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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
hey guys,
this is Suhana as some of you might be knowing...

here is a new Mini FF...
actually a joint effort by Kavya(premeer4rever) and me...
the central idea and everything is of Kavya and i only helped her to make it more presentable...
so large share rests with her...

i hope you guys will enjoy this combined effort of ours...
here goes the first chapter...
enjoy...


TERI YAAD SAATH HAI...

CHAPTER 1


A man in his late twenties was giving a presentation.

"Gentlemen as you can see, Juneja Industries has been the most successful company in foreign markets for last four years. We haven't suffered a loss of even a single Rupee plus none of our clients ever had any complaint while working with us.

I can assure that the offer we are giving is the best one, and you cannot find a deal better than this one in the whole country.

I am sure that if you people will be working in India, your partners cannot be anyone else but the Junejas."

He said winding up the presentation and left the conference room. His secretary turned off the projector and turned on the lights.

The clients seemed to be very much impressed by him and why not after all he was the most booming business man of India, winning the best Business Man of the Year Award for last three years in the row and also successful in bagging couple of  International recognitions.

Prem Juneja another name of accomplishment, everything he touched literally changed into gold. Although Juneja Industries were doing very well before he joined in four years ago but he took the company to the heights and now Juneja Industries were classified among top five businesses of India.

He reached his cabin and threw himself on his chair after loosening the knot of his tie and throwing his jacket on the sofa. His secretary followed him in and arranged the files and laptop on his table.

PREM: Jenny could you please tell the peon to bring me a cup of coffee.

JENNY: off course, Sir. (she instructed the peon on the intercom)

PREM:  that's so nice of you.

JENNY: another brilliant Presentation, Sir. I am very sure the contract is coming to us.

PREM:  thanks Jenny. And yes, obviously the contract is coming our ways. After all PREM JUNEJA jo kaam shuru karta hai woh anjaam tak zaroor pohnchta hai.

Jenny smiled as she knew that whatever he said was all correct, his success rate was 100%.  The phone rang, he asked Jenny to answer it.

JENNY:  Sir, it's a call from Big Boss. Lalit Sir wants to meet you.

PREM: OK. Tum meri coffee dad ke cabin mein hi bhejwa dena. (he said getting up from the chair)

He then wore his Jacket and set his tie and went towards his father's cabin. He knocked slightly and entered in.

LALIT:  Hey son, you did it again. Delegates ko humari Presentation bohat pasand aayi and we got the deal.

PREM:  wow!  I already knew it dad, aur issi khushi mein aaj sham ko party throw ki hai main ne'

LALIT:  chalo acha kiya, acha ab jaldi se woh baat batao jo subah karna chah rahe the'

PREM:  Dad mein aap ko kuch batana chahtha hoon.

LALIT: Jaldi bata kya baat hai?

PREM:  actually Dad, I want to get married'

LALIT: Tu sach keh raha hai Pem?

PREM: haan Dad' I am serious about it'

LALIT: per main ne aur teri maa ne kitni baar tujh se iss bare mein baat ki' aur tu hamesha inkar karta raha' aaj yun achanak hi faisla le liya?

PREM:  I know' but main ne bohat socha iss bare mein' mom sahi thi mujhe apne future ke liye yeh kadam uthana hi tha' 

LALIT:  Aaj tu khud samne se shaadi ke bare mein baat kar raha hai' main bohat khush hoon' jo bhi tera faisla hai wahi mera bhi faisla hai. Main tumahari mom ko batata hoon' bohat khush hogi woh yeh sun ker'

PREM: Thanks dad.

LALIT: thank you son' mujhe itni bari khushi dene ke liye' acha yeh tou bata larki kon hai?

PREM: Dad larki bohat achi hai' aap log jantein hain usse'

LALIT: tune pasand ki hai achi tou hogi hi' tu bata hai kon?

PREM: woh surprise hai' sham mein hi khule ga' aap ko party ka intezar karna hoga'

LALIT: chal theek hai jahan itne saal apni bahu ka chehra dekhne ke liye intezaar kiya hai' wahan kuch ghante aur sahi' (he smiled and patted Prem's shoulder)

Prem went back to his cabin. He stoods by the window viewing the beautiful sight of ocean in front of him. He takes out his mobile.

 

Lalit dials gayatri to give her the news which she was awaiting for a long time.  

LALIT: Hello gayatri. 

GAYATRI: Hello ji boliye aap ne achanak aise phone kyun kiya?

LALIT: Ek kush kabardeni thi..

GAYATRI: Aap ko deal milgayi yaheen baat hai na.

LALIT: Deal toh milgayi kabar woh nahin hai.. pehle tum baith jao phir bataounga

 

GAYATRI: Aap yeh bachon jaise kya baat kar rahe ho.. jaldi bataiye baat kya hai?

 

LALIT: Prem shaadi karna chahtha hai..

GAYATRI: Kya??????? sach???

LALIT: Haan yeh sach hai.

