Written Update 23 Oct 09 : Teleshopping Murder

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Hello, Namaste, and SalaamSmileLOL
Few things to note : ACP for ACP Pradyuman and Abhi for AbhijeetEmbarrassed
No Introduction Confused
  • Camera shifts to a shooting place where two hosts( Rohit and Deepalika) are complaining that they have wait for everything to get ready.
  • Rohit is really irriated. Umesh (Director) and Assistant director are frustated to see him act like this.
  • Someone says that the shot is ready.
  • We see someone cuts the robe which is tied to the light ( on ceiling).
  • All of them are ready to shoot for the sequence.
  • Rohit moves toward the audience and is about to say something but the light falls right next to him.
  • He is scared.
  • Crew members run towards Rohit and ask if he's fine.
  • Assistant director runs to the control room where umesh  is ( he has headphones on).
  • Assistant informs about the accident but umesh doesnt respond. He goes toward the director and touches him.. he's falls toward the table before him ( he's dead).
  • Back to bureau, Freddie is jogging insideLOL.
  • Vivek and Tasha come in.
  • Freddie tells a secret only to Vivek and Tasha is hurt because he didnt tell herLOL
  • Abhi comes to the bureau and is suprised to see Freddie in his gym clothesLOL
  • Vivek tells Abhi the secret. Freddie's got a new neighbor and that's a woman.He made a bet with his neighbor that by next wedding aniversary, he will lose 10kgsLOL ( This is Freddie's secret).
  • Abhi asks Freddie if his wife knows.. Freddie says yes.
  • Abhi decides to call Freddie's wife and confirmLOL But someone calls and tells about the director's death.
  • Rohit tells the whole incident. Deepalika says that its not a big problem.
  • ACP says that someone called because they saw a dead body. Nobody knows about director;s death.
  • Assistant director comes forward and tells everything.
  • ACP and  Daya leave for control room while Vivek checks the robe to which the light was tied to. and Freddie makes sure that no one  leaves the place.
  • Daya checks the whole body and tells that there's no bullet sign nor he died due to poisoning.
  • Vivek talks to the man who fixes light. This guy tells only he knows how to set up that light. He says before they started to shot the sequence, he saw someone near the light on ceiling.
  • Vivek checks the ceiling and the robe.
  • ACP and Daya suspect assistant director but he's innocent. He says them that Vikas came before to the room before he entered.
  • Assistant director calls  Vikas (operator guy) who says that he doesnt know anything. And umesh was completing fine when he left the room.
  • Vivek informs ACP that someone intentionally cut the robe so that the light can fall on Rohit and also tells what the lightman has said.
  • ACP tells the lightman to identify the guy who cut the robe from the people present there.
  • Lightman looks at everyone and says that guy is not here.
  • ACP tells Freddie to send the light to forensic lab.
  • Back to bureau, where Salunke tells Abhi that the director died due to current.
  • Salunke says that the director ( Umesh) had a pacemaker ( which helps in functioning of heart). He also says that the murderer knew about the pacemaker and that's why he used current so that the pacemaker can stop and eventually, umesh will die.
  • Abhi says someone related to umesh must have done this.
  • Freddie says that his wife must know about that.
  • Abhi teases him about the neighbor and he leaves the labLOL
  • Tasha brings Umesh's wife while Rohit is yelling at the top of his lungs and says that he has lots of work to do and blah blahAngry
  • Through conversation between ACP and Rohit, Umesh's wife comes to know that her husband is dead.
  • She cries and tells that Rohit and his co-anchor ( Deepalika) is responsible for Umesh's death because they used to irritate him alot.
  • While Rohit blames on Deepalika because she came to know that umesh used to like Deepalika and that's why she killed himShocked
  • Umesh's wife says that its not true and she says that rohit gave a warning that he will kill umesh.
  • ACP tells her that he will call her again and tells Freddie to stay with Rohit.
  • Daya tells ACP that he's still confused about why Umesh stayed there when the light fell.
  • Door opens. Its ACP,Daya and Tasha in Umesh's operating room.
  • Daya finds a magnet to Umesh's chair.
  • ACP sees this and says that the murderer knew Umesh very well.
  • Daya says that umesh must have sat on his chair and due to magnet, pacemaker got cooler and thus, the heart rate too started to decrease.
  • Freddie and Vivek are talking about something and they both are sitting away from Rohit.
  • Camera shifts to some guy who sits right opposite to Rohit on the next table.
  • This guy takes out the gun to shoot but Freddie is injuredCry 
  • Freddie fires the gun and the guy dies.
  • Back to bureau, Salunke tells Abhi that the fingerprints on the magnet and on the light matches and these fingerprints belong to the guy who just died.
