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Mariha_LoveIF

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Posted: 31 October 2009 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Aakhri raat!

Note : This FF is in hindi so dat it creates more fun to read 4 pakistanis and indians...AND THIS IS MY GIFT TO THE FF READERS FOR THE HALLOWEEN!!! Smile


:: Samrat aur Gunjan ki shadi hochuki hoti hai..

Ek baar Samrat office jata hai..Aur kehta hai "Gunjan! Mera dost aaega..Usko keh dena ke main ghar se bahar hun"

Aur Gunjan sunke kehti hai."Haan Samrat main keh dun gi"

*Ting tong*
Gunjan bhaagti hui..darwaze par puhanchi..


Lekin darwaze ke hole se koi nazar nahi aaya..Gunjan ne socha, "Koi badtameez bache bell baja kar bhag gaye!"

Gunjan waapis kitchen mein chali gayi..Lekin Gunjan ne galti se salt ki jaga sugar daal di...

*Ting Tong* *Ting Tong*

Gunjan phir bhaagi aur darwaaza kholte hi chikhi.."Agar ab bell bajai to.."

Lekin bahar to koi nahi tha..Gunjan ko gussa agaya..Wo darwaza band arne lagi achanak ek admi black suit mein usse nazar aaya..Jo usse ghoor raha tha..

Gunjan darr gayi.."Aaa! Aap..Aap kahan se agaye..Ap kon hain?..Arrey ap kahin Samrat ke dost to nahi I'm so sorry..Wo kuch bache bell baja kar bhag rahe the na..Isi liye.."

Lekin us admi ne Gunjan ki baat kaat kar kaha.."Haan main Samrat ka dost hun..Aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ke Samrat office gaya hai..!"

Gunjan boht shocked reh gayi.."Lekin..Ap ko kaise.." Gunjan isse pehle ke kuch aur puchti..Wo admi waapis chala gaya...


Jab Samrat ghar waapis aya to..

(Samrat) : Gunjan! Mera dost aya tha kya?
(Gunjan) : Haan aur barra ajeeb dost hai tmhara..Kuch bolo to baat kaat deta hai..Aur kuch pucho aur waapis chala jaata hai..
(Samrat) : hehe..Usne aisa kia..Pagal hai..Excel college mein bhi aisi hi harkatein karta tha class mein..Yaad hai naa tmhein?
(Gunjan) : Maine to isko kabhi collehe mein nahi dekha..
(Samrat) : Kya hogaya hai tumhein Gunjan..Tmhare saath waali desk pe hi to beth ta tha wo..Choti si height wala larka jo boht masoom sa tha..
(Gunjan) : Lekin jo tmhara dost aaj aya tha..Uski height to bohat zyada lambi thi aur terrorist jaisi shaqal thi..
(Samrat) : Acha..Main usse baat karun ga...

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Us raat..Gunjan aur Samrat dono so rahe the..Achanak ek awaaz ayi.."Dhish dowm" ,

Gunjan uth gayi!.."Arrey ye kaisi awaaz hai" Ye keh kar dining room mein gayi..


To usne dekha ke well-decorated plate mein biryani parri hai jiske samne ek glass tuta hua hai...


Gunjan ne socha.."Maine to biryani dust bin mein phenk di thi kyunke usme salt ki jaga sugar dal gaya tha to phir ye plate mein biryani kisne rakhi.."

Gunjan ne wo biryani taste ki..Wo biryani bohat tasty thi.."Ye kaise possible hai!..Jo biryani maione phenk di kyunke uska taste kharab hogaya tha wohi biryani itni mazedar tasteful kaise hogayi!...Kuch to ajeeb hai"


Usne biryani fridge mein rakh di aur waapis so gayi..



Subah hogayi..Samrat office chala gaya tha..Gunjan ne fridge khola to biryani GAYAB HOGAYI!
Usne kaha.."BIRYANI KAHA GAYI..Arrey shayad Samrat ne khaa li hogi.." Lekin sink mein breakfast ki plates to thin lekin biryani ki nahi..!

Gunjan ne socha..."Samrat biryani ki plate kyun wash karega..Wo to waise hi late hojata hai..Kuch to garr barr hai"


Gunjan ek old si aurat ko ghar mein bulati hai..Jisse log UMA BIBI ke naam se bulate the..