GAYATRI: Mujhe toh yakeen hi nahin ho raha hai. kahaan hai woh usse phone do

LALIT: Apni cabin mein hai,

GAYATRI:  Aap log jaldi ghar aajayen' aur yeh tou bataiye meri hone wali bahu hai kon?

LALIT:  woh tou main bhi nahin janta' Prem aaj raat ki party mein hi milwaye ga'

GAYATRI: main sham ki pori tayyari kar ke rakhon gi' aap log time se aa jana'

LALIT:  theek hai'

The call ended and both Lalit and gayatri are extremely happy about the fact that atlast their son agreed to marry. 

Prem dialed a number with a million dollar smile on his face. 

PREM: Hello' 

GIRL: hello finally tumhe meri yaad aahi gayi'

PREM: Tum jaanti ho na mein presentation ko lekar busy tha

GIRL: Haan aaj presentation tha na deal milgayi hogi, yehi baatane ke liye phone kiya na 

PREM: Tumhe kaise pata deal milgayi? 

GIRL: Prem juneja ka presentation hai, kabhi fail ho sakti hai? 

PREM: Ohh acha lekin mein ne yeh batane ke liye phone nahin kiya

GIRL: Phir

PREM: Mein papa se shaadi ke baare mein baat ki

GIRL: Kya kaha unhone? 

PREM: Woh maan gaye!!!

GIRL: Kya??? OMG mujhe toh yakeen nahin horaha..

PREM:  yakeen karlo madam' Dad shadi ke liy man gaye hain' aur aaj sham ko party mein hi main tumhe sabse introduce karwane wala hoon'

GIRL: introduction ki kya zarorat hai? Sab jante tou hain mujhe'

PREM: haan jante hain' per sirf meri achi dost aur ek business associate ki tarah' aaj main tuumhe apni hone wali wife ki tarah introduce karane wala hoon'

GIRL: Prem' tumne ache se soch liya hai naa iss barey mein?

PREM: kis barey mein? Sham ki party mein tumhe sabse milane ke barey mein?

GIRL: nahin Prem' humari shaadi ke barey mein?

PREM: yeh tum kya kehna chah rahi ho?

GIRL:  anjaan mat bano PRem' tum jante ho main kis barey mein baat kar rahi hoon? Sach sach batao ke 5 saal pehle ki un yadon ko bhula ke tum ek nayi zindagi guzarne ke liye tayyar ho?

PREM: tum janti ho main us barey mein baat nahin karna chahta' bari mushkil se main shaadi ka faisla kar paya hoon' plz purani baton ko ek baar phir mat chero'

GIRL: ok nahin karti us barey mein baat' but tum shaadi ke barey mein phir soch lo'

PREM: I have made my decision'

GIRL: theek hai then main hamesha ki tarah tumhare saath hoon Prem'

PREM: I know' tum ho tabhi main itna bara faisala le paya hoon'

GIRL:  chalo sham mein milte hain'

PREM: hmm' bye!

GIRL: listen PRem' tum khush ho naa?

PREM: trust me SANJANA main bohat khush hoon ke humari shaadi hone ja rahi hai'

He said and disconnected the call.



that is it for first chapter...

we really hope it was good enough...and we are all open for criticism...

do let us know what you think about it...

and we will be maintaining a new pm list for this one... so people who want their name to be added plz feel free to ask...


take care,

Kavya and Suhana.



Edited by Suhana Ahmed - 09 April 2010 at 11:01am

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INDEX

Chapter 2- pg 6

Chapter 3- pg 11

Chapter 4- pg 14

Chapter 5- pg 20

Chapter 6- pg 26

Chapter 7- pg 35

Chapter 8- pg39

Chapter 9(a)- pg44

Chapter 9(b)- pg47

Chapter 10(a)- pg48


Edited by Kavya.... - 21 June 2011 at 4:32am

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Hey Suhana this sounds good!Smile
i'll be keeping an eye out for more or u can PM me.Smile
Anu. 

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great

wonder wat happens next

thanx 4 THE PM

UPDATE SOON

Kamal

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Posted: 31 October 2009 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by premeer4rever

yeah first me

i know its' really so stupid to comment on our own work..but still i've dropped in
to say that
you did an amazing job....
i'm actually surprised the way you executed itClap
thank you Smile


hello... its our combined effort thanking me is same as thanking your ownselfWink
an the amazing job is by both of us...
Hello Kavya! we cant praise ourselves... let the readers do thatLOL

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Posted: 31 October 2009 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by locman

Hey Suhana this sounds good!Smile
i'll be keeping an eye out for more or u can PM me.Smile
Anu. 


hey Anu,
thanx for liking this...
ya sure we can pm you...

regards,
Kavya and Suhana.

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Posted: 31 October 2009 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kamal_23

great

wonder wat happens next

thanx 4 THE PM

UPDATE SOON

Kamal


thanx dear...
we will try to update asap...

regards,
Kavya and Suhana.

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hiiiiii
sounds really good....nice first chapter!
update the next soon!
 

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