2/28/10!!!|FORGOTTEN LOVE|*Pt.8...Cmnt!

Posted: 14 years ago
10 friends were at a bistro''WAIT BUT'..where's the 10th one????
Then suddenly a song starts''
 
Daaa'..reee'''.
Sari nisa sari nisa sari nisa sari nisa(a gurl comes in'stading on top of the bar'..dressed in a modern dress---yet traditional'''in her mid-20's'.and DRUNK!!!!
 
Na pairo mein payal na haaton mein kangana
 
chali main chali main chali
 
ho na ankhon mein kaajal na maathe pe bindiya deewane ki dhundu gali
 
i wanna show my body groove the nite away
 
chahe bas chahe yeh dil dilbar ko paana re
 
halla re halla re halla re (x2)(she screamed into a handsome guys ear'whos face was very familiar to her'..but nothing coming back to him)tu jhoom le
tu naach le
 masti mein tu kuch pyaare
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyaare
 
 
 main toh na jaanu kisko dhunde yeh nazar bekhabar(2)
ho jiski khaatir todu main duniya bhar ki rasmein
kare joh vaade pure nibhaye saari kasmein
kahin toh mil jaye woh chahe dil toot ke mujh
kora hoon na main bhi bas mein raahein na woh bhi bas
 mein I wanna show my body groove the nite away
chahe bas chahe yeh dil dilbar ko pana re
halla re halla re halla re (x2)(got on top of the bar and started dancing)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyaare
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyaare aya kahin pe mujhko mera humsafar joh nazar (she looked at him'but the rest trying to get her eyes to llok somewhere else B4 HE FOUND OUT)
 
aya kahin pe mujhko mera humsafar joh nazar mohabbat ki rahon par main hadh se badh jaaungi(she went to him'danced around him)
 
main uske naam jawani kasam se kar jaaung
imujhe hai itna kehna wohi hai mera gehn
aagar bahon mein lele khushi se mar jaaungi(he caught her with his majestic body to capture her tender body) i wanna show my body groove the nite away
chahe bas chahe yeh dil dilbar ko pana re
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyare
halla re halla re halla re (x2)
tu jhoom le tu naach le masti mein tu kuch pyare
halla re halla re halla re (x2)(HE TOOk her away from the crowd'out in the parking lot)
 
 GUY:damn'isse bhi aaj talli hona tha'.anjie pllzz isse ghar legao'aur nimbo ya kisika bhi raas pilao.. 
 
An- oohh hello dr.armaan'..talli ye tumhari vaje se hui hain'tho ghar bhi TUM hi lejao ge..shamje??? 
 
Ar- kya'.mere wajah se'and how is that? 
 
An- agar tum wo stupid si competioin nahin rakh ten a tho aaj riddhima puri hosh aur awaz mine hoti'aur mujhe wo tumara nimbo ka sharabar nahin pilana padta samje'aur waise bhi mujhe duty hain'. 
 
Ar- tho phir mein isse'yaar'anjie'mein isse ghar kaise legao'ghar tumara lock nahin hoga?? 
 
An- IDC tum isse kaha lejao'as long as ye kaal pure hosh aur awaz mein Hoon! Shamje'..warna papa ke saath tumhari ekk bahuak acchi meeting hogi'. 
 
Ar-(in though-----papa'jumps outta though) DR.SHASANK!....anjie u can't do this to me!! 
 
An- byeee'. 
 
Ar'anjie'anjie'plzz plzz'abbe yaar''riddhima'riddhima'[.found her laying on the road'.] challoo'picked her up'
 
He went to his car and put her layed down in there''.he tried starting the car..but no luck'.he realized that he'd left his head lights on'.
 
Ar- SHIT MAN!!! Ab isse lekar kaha jao'wo bhi pedal'..aaghh'..
 
He picked riddhima out of the car'.at this time riddhima had woken up'
Ar- crap! Ye tho uth gayi! Matlab meri barbaadi!!
Ri- BAHHH!!!!!!!!!
Ar- hmm'.hiii(trying to be sweet)
Ri- mele junior hulk'.kitne cute'kitni pyaree..chooo cuutee''kitnee mmmm hoo!!!!(pinched his cheecks reallli really hard)
 
 
Ar- haan haan thank you[sarcastically]
Ri- heeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyy'''.BIHKU KAKA!!!!
Ar- what'..kiya?? bhi'bhik what???
Ri- arre wo dekho na bhiku kaka!!!!![she pointed to the bhikaari(begger) sitting on the side of the road all alone)
 
Riddhima ran to him'.and sat right beside him''
Ri- HI!!!
Br- [juss stared at her]
Ri- hulky'.tum bhi bheto na'
Ar- hulky?? Umm nahin mein theek hoon..aur riddhima chalo yaha se..
Ri- mmm nahin mujhe yaha BHETNA HAIN!!!!
Ar- okay f9'.chilna band karo!
 
