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18th June'10...Animated MRD FF Page 38...

pennu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 November 2009 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Hi dear friends...
you may think how crazy I am ???Shocked... and the answer is a big YESBig smile.... I love MRD...  I made some animated cartoon like pics of Skep's MRD my way.... these is how the story comes in front of my eyes when i read Skep's MRD.... so just thought to share it with you all... A special thanks for our dream weaver Skep.. whose pen inspired me to sketch these pics... hope you all will like this...
This one is the introducing promo pic....

Edited by pennu - 17 June 2010 at 8:34pm

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pennu IF-Sizzlerz

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1.The Secreat Message
What do you want she hissed at him.  Well actually, he cleared his throat and continued, I want lunch.  She gave him an angry look and looked down her nose at him.  Who's stopping you? She bit out.  Her voice was low but her eyes were snapping fire. My lunch box hasn't arrived and I have to be at court soon.  He asked why don't you share your lunch with me? She couldn't believe what she had heard.  What arrogance!  Did he think she was going to break bread with him and wait on him like that simpering sheep he had at home which his sister in law was trying to get him married to?  Hah!  He dragged her by her elbow to the table.  He sat down at her desk.  She looked as haughtily as she could and said this was her desk and that the kitchen services were on the lower floor.  I don't want that food, I know you cook well and so --- wont you share your lunch with me?  She opened her mouth in disbelief.  He laughed.  C'mon, here have a seat.  Someone brought a plate for him and he picked up her basket.  He seemed to be very much at home and now was helping himself to her meal!!  Drat that man, she thought rudely.  He was offering her some of the food he had spooned out.  She looked away furiously.  He began tucking in.  Hmmmmm, this is delicious.  Well done Kranti, you are going to make some guy a good wife.

Edited by pennu - 17 November 2009 at 9:55pm

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TOO    GOOD    PEN.........................
     A special award for you..................

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2.The journey to Amritsar
O God she thought?..she had almost forgotten that he was a lawyer.  That was an excuse I gave the policeman, she fibbed.  I have jewellery in my bag since I am going for my cousin's mehendi ceremony.  I thought that man would confiscate it and I would lose it all she explained.  Why on earth would he confiscate it??unless you are carrying something else altogether?  He asked.  She looked affronted.  Well she said angrily, take a look yourself.  She jumped off and made to pull out her bag when he caught her wrist.  I don't want to see your bag, you little liar ?? don't you ever take me for a fool.  How did your uncle allow you to travel alone anyway?  Perhaps you're not alone and are travelling with friends to this ceremony? Yes, I have an escort here, she pointed out Satpal?he's Mamaji's person.  Kewal called out to Raj.  He was impatient and didn't understand why Raj was wasting time with that girl, unless?..?

3.Daffodils''..or Mustard flowers  
Raj was shocked to see those dark eyes peering angrily at him through the veil.  But he knew whose dark eyes they were.  Those striking dark eyes that were so eloquent.  Even if she didn't speak, her eyes carried the message across thoroughly.  He couldn't believe he had found her that easily.  He was out of the car and right behind her in the chase.  He caught her arm and spun her around.  She crashed into him as he halted and turned her.  He had her arm twisted behind her back and this brought her right up to him.  He looked down at her and saw she was carrying a loose parcel.  She looked back at him, her eyes unwavering but wary.  He lifted his free hand to lift the veil from across her mouth.  Her face was now free from covering and exposed.

4.At Amritsar?.literally      

Amritsar, the name that means the pool of nectar.  Amrit was the drink of the Gods? elixir.  A drink that could blend the state of consciousness of the mind and spiritual enlightenment.  That was this city now synonymous with the Harmandir.  The golden temple was the soul of the city.  It was here that you could actually feel the pulse of good vibes.  Kranti entered the holy place through the white structural compound that protected the shrine within.  Kranti felt all her anxieties being stripped away from her.  She could feel the spirit and the power of the place.  She was enthralled at its beauty.

5.Home and heart breaking memories

She stepped under the archway.  The garden seemed to be bare.  Only the old tall trees stood in grandeur.  They stood there waiting for the house to be lived in once again; to have activity around there; to hear the strains of laughter; to hear whispered discussions about the struggle for freedom; to witness courage and fortitude of the inmates of the house and to see that young girl happy once again.  The garden was in shambles, unkempt and down-trodden.  Kranti throat ached with unshed tears.  Why did she feel exactly like her garden? 
6. Lost in thoughts
During his three month stint at Cambridge, he met Manpreet.  She was also from India.  They had the same hobbies and they were both Indian students.  So it was natural that they often met over tea in the university cafeteria.

