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Posted: 14 years ago
SUPERB shot sweety it was awesome i just looved it i thought i was abt to cry lol it was seriously soo beautiful so cute so touching i really appreciate it sweety ^^
 
Love, Nina ^^
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! gr88 FF..but Atul-Armaan twins?..dont u think its a weird composition?...well..i luved it..is it the end?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow ... just too good. Beautifully written. And best bit was Abhimanyu getting hit for using bad words for Armaan. Hahahaha.
 
Thanks a ton for the PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i very sweet cute love story
i just loved it
d friendship bonds...atul n riddhima shared was lovely
u described there emotions very well...
its too good
thanx 4 d pm

love
debadrita

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Posted: 14 years ago
omg this is awesome.......i just loved it....nd i could totally imagine all the emotions and feelings you described in this one shot..coz there is always a case where u r closer to one of your parents.....and somehow on the way u actually drift away from the person who u love as well...nd then in the end u regret doin it....so well done...i liked the ''placing hand on heart'' gesture from AR....it made me smile..!! k..keep writin
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Posted: 14 years ago

WOW girl was amaging

loveable .\

perfect , ah great

Love heaven and

dop roght more

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Posted: 14 years ago
heyaa hi [sorry don't knew your name]
 
i just read you one short story
wow yaar fab work , it was great
the best part was it was armaan pov loved reading about all his emotions his thinking , it was great
you r soo perfect with wirtting i loved your style a lot , it was fun reading from you , i never realized when i ended reading with it , and i was like i want more now
 
loved your post , it was a simple and sweet tale a cute lovve story , awww i loved armaan and atul bond , his thinking for his twin , it was all soo real
 
please doo try and write more and more , would love to read more from you
till then take care , and please doo pm me if you write more stories , would love to read them
 
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just completely loved it
it was just awesome
it couldn't have been better I loved it very much
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Posted: 14 years ago
haha..loved the ending the most...poor daddy...lol..gr8 jum hun..ur awesome!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear...thts was cute one..i liked atul's character...