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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preksha07

yaar dono os awesome the.....cont. soon......

thanks Pari😛

Posted: 14 years ago
"What is this Nupur?" Mayank threw a diary in front of her
She jumped from her seat and looked at him, "What?"
"Why don't you tell me about this? You have someone in your life before me and you don't even bother to tell me about it" He said loudly and Nupur looked scared
"Ohh God he read all the diary, how stupid I am" she looked down
"Tell me Nupur you have any answer?" he asked again
"Mayank actually....." She stopped again
"I guess you wrote all in your diary what you want to say, I think we need a break good bye" Mayank said and moved forward
"Mayank..... Mayank please listen to me once?" She tried to stop him but he went away
"Ohh God what is happening with me" she sighed

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Nupur was crying when Gunjan came inside
"Di" she threw her books on bed and moved to her who was sobbing
"Di what happened? Is everything OK? You again fought with Mayank?" This time Nupur gave her angry looks
"Why did you always think that I am the one who fight with him"
"Ok I am sorry so tell me what happened" and Nupur told her all
"Di I told you that you should tell Mayank about this" said Gunjan after listening everything
"But Gunjan I thought it's not a big issue" Nupur said still sobbing
"Di in love small things create big differences, you should talk to Mayank now" Gunjan said giving her the phone
"No use Gunjan he will not talk to me" Nupur pushed her hand back
"Di if I tell Mayank........" Nupur interrupted her
"No Gunjan he will not going to listen anyone not even you"
"But Di we can try na" Gunjan pressed
"Ok I have an idea" Gunjan said and Nupur smiled
"Ohh Gunjan you are the best sis" Nupur hugged her
"Yes I am" Gunjan laughed

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Next day in college Nupur was very nervous
"What do you think Gunjan our plan will work?"
"Of course Di' ok Mayank is there, you go to the class I'll be back" Gunjan said seeing Mayank near the pillar
"Ok Gunjan best of luck" Nupur said and went to the class
"Hi Mayank" Gunjan said sitting near him
"Hi Gunjan how are you?" Mayank smiled
"Umm Di told me about what happened yesterday" Gunjan started and Mayank frowned
"Please Gunjan I don't want to talk about that"
"But mayank just once listen to'''PLEASE GUNJAN" Mayank said raising his voice
"If you want to talk about anything else you are welcome" Mayank said rudely
"Ok umm Di gave this for you" Gunjan gave him a folded paper, "Please mayank take this and please read it if you ever loved Di" Gunjan said quickly as she saw his intention of saying anything harsh
"Ok" Mayank took the paper and Gunjan smiled happily
"Thank you Mayank"

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Mayank came back home, closed the door of his room and opened the folds of paper
"Hi Mayank
I know that you are angry with me but please just listen to me once. You can't even imagine how much I love you......" Mayank grinned, "huh if you love me then you don't hide such a big truth from me"
He again looked at letter
"Today I'll tell you all the truth, you only read three lines of my diary and draw the conclusion without knowing that what is the truth" Mayankfelt ashamed, "She is right I must listen to her once" He read further
"I am starting from where you stopped, I was of 10years when Dad first bring him in our house, he was very cute, when I saw him my heart skipped a beat and I started dreaming about him day and night. He was my first crush. I never felt in that way for anyone. I know you must be laughing at me but it's true he was my first crush no my first love"
"WHAT" Mayank shouted, "Nupur hide such a big truth from me I am not gonna leave her for this"
He again tried to concentrate on what is written in letter, "Please Mayank don't get angry with me I'll tell you everything about him. He is very cute, very innocent, he did not even tell anyone about his pain even when he was in pain, and you know what I..... I still love him. People say na that first love can never be forgotten.......... And he is............"
"WHAT" Mayank was shocked reading about her first love, "This girl is really mad, God only this piece was left for me" he said looking up

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"Di please eat something" Gunjan was trying from previous one hour to feed Nupur but she was crying
"Di please don't cry I hope Mayank will understand and............" Only then Diya entered the room
"Nupur Mayank is waiting for you downstairs"
"What?" Nupur got up from bed in excitement and went downstairs
"Mayank" she called her
Mayank turned to see her, Someone pinched his heart, "She was crying for me, she is truly my sweetiepie.. Maynak what the hell you are thinking"
"Mayank" Nupur called him again, ran to him and hugged him
"I knew that you will understand me" and Mayank smiled at her
"But you have to promise me that you won't hide anything from me"
"Promise so you don't have any objection with me and..............." Mayank broke the hug and could not control his laughter anymore
"What?" Nupur glared him in anger
"Ok Ok I have no objection you can enjoy your chicken whole life"
"Ohh Mayank thank you soooo much you are sooo sweet"
And they hugged each other while Diya and Gunjan smiled at them


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Hina this OS is dedicated to you
I hope you like it
Guys please read and tell me if you like it or not
Waiting for your replies


Edited by NabeehaFS - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
vry nice  OS dear.....😃😃
Edited by nikki028 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣...nabz u cracked me up....my eyes are filled with tears from laughing....wat was that????......hinna ko nups bana diya.....par i think hinna mayank ki jagah pe chicken hi choose karti..........🤣🤣🤣...i still cant get up from the floor......and its damn difficult to type in such a situation.......🤣
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zoya_me

🤣...nabz u cracked me up....my eyes are filled with tears from laughing....wat was that????......hinna ko nups bana diya.....par i think hinna mayank ki jagah pe chicken hi choose karti..........🤣🤣🤣...i still cant get up from the floor......and its damn difficult to type in such a situation.......🤣

you are right zoya🤣🤣🤣

jab chicken ke liye hina ne robbie ko chor diya toh mayank bichara kya cheez hai

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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣 too funny
i really liked it
keep it up nabeeha
well done
and thanx for the pm
love
sana
Edited by sana866 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣 uff now that i'm done laughing *wipes tears* 🤣
 
wahh wahh kya OS hai!!!!! 👏 Take a bow nabz!! 👏 World best!!!!! ⭐️ Award winning!!!!! ⭐️ Mind-blasting!!!!!!!! ⭐️ Ispe tho film ban ni chahiye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣 🤣
Taaliyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!!!!!!!! 👏
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OMG i can't believe yu wrote an OS about my life!!!!!!!!! 😲😃🤣
I feel so privilged!!!!!! 😳 Thank yuuuuuuuu soooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!! 🤗 Itni khushi mujhe kabhi nahi hoye!!! Itni khushi, itni khushi!!! 😃 *khushi ke aansoo* 🤣
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Coming tu the OS...it was FANTASTIC!!! 👏 I absolutely LOVED it!!!!!! 😃😛😳
Kya true emotions and feelings and actions thay!!!!
Haye pehla pyaar tho sabse pyaara hi rehtha hai!!! 😍
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Here's something from me tu yu tu show my appreciation!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god nups crush was a chicken
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i cant control my laugh its juts awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
what a surprise
i burst into laughter 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣I just can't stop laughing🤣Mein wonder kar rahi thi
ke kaun hai, and it was chicken🤣 Hinna🤣 I can't believe it🤣