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Posted: 02 November 2009 at 2:56am | IP Logged
sanam it was amazingly written....every emotion was perfect

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Posted: 02 November 2009 at 5:13am | IP Logged

Really nice one-shot sweety!ClapClapClap

Thanks soo much for the PM!Big smile
Love,
NikySmile

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Posted: 02 November 2009 at 6:10am | IP Logged
nice one

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Posted: 02 November 2009 at 6:33am | IP Logged
hey sanam..congo on ur gallery..
 
Nice one shot
 
Mayank and Nupur had drifted apart..but then came back together anyway!..they must hv missed each other like hell..but then the kiss and the hug were so cute..
 
thnx 4 d PM
do write more
 
-aish

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Posted: 02 November 2009 at 8:56am | IP Logged
hiiiiii
fabulous job!
the emotions were well captured....it was well written
liked it.....keep wrtiting!

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Posted: 02 November 2009 at 11:51am | IP Logged
great one shot it was so cuttttttttttttttte

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its just
i cant judge
hat off to u dear

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Posted: 03 November 2009 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Hey sanooooo!!
Sorry im commenting a bit late but
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Wow i didn't know my little baby sister was so talented!!!!! Wink
I absolutely loved it!! Fabtastic OS Star
ad the way yu portrayed it with mayank's and nupur's point of views separately was amazing!!! Clap
And the song yu chose was perfect!! Suited the situation perfectly!! Tongue
Beautiful ending!! Embarrassed Well done!!

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