One shots on MN!! - Page 3

Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys i read all os now and they all were awesome...............
Posted: 14 years ago

ok, this is after Mayank is back for good.........actually i had written a similar one earlier, but i think didnt post it in OS gallery

 

Nupur and Mayank were walking to her home, they had been away from each other for too long, and this had made them realise that the only thing lacking in their relationship was communication.........Nupur was blabbering abt random stuff, and Mayank simply looked at her........

Suddenly she took away her hand from his, and glared at him......." Mayank, mein tumse aakri baar puch rahi hun.........tumne project ke baare mein kya socha hai......."

Mayank, came out of his trance and looked at her......."project?"........Nupur laughed out........."by god, ye to chamatkar ho gaya, Mayank Sharma aur project ke naam se confused......"......Mayank smiled sheepishly and said......"aisa kuch nahin hai.........haan project to karna hai na.......tum aaj shaam ko ghar aa jaana.....hum project start karenge......"

Nupur "by god Mayank, tum na duniya ke iklaute bf ho, jo apni gf ko study date pe bula raha hai....., ye nahi, ki chalo Nupur beach pe chalte hain........"

Mayank.." Nupur hum beach pe bhi jayange par project ke baad.......promise......"

She immediately smiled and Mayank smiled too, thinking that this is the girl he fell in love with..........her simplicity, her ability to find happiness in small things........

 

Nupur continued  " vaise tum mujhse kaam karwaoge.........matlab tum to itne intelligent ho, meri kya zaroorat hai.......maine socha tum mere partner ho to mujhe aaram milega......." she finished.........tongue in cheek, expecting an outburst.......but Mayank smiled and said " Nupur, ye mat sochna ki tum meri gf ho to saara kaam mein akele karunga........" nupur made a face , and Mayank continued....."aur vaise bhi mujhe tumhari creativity, tumhari spontaneity chahiye.........tabhi ye project sabse best banega...........hamara pehla project, jab tumne khud karna shuru kiya tha...........wo aur bhi better ho gaya tha.......Nupur, hum best jodi hain kyunki we both complete each other......samjhi?"

 

Nupur was taken aback....mayank had always praised her, but not this way.......she smiled and said "tumhe sach mein aisa lagta hai....."

 

Mayank "haan, aur ab chalo, mein chalta hun, shaam ko late mat hona......'

 

She nodded and said bye to him......

Posted: 14 years ago

Mayank and Nupur, sat in peace.........content to be with each other............her head was on his shoulder and his arms around her waist...........he spoke up......"Nupur.........kya soch rahi ho?"......."Ahmedabad trip ke baare mein...........tumhe yaad hai, jab meine apne sapno ke rajkumar ko dekhne ke liye aankhen band ki thi........".........he interupts....."haan aur mere siwa tumne pure college ko dekha tha".......Nupur Smiles and adds "actually, maine realise kiya ki maine har baar tumhe hi dekha tha....par maine tumhare saath wale bande pe concentrate kiya, kyunki maain kabhi soch bhi nahin sakti thi, ki tum mujhse pyar karoge......"..........."Nupur", Mayank says in a irritated voice "tumhe hamesha ye kyun lagta hai.........infact maine tumse kitna kuch sikha hai..........zindagi jeena......"........."main pehle tumhari jin qualities ko hate karta tha, actually mujhe un se hi pyar hua.......tumhara har pal mein khush rehna.........har din ko ek naye din ki tarah lena........"........."mayank, tum ye.......""nahin, nupur pls aaj mujhe kehne do, main nahin chahta ye bat hamesha tumhare mann mein rahe........ahmedabad trip mein tumne jis tarah us couple ki madad ki thi........tumhara spontaneous act, main kabhi nahin kar pata, sach much, hum wo academic jeete, kyunki tum meri partner thi..........main to tabhi tumse pyar karne laga tha.........par apne ko khone ke darr se chupata raha.........Nupur main tumse bahut pyar karta hun, kyunki tum tum ho, aur main nahi chahta ki tum badlo....."


Nupur "by god, Mayank, tum itna bol sakte ho...........lagta hai  

meri sangat ka asar hai.......".....  and they both laughed...."vaise Mayank tumhe yaad hai jab mein talli ho gayi thi......"......."kaise bhul sakta hun mein, Ms. Nupur Bhushan, jo hosh mein bhi aisi harkatein karti hai, wo peene ke baad to  pagal hi ho gayi thi.......pata hai tumne us din kya kaha tha....." "yaad hai na".......Mayank looks at her surprised.......while she continues........"tumhe nahi pata, nashe mein insaan sach bolta hai, aur mein bhi sach bol rahi thi..........par Mayank, tum sachi kitne ache ho, us trip mein tumne mera kitna saath diya, mere liye bus chodi.....us raat bhi mujhe khud se zyada tum pe vishwas tha.." Mayank replied "bus nahin chodta to tum kaise milti"....Nupur looked at him, and hugged him, and said "tum hamehsa aise hi rehna, tumhe raj banne ki zaroorat nahin.........mujhe Mayank sabse zyada pasand hai......"

