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Posted: 03 January 2010 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurarti

Originally posted by mahaklovesmayur

guys.......

i know i have taken much time........

now i will be updating it soon.........

by tomorrow........


Gosh....


I was waiting for this


Finally ur going to update


cant wait to read it


Pakka kal


tera wo wala kal nai


jo bol ke gayab ho jaati


luv

Nidzy


fine yaaar..........

u were waiting?

i thought to end it as it got less response...........

but now i think i will update it..........

haan baba kal............

mera waala kal nahi..........

normal waala kal...........

ohk?

love ya loads..........

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Posted: 03 January 2010 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fariaa70

Originally posted by mayurarti

Originally posted by mahaklovesmayur

guys.......<br><br>i know i have taken much time........<br><br>now i will be updating it soon.........<br><br>by tomorrow........


Gosh....


I was waiting for this


Finally ur going to update


cant wait to read it


Pakka kal


tera wo wala kal nai


jo bol ke gayab ho jaati


luv

Nidzy
<br>Me too waiting 4 this update mahi<br>so dont b late.<br>update soon <br>


ohk faru...........

ami jaldi update karibe.........

this is bengali????????

well i tried.......

anyways.......

main poori koshish karoongi..............

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hey guys........i think u must have forgotten what this ss is all about......let me now reveal it.....so......this ff is made up of suspense......and u know my favourite- feelings......and i am uploading its all part again......to give u a review

This is a mayur, sajan, sayank, gunur ss....
 
 
 
main hamesha hi sochta rehta hoon ki kaun hai woh?????

woh hai kaun jo har baar mere sapno mein aati hai??????

kyun mujhe kuch bhi saaf saaf nahi dikhta hai?????

kyun har baar main jab bhi uska sapna dekhta hoon to pareshaan ho jaata hoon??????

aakhir aisa kya hua hai??????

uska mujhse kya naata hai??????

kyun woh mujhe har baar dikhti hai????

uska chehra.......

uska chehra mujhe kabhi bhi saaf kyun nahi dikhta hai??????

aakhir kaun hai woh????
 
 
 
this is the song written, composed, sung by me for this ff........
 
 
 
 
main hamesha hi sochta rehta hoon ki kaun hai woh?????

woh hai kaun jo har baar mere sapno mein aati hai??????

kyun mujhe kuch bhi saaf saaf nahi dikhta hai?????

kyun har baar main jab bhi uska sapna dekhta hoon to pareshaan ho jaata hoon??????

aakhir aisa kya hua hai??????

uska mujhse kya naata hai??????

kyun woh mujhe har baar dikhti hai????

uska chehra.......

uska chehra mujhe kabhi bhi saaf kyun nahi dikhta hai??????

aakhir kaun hai woh????

Kaun hai jo aati hai mere khwabon mein.......khyaalon mein......aur sapnon min yeh bhi lagta hai ki woh aati hai meri baahon mein.....

Aakhir kaun hai woh??????

Kyun aati hai aur mujhe bachain kar jaati hai......

Woh mere khyaalon mein aati hai....

Lekin main use dekh bhi nahi paata hoon.....

Bas kuch dhoondhli yaadein aati hain.......

Kuch kahe ankahe shabd sunayi dete hain......

Agar woh hai is duniya mein to woh kahan hai??????

Uski khushboo kyun mujh tak nahi pahunch rahi hai????

Aur main kaise keh sakta hoon ki uski khushboo.....ko main pehchaan loonga.....

Aakhir kaun hai woh????? Aur kahan hai woh?????

Kaun hai jo begaani hote huye bhi mujhe apni lagti hai?????

Kaun hai woh jo ek ajnabi hote huye bhi apna sab kuch lagti hai?



[Lyrics of my song which shows his kashmakash and pain......and yup....it's original...to be very specific and clear...i have written and composed and sung this song myself.....and I am whole heartedly gratified by the amount of love u showered upon me...i only thought that I could sing only film songs...but thanks for appreciating my song....it meant a lot to me....i am on the top of the world today...not with proud but with ur love...thanks again...]

Kuch dhundhali si yaadein....
Kuch dhundhali se chehre...
Kuch dhundhali si baatein....
Sunayi deti hain
Dikhayi deti hain...
Koi aaye mere sapnon mein....'
Koi rehta hai mere dil mein.
Par yeh bhi na jaanu main...
Ki woh kaun hai?
Ki kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?
O wo ho ho ho...

