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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess52

is this reallly ur first attempt??????
doesnt look like...
the sshot was superb......loved it to bitsss......
do write some more n pm me if u do
love habs


yes daear, it was my 1st attempt.
i am happy u liked it.
shall surely pm u for more of them.
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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammygurl

wow...that was sooo gud man...
awesum....
I mean...so sweet...it made me smile all over...:)
it ended soon but it was really nice...
AR love each other....everybody agreed for marriage...what else does a reader want?
I hate Armaan to see crying but i cud imagine everything u wrote...
so gud for us..and u too..:)
take care
pm me if u write more



Ananya


thanx ananya
i too enjoyed writing its every part.
and i was worried tht it was too long.
i shall surely send u a pm when i write more.
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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 11:29am | IP Logged
hey hi
well i just read your this one shot , gosh this was the best i have read ever , i loved reading this , the way you written it was fab , i dodnt believe this was your first attempt of yours for writting somethink , ab tak kahaa the tum madam , you were great , i just soo loved reading your story ,
gosh that was such a sweet love story , full of emotions , and perfect discription , lovely work sweety , would love to read more and more from you ,
doo try and write more of these kinds , you were great with this
 
will be waiting to read more from you
till then take care
lots of love
simi

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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi2

hey hi
well i just read your this one shot , gosh this was the best i have read ever , i loved reading this , the way you written it was fab , i dodnt believe this was your first attempt of yours for writting somethink , ab tak kahaa the tum madam , you were great , i just soo loved reading your story ,
gosh that was such a sweet love story , full of emotions , and perfect discription , lovely work sweety , would love to read more and more from you ,
doo try and write more of these kinds , you were great with this
 
will be waiting to read more from you
till then take care
lots of love
simi


wowoh simi,
u've made me reach the 9th cloud.
due regards, i'll surely write some more of them.
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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
amazing
thx for the pm's plz plz write more. u got talent

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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 1:29pm | IP Logged

honey really good shot .A sixer .

try more shots .u had written it so well.
It doesn't seems that its Ur first attempt.
keep going.
love
ritu

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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
wooow awesome shot really good

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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 3:47pm | IP Logged

Hi There...

The story started in an interesting way. Riddhima is an Editor. Nice... The links between all the other characters is very sweetly written. I wonder how you manage to do so in just a paragraph... LOL... actually I am quite a wordy person, so its hard for me to explain something so easily. Anyways, back to story now. Woah, Riddhima went to Punchgani for Holi celebrations.

Oh my, what was that? The person Riddhima loves HATES her... WHY? Arey baba re, Armaan Malik, so much attitude at 14... wow, this guy is something. He is a tough boy.

I loved the way you elaborated Riddhima's feelings towards Armaan and her antics to keep her 'secret' safe and secure.

The three Musketeers are great. I felt that Armaan was kind of avoiding Riddhima. I think Armaan thought Rahul and Riddhima are a couple. So, maybe he was crying for this reason. Oye, ye Armaan to bhot chaalu nikla... he was the one who used to paint Riddhima every Holi morning… plus he steal all her data from her cammy... he is really a witty smart guy. An adorable prankster in disguise.

It was a wonderfully written one shot. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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