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Very nice part......continue soon.

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thanks all of u .. i m kinda busy in my cousins wedding ... but i ll post tthe updt soon :))

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PART FIVE
FIVE MONTHS AGO


One month had already been over and i cudnt find luck anywhere. Instead a new problem was at my door. One fine morning as i checked money to have breakfast, i discovered that i was running out of money already. I went to a nearby hotel to find if i can buy something to eat.
"How much is a chicken burger?"
"Rs.75 Ma'am"
"Oh my God and a veg burger?"
"Rs.50 Ma'am"
I looked at the money i had and all i had was a thousand rupee note.
"Well thats still too much. Please get me a cup of coffee.. i think that is all i can afford right now."
"Sure Ma'am"
The man went to get a coffee and i was sitting there waiting for it when i heard a group of 3 girls singing and dancing loudly like as if they are in a disco. I was like is she doing belly dancing or hip hop or what? I was confused. Finally they all had their seats and one of them raising her coke glass cheered.
"I pledge that i will never forget you my friends and sisters Cherry and Shelley"
The other two raised the glass and chirped together
"We will never forget you too Shaina"
I was kind of amazed and asked the man "Are these regulars over here?"
"Yes they are."
"Are they dancers?"
"No"
"Singers?" I asked with a big smile.
"No, they are Singirls from Singirls's"
"Singirls from Singirls? what do u mean?"
"Well its Singirls's with an apostrophe 'S'.. confusing huh?"
"Confusing" i had a blank face.
"Go and check" He just gave me a card. I saw it and there was a vacancy for a girl age between 18-25 yrs over there.
"But what it ...." i had to stop asking him more questions because i saw he got busy in other customers and check it myself.

As i was running out of money i needed a job as well. The same day after my coffee i went to the place.  It was empty and looked like a club or some other version of a bar. I heard someone calling me.
"Who are you?"
"Hi, i m Gunjan..i came here for the job"
She looked at me from toe to top, maybe i was very simple for the job.
"From where?"
"Manipur"
"What Mini ... ?"
"Umm .. its Manipur .. i came here to find a singer for my songs but now i realized i need a job"
"Oh hi, i m Sonny. So come tomorrow for auditions" She just said and went away.
"U mean i got the job??" I was excited.
"Its just an audition. U sound to me like a teacher. U will be good to handle my guests. Tomorrow sharp at 8 pm"
"Thanks i will" I was happy to atleast get something in MUMBAI.

PRESENT DAY

From the next night i started a life that totally made me different and took me away from my near and dear ones. Including Daddy, Simi and "him".

FIVE MONTHS AGO
to be continued...

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Please post ur comments. They are a real booster for me. And thanks for the comments that u give. After writing this part i got a feeling that this fanfic will not be very long. I mean not like those having 50-70 parts. It might.. theres this might.. it might get over in 30 parts . I m not sure how many parts it will take. But one thing is for sure.. ill keep updating this story as it is completely ready.

PS: i have put the banner on page 1 for the fanfic. do take pains to check it ones. its good for imaginationTongueWink. Credit goes to griffinmonster.Smile



Edited by talkativetaurus - 26 November 2009 at 3:50am

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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 3:57am | IP Logged
It was Fabulous!Clap  Please Please continue soon! I am really eager to read it!

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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 4:02am | IP Logged
heyy...nice.. :) am i there on ur pm list???? pl add me :)

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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 4:14am | IP Logged
hey nice updates

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Posted: 19 November 2009 at 11:46am | IP Logged
wowow tht was cool

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excellent work man.
 
 

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