7. Guerrilla Warfare  - 1

She turned her head to look at the window.  It was still dark outside.  Yet, it was necessary to get up.  Where was Sohan tauji?  She threw the covers off and slipped on to her bare feet.  Noiselessly, she went to the outer room to seek out Tauji.  In the last room, she could hear muted whispers.  It seemed to be dark.  She peeped through the slit of the door.  A small candle was burning in the corner.  It cast long dark shadows on the wall.  Two or three people seemed to be in deep conversation. 

8.Guerrilla Warfare  - 2

Stop '..said someone.  He stiffened.  A female voice?  Where had he heard it before?  He didn't turn around.  He gritted his teeth.  There was nothing else that he could do but turn.  His dark glasses shielded his eyes.  A slim figure was standing before him.  Her face was covered but turned away.  Don't move, the female continued.  She had a gun in her hand and from the way she was holding it, he realised that she was a novice...

9. Held Captive

He was looking furtively everywhere to see if he could spot Kranti.  He noticed Raj coming up.  He was tying his kerchief round his palm. He looked at the young lawyer questioningly.  But Raj remained deadpan and unconcerned...

10. Held Captive - Contd

She lay there still.  He picked her up in his arms and carried her to his car.  He laid her in the back seat.  But he had to gag her and tie her hands and feet.  He was soon driving way.

11. The Sparks Fly ' 1

He walked up to the large bed and threw her on it.  She lay on the soft mattress looking at him.  Her arms were still twisted behind her back and they were beginning to ache now.  Her feet were tied up so she could barely move.  He returned to close the door shut.  He looked down at himself and made a face.  He was full of filth and hay. 
Kranti was watching him. What a dandy he is she thought.
He went to her, held her arms and pulled her into a sitting position.  He removed the gag from her mouth.  He put up his hands to gently massage her jaws and cheeks.  She angrily turned her face away.

12. The Sparks Fly ' 2
His hand crept behind her and slid slowly down her back.  It reached her lower back.  He applied pressure and pushed her towards him.  She gasped and reached out to regain her balance.  One hand caught his shoulder and the other opened on to his chest.  She felt her breath catch in her chest.  What was happening to her?  She could feel warmth spreading throughout her body.  She could barely breathe.  She curled her fingers on his shoulder for support.  He raised his free hand to cup her face.  Her eyes couldn't take the intensity of his dark gaze and they fell.  He turned up her face.  His lips were inches from hers.
13. First Doubts

She ran her fingers through her hair trying to unlock the knots.  Her bath over, she pulled the towel from the handrail and wrapped it around her as stepped out on the bath mat.  What a soft towel!  She wiped her face.  The feel of the soft yet rough fabric reminded her of something.  She felt breathless all of a sudden.  She remembered the rough texture of his cheek against hers.  And then what had he said?
"You smell like a goat."
Oh'.She shut her eyes tightly. 

He looked at the powdery stuff.  It looked like ordinary dust.  He got off the truck.  He laid the paper on the table.  He took a matchstick and lit it.
He touched the burning splinter to the dust on the paper.  It was immediately caught in a small blaze.  Dear God! This was gunpowder.

14. At the End of the Day

He opened the door slowly.  A candle was burning by the bedside.  A figure was lying on the bed.  He went forward to see her.  Her dark hair was spread over the pillow and her face was turned slightly to one side.  Her thick lashes lay on her cheeks.
He continued to look down at her.  There was a redness on her wrists.  He almost reached down to trail his finger down her cheek when she sighed and turned.  He didn't disturb her.  He silently left the room.

15. Nani-ma And Dai-ma

He turned and walked to the curtain.  He pulled it on one side.  Kranti was standing there looking suddenly embarrassed.  He put out his hand to bring her forward.  In the overhead light, he saw her.  Her jet black hair was loose and flowed past her shoulders.

16. In Conversation

Kranti was alone and eagerly she went down.  She found the kitchen in no time and kept the tray near the sink.  There was a window above the sink.  She reached out to catch hold of the handle.  She had to try again on tiptoes.  But she couldn't grip it properly.
"Need some help?"
Kranti nearly jumped out of her skin.  She turned round to see the devil leaning against the door.

Chapter 17

Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24

Edited by pennu - 17 June 2010 at 8:32pm

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skeptical IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 November 2009 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Arre ?? Where is the animation? Confused Confused Confused

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pennu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 November 2009 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by skeptical

Arre ?? Where is the animation? Confused Confused Confused
Oops some technical errorConfused...
hope now its there...
skeptical IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 November 2009 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
A-Ha there is it is.  Wonderful !!!!!

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Posted: 03 November 2009 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
too good...pen will.....comment in detail...later on too stuck at work...

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