Short Stories: Kaun Hai Woh [Mayur] :Promo: Pg 132

hey friends.......i have decided to open a short stories gallery........and to open it.....i was very excited......so let me welcome all of u to mahak's creations.......on mayur of course......but i will write many stories on sajan too........u can ask me to write even some shots for u.....its a open request gallery where u can demand me to write anything.......just post me ur idea and i will post ur request with ur idea.....as soon as possible.......i will write any thing which u will like......don't kill me for my bad stories......

u all know me by my ff "life in a movie" which is still continuing........





it's link is
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1250238

mayur forever part 1 on page 1
mayur forever part 2 on page 6
mayur forever part 3 on page 11
mayur forever part 4 on page 16
mayur forever part 5 (last part) on page 22

finished.........

first and last part on page 46

finished...........

concept on page 28
clarifications on page 33
monologue on page 33


will be continued later.........

notice on page 37

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monolouge on page 37
title song by me on page 43
part 1 on page 55
part 2 on page 61
entire story + part 3 on page 72
part 4 on page 85
part 5 on page 106
promo on page 132

is continuing.........

Edited by ...Mahak... - 13 years ago

mayur forever part 1


two shot on current track-
Hey frds......this is what I feel shud be there in present.....i was very depressed knoing the current track so I decided to write two shots on it.....dont worry this will be a very happy shot.....the first shot is not at all good but wait till u read the second one.....

Night-
Nupur's house
Nupur- mayank tumne mujhe itna dukh diya hai ki mujhe ab khud ko badalna hoga.......tumhare liye nahi balki apne liye.......

Mayank's house
Mayank- nupur......tum aisa kyun kar rahi ho? Kya tumhe mera pyaar koi dikhawa lagta hai??? Maine tumhare liye kay kuch nahi kiya? Tumhe uski koi fikar nahi hai kya? Tumhe sirf us propose waali baaat se itna dukh hai kya?????

Nupur's house
Nupur- tumne mayank mera vishwaas tod diya....kyun kiya tumne aisa????? Main to tumse sache dil se pyaar karti thi to phir kyun tumne mere dil ko dukhaya? Main theek hi sochti thi ki main morena ki seedhi sadi ladki yahan par nahi reh sakti hoon.....ab mr mayank sharma, tumhe kale k nayi nupur ka saamna karmas padega......i wont be the same......

Mayank's house
Mayank- mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki tumne mere pyaar ko itni aasaani se bhula diya.....tumhe mera letter nahi mila tha kya?

Then mayu's mom came into the house....

Ma- mayu.....

Mayank- haan ma...

Ma- beta tu nupur se baat kar le......hum log ek hafte ke andar hi banglore jaa rahe hain....wahin par mujhe job mili hai......

Mayank's heart was shattered.....banglore????? this means he wont be able to see nupur ever.....he had tears in his eyes yet he couldn't show them to his mother.....he was responsible.....he had to be strong for his mother.....

Mayank- theek hai ma....aap so jao.....main abhi sone jaata hoon....

Shilpa went away from there leaving mayank to cry.......he didn't wanted to hold back his tears cause he didn't wanted to hurt himself more and more.......what a dilemma.....his mother and his love......whom to choose?????

Mayank- nupur....kal main tumhe college mein bata donga ki main banglore jaa raha hoon.....aur yeh bhi ki kyun us din main tumhe is tarah chod kar chala gaya tha....tumhare bina main jee nahi sakta hoon....aur main tumhe is tarah hurt nahi rehne doonga....
Tum sirf meri ho nupur....i love u.....i love u a lot.....

Both of them slept at their respective houses......fully aware that now they will have to face a big day ahead......tomorrow their lives will change completely...

Next day-

College-
Mayank was wearing a black shirt looking killer.....he was looking so smart that all the girls fainted seeing him like this......while he was waiting for someone else.....

Mayank- yeh nupur abhi tak kyun nahi aayi?

Then he sees her at the corner of the corridor......

She was wearing a magenta dress.....she too looked very beautiful but the smile on her face had vanished.....she was all tensed and depressed......today she looked very angry and a changed person.....

Mayank followed her trace and stopped her......

Mayank- nupur suno..

Nupur- dekho mayank.......mujhe tumhari koi baat nahi sunni hai.....ab hamare beech ab kuch bhi nahi hai....

Mayank- nupur dekho......

Nupur- main bahut dekh chuki hoon mr mayank sharma.....ab to tum dekhoge.....i don't wanna talk to u......

Mayank- nupur please.....meri baat sunlo.....

Nupur- ab sunne ke liye aur kya bacha hai???

She had hatread in her eyes for him.....she wanted to go but mayank wanted her to listen first......

