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Posted: 30 November 2009 at 11:50am | IP Logged
aw....good one annie.........

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really nice

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yaar this was too good annie.......
loved it........

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awwwwwww annie you write sooooooo well man, it was a very wonderfully written scene with a mixture of love, care, intensity and a little comic element, each ingredient in its perfect quantity.

wowwwwwwww it explored the sensitive side of them, i am so hoping to see that, mainly on nups and her loving side in the show but alas these creatives bhi na,
 
but it was an amazinggggggggggggggggg OS, please do pm it to gagan na.
 
excellent workkkkkkkkkkkkk, i so want them to talk like this man.

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awesome annie ....really good...Thumbs Up

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After lot of  arguments and accusations, Bui finally agreed to

Mayank and Nupur's relationship.
Somewhere in her heart she knew that there cant be a guy

better than Mayank for Nupur, he loved as she is and for

who she is.................

She went back to morena, taking promise from Mayank that

he will be always there for Nupur................

Same day they got another good news that Mayank's mom

has been transferred back to Mumbai..............their happiness

knew no bounds..................they will be together

forever..........

Mayank's mom had come, and now the whole house was to

be set up..........she left for office leaving Mayank for the

job.......

Nupur called Mayank, on not finding him in college, and

offered to help...........she reached his home and rang the

bell..........

Mayank opened the door................and smiled at Nupur........

Nupur - "by god , Mayank, tum mujhe khud se nahi bol sakte

the...........hamesha sab akele karna zaroori hai ,

kya..............pata hai main kitna pareshan ho gayi thi.........tum

ek phone nahi kar sakte the, ab aise kya dekh rahe ho, kuch

bolo bhi........."

Mayank - "Nupur, maa kehti hai dusron ke beech mein bolna

bad habit hai.., tum chup hogi to main bolunga......."

Nupur stays quiet.......and gestures him to speak................

he says............"main tumhe pareshan nahi karna chahta tha,

sisliye nahi bola, par i m sorry..............ab tum meri help kar

sakti ho?"................

She doesnt reply..............Maaynk smiles at her antics and

said "by god, nupur bhushan, main tum jaisa sample aaj tak

nahi dekha"...........

Nupur - "aur dekhoge bhi nahi, kyunki main ek hi piece hun

is duniya main"............

Mayank - "thank god, tum jaise do-char aur hote

to..........."..........

Nupur - "kya kaha Mayank, main tumhe chodungi nahi,

thehro............and she runs behind him........and is abt to fall,

whne he catches her.............and eye-lock

Mayank says " Nupur tum girna kab chodogi"............she

disentagles herself and replies "kabhi nahi, tum ho na

pakadne ke liye"...............

"chalo ab kaam karte hain........"...........Mayank starts arranging

the hall, and she works in his room, as he wanted her to set

up his room............she is setting his books, when she finds

an album..........she picks it up, and is about to open, when

Mayank takes it from her..............

Nupur "mayank, dekhne do na, tumhari bachpan ki photos

hai na......"

Mayank says no, nupur.............ye nahi........

Nupur makes a puppy dog face and says - "ab mera itna bhi

haq nahi hai.........."..........

He sighs and said ok, "par main dikhaunga"..........she happily

nods...

they sit on the sofa, and shows her the pics, his 1st birthday

party............his first day at school..........the rondu

Mayank......she happily see them...........

tehn he comes to  a pic of his with his dad, he stops at

that..and says "pata hai Nupur, main apne dad ko bahut miss

karta hun.............jab bhi koi problem hoti thi to wo hamesha

solve karte the.............unhone mujhe cycle sikhai, unke saath

mein cricket khelta tha.............."
"dad ke jaane ke baad, sab different ho gaya, maa ko itni

mushkil lete dekh maine decide kiya, ki main khub

padhunga, unki har problem solve kar dunga..........isiliye

maine duniya ko chod, books se dosti kar li............par shayad

maine kahin na kahin apne aap ko kho diya, thanx to u,

tumne mujhe sikhaya ki khushi aaj mein hai.........."

Nupur says "Mayank, main samajh sakti hun, maa ke jaane

ke baad, sab khatam ho gaya, bauji ne hamein bahut pyaar

kiya, par maa ki ab bhi bahut yaad aati hai, and she starts

crying...............

Mayank takes her in his arms and consoles her "Nupur, i m

sorry, main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta tha, meri maa bhi

to tumhari maa hai na".........

She pulls back and looks into his eyes and says "haan, aur

hum dono mil ke unka har sapna pur karenge..........main

tumhare saath hun Mayank..........."

He smiles and hugs her back.............

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awwwwwww.......this was so cute annie..!!!
by god...only if mayank would open up to nupur like that....alas....!
mayank is that kinda guy who can talk to samrat abt his chilhood but to nupur....i dunno...i just hope someday he really confides in her..!~

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awesome annie...so touching.....M talks about his dad and N about her mom..so sweet....I really liked it....bravo....

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