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Posted: 28 October 2009 at 5:31am | IP Logged

"Learning to Breathe" is a title taken from the movie A Walk To Remember's soundtrack by Switchfoot. However it is completely different from the movie. This Fanfic is an inspiration from Priyanka Chopra's superhit "Fashion", however the storyline is not the same.

This is a story of a young girl name Gunjan who is a very good songwriter.
"Learning to Breathe" denotes two special things in her life; her 'dream' and her 'love' - both of which are on test at this time.

This is going to be a flashback story narrated by Gunjan herself of what happened 6 months back before she got at this stage when both her special things are at test.


I dont know if he will come today to see me singing on stage. I know i hurt him. But if it wudnt have been for him i wouldnt have been here. My song is nothing without him. They require him, my dreams require him. I need him. Please come.

(Tears went down her cheeks as she wiped her hands on the gift he had given her. It was silky white and something for a bride but suitably modified by him so that she cud use it on her first show. She waited in the green room before the technical problems get over.)

 He was right i was not doing what i was suppose to do. I came to Mumbai from Manipur to fulfill my dreams and what i was doing was crushing them with my own hands.  How cud I do that? How cud i ruin them and how cud i hurt him?

to be continued...

If you guys think i shud continue it then pls press the like button and leave a comment if u wish for a pm so tht i can make a pm list n add u over there.



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Edited by talkativetaurus - 20 January 2010 at 8:29am

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Posted: 28 October 2009 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
hey awesome work.

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Posted: 28 October 2009 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
heyy i love it plzz contuied soon

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Posted: 28 October 2009 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
I love it !!! please continue

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Posted: 29 October 2009 at 10:59am | IP Logged
i loved it.... please do do do continue it soon.....thnx for pm.....looks interesting

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talkativetaurus IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 6:55am | IP Logged

I worked in Uncle Sunny's coffee shop at Manipur. He was dad's friend. He knew that i needed to earn very much for the house and care for daddy after mummy died 5 years ago.
"Daddy stop that now. You will get insomnia if u go on like this" I shouted at him like a mother.
"Oh sweetheart. Its ok. I have had only 10 cups. Few more to go. I need to win the race. I need to show uncle sunny how much i loved his coffee" It had become a daily schedule, where i worked whole day and daddy and uncle sunny had competitions of who will drink more coffee till i finish my work.
"Ok now stop. I m done. Uncle Sunny, if u have any more work then pls let me know before i leave for Mumbai early morning" It was my last day at work in his shop.
"Ok Bhushan now stop. I m sad. My daughter is leaving." He never called daddy by his name and therefore we all forgot if daddy was ever given a name. He was known as Mr. Bhushan.
"Your daughter?"
"Yes, because shes your mother. Why r u getting jealous?"
Daddy was not jealous but rather angry or unhappy because he was not ok with the idea me leaving Manipur.
"Ok Gunjan, come here sweety. I want your autograph on this paper"
"My autograph?"
"Yes! I want to take the privilege of having Manipur's best singers autograph very first."
"Oh Uncle Sunny. My dreams are yet to come true. And i m only a song writer. U know that." I told him while signing a piece of paper for him.
"Mark my words dear. U r a singer and that too a best one." He stuck the paper on the shops wall so that it remains in front of his eyes forever. Daddy, Uncle Sunny and my friend Simi; always thought i was good at singing. But honestly speaking i thought they always lied. Because i used to write songs and i just wanted someone to sing it for me.

Early morning, as i said daddy was a little uncomfortable of sending me to Mumbai.
"Come on Daddy. Cheer Up! U always knew i was planning for this day. Its my dream. I always wanted to achieve my dreams like mummy did."
"Yeah, i know sweetheart. Its just i have never send you alone."
"Oh daddy. I m not alone. Simi is coming to leave me at Mumbai and then meanwhile i will get use to it. Come on pls i need your Good luck."
"Good luck sweety. But how will i stay without you?"
"Dont worry Mr.Bhushan. I m here for you. I m your daughter too. Gunjan u dont worry about ur dad." Simi was my childhood friend. We studied in same classes always. She belonged to a Catholic family.
"Oh thanks dear".


Finally we both hugged and waved daddy good bye.
Mumbai, as i heard, was a place to make your dreams come true. But sometimes one is required to pay heavy prices for the same. I m not sure if that happened to me, but my dreams were somewhere lost. It is not that i made it happen but i was under a wrong illusion until and unless he made me realize about it.

to be continued....

Edited by talkativetaurus - 01 November 2009 at 4:14am

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talkativetaurus IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 7:01am | IP Logged
thanks everyone for the comments . they mean a lot :)))

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