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Posted: 28 November 2009 at 4:49am | IP Logged
 
Oh, thank you Aish! So sweet of you to comment. Always very much appreciated!! Big smile
 
Well, life is always not as good as we would have liked it to be. But it's real, unlike our dreams. So it must be appreciated for that, I think. It is what we have.
 
He didn't actually disappear btw. He went to the UK, but that still means we might never meet again. It's kind of complicated.
 
 
That one's fictitious. Would be nice if you read it, when you have some time, of course! Smile
 
Thanks again for the comment! 
 
 

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Posted: 29 November 2009 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _.serendipity._

 
Oh, thank you Aish! So sweet of you to comment. Always very much appreciated!! Big smile
 
Well, life is always not as good as we would have liked it to be. But it's real, unlike our dreams. So it must be appreciated for that, I think. It is what we have.
 
He didn't actually disappear btw. He went to the UK, but that still means we might never meet again. It's kind of complicated.
 
The link to my other story is http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1284937&PID=25753359
 
That one's fictitious. Would be nice if you read it, when you have some time, of course! Smile
 
Thanks again for the comment! 
 
 
Trust me, its a pleasure.
 
Yeah i know, life is just too real which makes it sad. Ouch
 
Oh..but thats bad anyway...
 
hmm i think i did check it out, if not i will now Wink
 
mah pleasure :)

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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aish_punk

Originally posted by _.serendipity._

 
Oh, thank you Aish! So sweet of you to comment. Always very much appreciated!! Big smile
 
Well, life is always not as good as we would have liked it to be. But it's real, unlike our dreams. So it must be appreciated for that, I think. It is what we have.
 
He didn't actually disappear btw. He went to the UK, but that still means we might never meet again. It's kind of complicated.
 
The link to my other story is http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1284937&PID=25753359
 
That one's fictitious. Would be nice if you read it, when you have some time, of course! Smile
 
Thanks again for the comment! 
 
 
Trust me, its a pleasure.
 
Yeah i know, life is just too real which makes it sad. Ouch
 
Oh..but thats bad anyway...
 
hmm i think i did check it out, if not i will now Wink
 
mah pleasure :)
 
Hey Aish, just realised, I never replied to you. Sowwie.. Confused
Yeah it is kind of bad :(
Must move on though.. And the memories are still there, so it's never the end Smile
 

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Posted: 08 January 2010 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Nice story!
beautifully written!!

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Posted: 11 January 2010 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
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Nice story!
beautifully written!!
 
Thank you!! Big smile

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nanshr

Hey Hema! Awesome work! You did a great job describing her feelings, her desire that the ride never end. You are very good with descriptions. Makes readers feel as if they were there. Awesome FF!
 
Sravi, you're awesome! Star Thank you very much for your kind words. Really appreciate it.
It's a true story so it wasn't too hard for me to describe everything... But, that said, I shall accept the compliment nevertheless LOL 
Thanks dear! Big smile

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No problem
 
btw, just a suggestion :please write more=)

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