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Posted: 25 December 2009 at 12:59am | IP Logged
wow! muski.....awesome OS dear! i wish i wish this kind of thing happens in the show too..........i sooooo wanna c that hug....., & the convo between them was also so apt for the situation........i hope we get a scene like that in the show as a Christmas gift..............

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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 12:07am | IP Logged

Mayank and Nupur stood looking at each other, Nupur looked down and gazed at the ring on her finger, the ring which Mayank put on her.................and now their relationship was official.............she was on cloud nine...........now no one will separate them ever.............

Mayank's mom realised that they need some time alone so she spoke up............"mayank, nupur..............beta tum dono ek walk ke liye kyun nahin jaate..........and then asked Nupur's  bauji........."aapko koi problem to nahin hai na........"

Nupur's dad smiled and said " nahin, problem kya hogi........Nupur jao beta......."

Mayank and Nupur came out...........and started walking in silence, next to each other...........they had lot of things to say, lots on their mind........but was still shaken .............it seemed that the time has went back to their post confession  stage.............when they were still reeling in the fact that they were together.............the feelings were same, emotions a bit different............

Mayank, slowly held Nupur's hand..........she stopped and turned to look at him...............he smiled at er..........and next minute, she threw herself in his arms and started crying.........Mayank's own eyes became teary, as he held onto her tightly, never to let go again.........

After a while when she didnt stop..........he softly pulled out of the hug, and caressed her head...........and said " bas Nupur, ab to sab thik ho gaya hai na, ab kyun ro rahi ho.........."

Nupur slowly stopped cruing, but was still sad..........Mayank made her sit on a bench, and held her hand.....and said "Nupur main jaanta hun, pichle kuch din hamare liye tough the, par ab to hum saath hai na...........aur hamesha rahenge............aur aaj to hamari sagai bhi ho gayi............tum yehi chahti thi na..........hamesha se........."

Nupur looked at Mayank, with all the love in her eyes...........and said "haan, par tum to nahin chahte the na........i m sorry Mayank.........ye sab meri wajah se hua...........meri ek galti ki wajah se, hum alag ho sakte the........"

Mayank cupped her face in his hands and said " par hue to nahin........pata hai kyun............kyunki hamara pyar in sabse strong tha..........tumhara mujhpe vishwas sabse badhkar tha.......aur rahi baat sagai ki ti main sach mein khush hun Nupur, ab hum hamesha ke liye saath hain..............aur ek saath hi apne sapno ko pura kaenge, hai na...........".........

Nupur smiled and nodded.........and rested her head on his shoulder..........saying........."Mayank, main tumhare saath hun, jo bhi tum karoge thik hi hoga.........."........Mayank smiled and then teasingly dded........"wo to hai........lekin Nupur, shaadi hum 2016 mein hi karenge........."

Nupur looked at him.......and said "mayank tum bhi na, by god............"...........and then both burst out laughing..........

and sat their for a while, relishing their togetherness..........



Edited by annie07 - 13 January 2010 at 12:11am

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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 1:29am | IP Logged
annie..loved it.....Hug.....hope cvs think like u & do the same in the show...& yeah! i m with mayank...no MN shaadi till 2016.please!!!!!!!!!LOL

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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Hey annie ..... Nice OS...... Loved it....specially 2016 wala dialogue... and when mayank assured her that he is really happy with the engagement....

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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Annie... tumhare writing mein ghee shakkar...... aisa hi scene mile show mein dekhne ke liye.... lovely OS...

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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
hey annie sooooooooo well written that 2016 part makes me all sad and feel like crying now, awwww mayank's plans all down no we should be positive and all is well.
 
annie very very well written indeed, do write more and more na.
 
God bless.

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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
lovely os dear

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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Happy Birthday Piya..............especially for u.............though i dont knw how relevant it is now!!!!

Nupur walked into the college corridor dreamily.........suddenly life was beautiful, it felt like shewoke up from a nightmare and was thankful that itsover.............

