~The Rishta Series-AN captions story~complete - Page 4

@Radz- thanks so much! I'm glad ur enjoying the story so much...actually i was about to try to update some more today...lets see if i m able to do so! If not today then perhaps tomorrow!

@Annie-Oh good it worked!! And thanks! glad u liked it so much!

@Mich-thanks! I loved the monster part too...at first i thought it'd be too childish but then i remembered how childish niki was acting anyways and thought it would work! glad it did!

@Sayra- Thanks!!!! And yup she is so much trouble when she's awake but looks like an angel asleep!! ;-)

@Mishu-thank u so much!!

@Sigma- Thanks so much! I'm glad ur enjoying it so much!! the holi scene was my favorite too and so had to use the caps!! I'm going to use the caps from med camp for my next part!!!
Edited by Erutan99 - 14 years ago

~Two weeks later~

Armaan: Argh! *walks right into Atul*
Atul: Ahh!!! *almost falls over in shock*
Anjali: Who is it?!



Atul: Armaan? Rahul?
Rahul: ...sigh...Champ.
Anjali: What are you two doing over here...aren't you suppose to be over there?
Armaan: No, no, Anjali. Riddhima and Muskaan are over there...you two are suppose to be on the other side!
Atul: But Umar Bhai and Guppo are staking out on the other side!
Rahul: No they're staking out on the opposite side!
Armaan: Yeah...the one you thought they were staking out is the side you two are suppose to be on!
Anjali: *gives Armaan a confused look* Umm...u lost me...
Rahul: *mutters* Ur not the only one he's lost...
Atul: Um...Armaan, I've been meaning to ask you....exactly what is the plan? Cause I don't get it...
Anjali: *turns to Atul in astonished delight* U don't get it either! I thought I was the only one!
Rahul: Yeah Armaan what is the plan exactly...all we've been doing for the past few weeks is stalking either Dr. Modi or Niki....
Armaan: Umm....well u see....uhhh...
Rahul: *deadpans* There is no plan, is there?

Atul: I don't get it...what does the medical camp trip have to do with getting Niki and Dr. Modi together?
Armaan: Not the med camp trip, Champ! I'm talking about the day trip we were all planning on going on right afterwards. If we invite Dr. Modi to come with us then we can make sure that stuff happens that pushes them together...don't u see! This is the opportunity we were looking for!!
Rahul: Hmm...that might work. Did u tell the girls yet?
Armaan: Riddhima's going to tell them.



Muskaan: WHAT?! Did u tell Niki he was coming?
Anjali: *astonished* Did Dr. Modi actually agree to join us?
Riddhima: No...Armaan's going to tell Niki and we haven't even asked Dr. Modi yet. Armaan thought it would be a good idea if we all went up and invited him...
Anjali: In other words, he may turn us down...
Muskaan: If he does we'll kidnap him! There's seven of us and only one of him. We can take him!

Rahul: Yeah, we're all fine, Dr. Modi. But it doesn't look like we'll be getting there anytime soon...huh? Oh, no, I don't know how long it'll be before we can get the engine running...uh-huh...okay, thanks! Yeah we'll meet you there instead. Take care.


~The Next Morning~

Atul: Are we going to try to make it to the medical camp...Poor Niki is there all by herself with Dr. Modi!
Rahul: Champ, we want them to be alone together! Armaan's car breaking down was probably for the best...now they'll be forced to spend all that time together before they join us at Panchgani...
Anjali: We wouldn't make it in time to the camp anyways...by the time we'd get there it would be time to pack up...I'm glad Dr. Modi told us to go ahead and go to Panchgani instead...
Riddhima: Yes, and this is why I think we should have gone ahead and stayed with Armaan...now he has to wait by himself for the mechanic to fix his car before he comes to join us...
Muskaan: Well at least we have more room in the car now...Its a good thing Armaan is going to come separtely otherwise we'd be stuck in the back like Sardines again!






Abhi: They're not coming...Dr. Rahul called last night after you went to sleep to tell me that they had some engine trouble...By the time they manage to get here it'll be time to pack up so I told them to go ahead and go on to Panchgani and that we'd meet them there....


Niki: In other words, I'm stuck here with u by myself! Great....


Abhi: Why? Does it bother u that much to have to spend time with me?
Niki: Do you have to ask?


Abhi: *smirks* You know...most girls go out of their way to try to get a few moments alone with me...u should be quite pleased...


Niki: Oh really *rolls her eyes*
Abhi: *smiles arrogantly at her* Yes really!
Niki: Well unfortunately for you, I'm immune to ur supposed charm...


Abhi: *huskily drawls* Really... *starts backing Niki into the supply boxes*


Abhi: *whispers huskily* Are you sure you're immune to me...or is all this indifference of yours just an act...
Niki: *eyes wide in shock* wh-what...?


Niki: *Blushing furiously pushes Abhi away* You wish!



Abhi: *yells after her laughingly* If you're truly immune then why are you blushing!


Edited by Erutan99 - 14 years ago

LOL @ everyone not understanding the plan, or rather the lack of a plan Poor Nikki...subjected to a 'rishta' at the hands of such folks.

I love that cap of all the kiddies stuck in the backseat together. Actually, every picture is so much fun to see, you've picked them perfectly, Ives! (:

I squee'd on seeing you updated :P Let's see how exactly Nikki stays not so indifferent to Modi's charms ;)

@Fatima- wow that was a really fast comment! I didn't think anyone would read it right away but u did! I'm glad ur having so much fun reading it! I'm having fun writing it but now, unfortuantely, I really need to go study! 😆

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Ur going to really enjoy my last part! I've already got the caps and know exactly how its going to end!😉
Edited by Erutan99 - 14 years ago

Brilliant Ivy..
And before I go anywhere near talking about how food your scene was I have to tell you - this pace of updates is good.. each a day :) :) please keep it up and give us next one tomorrow 😆

Now coming to the scene you wrote.. Brilllllliaant... ivy dear you deserve a pat on your back :) wonderful how you use different caps to create your own magic here...

I was laughing out loud for this one :
Muskaan: If he does we'll kidnap him! There's seven of us and only one of him. We can take him!

Got it right girl... that backing to the boxes scene was good too... Haha who can resist those "supposed" charms ...

Awesome.....wat a treat....each n every part is hilarious!!...I love it all...can't wait 4 ur update.....sooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn!!

Ivy.... woah that was fast!! but thanx.. and it was sooo good!!! 👏 Edited by pagli91 - 14 years ago

Ivy Lovely updates 🤗

I loved how they convinced AN to go together in car and thinking to stay one day after the medical camp in panchgani .😆
I love the scene in which everybody is trying to adjust in the car 🤣 and the pic is so good.I can't stop laughing 🤣

Do Continue LOL

YAY!!! Ivy u updated!!! I love this Caption story it is so wonderful!! I really loved the whole thing but my fave part was this
Rahul: Muskaan get off of me!
Muskaan: Why don't u scoot ur fat but over first! Then I'll get off of u!
Riddhima: Ouch! Muskaan! That's my hair!
Atul: I can't breathe! Yaar, Armaan, why did u have to put the extra luggage on the front seat!
Anjali: Where else were we going to put it, Atul! And Armaan why are you stopping....we can't be there yet already....

I couldn't stop laughing!!🤣 Just looking at the pic makes you laugh!! the dialogues were perfect!!

Abhi: *yells after her laughingly* If you're truly immune then why are you blushing!

Ivy! That was utterly brilliant! I love how Abhi and Armaan get along, and the end, with Abhi cornering Nikki, and her getting all flustered. So light-hearted and fun, and so entertaining!

I cannot wait for more!

Love,
Radz