(Gunjan) : Uma bibi, Mere saath kal se kuch aise haadse horahe hain jo hadd se zyada ajeeb hain..Mujhe kuch samaj nahi araha..
(Uma bibi) : Wo sab haadse hokar rahenge..!
(Gunjan) : Lekin kyun?
(Uma bibi) : Kyunke IS GHAR MEIN AATMAEN HAIN WO BHI EK NAHI CHAAR AATMAA!!!!!!!!
(Gunjan) : KYA! *fainted*


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Uma bibi wahin dethi thi..Achanak Samrat waapis agaya..Wo unko apne ghar mein dekh kar chaunk gaya! Samrat ne kaha .." Ap kon hain aur yahan kya karahi hain?" But achanak usne fainted Gunjan ko dekha..aur chilya.."GUNJAN! Meri Gunjan ko kya hua...Apne kya kia hai..!!!"


Suddenly Uma bibi turned her face in anger and saw Samrat in angry expression.."Mujhe log Uma bibi kehte hain..TERI Gunjan ko sach kadwaa lag gaya hai..."

Samrat said, "Sach! Konsa sach! kaisa sach!"

Uma bibi answered, "Tere ghar mein boht si aatmaa hain! Teri patni ne un mein se Do aatmaa ko dekh lia hai..Agar usne aur DO aatma bhi dekh lien to wo puri tarhan se pagal hojae gi.."

Samrat was in shock..and asked.."Kya matlab pagal hojae gi?"

Uma bibi answered." Tune wo jungle ke Baba to dekhe hi honge...Jo apna sarr hilate rehte hain..Un logon par bhi in bhatakti aatmaon ka asar hota hai..Aur ab teri patni ki baari hai"

Samrat ne kaha.."Main ye hone nahi dunga" ::


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Discover what happens.,.Kya wo DO aatmaen Gunjan ko dikh jaengi aur Gunjan pagal ho jae gi.. ya phir Samrat usse bacha le ga... Akhir ye aatmaa kahan se aaein hain..Inka kya rishta hai Gunjan se..? Uma Bibi kahin jhoot to nahi bol rahin? SAMRAT GUNJAN KO UN 4 AATMAON SE KAISE BACHAE GA!!!



Read all in my next posts!


Thank u for reading,
Mariha...


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Posted: 31 October 2009 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
wow mariha nice update dear
plz continue soon
love sana


Edited by sana866 - 31 October 2009 at 9:19pm

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Posted: 31 October 2009 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
very nice do update soon

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Woww yaar!
Veryy NICE!!
AMAZING!=)

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wow.
nice update.
wud luv to be a part of this ff.
do pm me wen u update the next part.
quite intresting.
 
 
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Posted: 05 November 2009 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Special Note : Thank you for such praising my FF, I first thought that nobody will like it because its too horror types but I'm glad here are sum awesum people who love horror and thriller, suspense type of ff's..Luv u all too too too much..Keep reading dis FF...
Mariha





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Ek Mahina guzar gaya, Lekin Gunjan ki tabiyat sahi nahi hui..Usse fever hogaya tha.... :

(Doctor) : " Dekhie, Mr.Samrat Shergill , Mujhe ye to pata hai ke fever hota hai aur fever sahi hone mein time bhi leta hai lekin ye case kuch ajeeb saa hai..Ye kaisa fever hai jo ek mahine se hat nahi raha.."

(Samrat) : " Kya kehna chahte hain aap..Meri wife ko kya hua hai?"

(Doctor) : "Hmm, Mujhe jo lagta hai wo ye hai ke apki wife ka behaviour kuch ajeeb hogaya hai. Sach btaun to aise logon ko hum mental patient consider karte hain aur hum hi nahi Duniya ke saare doctors yehi maante hain..Mera khayal hai ke ap inko pagal khane bharti kr dein.."

(Samrat) : "Kya kaha aapne !!! Meri Gunjan ko agar pagal kaha to main tujhe chorun gaa nahi.. Doctor hai to anaap shanaap bolega.. Main apni biwi ko yahan se dhoor le jaunga warna ye duniya usse pagal kar de gi..!!! "

       


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Samrat ye bhaari statement de kar..Gunjan ko apne hands mein utha kar car mein le gaya..Achanak Gunjan ko hosh aya aur wo chilaai,

"Kahan le kar jaaraha hai tu mujhe!..Mujhe mere Nikhil ke paas le jaa! Warna main yahin jaan de dun gi!! "

Samrat boht shocked ho gaya, "Lekin Gunjan..Hum kisi Nikhil Wikhil ko nahi jaante..Naa main..Aur naa hi Tum..Main tmhara pati hun Samrat..Tumhe kya hogaya hai?"