  • Abhi is confused about why this guy wanted to kill Rohit and says before they could find out, Freddie shot the gun.
  • Freddie says that the guy shot the gun first and that's why he too shot the gun. Abhi says but still he should have not fired the gun.
  • Freddie says that next time, when someone is about to shot him, he will take on his shirt and tell the other guy to shotLOL Vivek says after you remove your shirt  instead of shooting, the guy will faintLOL Salunke asks Vivek about that's so special about Freddie's chestLOL
  • Abhi tells Freddie to find out who this guy is and why he wanted to kill Rohit.
  • ACP tells Daya that the guy who died must be an enemy of Rohit while Daya says maybe he must have done for money.
  • ACP says that eitherway, there's a connection between two murders.
  • Tasha shows the driving license ( dead body happens to be Ragav's) to ACP and Freddie says that he's suprised to see lipstick in Ragav's pocket.
  • ACP tells Freddie to give it and he drops it.
  • Freddie picks it up and Daya says that its not a lipstick.
  • ACP says that there are two electrodes on that thing.
  • He tells Freddie to bring a paper. ACP makes an attempt to connect the electrodes with paper.  And paper burns.
  • Tasha says that the marks are also same like that of Umesh's dead body;s marks.
  • ACP tells that this is stun gun.  Whenever this gun is kept on a human body, current fires up as a high voltage from one side of the electrode. This results shock and person might fall.
  • Mostly, women use these type of gun for defense.
  • ACP says that this gun might have used to kill Umesh.
  • Back to bureau, Salunke tells that ACP is right about the shot gun.
  • Tarika tells Abhi that Freddie didnt shoot Ragav. This means that bullet from Freddie doesnt match with the one with ragav's bullet.
  • Freddie is happy to hear thisTongue
  • Vivek says that ragav went to kill Rohit but someone  came there to kill ragavShocked Abhi says then who could be?
  • Salunke says that the murderer might have had an insecurity about ragav and might tell how umesh died.
  • Abhi tells Freddie to find out about the lipstick stun gun.
  • Freddie and Vivek stop at a shop where the owner identifies it and tells the some woman purchased it by credit card. ( This guy also makes a sketch of the woman)
  • Freddie takes the receipt and leaves.
  • ACP and Tasha leave for Raghav's house.
  • ACP tells seema ( Raghav's wife) that her husband died .
  • Seema breaksdown while Tasha comforts herSmile
  • ACP asks her if she knows anything about Raghav's murder.
  • Seema tells that her husband was cheating on her and she heard him talk on the phone to some woman about a parcel.
  • She also says that she saw some woman giving the parcel to him on the road  in which money were there.
  • ACP tells her if she can identify the woman, She says yes.
  • He tells Tasha to take seema with her so that they can make a sketch of the woman.
  • Freddie tells ACP that the stun gun belongs to show's producer's wife.
  • Abhi asks her about the gun who says that she uses it only for security. She also tells them that she doesnt know about Raghav.
  • Then she tells everyone that she still has the gun. She goes to find it but doesnt find it.
  • Freddie shows the gun. She tells the story that she left her purse on the washroom for some time.
  • Abhi, Vivek and producer's wife leave for that place. Vivek says maybe some women must have stolen the gun since its a ladies washroom.
  • Abhi tells producer and his wife to leave the washroom while him and Vivek check for clues.
  • Freddie comes and shows the sketch to Abhi, Its Deepalika's picture.
  • She tries to run away from her house but Abhi, Freddie and Vivek reach there.
  • She tells that she gave money to Raghav ( her friend told her).
  • Abhi asks whats the name of her friend.
  • Camera shifts to Rohit's house where CID reach there.
  • He says that he doesnt know anything. Rohit blames Freddie for killing Raghav.
  • Someone rings the call bell.
  • ACP tells Rohit not to tell the person that CID is here.
  • Everyone hideTongue
  • Rohit opens the door. And some woman asks Rohit why he's tensed and she tells him that she fooled CID.
  • ACP and others come forward. Its Producer's wife.
  • She's suprised to see CID team there and tries to runaway but Tasha blocks her way and slaps her.
  • Rohit and Producer's wife Confession : Rohit confesses that he killed Umesh because he spoiled his career. He got a film offer and he had to end his contract with the show. But umesh didnt let him too and that's why he killed him.
  • He gave money to Raghav so that he can drop the light beside him while shooting so that none can suspect him. Rohit killed him because Raghav was blackmailing him.
  • Producer's wife helped Rohit because she loves himConfused

                                    ***** THE END*****

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Posted: 25 October 2009 at 1:07am | IP Logged
priya_sparsha  nice work .

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