Kuch kahi ankahi baatein...
Kuch jaane pehchaane chehre
Par yeh bi na main jaanu..
Ki woh kaun hai
Ki woh kaun hai?
Kabhi darr lagta hai mujhko
Kabhi sehem jaata hai yeh dil
Par jab bhi aaye woh nazar
Dhadakne lage yeh dil
Dhadakne lage yeh dil
Aakhir kyun hua hai yeh mujhko
Aakhir kya hua hai yeh mujhko
Yeh baat bhi main na jaanu..
Ki woh kaun hai
Ki woh kaun hai
La la lal lalalalalalalala

Kya naata hai mera usse
Kya vaasta hai mera usse
Kyun rehti hai mere dil mein
Na jaane kaun hai woh
Na jaane kaun hai woh
Woh hai koi mera apna
Ya hai koi begaana
Na jaane kya hai naata
Na jaane kaun hai woh?
Na jaane kaun hai woh?

Jab aati hai woh nazar...
Muskuraahatein de jaati hai
Kabhi mujhko woh rulati hai
Na jaane kaun hai woh
Kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?

Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai
Jaise woh mere paas hai
Par dekh na paaon usko
Na jaane kaun hai woh?
Na jaane kaun hai woh?
Kyun dhadkaye mere dil ko?

Uski aankhon mein main kho jaaon
Uske chehre ko na dhoondh paaon
Yeh baat bhi main na jaanu
Ki woh kaun hai?
Ki woh kaun hai?
Koi to hai mere sapno mein
Koi to hai mere dil mein

Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai
ki woh mere paas hai
Ki woh mee paas hai
Mann karta hai lagao gale
Mann karta hai chupaaon use
Is duniya ki nazar se
Na jaane kahan hai woh?
Na jaane kahan hai woh?

Kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?
Kaun hai woh?


Mayank thought this.......

when he woke up by a dream in is sleep...

the dream had.. disturbed his peaceful sleep......

he was a very tall.....smart.....handsome...cute... intelligent......his eyes expressing his fear right now.....his lips moving in an inaudible worry....cries.....why did he had such dreams????

Dreams which would show nothing but his relation with a girl.....sometimes only the girl.....and sometimes a horrid thing to see....who was she???

Why was she haunting him in his sleep????

Why??? Had he done anything???

Why is he so perplexed in his life about his dream????


He wiped off the sweat from his forehead and then......

He checked the time in the watch.....

"Not again.... phir se nahi....." though mayank always had this dream at this time....yet he still wasn't accustomed to it.....he still thought that why does he had these dreams after all???

Had he done anything weird????

"12.00 am.....oh no...." mayank said out the dream aloud......his confusion regarding his dream was right.....why did he had such dreams???? Out of 56 million people in India....why only he had such dreams and only at this time? What had happened at this time??

Then he pushed his covers....

and started to get ready and go to the place he always went when he had such dreams.....

dreams unclear.....faces not visible.....voices irritating him to the core.....a girl's voice calling him....

He then got up from his warm bed and washed his face......

his masculine body was very attractive.....he had sharp features......

but right now.....his eyes had some unknown fear....fear of loss......

his face had become devoid of al colours......he hadn't shaved properly....but his face was looking beautiful inspite of that too......

he had wore a black t-shirt with black lowers......






The only thing he needed at this time was to go to his secret place.....

a place where no one can actually find him.....

a place where he used to think about that dream.....

a place which soothed him.....

a place known only to him and not even to his parents....a place where he could have silence and his peace of mind.....

He opened his cupboard and took out his keys from it....

then he slowly and slowly moved towards the door to check if it was locked ...

yes it was locked.....

Then he went to his store room and then lifted up the carpet that lay behind its floor.....

There was a hole in that....

he took out his keys and then opened the lock.....

as soon as he did this....

an underground room was opened.....

he went to his secret room through the stairs that followed it.....

he went there and began scribbling some thing in his personal diary......




bas ab bahut thak gayi hoon.........

di ki kal shaadi hai........

lekin agar main kuch na likhun to mujhe neend nahi aati hai.......

to maine likh hi diya.........

baaki usne aakhir kya likha hai apni diary mein? kya naata hai uska uske dream se????? kyun jaata hai woh apne secret hiding place mein????? 

yeh sab jaane ke liye padhte rahiye kaun hai woh? by mahak.........

and plzz do leave your precious comments!

they mean a lot to me.........