Ri- [gave he lip smile] tum bhi plzzz bheto na'
 
 
 
Ar- theek hain'.lo bhet gaye khush!
 
 
 
Ri- KUTA[dog]!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ar- KYA? TUMNE MUJHE'.b4 he cud finish riddhima ran to a dog'.
Ar- abbe yaar'ab isse mere hi ghar legana hoga'..SHIT!
 
 
 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~NEXT EPI~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ri- armaan how could u! tum itni giri hui harkat kar bhi kaise sakte ho?
Ar- damn..riddhima'..tum jaise ladkio ka ek hi problem hain''bhenji hoon au raise hi soch'total middle class''.
Ri- armaan juss shut up okay'jus b'cuz tumarhi yadash khogayi hain iska matlab ye nahin ke tum kuch bhi bologe'''.
Ar- KYA?!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
OKAY OKAY....ISS BAR APNE APP KO INTRO BHI NAHIN KARONGI....KYONKI ALREADY IF PAR APP LOGO KA BOHOT DIMAG CHAT LIYA HAINπŸ˜†
BUT HERE IS ANOTHER FF I'VE STARTED FORGOTTEN LOVE....STARTS OUT KIDNA SIMILAR...BUT EVENTAULLY IT'LL TAKE A BIG TURN..........TRUST ME....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
PLZ PLZ DO LEAVE UR THOUGHTS ABOUT IT.........AS THEY MEAN LOTS TOO MEE.....AND DO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON....iF POSSIBLE TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
KK LOVE LOTS....MAUHZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
JANHVI<33
 
 
***INDEX***
Part 1: pg 1
Part 2: pg 3
Part 3: pg 6
Part 4: pg 9
Part 5: pg 12
Promo: pg 16
Part 6: pg 19
Part 7: pg 25
*PROMO*: page 27
Part 8: Page 30



Edited by shine_bright - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
woah Janvi  its really an awesome one mind blowingso cute woah both r so sweet &  romantic but her way to say dog   plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


"I've dreamed of seeing u from two years,
Loving u each day, each hour, each
moment
,
A memory I can feel when I look into ur eyes,
A never fading happiness spreads through my
vibes,

N
ever wanted anything in my life as much as I desired u...
I want to breathe in ur
fragrance
& keep it with me every day long,
I want to taste ur love for me by kissing ur sweet lips...
Ur the one I needed most & ur forever with me,
In my thoughts & also in my dreams...
I need u like a flower needs the rain,
I need u for u can wash away my pain....
I want u to know that I LUV U, need u, miss u & want u.
I want to have u in every single moment of MY LIFE!"




Nidha 

Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
I loved the picture thing Janz, very nice intro :))


Posted: 14 years ago
great yaarπŸ‘
it is awesome
i love it😊😊

all the best 4 next parts
πŸ₯³
Edited by cute_ridhima - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
hey janvi awesome part yaar cont soon .....thnx 4 d pm
Posted: 14 years ago
coool!! That was fantastic .. Janvi!!
Posted: 14 years ago
hey janvi...
i havent read any of ur ffs till now
so i deffinetly wanna read those which i have missd cozz
i reall found this one intresting well written waiting for the part....
update soon n add meto ur pm list n if u could pm me ur other ffs i would be thnakful
thnks
love
habs
Posted: 14 years ago

hey!!!

liked it,,,

really cool one...

love

dipu

Posted: 14 years ago
hi...... janhvi(my shona)

ur ""FORGOTTEN LOVE"" ff is sooooooooooo beautifull

speacialy begning is so cool with song
situation suited

mujhe laga jaise mein humhara purana DMG dhekrahi hon




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acha laga

janhvi ARMAAN ne RIDDHIMA ko aise nhi udhaya , acha lagta nhi acha ab dheklo phir btana

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ar mujhe sabse acha whole ff mein ye laga

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and once again the whoooooooooole ff is soooooooooooo beautifull
as like u

n thanks for pm
aur ha aage bhi chaper-2 kart rahna ok
πŸ˜‰
sorry if i hurt u
byeeeeeeeeeeee &takecare
Posted: 14 years ago
lovely stat

waiting 4 the next part

conti soon

love

deepz

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