plan!
Riddhima: *thinks to herself* Thank God...


Atul: I don't get it...what does the medical camp trip have to do with getting Niki and Dr. Modi together?
Armaan: Not the med camp trip, Champ! I'm talking about the day trip we were all planning on going on right afterwards. If we invite Dr. Modi to come with us then we can make sure that stuff happens that pushes them together...don't u see! This is the opportunity we were looking for!!
Rahul: Hmm...that might work. Did u tell the girls yet?
Armaan: Riddhima's going to tell them.



Muskaan: WHAT?! Did u tell Niki he was coming?
Anjali: *astonished* Did Dr. Modi actually agree to join us?
Riddhima: No...Armaan's going to tell Niki and we haven't even asked Dr. Modi yet. Armaan thought it would be a good idea if we all went up and invited him...
Anjali: In other words, he may turn us down...
Muskaan: If he does we'll kidnap him! There's seven of us and only one of him. We can take him!



Niki: You want to invite that Sadhu along on our vacation! But why!?
Armaan: Aww come on, Niki. He's not that bad...
Niki: *gives him a disbelieving look*
Armaan: *ignores her* Besides if we invite him along then we can get to know him better...maybe he'll soften up a bit if we hang out with him some...



Niki:
As if it wasn't bad enough that he was going to be the one supervising us at the medical camp, now he's going to be joining us for our mini vacation as well...
Rahul: We haven't even asked him yet, Niki. He may turn down the offer.
Atul: *smiling smugly* He won't.
Anjali: Why not?
Atul: Because we've got Nik-
Rahul: *slaps a hand to Atul's shoulder and squeezes tightly to shut him up*
Atul: Yeow! Rahul!
Niki: Huh?
Riddhima: A-Atul just means that Dr. Modi will probably come cause...umm...
Rahul: Cause he wants to keep an eye on us! U know how he is...he likes to keep tabs on all of us, interns...he won't turn down this opportunity to do so!
Others: Yeah..uh-huh...*all nod in agreement*


Abhi: Interns, I hope all of you are ready for the trip tomorrow.
Armaan: Yup, we're all set, boss. Actually that's what we wanted to talk to you about. U see we were all planning on stopping in Panchgani for a night on the way back after the med camp trip to relax and hang out. We were wondering if you would like to join us since you'll be the one coming with us to the camp and all as well...
Abhi: *looks surprised and thinks for a few seconds before nodding* I guess I could come with all of you. Thanks for the invitation.
Atul: Great! We'll have a ton of fun!
*Others smile and nod in agreement while Niki glowers..*



Riddhima:
We have to convince Niki to ride with Dr. Modi on the way to the camp and to Panchgani...it'll force them to spend some time together...I'll go ask her right now.


Riddhima:
I know you two don't get along well but, Niki, please. Muskaan and Rahul need to stick together and Atul really wants to ride with Anjali...I'd ride with Dr. Modi but Armaan will throw a fit if I'm not with him. And with all the luggage all of us can't fit into Armaan's car together.
Niki: ...sigh...fine Riddhima...I'll ask Modi if I can ride with him...but I'm only doing this for you!



Niki: ....so you see why I can't ride with the others...
Abhi: *looks amused and exasperated all at once* Fine, Dr. Nikita. You can ride with me...just don't be late in the morning.



Abhi:
Ready to go...
Niki: *smiles tightly* Of course...lets hit the road!

*****

Rahul: Muskaan get off of me!
Muskaan: Why don't u scoot ur fat but over first! Then I'll get off of u!
Riddhima: Ouch! Muskaan! That's my hair!
Atul: I can't breathe! Yaar, Armaan, why did u have to put the extra luggage on the front seat!
Anjali: Where else were we going to put it, Atul! And Armaan why are you stopping....we can't be there yet already....



Armaan: Err...guys...we've got a problem....


Rahul:
Yeah, we're all fine, Dr. Modi. But it doesn't look like we'll be getting there anytime soon...huh? Oh, no, I don't know how long it'll be before we can get the engine running...uh-huh...okay, thanks! Yeah we'll meet you there instead. Take care.


~The Next Morning~


Atul: Are we going to try to make it to the medical camp...Poor Niki is there all by herself with Dr. Modi!
Rahul: Champ, we want them to be alone together! Armaan's car breaking down was probably for the best...now they'll be forced to spend all that time together before they join us at Panchgani...
Anjali: We wouldn't make it in time to the camp anyways...by the time we'd get there it would be time to pack up...I'm glad Dr. Modi told us to go ahead and go to Panchgani instead...
Riddhima: Yes, and this is why I think we should have gone ahead and stayed with Armaan...now he has to wait by himself for the mechanic to fix his car before he comes to join us...
Muskaan: Well at least we have more room in the car now...Its a good thing Armaan is going to come separtely otherwise we'd be stuck in the back like Sardines again!


~Meanwhile, at the Medical Camp~

Niki: ....Oh God, I'm so tired...where are the others! They should have gotten here last night, even if they did leave after us!



Abhi: They're not coming...Dr. Rahul called last night after you went to sleep to tell me that they had some engine trouble...By the time they manage to get here it'll be time to pack up so I told them to go ahead and go on to Panchgani and that we'd meet them there....


Niki: In other words, I'm stuck here with u by myself! Great....


Abhi: Why? Does it bother u that much to have to spend time with me?
Niki: Do you have to ask?


Abhi: *smirks* You know...most girls go out of their way to try to get a few moments alone with me...u should be quite pleased...


Niki: Oh really *rolls her eyes*
Abhi: *smiles arrogantly at her* Yes really!
Niki: Well unfortunately for you, I'm immune to ur supposed charm...


Abhi: *huskily drawls* Really... *starts backing Niki into the supply boxes*


Abhi: *whispers
huskily* Are you sure you're immune to me...or is all this indifference of yours just an act...
Niki: *eyes wide in shock* wh-what...?


Niki: *Blushing furiously pushes Abhi away* You wish!



Abhi: *yells after her laughingly* If you're truly immune then why are you blushing!


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Edited by Erutan99 - 26 December 2009 at 6:34pm

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