Mayank- dekho nupur.....bas ek baar meri baat sunlo.....bas ek baar......

He said it in a very pleading tone.....so she said.....

Nupur- theek hai par jaldi bolo.....mere paas tumhare liye koi time nahi hai......

Mayank- nupur tum mujhse aaj kahin mil sakti ho?

Nupur- theek hai.....main tumse mil loongi lectures ke baad.....library mein.....aur woh bhi sirf paanch minute ke liye....

Mayank- nupur.......

But before he could say anything........she went away.....she was depressed but she couldn't allow herself to be fooled this time too.......

As for mayank....he was broken....he knew this was gonna happen...he was really very sad......

Library-
Mayank waited for nupur after the lectures in the library....he waited and waited but she didn't come....he waited till he could wait no longer......the time for closing of the library came.....

Mayank was now depressed.......why wasn't nupur allowing him to speak once???? Why was she doing this to him??? He had the right to get a chance too......didnt he?????
He decided to call her.....

On the phone-
Mayank- hello nupur

Nupur- hello mayank.

Mayank- nupur tum aayi kyun nahi? Main tumhara kitna intezaar kar raha tha....tumne to kaha tha ki paanch min ruko...

Nupur- tum aaye the kya? Maine bhi tumhara bahut intezaar kiya tha......par tumhe meri koi parvah thi kya? Dekho tumne bhi mujhse kaha tha ki paanch min mein tum mujhse woh baatein kehna waale ho....par tum????? Chodo....

She was all teary....but she controlled herself......she couldn't once again break down.....while on the other line....mayank was totally break down.....

Mayank- nupur ek baar tum meri baat to sun lo....

Nupur- dekho mayank.....ab sunne ke liye kuch nahi reh gaya hai.....behtar hoga ki tum mujhe akela chod do.....ab hum ek doosre se kabhi nahi milenge.....ab na hi tum aur na hi main ek doosre ki zindagi mein dakhal denge.....

Mayank- nup-

But before he could say anything........she had cut down the phone.....

to be continued........

sorry frds.....i m ill so i cudnt write any longer and had to make it a two shot ff........sorry.....i know this part is very sad.....but i hope u will like it.....i will update the next romantic post within one day.......so if u want me to pm u for the next second shot which is romantic and deals will they meet.....then do add me in ur buddy list.....the second shot will cheer all of u up.........definetly sorry for the first one.....and i cudnt make it one shot as i am ill......
😭

do comment plzzzzzzzzEdited by mahaklovesmayur - 14 years ago

ha! 1st 1 2 coment!!!
hey di...the 1st part was sooooo nicely written!
but m soooo sad!!!=(
m really very sad...bcos of d current going track, nd now bcos this track!!!
pls do upd8 soon
4 i cant w8 any longer!!!
:(
pls do pm me...remember!!!!=P

Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 14 years ago

Mahi yaar great OS

and hmm congrats at your OS gallery

and yaar tum toh bemari mein itna acha likh laiti ho😆

just kidding yaar

welltry to update next part soon

Edited by NabeehaFS - 14 years ago

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

ha! 1st 1 2 coment!!!&lt;br&gt;hey di...the 1st part was sooooo nicely written!&lt;br&gt;but m soooo sad!!!=(&lt;br&gt;m really very sad...bcos of d current going track, nd now bcos this track!!!&lt;br&gt;pls do upd8 soon&lt;br&gt;4 i cant w8 any longer!!!&lt;br&gt;:(&lt;br&gt;pls do pm me...remember!!!!=P&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;

thanks......

Originally posted by: NabeehaFS

&lt;FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"&gt;&lt;FONT size="2"&gt;&lt;FONT color="#ff66cc"&gt;Mahi yaar great OS&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;

&lt;FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"&gt;&lt;FONT size="2"&gt;&lt;FONT color="#ff66cc"&gt;and hmm congrats at your OS gallery&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;

&lt;FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"&gt;&lt;FONT size="2"&gt;&lt;FONT color="#ff66cc"&gt;and yaar tum toh bemari mein itna acha likh laiti ho&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;😆

&lt;FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"&gt;&lt;FONT size="2"&gt;&lt;FONT color="#ff66cc"&gt;just kidding yaar&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;

&lt;FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"&gt;&lt;FONT size="2"&gt;&lt;FONT color="#ff66cc"&gt;welltry to update next part soon&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;

thanks yaar......tere logon ki vajah se hi to maine yeh gallery kholi hai........

It's brillinat update dear.Yes,It's emotional but too good.U wrote their emotiona very well.Wait for the next part soon dear.

hey!!

awesome dear , and your writing skills are outstanding .😊😊

nicely written huni