 

She kept glancing at the ring on her hand, her true engagement ring..............she got engaged to Mayank on her Bauji's instance.........and Mayank being him, agreed...........

 

Suddenly she saw Mayank coming from the opposite side and became all shy...........he was no longer her boyfriend, he was her fiance.............she felt same butterflies in her stomach, as she felt in intial days post their confession..........

 

Mayank's face lit up as he saw Nupur, finally she was his,and forever...........he walked towards her and said "hiNupur"..........

 

Nupur got all flustered and shy, and lowered her gaze.........this amused Mayank and smiling at her antics......he said........."kya baat hai, aaj suraj paschim se nikla kya?.........Nupur Bhushan aur chup hai"..............

 

Nupur looks up glaring at him, and he chuckles...........and says........"acha main library jaake aata hun.........."...........Nupur makes a face and says " Mayank, ek din library nahi jaoge to library kahin gum nahi hogi, wahin rahegi, tumhare intezaar mein"............

 

Mayank again smiled, he was now used to Nupur's mood swings.........and knew how to handle it...........he replied" kya karun,  tum to jaanti ho, library mera pehla pyar hai, aur main itne din usse dur raha to ab milna to padega na............".........and laughs................Nupur hits him on his shoulder, and turns away..........and he says, " Nupur, mujhe kuch books issue karani hai...............itna sab catch up karna

hai na..............tum canteen chalo mein aata hun".............

 

Nupur nods and they walk in opposite direction............Nupur sits in canteen waiting for Mayank, when he comes with a pile of books........ and says........" Nupur tum apne notes layi ho na.............class ke baad hum saath mein padhenge............jo bhi maine miss kiya  hai"...........Nupur is shocked and says "mayank, mein tumhe

samjhaungi............by god, aisa din bhi aayega maine nahin

socha tha"..........


Mayank says " haan tum hi meri help karogi, kyunki mein jaanta hum ki tum kitni intelligent ho, aur aise hi to nahin tumne Mayank Sharma ko do paper mein haraya tha"...........

 

Nupur smiles hearing...............Mayank holds her hand and says........." Nupur, ab mujhe aur bhi mehnat karni hai, kyunki main khud ko prove karna chahta hun, maa ke liye aur tumhare liye............".........."main chahta hun ki main tumhe aur maa ko sabse comfortable life de sakun".............

 

Nupur says "Mayank mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai, aur main tumhare saath hun".............

 

Mayank replies " saath to tumhe dena padega, kyunki ab tumhe bhi apne career ke baare mein sochna hai....kyunki main jaanta hun tum kitni talented ho, aur tum bhi kuch karna chahti ho"...........

 

Nupur is overwhelmed with emotions...........she had never imagined that her dreams and her aspirations will matter to someone............but then this was Mayank, and thats y she loved him so much............

 

she says "Mayank tumhe kaise pata..............lekin haan, main hamesha se kuch karna chahti thi, apne pairon pe khade hona ..............par mujhe laga mujh mein koi talent hi nahin hai........."

 

Mayank retorts " kisne kaha.............Nupur, tum ek achi designer ho, jo dresses tum apne aur gunjan ke liye design karti ho, they are very nice............tum is pe aur dhyan do......."

 

Nupur gets teary and smiles 2 .........."tumhe lagta hai main kar sakti hun?"

 

Mayank touches her cheek affectionately and says "bilkul kar sakti ho, aur main hun na tumhare saath, hum dono milke apne aur maa-bauji ke har sapne ko pura karenge.........hai na?'

 

Nupur nods and says "haan, aur chalo ab class chalein........"

 

Mayank smiles teasingly and says " Nupur tumhare tabiyat to thik hai na...........ye dusra chamatkar hai............tum aur class jaane ke liye bol rahi ho".............

 

Nupur glares at him, but then they both burst out

laughing......and walks towards class...............

 


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