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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 2:43am | IP Logged
annie very cuteeeeeee....touching os
 
i loved all .........aisa scene kab aayge mayur story mein
 
i want them 2 .........
this dialogue  "kabhi nahi, tum ho na

pakadne ke liye"...............

awww shooooo cuteeeeeee
nupz mom & mayu's dad convo is very sweet
 loved all the parts

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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 2:57am | IP Logged
absolutely wonderful Annie
great concept of M and N thinking about their respective parent they've lost.
I hope they show something similar in the show too. Simple yet meaningful

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okie I just read.. we are not supposed to give comments ...D'oh.. i'm sorry
will not repeat


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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 4:40am | IP Logged
awee annie it was just too gud..

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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Annie.....very wonderful OS....Dil Khush Ho Gaya...by God..!!
 
It is very simple yet touching scene....hope we get something like this in the show....I want Nupur talking about her Mom....her childhood must have been different without her Mom.....very touching scene...
 
And I like the dialouge...."Mai girna kabhi nahi chodungi...tum ho na pakdne ke liye"....cute....
 
 

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Completely loved it..thats what i want mayank& Nupur's relationship should be like, simple, realistic with lots of nok jhok.....i love them like that!!!!.........
Thank u soooooooo much for writing it, Annie..& please do writre more & more OS .like this.............ClapClapClap

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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 11:43am | IP Logged

Annie i lovedddddddddddd it man, i loveeee the way you wirte annie, you should write more and more and more.

Coming to the OS, i loved how you showed the MN relationship as it really is and should be with spice and sugar hehe. I loved how you started with things getting back to normal and nupur as her usual self coming over to help and uninvited hehe.
 
Mayank as his usual sarcastic self on the door and when she falls down or sia bout to fall, his dialogue of girna kab.. was sooooo well put annie.
 
i lovedddddddd the photo album bit, showing the emotional and vulnerable side of mayank and nupur.
 
Excellent work annie, missed mum annie.
 
But it was soooooooooo well writtem that i was forced to read it twice.
 
 

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Posted: 23 December 2009 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
Awwwh so adorable Annie! Cutest OS i've read in a long time...that mother-father bonding talk was exceptionally beautiful....i could imagine it...mayank and Nupur both sitting at his place..and having the cutest convo ever....Pleaseee write more Annie..if not in MJHT, at least this will keep us satisfied...

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