Gunjan koi baat sunne ko tayyar naa thi, Wo car se utarne ki puri koshish mein thi..Lekin achanak Samrat ka phone baja.."Tring Tring"..Samrat ne dekha to Uma Bibi ka phone tha..

Samrat ne phone uthaya..
(Samrat) : " Hello, haan Uma Bibi.."
(Uma Bibi) : " Tu apni biwi ko waapis le aya!!! "
(Samrat) : " h.h.a.a.a.n haan Lekin aap ko kaise pata chala..? "
(Uma Bibi) : " Log mujse apna bhawayish isi liye jaan ne aate hain kyunke mujhe sab pta hota hai.."
(Samrat) : " Wo to theek hai par kya maine kuch galat kia hai? "
(Uma Bibi) : " Tu ne bohat galat kia hai!!! "
(Samrat) " Kya..To ab main kya karun Uma Bibi? "
(Uma Bibi) : " Apni Biwi ko us barri si paani ki nadi ke paas chor de..! "
(Samrat) : " Kya!!! Lekin kyun! ur ap ko kaise pata ke saamne ek pani ki naddi hai? "
(Uma Bibi) : " Bataya naa ke mujhe sab pata hota hai aur teri Biwi Bhaagi nahi jaarahi..! Sun! Agar tu apni biwi ka bhala chahta hai..To wohi kar jo main keh rahi hoon, Itne dinon se maine hi tmhari madad ki hai, Aage bhi main karun gi.. "
(Samrat) : " Hmm..A.c.c.c.h.h.h.h.h.a "




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Samrat jo karna nahi chahta tha..Wo usse karna parra..

Samrat ne ek barri si naddi ke samne Gunjan ko chor dia..

(Gunjan) : " Nikhil..!!!.. Tu yahin hai..Mujhe pata hai.."
(Samrat) : " Lekin yahan to koi nahi hai Gunjan!"
(Gunjan) : " Tu chala jaa yahan se.Main Gunjan nahi hun..Main Sapna hun!!! Aur mera Nikhil bhi mere paas hi aaega.. "

Samrat bohat hi shocked reh gaya aur Gunjan ne usse dhakke maarna shuru kardia wo bhi naddi mein..Samrat kissi tarhan jaan bacha kar bhaag gaya...

Samrat jaa hi raha tha..Achanak usse ek Pagal Baba nazar aae jo apna sarr hilarahe the..Samrat ko yaad aya ke Uma bibi ne kaha tha ke Shayd Gunjan bhi in hi logon ki tarhan ho jae..

Samrat waapis gaya..Lekin wahan pe Gunjan nahi thi..Samrat ne puri jaga dhund lia lekin Gunnjan usse naa mili..

Akhir kaar majbur hokar, Samrat us Baba ke paas gaya aur pucha, "Sunie, Kya aapne abhi kisi chashmish..I mean chashme wali ladki ko dekha jo pink kapre peheni hui thi?"

Baba ne Samrat ko dekhte hi chilaya, "Tu uski baat to nahi karaha JO ABHI NIKHIL NIKHIL chilla rahi thi aur Phir achanak naddi mein kood parri"




Kya Gunjan sach mein kood parri hai..? Find out in my next post..Thank you..

Edited by Mariha_Kapoor - 05 November 2009 at 11:09am

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Posted: 05 November 2009 at 4:48am | IP Logged
hey mariha..nice FF...just read it..
 
SaJan are married ..nice..but their house is haunted?!..with 4 aatma's?!..omg..!..n i hope Gunjan dusnt see d other two..
 
n the dr said that Gunjan is mad?!.wth..i hope Samrat can save her..but she seems to be on the look out for Nikhil..nw who the hell is he!...omg..this is scary..!
 
update soon
 
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Posted: 05 November 2009 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Interesting.....Plzz continue soon!!!

Love,
SameeraSmile

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