 Mayank just hugged her back in response...........

 

 

Edited by annie07 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
aw....good one annie.........

👏

really nice
Posted: 14 years ago
yaar this was too good annie.......
loved it........Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago

awwwwwww annie you write sooooooo well man, it was a very wonderfully written scene with a mixture of love, care, intensity and a little comic element, each ingredient in its perfect quantity.

wowwwwwwww it explored the sensitive side of them, i am so hoping to see that, mainly on nups and her loving side in the show but alas these creatives bhi na,
 
but it was an amazinggggggggggggggggg OS, please do pm it to gagan na.
 
excellent workkkkkkkkkkkkk, i so want them to talk like this man.
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome annie ....really good...👍🏼
Posted: 14 years ago
hey yaar...
The OSs wer toooo gud!!
dey were awesum!!!
xelent work!!
do rite more soon....
thanx 4 d pm... =)
Posted: 14 years ago

After lot of  arguments and accusations, Bui finally agreed to

Mayank and Nupur's relationship.
Somewhere in her heart she knew that there cant be a guy

better than Mayank for Nupur, he loved as she is and for

who she is.................

She went back to morena, taking promise from Mayank that

he will be always there for Nupur................

Same day they got another good news that Mayank's mom

has been transferred back to Mumbai..............their happiness

knew no bounds..................they will be together

forever..........

Mayank's mom had come, and now the whole house was to

be set up..........she left for office leaving Mayank for the

job.......

Nupur called Mayank, on not finding him in college, and

offered to help...........she reached his home and rang the

bell..........

Mayank opened the door................and smiled at Nupur........

Nupur - "by god , Mayank, tum mujhe khud se nahi bol sakte

the...........hamesha sab akele karna zaroori hai ,

kya..............pata hai main kitna pareshan ho gayi thi.........tum

ek phone nahi kar sakte the, ab aise kya dekh rahe ho, kuch

bolo bhi........."

Mayank - "Nupur, maa kehti hai dusron ke beech mein bolna

bad habit hai.., tum chup hogi to main bolunga......."

Nupur stays quiet.......and gestures him to speak................

he says............"main tumhe pareshan nahi karna chahta tha,

sisliye nahi bola, par i m sorry..............ab tum meri help kar

sakti ho?"................

She doesnt reply..............Maaynk smiles at her antics and

said "by god, nupur bhushan, main tum jaisa sample aaj tak

nahi dekha"...........

Nupur - "aur dekhoge bhi nahi, kyunki main ek hi piece hun

is duniya main"............

Mayank - "thank god, tum jaise do-char aur hote

to..........."..........

Nupur - "kya kaha Mayank, main tumhe chodungi nahi,

thehro............and she runs behind him........and is abt to fall,

whne he catches her.............and eye-lock

Mayank says " Nupur tum girna kab chodogi"............she

disentagles herself and replies "kabhi nahi, tum ho na

pakadne ke liye"...............

"chalo ab kaam karte hain........"...........Mayank starts arranging

the hall, and she works in his room, as he wanted her to set

up his room............she is setting his books, when she finds

an album..........she picks it up, and is about to open, when

Mayank takes it from her..............

Nupur "mayank, dekhne do na, tumhari bachpan ki photos

hai na......"

Mayank says no, nupur.............ye nahi........

Nupur makes a puppy dog face and says - "ab mera itna bhi

haq nahi hai.........."..........

He sighs and said ok, "par main dikhaunga"..........she happily

nods...

they sit on the sofa, and shows her the pics, his 1st birthday

party............his first day at school..........the rondu

Mayank......she happily see them...........

tehn he comes to  a pic of his with his dad, he stops at

that..and says "pata hai Nupur, main apne dad ko bahut miss

karta hun.............jab bhi koi problem hoti thi to wo hamesha

solve karte the.............unhone mujhe cycle sikhai, unke saath

mein cricket khelta tha.............."
"dad ke jaane ke baad, sab different ho gaya, maa ko itni

mushkil lete dekh maine decide kiya, ki main khub

padhunga, unki har problem solve kar dunga..........isiliye

maine duniya ko chod, books se dosti kar li............par shayad

maine kahin na kahin apne aap ko kho diya, thanx to u,

tumne mujhe sikhaya ki khushi aaj mein hai.........."

Nupur says "Mayank, main samajh sakti hun, maa ke jaane

ke baad, sab khatam ho gaya, bauji ne hamein bahut pyaar

kiya, par maa ki ab bhi bahut yaad aati hai, and she starts

crying...............

Mayank takes her in his arms and consoles her "Nupur, i m

sorry, main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta tha, meri maa bhi

to tumhari maa hai na".........

She pulls back and looks into his eyes and says "haan, aur

hum dono mil ke unka har sapna pur karenge..........main

tumhare saath hun Mayank..........."

He smiles and hugs her back.............

Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwww.......this was so cute annie..!!!
by god...only if mayank would open up to nupur like that....alas....!
mayank is that kinda guy who can talk to samrat abt his chilhood but to nupur....i dunno...i just hope someday he really confides in her..!~

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