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Soph

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Posted: 23 October 2009 at 5:41pm | IP Logged

Reserved:) I am so looking forward to reading this.Just need to run a few errands:)

First of all, I have never watched House MD so I am very excited. I mean the way you write the reader cannot help but fall into this land of fiction and watch it all happen before their eyes. I LOVE it! I assume you are studying english or have studied, because girl you write like a pro!! Clap

What I am finiding most thrilling about this piece,is the ominous sense you have managed to create. Why is this old man the way he is. Why is he holding everyone else hostage if it is he who is ill... I mean its just one question after another. I LOVE it! I love thrillers. what I love MOST, is the way you have created Armaan and Riddhimas love story, It is so sweet. My favourite part was the phone call. She was so desperate to hear his voice, and when she did it removed the apprehension which was suffocating her,

Do put me on your PM list. This is one FF I cannot afford to miss!!!

Sorry once again for the delay
Sophxxx

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Posted: 23 October 2009 at 5:43pm | IP Logged

Hey,

Wonderful part. I enjoyed reading it and it was like i was actully there when all this occured. Your way of describing every situation and emotion is Great!

My favourite part was the anxiety in AR when she called first time...and then their short encounter in the end. Oh so the man is a patient...and is frustrated with his disease..i guess!!...Nice concept. Haven't seen the show..so No idea about the Real story..but i m loving it here.

Continue soon.

Thanx.

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Posted: 23 October 2009 at 6:00pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ammy-ridz

Hey,

Wonderful part. I enjoyed reading it and it was like i was actully there when all this occured. Your way of describing every situation and emotion is Great!

Continue soon.

Thanx.

Heyy...Hi!

First of all thank you SO much for writing in...!! And thank you so much for the kind words...it just makes me really happy to know that you had a good time reading...and believe me, it's a bonus if you haven't w the show...makes it more mysterious, and more thrilling, since you don't know what to expect...and I've really modified the story to suit my theme as well...

The old man...yes he's a man who's been bogged down by disease for nine years without any respite...he doesn't even know what's wrong with him, and after sixteen doctors and a miserable, painful life, he's had enough...he wants some answers now...not hollow promises and useless medication...which is why he's made his way into India's best hospital, looking for its two best doctors...why he chooses this way to do it, is because he really is mentally disturbed...which is not to say that he's insane...just disturbed, if you can understand the difference...

And those're my favourite parts too...partly because I've always loved the idea of two souls connecting with each other without the need to directly intract with words or even gestures...there's just a deep, strong understanding of the unsaid...I was actually beginning to wonder how I'd depict the connection, actually, since they're on the two opposite sides of the door, completely cut off from each other...and there is nothing remotely romantic in the original for me to draw upon...but I've tried to do what I could...and it makes me really, really happy to know that you liked it...thank youu...!!

Take care and cheers!

Nandini

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Posted: 23 October 2009 at 6:12pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by nandinidev

Originally posted by arluver15

Nandini

that was gr8 part

absolutly loved it

i m turly hooked to ur mini ff

i just love it the way u have describ the emotions and the senario of the hospital was just gr8

i loved it very much

god armaan is in there n ridhima out side

but i hope u dont take the same scean of one of the doc in the house with ridhima

i dont knoe her name n i dont want to ruin ur ff with my prediction n all

loved the part

cont soon

lods of luv

nruti

Heyy Nruti...!!

Thanks soo much for writing in...!! It really means alot...and about the doctor, if I'm not mistaken, you mean Thirteen, right? Well, let's just leave it at that question mark, shall we...? You'll see what I have in mind in the coming parts...!

Thank you soooo much for responding again...

Take care and cheers!

Nandini

Hey Nandini..........
ur welcome

serioisly u have no idea hoe much i love u for writing this ff

i just love the story

n ya i thats the girls i ment

ok let it stay there

i m looking forward to next part

updat soon

nruti

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Posted: 23 October 2009 at 6:45pm | IP Logged

nandini that was an awesome part

You had stuck to my seat till the part finished LOL

I really just wanted to keep reading

thanx for the pm

and u r an awesome writer Clap

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Posted: 23 October 2009 at 6:47pm | IP Logged

simply brilliant! i loved it immensely, i hope you continue soon!

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Norz

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Posted: 23 October 2009 at 8:15pm | IP Logged

amagzing part

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mrs.sharma

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Posted: 23 October 2009 at 8:48pm | IP Logged

brilliant,absolutely brilliant.neatly worded,precise and to the point.man u had me engrossed.keep up nandini....

b/w cinevistas are looking for writers..want to give a try??

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