Mahak
 
 
 
Then he went to his store room and then lifted up the carpet that lay behind its floor..... 

There was a hole in that....

he took out his keys and then opened the lock.....

as soon as he did this....

an underground room was opened.....

he went to his secret room through the stairs that followed it.....

he went there and began scribbling some thing in his personal diary......



When he had finished it read-

" aaj maine phir se usi ajnabi ko dekha.....kaun hai woh?

Mujhe to samajh mein hi nahi aata hai ki aakhir uska mujhse kya naata hai??? 

Kabhi to mujhe apni lagti hai aur kabhi begaani......

aur mujhe uska chehra saaf saaf kyun nahi dikhta hai?

Mujhe sirf dikhta hai to uska aks....ek ajeeb si kashish hai usmein.....

jab bhi main usko dekhta hoon.....na jaane kyun aisa lagta hai jaise ki...

woh meri hai.....mera matlab hai....meri koi apni hai....

aur aaj maine uski cheekhen suni hain.....

aur iss baat se main behaal ho chukka hoon.....

aisa lag raha hai ki jaise woh mujhe bula rahi hai....

mujhse madad maang rahi hai...

lekin main kuch nahi kar sakta hoon....

main majboor hoon....

lekin main uski madad karne ke liye tadap raha hoon...

woh tadap na jaane kaisi hai.....

na jaane kaun hai woh.....

na jaane kyun uske dard ko main mehsos kar sakta hoon....

na jaane kyun uski hare ek tadap ko main mehsoos kar sakta hoon.....

woh meri madad chahti hai....

lekin jaise hi main uski tarah haath badhata hoon vaise hi meri aankh khul jaati hai....

aakhir kya hua tha uske baad? 

Aakhir kya hai yeh raaz....

aakhir kyun mujhe yeh sab dikhte hain.....

main to itna majboor hoon ki main kisi ke saath apna dard baat bhi nahi sakta hoon....

dard bataon kaise jab mujhe khud hi nahi pata hai ki yeh dard hai kaisa???? 

Main to yeh bhi nahi jaanta hoon ki agar kisi ko mere sapno ke bare mein pata chalega to woh log kya sochenge? 

Shayad woh mujhe pagal hi samjhenge.....

par diary....

tum to jaanti ho na ki main pagal nahi hoon.....

barson se main apne saare dekhe huye sapne tumhare andar kaid kar raha hoon.....

hafte mein kam se kam teen baar main bara baje apne sapno ke bare mein tumhe batata hoon....

is aaas mein ki shayad ek din tum hi mere sapnon ke raaz ko khol do.... 

kyunki main to nahi jaanta hoon ki woh kaun hai....

akhir kaun hai woh?"


Then he closed his diary......



he had named his diary as "kaun hai woh?" because he writes in it everything about his dreams....his queries regarding her....his moments spent with her in his dream.....

Then he set out to draw her portrait.....



He was very good at painting......

he could make exact pictures of the things happening with him.....

but only few knew his talent on painting........

When he finished making it......

it looked like this.......



Today he made it with red colour.....

cause today her dream had perplexed him.....

today her memories were full of pain......only pain.....

so he decided to use red colour......



All he could see her was her blurred face.....

she was standing near a candle.....

waiting for someone.....

perhaps waiting for him.......

When he had completed that......

he took few pins and then tucked it on the wall.....

along with some more pictures of her.....

pictures in same position yet different by colours.....

He made her pictures so finely that no one could say that it was a hand made piece of work......







And this was the work he did in his room......

he always made out her pictures......

wrote about his dreams in his diary....

and had hidden it from everyone....

because he did not wanted to spoil his image....

The image of mayank.....

the Mayank Sharma.....



Mayank was a very successful business tycoon......

he had a passion for music..... 

Especially old songs.....

he loved to write poetries.....

he loved to enjoy his life....

he is very successful in every aspect of his life....

even at this tender age......

he knows how to deal with his life affairs.....

he got fame and fortune.....

he had everything a girl can wish for......

yet he was craving to meet the girl haunting him in his dreams.....

He had a big mansion....all of his own....in which only few people lived.....that is he and his parents along with many servants......



And no one knows about his dreams.....he had decided that he will never let anyone go so close to him to know about his dreams.....or he thought so......




i am really very sorry for a short update!

but actually i have fever........

so i wasn't able to write more.........

so bear with me.........

and this is the last part where mayank is alone.......

next part will be nupur's entry..........

and i will update it soon this time........

