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parisbynight

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Posted: 21 October 2009 at 1:30pm | IP Logged

Guys here is a small one shot on ARTI,i don't know why i felt like writing on them two,i wrote it quickly on my way back from work,let me know what you think about it?!!

Please press the like button if you liked reading it! And leave your precious comments!


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Arjun didn't know why he felt restless lately, why was he not able to have as much as masti as he usually does on sets, something was stopping him from being the "happy go lucky" type of person he normally is.

Sitting alone in his van, rehearsing the dialogues for his next scene, he eventually took out his cell to make a call.

a/hi

r/hi   rati was surprised that he called

a/so? Enjoying to be home?!   

r/yeah!it feels so good to be with family at last...but its going to fast,2 days are over already  

a/oh!i guess your not looking forward to be back on sets...right?  

r/its not that...I needed rest...a break from everything..

a/your saying as if you hate being on sets with us...

r/i never said that...anyways how is sanaya and mohit?

a/you called them few times so im sure you know how they are..   he taunted

r/are you shooting today?!   trying to ignore what he said

a/yea...

r/good...

a/rati are you upset with me?!     frankly asked

r/no!   she was surprised by his question or rather she was surprised that he knew she was upset   why?

a/don't know. it just feel like you've been avoiding me lately..   he added in a sadden tone

r/lately?!im in patna and your in mumbai!    trying to laugh it off

a/listen im serious...

r/arjun and serious?!thats a change!

a/so you're not gonna tell me what wrong?!

r/nothing is wrong! and stop acting as if you care anyway..

a/rati if i didn't care, I would have never bothered to call you! and why would i act with you..    offended'

r/because that's what you always do! I can never understand whether your are being yourself or not with me...

a/so even after being with me 24/7 for a year you still don't understand me?! thanks!

r/i could say the same to you!its not like you ever understood me either?!

a/oh god! there you go again ..Blaming game!    Irritation taking him away

r/arjun why did you call?get to the point?! because honestly im in no mood to fight with you over the phone..!

a/i called maybe because we didn't get to speak for the last 2 days! but i was an idiot, I should have got the message that you simply don't want to talk to me...why else would you call everyone but me?! Sorry my mistake!    He retorted back, slightly angry

r/and why should i care to call you !Hein? did you even care to give me a "bye" when i left!

a/I had no idea you were taking off!mohit told me!   justifying himself

r/...ok arjun lets forget that...ill speak to you later..

a/see you are avoiding me! did i do anything? tell me at least!    He really neede to know why she was behaving like this, he hated it when whe wasn't talking to him

r/its not you! its just that i needed some peace of mind!im just in a highly confused and stressed state these days..

a/confused about what?!

r/i dont know!

Another person comes in to inform Arjun that he was called on sets.

a/i have to go give my shot!

r/ok..good luck!  she wished him    hmm listen..    she hesitantly said

a/hmm?

r/sorry!i didn't call you...but trust me its not like didn't think of you...

a/its alright!bye!    he hanged up, he felt so much better knowing that she did think about him, was it what he wanted to hear?!

 

Before going out of his van,Arjun quickly wrote a text message to Rati.

 

 

Text***really missing your presence here....and i mean it!   Arjun XxX***

 

On reading the sms,rati couldn't help but to smile,she was even slightly blushing, strange?! was it what she wanted him to say?!

Edited by parisbynight - 21 October 2009 at 1:46pm

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Posted: 21 October 2009 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Hey paris
wonderful One shot!!!!
Loved it....
 
It seems so real.....
 
will u continue it?
 


Edited by Piya_2009 - 21 October 2009 at 1:49pm

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Posted: 21 October 2009 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
awesome Smile,,such a realistic convo :)

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awesome paris!!
its very realistic!

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Posted: 21 October 2009 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Really very nice PARIS.. Realistic convo.....keep it up. I loved it...Clap

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Posted: 21 October 2009 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Piya_2009

Hey paris
wonderful One shot!!!!
Loved it....
 
It seems so real.....
 
will u continue it?
 


thank u!!
yes maybe i will continue...lets see if i get time...

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Posted: 21 October 2009 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
oh my gosh parissssssss that was really awesomeeeeeeeeee man, how i wish it was all true.
 
as usual you are an amazing writer and make everything sound so damn real.
 
i lovedddddddddd it and senny secretly prays that its all true.
 
Keep it up, write more na paris.
 
God bless and hugs.

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Posted: 21 October 2009 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
paris awesome yaar
please write more....please pm me

*runs to somu*...shayd aise hi hua hoga....lol
Embarrassed

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