 

Mahak
 
 
and now i have written part 3 too.........do read it and give ur comments.....
 
 

On the other side of the city of Mumbai.....a girl too woke up on seeing a terrible dream...

 

"NAHiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" she said and woke up.....

 

Her face was wet with perspiration.....her forehead was covered with her hairs.....tension was clearly visible on her face.....she was extremely scared of something....something that horrified her....

 

What could be that? Why was she terrified????

 

Suddenly a girl in blue pajamas came to console her........she turned on the lights and gave her water.....she looked angelic....

 

"kya hua? Nupur tune phir se wahi sapna dekha kya?" she said......

 

"haan Gunjan.....phir se....kyun mujhe yeh sapne aate hain? Aakhir kya galti hai meri?" Nupur asked.....

 

Gunjan- kuch nahi.......tune kuch bhi nahi kiya hai......aise sapne pata nahi kyun tujhe hi aate hain....

 

Nupur- tu jaanti hai na ki main kitna darti hoon in sapno se? phir bhi yeh sapne mera peecha nahi chodte hain.....meri jaan le lete hain....kyun aate hain mujhe yeh sapne? Aur kaun hai woh? Woh kyun mere sapno mein aata hai? Kyun? Kya naata hai mera usse? Aur kabhi bhi uska chehra saaf kyun nahi dikhta hai?

 

Gunjan- Nupur yeh to mujhe bhi nahi pata hai ki kaun hai woh....lekin itna zaroor jaanti hoon ki tera usse koi na koi naata zaroor hai.....shayad pichle janam ka......

 

Nupur- tu phir shuru ho gayi? Tu jaanti hai na ki mujhe punahjanam mein koi bhi faith nahi hai?

 

Gunjan- haan haan theek hai baba.....na kar vishwaas.....par yeh to bata ki aaj kya dekha tune? Kyunki tere sapne har baar alag hote hain...aur bahut hi ache....

 

Nupur- yaar aaj maine ek bahut hi ajeeb sa sapna dekha....

 

Gunjan- aissa kya dekha tune?

 

Nupur- chod na Gunjan....

 

Gunjan bol na.....nupsi tu to jaanti hai na ki main bachpan se teri dost hoon? Hum dono hamesha se hi ek saath rehte aaye hain.....aur hamesha hi rahenge....tune aaj tak koi baat mujhse nahi chupaayi hai...aur na hi maine.....toh phir aaj kya problem hai?

 

Nupur- yaar main is sapne ko dohrana nahi chahti hoon....

 

Gunjan- tu bolegi ki nahi?

 

Nupur- theek hai.....aaj maine khud ko nearly marte huye dekha....

 

She told her terrified....her face had so much fear on it that it seemed as if she was going to die this moment....her face was blue with fear....her tulip shaped pink lips were now looking blue with cold and fear.....and her eyes....her eyes only and only showed the fear....

 

Gunjan- KYA? Kaise?

 

Nupur- tu jaanti hai na ki main pahadon se kitna darti hoon? Aaj maine khud ko pahad ki choti parse latke hue dekha.....aur maine uske haath ko thama hua tha....i mean woh mujhe girne nahi de raha tha.....par main usse keh rahi thi ki "I hate you...main marr jaana chahti hoon...mujhe marne do".....imagine me saying that! Lekin usne mujhe choda nahi...aur usne kaha ki "tum meri zindagi ho...main tumhe girne nahi doonga." Aur phir main usi ko kuch khari khoti sunane lagi....aage kya hua? Main bachi ki main marr gayi? Kahin usne meri baatein sunkar mera haath chod to nahi diya? Ya phir usne mujhe upar kheech liya....kuch nahi pata hai mujhe......mera sir dard ho raha hai...

 

Gunjan- tu pagal to nahi hai na?

 

Nupur- yahi toh main bhi nahi samajh paa rahi hoon ki aakhir aisa kya hua.....ki jo main us jagah pahunchi? Aur aaj itne saalon baad mujhe pehli baar awaaz sunayi di hai...aur aaj hi maine khud ko aise dekha....aakhir kaun hai woh?

 

Gunjan- nupsi tu kyun nahi is bare mein uncle aunty ko batati?

 

Nupur- tu to jaanti hai gunji ki is bare mein sivay tere kisi ko nahi pata hai? Aur main yahi chahti hoon ki is bare mein kisi ko pata bhi na chale......i mean I hate him.....aur yeh bhi tu jaanti hai.....

 

Gunjan- mujhe Nupur bas ek baar samajh mein nahi aati hai ki tune use apne sapno mein itni baar dekha hai......i mean kabhi tu uski bahon mein hoti hai.....kabhi tu uske saath hoti hai.....kabhi woh teri jaan bachata hai......aur kabhi kuch......par tu usse nafrat kyun karti hai?

 

Nupur- main usse behad nafrat karti hoon.......uski jhalak dekhti hoon to mujhe nafrat hoti hai usse.....na jaane kyun.....par main ek anjaan insaan se nafrat karti hoon......kaun hai woh? Main use jaanti bhi nahi hoon.....phir bhi nafrat behad karti hoon....mujhe uske chehre se.....jo ki bhale hi saaf na dikhta ho....par usse nafrat hai....

 

Gunjan- kaisa dikhta hai woh?

 

Nupur- kash main dhang se dekh paati to tujhe bata paati.....mujhe to sirf ek dhundhali si tasveer dikhti hai.....

 

And then his face flashed in front of her mind....

 

 

Nupur- pata hai kya? Uski badi badi ankhen mere saamne har baar aati hain...jaise ki woh mera intezaar kar raha ho....jaise ki ko mera ho.....lekin mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aata hai.....aakhir kaun hai woh? Kyun mere sapne mein woh aata hai? Uska naam kya hai?

 

Gunjan- Nupur tu zyada stress mat le....tujhe jaldi hi pata chal jaayega....tu ab so jaa...

 

Nupur- gunji mujhe lagta hai ki main pagal ho jaaungi.....

 

Gunjan woh to tu pehle se hi hai....

 

And she laughs.....but stops when a pillow hits her....

 

Gunjan- but on a serious note....mujhe lagta hai ki tu usse jaldi mil legi.....to tension mat le....aur ab so jaa....

 

And they both went to sleep....in a deep peaceful sleep.......this time.....hey wont get up so soon.....and both new that Nupur's dreams had some connection with her past life....but what it was.....it was to be found out......

 

This was a secret which only Gunjan knew.....cause Nupur did not wanted to tell this to someone who wont understand her....Nupur knew that no one would believe her dreams and think her to be as mad....and then no one would come to her clinic........who wants a phycho doctor to be a child speacialist?

 

The doctor......Nupur Bhushan......the doctor who always helps others.....the one who doesn't care for earnings but for proper treatment of her patients.....she got everything she desires....she has got a huge mansion......a house which may not be as huge as other's have.....but it has the space for entire Mumbai.....

But she is waiting to meet her dream man.....her only dream man to enter and life and get rid of those horrid dreams and to know that why does she hates him so much??? She knows that she will once meet him.....and she knew that this would happen soon.....

 

But would she meet him? And will see recognize each other? Will she be able to hate him? Will she solve her dream mystery? Why does she hate him? All these were questions which she will be only able to find out once she meets him.....or will she?

that's it!

now i think u might have come to know what this ss is all about.....
 
do comment guys......
 
it means a lot!
 
and i will continue as soon as u continue to give me comments!
 
i am waiting!
 
love,
Mahak
  



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Posted: 11 January 2010 at 10:24am | IP Logged
that's it for today......

this was a quick review of the chapters......

and also a new update......

do comment guys.......

it means a lot to me......

coz with ur comments only...........

i am able to gather spirit to continue...................

so do comment........

coming up is- sajan meet.......sayank have a discussion........mayur goes to a same mall.....

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Posted: 11 January 2010 at 10:37am | IP Logged

Hey Mahak,

nice part dear Thumbs Up
its becoming realy interesting!
waiting eagerly 4 the next part !
do continue soon
nd thnx 4 the pm Smile


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Wel mahak.............awsum dear, u r simply too gud. Each n every part is filled wid suspense, i was left out only to bite my nicely shaped nails.

As aresult, they r lukin horrible now. Very nice, continue soon

N thnx 4 d pm

 



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awesum part mahak dear !!!

u r just too good !!! loved it to the core !!!

wow ......punahjanam.......great topic dear !!! I just love punahjanam stories !!!

so much suspense....wow....bahut mazzaa ayega padhne mein !!!

 why does nupur use to hate mayank at the end of her past life........is really something to know .....god....i'm really excited to know this....but i know this will be revealed after many parts !!!

But never mind.....I will wait for that !!!

plzzz...........update soon !! will be eagerly waiting for you next part !!!

love u........


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